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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 11:11

Glad you liked it Ruth.
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<Deleted User> (33540)

Sun 29th May 2022 11:02

I most definitely fall in with the previous comments John


but don't phone me and I won't phone you ๐Ÿ˜

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<Deleted User> (33540)

Sun 29th May 2022 10:52

yet another of Mr Coopey's constant clevernesses! ๐Ÿ‘

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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 10:26

Good will keep evil far away๐Ÿ˜ˆ

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Nigel Astell

Sun 29th May 2022 10:24

Any thing sour is sweet at the start๐Ÿ˜

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 10:00

We are all becoming slaves to our phones, John. I recommend one with a dodgy battery and a slow charger, enforcing hours of non-use!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:35

It is important to say this, Keith, in the name of humanity. Well done.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:25

I think you sum it up perfectly, Jennifer. Twisted indeed.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 29th May 2022 09:20

A beautiful poem, Rick.

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John Botterill

Sun 29th May 2022 08:38

Thanks Carol. I'm a miserable old git, I know. ๐Ÿ˜Š Phones do want to take over your life though!!! Mine gives me unwarranted advice!

Thanks for the likes : Holden, Frederick and K. Lynn

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John Botterill

Sun 29th May 2022 07:49

Thanks Holden. Your comments mean a lot to me ๐Ÿ˜€

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<Deleted User> (33618)

Sun 29th May 2022 02:46

Life seemed a lot simpler before mobile phones, and yet they are also wonderful to have these days. But to become a slave to them is not good. You have penned an accurate portrayal indeed!

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<Deleted User> (33618)

Sun 29th May 2022 02:42

You've set a lovely scene Julie! Mmmm, we had a mini Magnum ice-cream last evening for dessert. ๐Ÿ˜‹

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 29th May 2022 02:41

A wonderful poem, John, the beautiful relationship you have with your grandson always shines through! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Sun 29th May 2022 02:39

Interesting! Might have been both[?]

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 29th May 2022 02:06

A remarkably powerful poem, John, very evocative! ๐ŸŒท

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Holden Moncrieff

Sun 29th May 2022 01:48

Thank you so much, John, for your kind comment and encouragement, I'm always grateful! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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John Coopey

Sat 28th May 2022 20:54

Yes, I saw that report, MC. It follows the solution is therefore to arm everyone in the US. Hang on though, theyโ€™ve already got 120 guns per 100 people. This should eliminate the problem. Hang on though, they seem to have the greatest number of gun deaths per population in the world.
https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-us-canada-41488081
Mercifully we do not have a statistically big gun crime problem in this country. But knife crime is. Perhaps we should encourage everyone to carry a knife so the good guys can be on hand to stab the bad guys.

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John Botterill

Sat 28th May 2022 20:22

I'm trying Ruth! Both of my brain cells are bumping together as I write this!๐Ÿ˜‚

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John Botterill

Sat 28th May 2022 19:57

Thanks, Greg. I really enjoyed this article. Very enlightening.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 28th May 2022 18:06

Gun ownership in the USA took a sudden turn in a positive sense
(if that can be said) when it's reported today that an armed
woman (not law enforcement) shot dead a criminal armed with
an AK-47 type weapon who had opened fire on a crowd in her
presence. No charges are contemplated by West Virginia authorities. The woman was legally entitled to carry a weapon
and her victim was a man with criminal convictions. He was prohibited by law from possessing his weapon and no explanation is available about how he obtained it. (Surprise, surprise!) Now,
about the much touted subject of "gun control"..........?

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jennifer Malden

Sat 28th May 2022 17:39

Thanks Julian.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 28th May 2022 17:35

Each time we say never again but only until the next one starts. This time many were coerced and seduced into going, expecting a warm welcome. Really good.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 28th May 2022 17:29

Terrifyingly interesting, and didn't know about the deportations. Was hoping for a putsch. Loved the poem.


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Graham Sherwood

Sat 28th May 2022 17:17

Iโ€™ll just check ourT&Cโ€™s for any transgressions JJ for this rare statement from our founding father ๐Ÿ˜‡

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 28th May 2022 17:13

Iโ€™ll send her an invitation to WOL

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 28th May 2022 16:46

I suppose it is thought canny to communicate with the younger
members of UK society in what is perceived as a politically
astute method, albeit that the target audience is probably least
likely to want to listen and arguably also least likely to be
paying anything towards the maintenance of the licence fee.
Pity indeed that BBC 4 is being taken from the main channels.
It has been a welcome outlet for a variety of appealing
programming that wouldn't find room on BBC 1 0R even BBC
2 these days. Money talks but at the BBC it seems only to
speak for its highly paid legion of "management" and the likes
of Gary Lineker et al in front of its cameras.

