Hi Clarissa, I'm not moving, have been to stay with my daughter for a couple of weeks as she just had a baby, so just back.Thanks for your comment.

Comment is about The Shoe: China 2008 (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

HI Carol, I hope your move is going well. I enjoyed the poems.

Comment is about The Shoe: China 2008 (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

HI richard, nice poem, great ideas within it. I find some depth in the words here. thanks

Comment is about Broken Down (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hello, Richard

I like this poem. It shows so many feelings and emotions. Life as it happens every day. Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Broken Down (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Jim Jefferies (?) an Australian comedian makes an interesting point. If God and the Devil are representations of good and evil, then why have we only read God's book or why has the Devil's book not been made available so that we can make our own minds up. Maybe it has been published. Any Barbara Cartland novel must surely be the work of Satan?
The piece made me think, although i don't necessarily agree with everything, but that's poetry eh?

Comment is about The Devil Quoting Scripture (blog)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

When you've done with that mare - give it a wipe.

Comment is about Precious Moments (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Phil, your poem shines. No one chooses to have a health problem. Life happens instant as day goes. Your write wonderfully worded and show your strength and courage to live as the day goes. You are a true fighter and that is a great attitude. Your words are educational for those who live with any illness. This one poem shows a person who decided to go against all odds in his life and teaches persevere the adversity.

God bless you and know that you are not alone.

Thank you for the courage read.
Warm regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Choicest Cuts (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Hello, Tai

Your poem has deep psychological base. There is a politics and luck of freedom, there is sign of discrimination in some of your lines. Dark poetry - My favourite stanza --

"""Belief in the lines, or a belief in me
But still I question my own choices
But one thing that cannot be overturned is the overwhelming source of forces
A dark angel struggles beneath a continuance of shrouded vision
Deputy to a council of detriment
Your body may be free but your mind snared before clouded prison
Excelling in political sediment
A tear is finally lost
What happened to my ancestors"""

Thought provoking write -There is a lot of truth in your write.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Hello, Daniel
Well expressed almost educational poem about the use of Guns' we do not have them here one has to apply for a permit. Nice piece of poetry proclaiming Peace rather then War.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about BULLET (blog)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

HI, Tomas

This is a Giant well-written Poem!
Well expressed with many metaphoric lines;
I see your point quite clear in your write. No one needs to pretend to be a faithful if applies rules of Evil in his/her life. My favourite stanza --

"""The Devil had a Eureka moment, and jumped up in joy
Blessed himself by mistake when running out, knocking down a little young boy
The way to sin lay deep within the human heart
And faith was the fast track there, where sin he could kick start
So... the Devil became a PREACHER, teaching of right and wrong
Blessing himself and saying mass and services all week long
And all were amaze and this new preacher, so proud and tall at first sight
Who spoke of Jews and Gypsies being wrong, and of Hitler being right"""

Your words of strong faith and very powerful!

GREAT STUFF!

Zuzanna

Comment is about The Devil Quoting Scripture (blog)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment! Yes, you had the right feelings within the lines in my poem. Life as it happens. Often takes toll on everyone and then we feel as a bent tree that would fall if not supported by others in this case family member, friends...Etc.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Tomás Ó Cárthaigh (poet profile)

Original item by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

It is true... war is no-ones friend bar big business.

Comment is about Katie Sheila Haigh (poet profile)

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Going now to check the site...

Comment is about Rachel Fox (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel Fox

"Daisychain Summer" is a great poem, showing the emotions of loving a free spirit... did I comment on that one before? No? It looks familiar somehow...

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

Original item by Louise Fazackerley

Its sad to hear he passed on...

Comment is about Jon Oxendale RIP (poet profile)

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Very descriptive and a good read.

Comment is about I'd like to live in a French Film (article)

It ios not too often you get a writer writing from the point of the paper that is being written on. A great read.

Comment is about Freda Davis (poet profile)

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Hello, Alvin

This is done with perfection. Enjoyed the humoorous side of this song-poem. You have done fanatstic job!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about I cried like a baby (blog)

Original item by Alvin Culzac

HI, Antonio

I love your utilization of your sense of humour in almost every poem. This one too is fabulous. The life moments you are in clearly paint the picture of that particular event!

Love your style in your poetry.
Great stuff!


Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about First class pain / train (blog)

HI Daniel, We have a gun, and I was raised with guns, some very big. It takes control, and you have to be taught, how and when to fire. Great poem!

Comment is about BULLET (blog)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

HI Antonio,Sounds fun, wish I could have gone to London, when I was there in 05.I did ride a train or two while there, and that was new for me, I loved it. Trains here suck, they are dirty, and trash rides on them, no peace at all. nice poem!

