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Lynn Hamilton

Fri 8th May 2015 19:38

Enjoyed reading your work Nigel. Think it was the 'blue nylon socks' that did it for me.

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Lynn Hamilton

Fri 8th May 2015 19:38

Enjoyed reading your work Nigel. Think it was the 'blue nylon socks' that did it for me.

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Lynn Hamilton

Fri 8th May 2015 19:34

Too crap to blog but you did ask!

Just for you Mr TC
(Top Cat tune keeps springing into my head)

Winky Face

Emotion without words
How does that work?
Display happiness with
A smiley face
Slighty abuse
Or amuse with
A winky face

Show sadness with
A downturned U
When you are so
Downturned
U don’t even know U
Are U

;)

On second thoughts I might blog. One glass of wine and it's starting to look ok ;)

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Lynn Hamilton

Fri 8th May 2015 19:17

Great and honest attitude and what a fighter. The very best of luck in Manchester tomorrow Jackie. Hope to see you perform next time.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 8th May 2015 14:44

LFC

ynwa

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Andy N

Fri 8th May 2015 12:50

good stuff, Ian. as i expected when i started it, i really enjoyed this. top stuff m8

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Nigel Astell

Fri 8th May 2015 10:46

Put together a poem for the theme of humour
but not sure about the title of The Laughing Policeman
was going to call it The Hairy Banana!

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Lan

Fri 8th May 2015 10:46

Love this!! I spent a lot of time on a roof when I as a kid - brought it back :)

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Lan

Fri 8th May 2015 10:43

Hey, hope you're doing ok, absolutely know what the negative loop stuff is like x

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Lan

Fri 8th May 2015 10:40

Love the plays on words and the raw emotion - gutsy poem - I struggle to be in most moments. Like this one a lot x

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Nigel Astell

Fri 8th May 2015 10:39

Downstairs we are for one night only under the theme of poetry humour.

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Fri 8th May 2015 09:39

quality and nothing less.x

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Fri 8th May 2015 09:37

love it! x

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Travis Brow

Fri 8th May 2015 07:44

Autum, your poems portray a wretched life, and i can't claim to understand, but quite how you manage to find the energy and the will to write, and post your work, is, dare i say it, both admirable and humbling. This is a shocking poem, but it's clever at the same time. Keep at it.

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Preeti Sinha

Fri 8th May 2015 05:34

This is brilliant!

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Kelly

Fri 8th May 2015 02:23

Love this!

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Helen Elliott

Thu 7th May 2015 20:51

Hi Michael. Thank you for your feedback. You are very kind an enthusiastic, which is good :) I am pleased that you enjoyed my work.

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Eva Elizabeth

Thu 7th May 2015 18:04

Thank you for your lovely comment on "The Poetry Bug"! Was really nice to hear x

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Autum Doolin

Thu 7th May 2015 18:04

thank you so much!!!! ?:)

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 7th May 2015 14:59

Hello Andy, thank u for always being so supportive and kind ! Much appreciated....

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 7th May 2015 13:37

Hmm.... I actually have a poem called 'Winky Face' somewhere lying around.

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 7th May 2015 13:24

Lovely, Preeti. x

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Andy N

Thu 7th May 2015 12:57

yeah, would be interested in hearing a recording of this also as it definately deserves to be recorded.

the short short lines at the end really work well for me here in particular but it's a good un all round

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Andy N

Thu 7th May 2015 12:56

lot of good stuff here, steve.

the use of because works really well here.

excellent m8

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Andy N

Thu 7th May 2015 12:55

last line really works Preeti.

gives it a very different meaning.

works well for me that.

excellent

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Greg Freeman

Thu 7th May 2015 10:33

Welcome to Write Out Loud, Melissa. Glad we were able to get along to your recent performance at Poets and Players in Manchester http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=48352

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Thu 7th May 2015 09:25

haha-this morning I feel like Michelle has got me on a lead,taking me for a walk to all her choices..but in this case,I,m glad she did! x

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Thu 7th May 2015 09:16

and I am in total agreement with Michelle.Terrific! x

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Michelle

Thu 7th May 2015 08:40

When oh when? I like this very much.
M:)

