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Wed 26th Aug 2020 15:59

Good luck to him I say, and I'm being serious. People can choose whether to buy or not. What else has he got to sell apart from himself? He doesn't manufacture anything or provide a valuable service.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 26th Aug 2020 12:50

It's become another issue in the Leave-Remain culture war, Tim. Apparently Vera Lynn singing Land of Hope and Glory is top of the iTunes chart. You couldn't make it up.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 26th Aug 2020 12:48

Thank you, Don. And you can stick your Paul Abbott where the sun don't shine. And I mean that in the nicest possible way.

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d.knape

Wed 26th Aug 2020 12:16

needless to say....
a Deep poem.

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julie callaghan

Wed 26th Aug 2020 12:02

Thanks for the likes Hugh and Branwell

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Don Matthews

Wed 26th Aug 2020 11:31

Maybe I should go on a shopping mall tour. 50 bucks to have ya pic taken with Australia's future famous-to-be poet (No-one's buying my stuff so a bloke's gotta make a quid ...)

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julie callaghan

Wed 26th Aug 2020 11:30

Hugh, you must be the only person who can bring a smile from Diarrhoea?

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Don Matthews

Wed 26th Aug 2020 11:24

Wot, no Land of Hope
No Land of Glory sung?
My mother country's been forsook
I'm buggered, feeling stung....

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Wed 26th Aug 2020 11:21

Grease? More like greasing palms. I s'pose a bloke's gotta make a quid.

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Wed 26th Aug 2020 11:04

Ahhh, the magic of young love captured with great eloquence. Lovely Tom. Brought back memories

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David R Mellor

Wed 26th Aug 2020 10:45

Thanks Eric, glad it struck a cord even tho its the bum notes people play on us sometimes

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keith jeffries

Wed 26th Aug 2020 10:40

Rampant Capitalism Don

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Tim Ellis

Wed 26th Aug 2020 10:28

I remember hating Last Night of the Proms since I was old enough to have opinions on anything, 40 years ago or more. I actually watch some of the concerts these days so I must be getting old, but my reaction to the crude jingoism of the Last Night hasn’t changed. Dropping these fascist anthems is well overdue.

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Tim Ellis

Wed 26th Aug 2020 10:19

I was privileged to see Seamus Heaney reading twice in the two years before he died. Great to see his legacy continues and he’s being quoted by the future US President (please!).

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John Coopey

Wed 26th Aug 2020 09:16

I completely agree about the hijacking of symbols by Boris, Greg,but I still can’t get exercised by the singing of these songs. No-one really believes we are going to set our bounds wider still and wider.. Pretty tame stuff, don’t you think? Now “cut the throats of your sons and friends” (“La Marseillaise”) - that’s more like it.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 26th Aug 2020 06:50

Each to their own, John. I just have a gut reaction to those songs, that's all. I see now that Boris Johnson embodies the spirit of Land of Hope and Glory. Let's hope he - and the song - retires soon on grounds of ill-health.

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John Marks

Tue 25th Aug 2020 23:43

Brevity - the soul of wit.

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julie callaghan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 20:03

Thank you Nicola for your kind comment and thank you Jordyn for the like.

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Eric Berard

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:48

This is something I feel I mirror- as silly as I feel knowing that I let it happen, like we get put down by others, maybe specific people, and slowly become the person putting us down, ad end up doing the same to others. I love it ?

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Eric Berard

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:45

I resonate with this, but the one part "hurt by my own harsh words" especially, as I often find myself putting myself down in moments of anxiety and frustration. Beautiful.

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Robert C Gaulke

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:44

Thank you. It's the lives of many of my students.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:32

Wow. Another great piece?


-J

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:21

Beautiful x

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Emeka Collins

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:11

"I fixed my dreams and longing on a future garland
I told myself this was only temporary, an abberation"

These words stuck to me. Thanks for inspiring.

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Emeka Collins

Tue 25th Aug 2020 19:07

Keith is simply a writer that speaks unbiased to power and the people.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 25th Aug 2020 17:51

Many thanks for your kind comment, Kate, and to everyone else for the likes.
One has to write about the present, even though we all wish that things could be different.

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julie callaghan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 17:49

Thank you Emer and Tom for the likes.

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Dan Holtan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 17:45

I feel your pain. Of course, expressing is more difficult than feeling, as you must relate with mere words.

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Dan Holtan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 17:37

Good concept. Uses your emotion, which shows, and is needed.

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kimberly

Tue 25th Aug 2020 17:15

I agree, this is lyrical.

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julie callaghan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 16:42

Thanks for the likes Vautaw and John

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 25th Aug 2020 16:30

Thanks Rich, and yes exactly that. There have been times when I've just attended to my life rather than actually lived it. I was the spoon, in and out of the soup, but never knowing what it tasted like. ❤

J. x

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 25th Aug 2020 16:21

Not the first time, JC. To adapt an old saying.
"Absence persuades the mind to wonder". ?
Onwards and upwards!

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 25th Aug 2020 16:05

it was - but it's also the title of one of JTE's albums - the irony is quite deliberate ?

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:59

I don’t mind the songs at all, Greg. If a nation wants to recall and celebrate its previous times that’s fine by me. I do have a rather bigoted attitude however to the Hooray Henrys singing it.

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:50

Someone’s got it in for you, MC.

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Tom

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:47

Thanks for the likes and comments Manisha, Neressa, Victoria, Jordyn, Nicola, Kim and Kate. So kind of you. I'm glad this one seems to have translated. Victoria, thank you, I can't help but be drawn to a bit of heartbreak... Nicola, you're right, so many ways to nurture and take care of this world... And Kate, carving pretty worlds is no mean feat - please never stop. Thanks all. Tom.

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:42

St Jude, wasn’t it, Ian?

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 14:42

Many thanks for your thoughts, MC. I tried to write it in triplets (dactyls) so I think a guitar plucked in 6/8 time would serve it well.
And many thanks for the Likes, Jordyn, Trevor, Stephen, Julie and Poems Hub.

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julie callaghan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 13:39

Thanks for the like Kate

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:35

I like the idea of erosion becoming a foundation. Nice poem.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:28

I fear I love to carve pretty worlds in my mind too Tom...... So many great lines in this, I hardly know where to start. One I will read over and over.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:24

An anthem for our times Stephen

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:21

Very uplifting Faith. I enjoyed this very much.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:20

I love the imagery of being left with a thorn stuck in my mind. Will you put this to music Simon? It feels like a song.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:19

I loved this Martin. Time to start a merry movement. ?

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d.knape

Tue 25th Aug 2020 11:51

This is delightful!
So glad that you wrote it.
Me.

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Martin Elder

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:37

I would echo what Keith says. That is a real test of your faith that it helps you to weather the storms. Keep on keeping on
Nice one

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keith jeffries

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:22

The gift of Faith is a gift indeed. Excellent poem

Keith

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:19

Thank you fee free to leave comments on my other poems. I appreciate any feed back.

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