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Lynn Dye

Tue 6th Sep 2011 21:04

Thank you so much everyone for your comments.

Thomas, strange you should mention musical chairs, I wrote one at the weekend called Musical Beds!

Lol, Isobel, we did go bed shopping too, as it happens, but didn't make quite such a spectacle of ourselves!

Bed hopping, Julian? Perhaps I should rename that poem! lol.

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Philipos

Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:53

Hi Dave, (John Doe) so many of these characters around and some actually began life with promising upbringings. Who knows where the decline began? Thanks for commenting.

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Isobel

Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:45

Ha - do you dare me to post Chlamydia? That should grab attention. I should do it before they kill Gadaffi - if they haven't already done so - I'm a bit behind on the news...

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:25

cheers for the info re Fanbox.
will look in later

ta Dave

P&S.

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 20:22


Lynn,
try this for a laugh-
on youtube type in these exact words
-don,t tease the dog-

its absolutely hilarious!

(try and get Benji to copy it)

Trish'n'Stef.xx

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 6th Sep 2011 19:33

Beds hopping?

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Isobel

Tue 6th Sep 2011 18:32

So you're claiming all that swivelling was an accident? Remind me not to follow you when you go bed shopping...

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Isobel

Tue 6th Sep 2011 18:27

Oh - I've come out in goosebumps John! It would be nice to think that there could still be that connection.

A tender, poignant poem Ann. xx

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Neil West

Tue 6th Sep 2011 18:22

Hi Lynn, thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated. It pointed me towards your work too, I like the political awareness in your writing, especially When the World Stood Still. makes you wonder if things run better when there is no government!

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Philipos

Tue 6th Sep 2011 16:34

I'm glad you liked John Doe, Ann, thanks for saying so.

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John Coopey

Tue 6th Sep 2011 15:16

Four years ago I was working in Stockton, travelling up on Mondays and staying till Friday.
One Monday I woke up because I couldn't get the song "Moonlight and Roses" out of my head. So I thought, "I might as well set off early, have a coffee at a service station near Stockton".
When I got to the service station it was shut so I carried on to work.
Later that day I found out that there'd been a big accident just before the service station at just the time I would normally have been passing it.
"Moonlight and Roses" was my mother's favourite song.

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Lynn Dye

Tue 6th Sep 2011 14:19

Excellent sentiments, Neil, and very well written. Appreciated this very much.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Tue 6th Sep 2011 11:50

Cheers P&S, I'll certainly try and post more here again, had a rather dodgy broadband connection for some time now, so I'm way behind on many sites.

Have you tried Fanbox.com? You can get paid for blogging there...

Best wishes, Dave

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 11:42

hopefully see you at the Tudor?..x

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 10:54

Ever played musical chairs Lynn? I think you'd win every time.
Anyway, you do with this poem.

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darren thomas

Tue 6th Sep 2011 10:25

thanks Ann!! NOT ironic, just bloody careless!

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 10:17


good ter see you bloggin again Mr.D

how come Terry Bull
Arfur Guinness
Stan Down
Pat Mehedwithanironbar
or Marge Herine
did,nt get a mention?

not to mention a million others.

well done Dunn as in Dave.
best to you from us two too-P&S Wilde'uns

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 10:09


oh Lynn,Lynn,Lynn!
yer attit again!

my gast has never been more flabbered!
I bet thats the chair I bought from DFS

only on the belief of it being interest free-
-yeah rite!

the one described in the brochure as
a bleedin great sack of spine misshaping
polysterene balls.

but to my delight
I found a pair of knee length bloomers
slightly clean(lol)

which I later sold to Arfur Kneegusset
on th'antiques roadshow.
he looks gorgeous innem..haha!

could that be the same chair one wonders?

in the meantime,I shall pray for your Soul
-I said-Soul! lol!

have a nice day me dux.

Stef&fingy.xxxxxx

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garside

Tue 6th Sep 2011 08:15

andy - many thanks as always for reading and making comment x

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garside

Tue 6th Sep 2011 08:14

Hi Kealan - ta very for reading and making comment

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garside

Tue 6th Sep 2011 08:13

I like The Fall very much hence the title

thanks for taking the time to read and make comment on my poem

steve x

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Noetic-fret!

