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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:54

Thanks for the lovely comments and likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:53

Thanks for the kind comment Carol send for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:52

Thanks for the likes and comment Stephen G.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:52

Thanks for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:52

Thanks for the comment MC and for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 19:51

Thanks for the likes

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raypool

Wed 1st Jun 2022 18:08

Frighteningly real yet surreal Robert. None of this surprises me, considering the artificiality of reality as we are expected to consume it. I spent a few years doing talent shows as half of a musical duo and getting a decent shot at Opportunity Knocks (before your time!) but it was very professionally carried out. Like you on that occasion I never got the limelight but also like you I made a good living from the art.....

x Ray

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:46

Another great poem, John! Perhaps the willful forgetfulness could be an antidote to rumination? 😉

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:37

A genuinely heartfelt poem, Steve! 🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:36

A very profound poem, John. I am reminded of the feeling of relief when I leave a hospital after visiting someone there.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:32

Perhaps 'Mild and Matt' could be the new drink of choice, John.

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Julian (Admin)

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:28

Thank you for your comments. Perhaps it is a little dyspeptic, but I couldn't stop myself!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 1st Jun 2022 17:24

Thanks, Stephen, for your kind comment. Yes, John, there is a link. War is a form of lynching, or perhaps it's the other way round.

And thanks to Tom, Bramwell, Rudyard, Holden, Pete and K Lynn for liking.

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John Coopey

Wed 1st Jun 2022 15:07

The renaissance of the small independents is indeed very welcome, MC. In fact they are even smaller (micro) than those independents which got taken over by the Big 6 in the 80’s and 90’s.
I mourn the loss of draught Mackeson which was withdrawn when I was about 18. What we didn’t want was Watney’s.
Thanks for the Like, Frederick.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 1st Jun 2022 14:27

May we be truly grateful for CAMRA, not least when we knew
Watney's Red Barrel! Certainly, the resurgence of the smaller
brewery is a source of great comfort. The only discomfort is the
upsurge in prices. I occasionally enjoy a pint of good cider in my
local but the £5.60p charged is a long eye-watering way from
the price of a pint of beer I remember when I first discovered the
pleasures to be found in a pub back in the early 1960s docklands
of East London..

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Lorry Madison

Wed 1st Jun 2022 13:44

Dave, it's such interesting additional information! Thank you all for sharing

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Lorry Madison

Wed 1st Jun 2022 13:37

Lorry Madison

Wed 1st Jun 2022 13:35

I don't think it will prevent kids from rap. And in my opinion, rap is the one of the safest content on the internet compared to other scary things there...

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Lorry Madison

Wed 1st Jun 2022 13:30

So beautiful and lifeful...

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John F Keane

Wed 1st Jun 2022 11:47

A great piece. That said, all politicians are liars so low expectations of the 'political class' (cough) are mandatory.

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John F Keane

Wed 1st Jun 2022 11:44

Some effective and witty use of language in that one.

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John Coopey

Wed 1st Jun 2022 11:10

Thanks for your thoughts and recollections, Dave. I’ve been teetotal for over 25 years now but the curious thing is that although “I’ve forgotten half my life I can still remember this” (Leonard Cohen). I can remember the fine differences in taste of these and other beers.

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Tom

Wed 1st Jun 2022 10:34

Hi Keith, thanks so much for your recent comment on One Last Affair. I'm glad you picked out that line, no one else did but it made me smile when I wrote it. The perfect chat up line 😉 Great to have you back and writing ferociously! Cheers, Tom.

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Dave Morgan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 10:24

The beauty of that may be lost on many John but not on me. Working as a driver's mate delivering soft drinks right down the Trent Valley I was intrigued at the range of local brews, none of which seemed to travel more than thirty miles from home in those days, which I suppose was what represented a reasonable catchment area for a small brewery. Strange how the brewing world has changed and I can get Cornish,Scottish, Kentish draft beers in my local micro pubs. Of course they're notlike they were. Thasnk God. They're probably better.

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Dave Morgan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 10:00

Thanks Julian. The project was stimulated by last year's Winter Hill 125 event commemorating the Right to Roam marches of 1896. On a fine day in September several thousand re-enacted the mass trespass challenging landowner and industrialist Col. Ainsworth's attempts to fence off Winter Hill to prevent public use. The Winter Hill mast and its eight lights are a familiar beacon to people across south and west Lancashire.