Comment is about First class pain / train (blog)

Hi Phil, You are a fighter, just like me. Your poems and shirt storys are very good and worthy in my humble opinion, of being in print. If I had it I would do it. This poem actually made me feel better about being diagonsed with cancer. Im a fighter, sure I have my down days, but over all, Im in charge of me.It may be that cancer gets me and puts me under. But then its in Gods hands,I have had to have a few talks with God of late.Your an inspiration! take care my friend from across the pond!

Comment is about Choicest Cuts (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Thanks for your comments concerning my poetry James. I've recently signed up here so please take a look at my latest work...There's also an exhibition of my artwork if you are in London, and if you fancy coming along. Vincent

Comment is about Ugly Tree Reviewed by James Hartnell (article)

Original item by Julian Jordon

Time flies by when you're a passenger on a train
standing on a paper plate there and back again.
Over bridges, under bridges etc etc.
I love trains - it comes with a name like 'Thomas'.
8-0

Comment is about First class pain / train (blog)

thanx for your message, Antonionionionionio.....
I prefer to sit next to weirdo's on the way to London
it's DANGEROUS!!!!!!!! hehe

Comment is about First class pain / train (blog)

Like the absence of perpetual motion and beneficial drugs without side effects, there is no free lunch in energy. Reductions in the availability of fossil fuels will cause increasing prices and the generation of more viable alternatives. The alleged pollutants emitted by road vehicles are trivial in comparison with farting cows, food production, ships and much else. At the moment, diesel/electric hybrids are probably a good option, but that will change with the onset of new technologies. By the way electricity is not a 'clean' fuel unless it is nuclear generated.

Comment is about Integrated Transport Plan (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Exhibition of paintings at the Langham Gallery, Lambs Conduit Street, London WC1 from 15th Feb 2010 from 1700hrs.

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Original item by vincent berquez

hey yea. I used to go to London every wekend from Preston. Then they brought those pendolinos in and I instantly missed the threadbare fun of the old MK3 carriages together with the futuristic drone of the class 90 locos.

Penods are too narrow though I do love it when they tilt and twist and turn

London is exciting

glad you had a good journey
I used to write poetry on the train
like you I felt like a VIP in first class with my coffee!

I dont care for classes I just love the luxuries! (and the relative peace from the rowdy second class footie mobs)

Comment is about First class pain / train (blog)

Hello, Shelley

Thank you for the wonderful comment on the newest poem. Have a great week!

PS: Love your voice when you sing the song and recite the poems on you new page. You are very artistic!

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

Good Day Shelley

Haiku style…Thought provoking write- well expressed. I came to realize that it applies to people who want to know everything...i.e...Gossip 'that type of thing. – Please, feel free to correct my statement if I am wrong.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about BOGIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (blog)

Original item by Shelley Ann Dwornik

And in these sheds you have 20ft high chickens, and these chickens are scared because they don't know why they're so big, and they're going, "Oh why am I so massive?" and they're looking down at all the little chickens and they think they're in an aeroplane because all the other chickens are so small. Do you deny that? No, I think his silence speaks volumes.


Quote Alan Partridge

Comment is about corn fed if it kills me (blog)

Yes. Electric, hydrogen fuel cells, solar cells, chip fat, cow dung. Bring on the alternative fuels, but save us from the bloody half wits who want to tell us which transport we can use and who is going to get a subsidy and at what time of day.

Comment is about Integrated Transport Plan (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Dai, Sounds like a lovely memory of someone dear to you. Mysterious though.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Traces of Her (blog)

Original item by Dai Miles

Melissa…thought provoking poem. You have some unanswered issues there. Life is not always perfect. Be patient if this based on truth, if not just a muse shows a fine writes.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Conversations End (blog)

Pete, There is less and less great food out there. All chemically improved for a long live on the shelves. Yes, you are right on with the subject on a corn fed chicken, I wonder if you still find those on the market. We are having same problem here and people get so ill from all kind of illnesses and allergy too. Thank you for the caring poem perhaps someone at the top will get to read this to make him/her think what is going to be with the future generation if still survive. It makes me think of that.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about corn fed if it kills me (blog)

Phil, your poem is multi descriptive, well written with a reality issues as well as some fiction incorporated in your lines. You have presented good story to read. I think every Country has its own issues with pollutions. Great work!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Bull Rushes (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Antonio, great poem; Seems as if you have a wonderful weather over there... Here no show offs and no speeding at all, the police ticketing quite high for the people who do speed. Nice reflection in your writing - summer time well presented in a form of a clear picture well imprinted in your poem.
Beautiful!!

Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Some Like It Hot Once A Year (blog)

Hi Antonio, great poem about summer, I read about the floods yall had, as I bathed in sun all summer long, near 100 degrees for 2 monthes, was so nice, as long as a fan was on or the AC! Ha, you guys are nuts,never crash a car for a chick, there will always be hot chicks around every corner.But hot does not mean good in heart and mind.So control of mind and body would be wise, for men. great write!

Comment is about Some Like It Hot Once A Year (blog)

HI Peter,Great poem, made me wonder if the poor chicken would want MON 863? Made by Monsanto, its a GMO that Monsanto has farmers growing all over the world. After 90 days rats that were feed it, had problems, blood stream anomalies that varied by sex, blood cell level changes and lymphosite problems,renal lesions, kidney problems.Now many a farmer and scientist would poo poo this information, just to make a $. Almost all the soy is GMO and has had roundup spliced into its DNA, so that the farmer can spray round up on the crop and not kill what he planted, just kill the weeds, that he used to pay people to pull up. From what I have read the word "Organic" is a big fat lie.I almost wanted to be anorexic and die once I read about Monsanto. Its tragic whats going on with the seeds.All chickens need to be free range, and should have "normal" seeds/foods to eat. So should humans. I vow to someday have a small farm where once again some chickens can hunt and peck, and be normal chickens. great poem, I should send you all the Monsanto papers I have. it would fire you up like a rocket!

Comment is about corn fed if it kills me (blog)

Great stuff, like it, reminds me how many near misses I've had just managing to stop before hitting the car in front!! We wouldn't change it though would we!

Thanks for your comments on my poem. You're right those answerable will inevitably be driven by material things rather than life, much appreciated, Jeff

Comment is about Some Like It Hot Once A Year (blog)

good stuff.
very neat poem.

you know im happy the fuel has gone up in many ways

electric cars i say
(fast ones though please)

Comment is about Integrated Transport Plan (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

this is wonderful Phil
I reckon though to leave us in the tranquil place
rather than the fall
I know what you mean to contrast the image and its ok but......you would make a great little story for relaxation with this!!! just lose the last lines and you got a therapy on the go!

well played

(constructive ideas the poem works for me both ways)

great to see you advancing up an up Phil

Comment is about Bull Rushes (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

she destroyed her body. and she mutilated it.
she has the most amazing voice and talent I have heard in a long time, if ever.

superb poem
the poem has a great, clean rythm, its very easy to vocalise, I read it aloud and as a performance piece it worked for me too. I can take it and read it confidently.
its not complex or heavy going.

Its the kind of poetry I enjoy

thank you

Comment is about Ain't life a bitch? (blog)

that geyser looks whacked out bored!

Comment is about Deadlines (blog)

Love it.
Love 'auto-fry' idea.

yes yes the totty crashes!!! Not just me then! all us men!! good idea. yes they all put on the summer dresses. super. and we crash our cars gawpin. love it.

Comment is about Some Like It Hot Once A Year (blog)

Hi Clarissa thanks.
hey the poem is not about me really
most of my poems are ideas
but they are not about me.
I do feel them though and yea mu house sometimes gets a bit untidy but its usually pristine. well the best i can get it!

Comment is about lazy alpha male (blog)

HI Peter,It sure seems some need to be cared for.I get some small satisfaction from cleaning,but as you say the novelty wares off, or thin."A place for everything and everything in its place" as the saying goes.It does help, to keep that going all week, then cleaning is not so labor intensive.You must care about being in a clean home, or it will not be clean. At times I get upset, because I have cleaned and the kids get it dirty in a few hours or min. Then I make them clean it! Great poem/rant. Clean up your act! LOL
Your not lazy, just un-organized.

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Hi Phil, this is a very nice story, I did enjoy reading it. Down the way from my home, is a mini lake, where people fish and birds hang out, and all the plant life is just as you say.I try and drive past it everyday. Then down about 3 miles is a very large lake, where you can see boats everyday and people at play, but one side of the lake is wet lands, the other, is some sort of refinery belching smoke.Huge comercial type buildings, that mess up the looks and life of it all.I loved your story! thanks

Comment is about Bull Rushes (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Claris, Phil Jeff
Thanks!

Hey Jeff nice one BRUT! SPLASH IT ALL OVER!!

hahhah

Comment is about lynx lover man (blog)

Like it Phil, I do a lot of fishing so I know what you mean cheers Jeff

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