be glad that your heart will soon have regular thumps
The time to worry is if your farts have lumps!!
Enjoyed the poem. xx
Comment is about THE MAGICAL MEDICAL MERRY-GO-ROUND (blog)
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Excellent. Great analogy Maintianed to the end even to the name of the street. I really enjoyed this, Ian.
Comment is about Eyrie Avenue (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
ok will have a think...
Comment is about Violet. (Short story) (blog)
Original item by Danny Metcalfe
Thanks for your kind words
Richard
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<Deleted User> (11111)
Mon 13th May 2013 15:54
Oh, please do. I want some feedback. :)
Comment is about Violet. (Short story) (blog)
Original item by Danny Metcalfe
In Axilfah on Thundersday we heard a sonic boom.
The rain came down but words held sway within a tight packed room.
They came from Leeds and Lancashire, from Cleckheaton and Hudd.
They raised their arms and voices too and spoke of death and blood.
And local wordsmiths said their piece. What rants and hymns we heard
when Genevieve her coven called to utter Weird Words.
Review is about Spoken Weird on 9 May 2013 (event)
Stef, we do indeed. Hope you and Patricia are well.
Jonnie, yes, you have a point there!
Thank you very much all for your kind comments. xx
Comment is about perspective (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Thanks for the comments Solar.
Regards
Graham
Comment is about Moor Music (blog)
Original item by Graham Ramsden
Bi-lingual English French, I often write the same poem in both languages - not the same thing as translating it! I'd like to join in, but the Out Loud part is difficult as I only know two other (British) poets in my area of NW France.
I shall forward this to Joseph Harker, (http://namingconstellations.wordpress.com/category/reveries/)as he is a poet/translator of lots of languages, including Japanese.
Comment is about Mad experiment on Write Out Loud – translating poems online! (article)
Original item by Julian Jordon
interesting.
i could offer a lot of criticism about this and ask some questions of it...but after my last attack of your veggie subject i think ill just say that.
Comment is about Violet. (Short story) (blog)
Original item by Danny Metcalfe
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 12th May 2013 23:38
'she clutched him in a tangled,dry embrace'...... ........and? oh! we don't have to wait for the next episode do we Ian? that's not fair,keeping me in suspenders!....and black fishnet stockings!
seriously,a very good poem.x
Comment is about Eyrie Avenue (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Upsetting,touching,dark,compelling. Possibly one of your best for me mate! 'I struggled for rainbows,wrestled with sunny days'
Comment is about Padlock (blog)
Original item by Richard Alfred
'By the hand of my past I am drowning'
Nice piece Richard,that I think,celebrates the individual.
Comment is about Seahorse (blog)
Original item by Richard Alfred
I like this. There was such a woman up the road from me when i ass a kid. She smelt of cloves and was always poised to pounce. Loved the cracking and popping carcass... inspired. I was trying to think of another word for 'horny' given its alternative connotations... but I couldn't!
Comment is about Eyrie Avenue (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 12th May 2013 20:59
killer last line.
Comment is about Fast, effective action (blog)
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 12th May 2013 20:57
That's why you shouldn't always listen to the experts! I enjoyed your poem.
Comment is about perspective (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
We've all been there. I liked that very much.
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 12th May 2013 20:26
AVB and the lads John. Dare to believe!!
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
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Which reminds me...I found online info. that tied the Texan LBJ of pre-White House days to an unsavoury character with a rep. for violence even unto murder, and there was a strong inference that LBJ used this guy for bad things which could be denied - and that just happened to point towards a certain murder in Dallas! The sheer number of "witnesses" who subsequently died in circumstances so weird that the odds have been given as many millions to one also supports suspicions of very big stakes and something far more worrying than mere "coincidence".
Comment is about in my head, scribbled down (blog)
Original item by Marnanel Thurman
Only just found this and am very struck. For me, it's had the biggest difference between a straight read-through and the audio track of anything I've ever encountered on WOL. For those who skip the audio, make an exception for this one.
Comment is about breathing (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
Fascinating stuff. It has to be remembered that the Pacific Ocean was far less documented than now but just as vast. Perhaps a fatal crash may have been the preferred ending for those brave adventurers and one can only hope they had each other's company for comfort if they were fated to endure an isolated and painful departure from this life.
Comment is about MIRACLE (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
Yes,retail...know the subject well and its pitfalls. Good representation mate!
Comment is about The Customer is Always Wrong (blog)
I feel this way when going into our local Asda! I duck and dive,generally trying to keep my head down and not catch anyone's eye.Made me laugh this! 'It' just painful to be reminded that everyone you know is getting older,because it means that you are too'.
Thought the length was fine,too.
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Hi Joe,
Haha! 'Another lost afternoon squares up to defeat me'. Great liitle piece mate!