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Dave Morgan

Wed 1st Jun 2022 09:53

Top stuff Julian. Two fingers to them all.

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John Coopey

Wed 1st Jun 2022 08:37

Excellent write, Clare.

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John Coopey

Wed 1st Jun 2022 08:31

What Stephen says.
Reminded me at the end of Billie Holliday's "Strange fruit".
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Web007rzSOI

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John Botterill

Wed 1st Jun 2022 06:52

I believe that is called "customised", MC. My smart phone is too smart for me. That's why it's TAKING OVER!!
Thanks for your response!

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 31st May 2022 23:55

😂
Thank you so much, Pete! 😊

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John Marks

Tue 31st May 2022 22:33

Thank you Holden, Tom, Pete, Stephen G, Stephen A and Frederick.

I am terrified by this dark thing
That sleeps in me;
All day I feel its soft, feathery turnings, its malignity.

From the poem "Elm", 19 April 1962

Sylvia Plath, 

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Greg Freeman

Tue 31st May 2022 19:49

I find this moving, Peter. And Shakespearean.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 31st May 2022 19:40

Cleverly constructed & hard hitting, Stephen 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 31st May 2022 19:38

What is poetry, if not to spill your soul upon the page, Nadia. No more today, but tomorrow's a different day. Teenage life can be hard, but, like life itself, it's fleeting. Keep writing. You have a definite talent. (Former part of the Breakfast Club brigade😉)

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 31st May 2022 19:20

Thank you Keith, I just missed out on that one 😄
And Carol, glad it made you laugh. Can't remember my parents laughing that much though 🤣
And Stephen, yes I still remember that hangover!
And thanks for the likes! 🌈🥴

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Pete (edbreathe)

Tue 31st May 2022 18:14

Great , thanks again for allowing me access to my dictionary. Good stuff as usual

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Pete (edbreathe)

Tue 31st May 2022 18:09

Thanks Keith ,
I’m glad you liked it, I’d like to agree that it took serious thought, but I just wrote it in half a hour without much thought at all. It just came out the end of the pen. It must have been in there for sometime hoping to get written
Perhaps I just need help !

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 31st May 2022 17:21

It's true that we never seem to learn from the past, Keith. Perhaps the dark side and the lust for power are just too strong. But, as you say, we must believe and search for peace. Excellent poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 31st May 2022 17:11

Inspiring and entertaining, Mike.

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clyde McCulley

Tue 31st May 2022 17:07

Thank you for your kind words, Keith. I hope that people do relate to it.

Clyde

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 31st May 2022 17:06

You bring it all back, Stephen. Great fun (apart from the hangover).

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 31st May 2022 17:02

Thanks to Keith, Kealen and MC for these fascinating comments.
For my part, my main objection to the WEF is that it looks so bad and I'm surprised that the (many) decent people who attend can't see it. Speakers fly in by private jet and lecture the world about climate change. Maybe a virtual session would be better.

Very grateful for your kind words.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 31st May 2022 16:58

My dumb phone (mobile for old gits) has developed a fault that
rejects incoming calls but permits ongoing texts. I much prefer
it that way. Silent but still able to communicate in my own
chosen time!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 31st May 2022 16:50

The theme is sure to be readily recognised and understood. There is a kick to be had in finding an unexpected good buy online! Sadly, my retirement's recall of a bar gain is when I used
to make it to the pub just before it closed after a busy day at work! 😃

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 31st May 2022 16:45

In one very topical instance I recognise the allusion to the
lottery of life that sees the existence of bad neighbours blighting
the chances of a peaceful fulfilling life. A major example of what
can be met and endured in humdrum daily life.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 31st May 2022 16:34

The style of rhyme and content is spot on for this subject.
Is the title "World Economic Forum" a blind for the old secretive
well-guarded Bilderberger meetings? Or "Bilderbuggers" as I
thought of them since they seemed busy giving the rest of us
a poke up the arse in pursuit of their ideas for world domination
via wealth and influence.

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kealan coady

Tue 31st May 2022 15:17

The kind words are much appreciated Keith

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Greg Freeman

Tue 31st May 2022 14:35

Thanks for your comments, Dave. You've known Shaun a long time. I just came across this fine poet during lockdown and through Zoom.

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keith jeffries

Tue 31st May 2022 13:25

As one devoted to Christ your words are echoed in my heart.
Thank you for this
Keith

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