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Michelle

Thu 7th May 2015 08:34

I don't have any clever words to offer. This is a compelling read. x

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John Bastard

Thu 7th May 2015 05:47

hi friendo

thanks for reading me a while back. I haven't had much time to float along this site in a while, but I glance at it and your comments always do good to bring me back.

hope this message finds you well. :)

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 6th May 2015 19:12

thanks for the comments on 'National Wealth Service?' Harry - I think you are right - but that doesn't stop the idealist in me wishing that you are wrong - cheers
Ian

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Preeti Sinha

Wed 6th May 2015 16:05

Thank you for your wonderful feedback! I write on an impulse...cannot explain what drives me to capitalize or not :0

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Preeti Sinha

Wed 6th May 2015 16:04

Graham, thank you. Made the change. I was not too sure !
Thank you again.....

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 6th May 2015 14:33

This is really impressive Preeti, I like it a lot. It's brevity but straightforward phrasing. I don't like the last line, make it one thing or the other.
Great work.

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Travis Brow

Wed 6th May 2015 10:05

Thank you Colin, much obliged. I started this sucker seven years ago and thought, at various stages, it was complete; I was wrong.

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Wed 6th May 2015 07:49

Nice one Travis. Especially like the rain running from verse one through two and into three and reappearing at the end - 'puddles traffic ploughed' - 'slick umbrellas' - 'filthy spritz'. Cheers. x

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steve pottinger

Wed 6th May 2015 07:43

Thank you for the feedback, folks.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 6th May 2015 06:58

Lots going on! :)

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Travis Brow

Wed 6th May 2015 06:49

Been there; still there, in fact; no plans to leave either.

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Travis Brow

Wed 6th May 2015 06:37

Well sustained and nicely laid out, Steve.

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Lan

Wed 6th May 2015 01:12

Thanks for posting this Steve, absolutely great, and so good to have a guy saying this stuff :)

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Tue 5th May 2015 22:07

xlent! x

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Tue 5th May 2015 21:47

I soooo agree with Michelle.And then some! x

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John Coopey

Tue 5th May 2015 17:25

Wazzap yongbludz. You realise we are over 200 years old between us? I reckon, MC, we'll get telegrams off the queen. She'll be 130 when she sends mine. Harry - I bet you treasure yours from the king.
Laters.

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Helen Elliott

Tue 5th May 2015 16:22

Absolutely bloody brilliant. Your poem makes me want to go! The only thing worse than the advert itself, was the response from the company who created it! Really liked this.

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steve pottinger

Tue 5th May 2015 16:07

I wrote this in response to the 'are you beach ready?' advert. Nuff said.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 5th May 2015 15:57

Competition results from the Ledbury festival website: Ledbury Poetry Festival Poetry Competition Results 2014

The results are in at last and I am delighted to announce that the winner of our poetry competition for 2014 is Jonathan Edwards with his poem ‘Servant Minding A Seat for his Master Before a Performance of The Rivals Covent Garden Theatre, 1775.’ Second places goes to Jacqueline Saphra for ‘My Friend Juliet’s Icelandic Lover’ and third place to Laura Seymour for ‘Cutting Chips’. In the 12 – 17 age group first place goes to Isla Anderson for ‘Letter for a Postbox Filled With Rain’, second place to Helen Ridout for ‘Poems Written in the Dead of Night’ and third place to Katharina Dixon-Ward for ‘Tube’. Finally in the under 11 age group first place goes to Poppy Smart for ‘Leonardo devinci losing the plot’, second place to Christy Fielder for ‘Teardrops’ and third place to Lilly Lees for ‘Where Reality Ends’.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th May 2015 15:52

You can rely on the hardline Tory
To sell you a hardship story.
And as for message from Labour:
It's guess who you might get for a neighbour.
The yellow in Liberal Democrat
Tells you all you need to know about that!
The newcomers who say "Brits - get a grip"
Are the purple in your face lot - Ukip!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th May 2015 15:41

Suck it to me baby!!
A powerful anthem to all our yesterdays - well, those we can remember.
Hey JC...
whatever else you may have lost, you still seem to have
a good pair of lungs to help you make it through the night!

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