Comment is about Fast, effective action (blog)
Whoa! Masterful, Ian.
Brilliant on so many levels, but "my bleach for life's permanent stain" is the pick.
You don't post often enough for my liking, but it's worth the wait.
Comment is about RAUCOUS (blog)
Original item by Ian Gant
Another goodie, John. I enjoyed this!
Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
see here. they look for her and have found much circumstantial evidance. bits of plane in the sea, raised up july 2014.
http://tighar.org/
Comment is about MIRACLE (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
Not only a pleasure to read but a lesson to learn.
Comment is about RAUCOUS (blog)
Original item by Ian Gant
One of the great mysteries of the air and a
timely reminder of the dangers of daring as we
follow the solo flight of that intrepid North
American teenager around the world at this time. Courage lives!
Comment is about MIRACLE (blog)
Original item by NICK ARMBRISTER
Kate, where are you exactly - Gers? Les Landes, La Gironde? I have several contacts in le sud-ouest, having once lived in Les Landes Girondine for almost five years and regularly revisiting friends there. Can you get in touch please? julian@writeoutloud.net.
Thank you all for your comments. There is much to be done to make it work, get people using it, so forth. We have the classic difficulty of many of the groups I worked with in Rochdale and Oldham being what are described as 'hard-to-reach', most not being internet savvy. The upshot of that is that they were delighted to work with other groups producing handwritten translations, but find it too daunting, for now, to venture onto the computer, something that I should have realised. And the Urdu, Panjabi, Arabic and Bangla translations are in a script that I cannot understand enough to type in myself, in spite of the existence of online virtual keyboards. I think we might be able to solve that element for now for the work on my desk awaiting uploading, but it is getting people using the wiki for themselves - along the lines of hat happens with the blogs - that is the medium-term aim.
Comment is about Mad experiment on Write Out Loud – translating poems online! (article)
Original item by Julian Jordon
Thanks for your comment. All is good. I suppose it 's a good thing it caused such a reaction. I hope you shall read more of my writing and I shall read yours also.
Hope all is well.
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<Deleted User> (11064)
Sun 12th May 2013 13:49
fantastic every line i really enjoyed reading
Comment is about RAUCOUS (blog)
Original item by Ian Gant
Kate Britten
Sun 12th May 2013 12:57
I am living and working in South West France- have set up 'Verteuil Verse' with a friend in a French/Anglo Bar in a pretty town and getting about 20 + people come and read their poems or other people's. Hoping to build on the richness of our different mother tongue/languages and the richness of different cultures creating together.
Comment is about Mad experiment on Write Out Loud – translating poems online! (article)
Original item by Julian Jordon
Fantastic John - when's the album due out?
Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Love your poetry. Love the imagery - 'Sybil-out-of-Fawlty-Towers-hair'. Love the social commentary. Love the cutting remarks.
Comment is about Elvis McGonagall (poet profile)
Original item by Elvis McGonagall
Definitely in a different league - you should busk outside B&Q until they pay you money to go away ;)
Love the guitar in the background - it sounds so pretty. Do you ever write any serious stuff John? I'd love to hear it if you do.
Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Very clever and witty. I love it Cathy.
Comment is about Cathy Bryant (poet profile)
Original item by Cathy Bryant
I still recall the photo that caught that Texas
politician giving LBJ a wink as the latter took
the presidential oath before a blood-stained Mrs Kennedy on Air Force One.
"Patsies" are nothing new in American murders,
useful in misdirecting investigations away from
the primary guilty party or parties.
Comment is about in my head, scribbled down (blog)
Original item by Marnanel Thurman
Cat Stevens wrote it, PP Arnold had a hit with it, and I'm fond of Rod Stewart's version, too. But John, yours is in a different league ...
Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
John, you've gotta play that next time you're at PPP! Love it!
Comment is about Your First Hut Is The Cheapest (blog)
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Thanks for your kind comments on "I Had A Bream", Harry
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Glad you enjoyed, "I Had A Bream", MC.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5nmq7WkMCxA
(Clarence Frog Man Henry - Aint Got No Home)
This the youtube link. We found it on a 50's compilation CD. It's great isn't it? I can imagine it as backing track to a a Quentin Tarantino film where everyone gets butchered :)
I can also imagine you writing to this theme John - you're probably one of the few who'd be able to write something funny :)
I'm glad to hear you like the theme Rachel/ Alex. I've already written something little. It's a piece of thought rather than a poem and I won't post it for a while or enter it into the comp - I just couldn't resist doing something.
Comment is about 52 Hertz (blog)
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Yvonne Brunton
Mon 13th May 2013 18:00
Quality stuff, this, John - unlike your first shed.
Ps can I have your old shed?
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