Tue 6th Sep 2011 03:43

This may or may not be the crux of the problem. In truth the veterans just don't know why they are suffering so much. But we know, from our own experiences that we were exposed to something sinister. For myself, because there are so many incidents that have pervaded my life, I just don't know the truth. Some of those incidents, have led me to trust no-one, including those in authority positions who sit on high making policy. Conspiracies are very real, they do exist! But in not knowing the full truth each veteran is left to fill in the blanks themselves. And that in essence is also a form of torture. Things have happened to me that I just cannot explain, and now I sit nursing a broken spirit and battered soul. One day we may be given the truth, but until then, the conjecture and supposition will continue. We need the truth, plain as day, to settle what is a quarrelsome undertaking of life. This may be the crux of the problem, it may not. I was going to remove this verse, and if you wish I will do that. Just never forget that all that is taken for granted by the majority, be only a dream for the veterans now suffering, who are asking so many questions but getting no answers. We served in faith, we are suffering now. We were treated unfairly, and the sorrow in each one shines like a bright ball of hurt that will never go away. On this day, it is their day, it is a day of celebration. Had things been a little different, perhaps I would be waving the flag I served too. But as controversial as this piece is, I shall let it stay, in recognition of the veterans who only want answers. Be well, and Good luck.

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Tue 6th Sep 2011 00:42

Oh the fun in trying though Lynn!

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Lynn Dye

Mon 5th Sep 2011 22:11

Enjoyed this, Kealan, good one.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 5th Sep 2011 21:55

The photo makes me feel really hungry!

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 5th Sep 2011 21:51

You paint a lovely picture Lynn!

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 20:06

ANY...are fine by us Aunty Lynn!

off for scoff,

later dude.

Buggerlugs and Trish.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 20:03

cool couplets
at th'end.

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 20:01


however melancholy you make it
I will gladly partake-

on one condition-it comes with-
chips! tea and a bleedin' big cake!

nice one Stell'Stef.xx

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 19:37


Evenin Ma Dye
all ok?

love

Stef&Tricia.xx

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John Embley

Mon 5th Sep 2011 18:54

Thanks for the YouTube info on Bert Williams, John -- amazed by the quality of the recording, and how fresh his material still feels today.
I reckon your little recording's up there with it though!

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Philipos

Mon 5th Sep 2011 18:12

Hi Ann, 'Reptillian' always a gift to stumble upon a surprise of nature as you did with the black lizard and I the grass snake so close. A real thrill and heart-warming at the same time. Thanks for the comments.

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 16:30

Thanks for the comments on A Wonderful Opportunity. If you want to check it out Bert Williams is on YouTube with an audio of his (superior) original entiled Somebody Else Not Me.

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John Embley

Mon 5th Sep 2011 16:09

Very clever, John! -- Worthy of Marriott Edgar and Stanley Holloway -- I've got to admit, I'd never heard of Bert Williams, but I'm busy correcting that little hole in my archive. Now it'll only look like a string vest.

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Lizzie

Mon 5th Sep 2011 13:36

Thanks :D x

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:29

Where all our inspirations go. When we can't think of what to write about we write about poetry (usally about not being able to write poetry!). Pope was no exception.

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:26



Stunningly beautiful dear lady.. x

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:24

Christopher, I use other "stimulants", but,hey, whatever works for you!
Seriosly though, I enjoyed the poem; twice in fact. The first time I enjoyed the ride of the rhythm, the second the lyricism.
Keep posting.

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:12

Ah aha ha ha ha...I asked for that didn't I?

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:10

Stella, I have a plaice you might want to put your cold hands on.

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John Coopey

Mon 5th Sep 2011 12:07

Thanks Dave. I suspect the reference to Our Gert in A Wonderful Opportunity gave its authorship away!
The real vintage though is Bert Williams's - worth checking out on You Tube.
Curiously he blacked up as a Minstrel despite the fact that he was, himself, black!

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:38


hi Dave.

Thanks for the comment on my Chanel poem..some days are made for feeling good inside..

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:33



Thanks Ann...it was a good day!..

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:32


I hope you returned home with more than half a car!

Thanks Isobel for finding my Chanel original :)

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:25



Lynn, thanks so much for commenting on my Chanel poem..appreciated :)

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:16

read this a few times now..and I like it more each time... :)

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Mon 5th Sep 2011 11:11

Pleased I came across this..I have just enjoyed reading your other work too..

nice one :)

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Dave Bradley

Sun 4th Sep 2011 23:39

Vintage Coopey. Should perform well!

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Dave Bradley

Sun 4th Sep 2011 23:37

Enjoyed this Stella. I don't use Chanel myself, but the chocolate sounds nice. .

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Lizzie

Sun 4th Sep 2011 22:30

Thankyou :) I have no idea why it changes as I write it separated. X

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