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julie callaghan

Sat 28th May 2022 14:01

Hi Ruth

I didnโ€™t realise you wanted recordings. I donโ€™t like to read my poems out loud, I know that sounds a bit daft, sorry. Thanks for the offer though. Jx

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 28th May 2022 12:37

Thanks so much Julie & John.

Julie if you could record your poem and send me the file or upload it here I can retrieve and play it for youโ˜บ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks a million for your kind words John. It would be an absolute pleasure as always to feature your work, be it real or imagined!

My e-mail for anyone to get in touch

missruthaoreilly@gmail.com ๐Ÿ™

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jennifer Malden

Sat 28th May 2022 11:12

She's done a great job, not always assisted by the other members of the firm. Think a few of them are overpriviledged and underworked!!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 28th May 2022 11:03

Thanks for the like Stephen A. They seem unable to change the situation.

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Greg Freeman

Sat 28th May 2022 10:02

I'm very grateful for her unshakeable commitment during the cost of living crunch, Hugh, although I'm not sure that it will bother her personally too much!

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Steve White

Sat 28th May 2022 07:15

Thanks all!

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kJ Walker

Sat 28th May 2022 06:59

My mum once brayed my sister for no reason.
On realising her mistake she simply said "oh well, your in credit now. Next time you do owt wrong you can get away with it"
The first time that I hit my dad back was the last, and we never spoke again. (Not to each other I mean. We weren't struck dumb or owt)

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kJ Walker

Sat 28th May 2022 06:35

Sad but true I'm afraid Stephen.
All wars are senseless. I don't understand the objective of this one, so can't see how it's going to end.

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<Deleted User> (33618)

Sat 28th May 2022 02:55

Very cool!

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<Deleted User> (33618)

Sat 28th May 2022 02:54

So funny! ๐Ÿ˜

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Tom

Sat 28th May 2022 00:34

Thank you Fredrick, Stephen, Stephen, Holden and Bethany for the 'likes' and for reading - very kind of you to take the time to have a squiz.

Stephen/Julie, thank you so much. I have wrestled with poem for a few weeks and I know I never really got to grips with it but I was quite pleased with some of the lines.

Writing poems like this when the world is self-destructing so spectacularly feels a bit trite but a little escapism helps some of us deal with everything. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

P.S. I don't know why it's not displaying here on the poem post, but I added an audio reading of this poem - you can find it on my profile page.

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John Botterill

Fri 27th May 2022 23:01

Yes. Hope your show is epic! How can it not be with you in charge!!!
I will do my best to dredge my memory, Ruth. Alcohol has tended to blur these occasions in the past but I'll use my imagination.
All the best to you and your station.๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ‘

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Reggie's Ghost

Fri 27th May 2022 22:54

Well constructed Steve.

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John Botterill

Fri 27th May 2022 22:53

Fantastic poem Holden. I loved the hubris and the pathos. We've all been there, I suppose! ( Never demolished a gate though!)
Your skill in the telling of the story is phenomenal! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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John Botterill

Fri 27th May 2022 22:47

Superb satire. The jolly tone is brilliantly at odds with the message, Stephen. Amazing stuff!

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John Botterill

Fri 27th May 2022 22:43

Thanks Julie and Stephen for your comments. He certainly feels that he can teach us all a lesson haha. He lacks nothing in confidence, bless him!
Thanks, too, for the likes Stephen A and Bethany ๐Ÿ˜€

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John Coopey

Fri 27th May 2022 21:00

I echo Stephenโ€™s thoughts, Steve. I wish I had written this.

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John Coopey

Fri 27th May 2022 20:57

Ha ha. Stop it, Joe. Youโ€™ll have the Woke Police on to you!

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Sunshine

Fri 27th May 2022 18:08

Definitely infinitely till death. Thank you Nigel.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 27th May 2022 18:00

A lovely poem, John. It shows that we must never lose that sense of wonder and curiosity, whatever our age. Your grandson can teach us all something.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 27th May 2022 17:57

This is brilliant, Steve. It skewers the whole bunch of them with rhythm and rhyme!

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 27th May 2022 17:54

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 27th May 2022 17:53

A massive poem, Stephen. The title sums it up.

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