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Philipos

Fri 15th Nov 2019 08:06

Interesting profile MT. Thanks for commenting on Coming a Croper. Blessings. P.

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Aimee

Fri 15th Nov 2019 06:12

I love this ! Truly magnificent

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Aimee

Fri 15th Nov 2019 05:51

Thank you !!!! I’m glad I’ve finally found a place full of creative thinkers

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Dewald

Fri 15th Nov 2019 04:11

Good work Aimee !! Good to know that are people of all ages seeing that the world has a lot a contradictions ?

I have posted an piece this morning called Who am I, sharing very much of the same emotion in your post

Love your work !

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Don Matthews

Fri 15th Nov 2019 02:35

Hey litttle Nobody
You've made someone smile
Keep donning smile faces
Keep donning with style

(OK......)

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Aimee

Fri 15th Nov 2019 00:18

Thank you I’ve been writing for 10 years but haven’t published yet never thought I was that good

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 15th Nov 2019 00:15

Your poems almost always make me don a smile. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 23:31

Good one Tom. I feel every blow!

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Tom Harding

Thu 14th Nov 2019 22:59

Thanks both, the sweet mysterys of life

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 14th Nov 2019 22:40

Ray you are correct. I stand corrected. Correction is the side-street to drunken doorways.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 14th Nov 2019 21:57

...though to reach a wide audience it is often necessary to keep the language and the message relatively straightforward. Complex pieces can leave many behind and end up appealing only to a tiny elite. This doesn't mean that pieces have to be dumbed down...that is entirely different.

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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 21:53

I don't know where you came from but i am sorry you had to
find my site and read my terrible poetry.
I hope someday you will recover.

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Martin Elder

Thu 14th Nov 2019 19:49

Thanks again Hannah

much obliged
Martin

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Martin Elder

Thu 14th Nov 2019 19:47

Thank you so much Hannah. I am glad you liked

Cheers

Martin

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Jon

Thu 14th Nov 2019 19:24

Hi Ray
Thought provoking. The stunning second stanza sums it up for me.
So well thought out and written
Jon

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Jon

Thu 14th Nov 2019 19:21

Hi Keith
Beautifully written. Exposes the cruelty of which mankind is capable.
Jon

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jennifer Malden

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:50

Beautifully awful!!!!! They even collected gold teeth afterwards!

Jennifer

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:50

Po - know where you're coming from. But I was throwing out some
magazines after posting this - some dating back to the early 1990s
(hoarder - moi?!) - and a number contained items that remind us how
the Tories became so disdainful of the electorate's misgivings over
the EU (I do NOT consider the EU to be "Europe"), with reminders
that John Major was vilified for betraying the electorate by signing
the Maastricht Treaty without a proper mandate, whilst a certain
"Father of the House" - Ken Clarke - was telling students in Cambridge of his ambition to see us signed up to the Euro.
Years ago, I wrote to the latter expressing my own misgivings about what was being done, quoting lines from G.K. Chesterson's poem "The Secret People". The response was a card merely acknowledging my letter. Now, the poet's words are taking form. His
"Unhappy Lords" see their power wane
now that the people understand what has
been done in their name and reject it..
Here's an amusing but rather alarming example of what we were facing:.
The Lord's Prayer has 58 words
The Ten Commandments have 297 words.
The US Declaration of Independence has 310 words.
But the EC directive on the exporting of duck eggs has 28,911 words!

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jennifer Malden

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:44

If we didn't even bother to turn out surely it would mean we didn't care a damn? turning out will never help the pain and sorrow of those injured, or that of families who have lost members, but it at least shows that we remember and are grateful for what they did. Or not?

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:37

Loved this one, concentrated and full of significance.

Jennifer

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Eli

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:25

Greetings Graham.
Thank you for your comment for the piece, "Hands of Ankh".
There is no translation, as the poem was inspired through a dream, in a language I do not know. Sorry.
Since that time, there is someone I know who believes it it Swahili!?
Wow, and translated a few lines, but didn't have time to translate it entirely.
Thank you for your support.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli

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Eli

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:20

Greetings Cynthia.
Apologies that I haven't referred to your comment sent, Wed 7th Aug 2013 12:15! Oh dear. It was for the :Hands of Ankh". I wrote this piece after a dream in a language unknown to me. Thank you for your sensitive comment.
Much appreciated.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli

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jennifer Malden

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:09

Thanks Hannah and Candice for the comments.
glad you enjoyed the poem. Your aunt and Candice's grandmother sound very similar! Thanks too to Lisa for the like
Jennifer

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Nigel Astell

Thu 14th Nov 2019 15:38

At ease he sits
by his side
she waits too
till such time
he hears her call.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 14th Nov 2019 14:45

What a way to finish Aimee.

I like the intermix of the reluctance of separatiuon with the relief of leberation. Well done.
Raj

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Do.RoThy

Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:08

A beautiful tribute...beautifully expressed...each word entered my lill heart and made a tear trickle down my eye.....? heartbreakingly beautiful!!

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Do.RoThy

Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:04

This is an amazing brainmatic thriller
The trail so curvy and twisty
Breadcrumbs as a mark to mystery
The last straight captured my heart.
Excellent!!

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Do.RoThy

Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:00

Hey lowercase Nobody Don
Like your fav e.mily dicki-son
Now you the other slice
Which uppercase Donny's life
Enigmatic and charismatic
Quite like this Nobody poem
It made me giggle and smile a lot
You know Sah....you nobody funny ol boy Mr.

Hehehe ?

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Do.RoThy

Thu 14th Nov 2019 12:56

Crazy Nobody......yes tz dedicated to Mr.Nobody from Nowherenia.....hehehe?

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David Redfield

Thu 14th Nov 2019 12:46

A nice metaphorical use of techspeak to convey breakdown in communications/relationships.
Strong ironic hint that over-reliance on such substitutions for real communication have actually led to this situation anyway. It's the universal neurosis of our times: can't do with, can't do without ...

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 14th Nov 2019 11:57

Thanks Dorothy, I think it's the journey we all have to take in the end. So pleased You liked it.

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 14th Nov 2019 11:55

Thanks Tom and thank you Don, I just had one of those, "Well this where we've got to and do you know what, the journey's not been so bad," kind of moments. Glad you enjoyed.

J, x

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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 11:18

have you grown attached to this poem?

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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:22

Liked your poem
thought it was neat,
don't step on your
Blue- toed feet!
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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:15

thanks for reading "Dear Valued Customer"
i hope you had as much fun reading it
as I had writing it.

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Don Matthews

Thu 14th Nov 2019 09:43

Golly gosh! A poem dedicated to me! I'm honoured....

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Don Matthews

Thu 14th Nov 2019 09:40

I wondered what that was flapping on my back Ruth?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 14th Nov 2019 09:32

Thanks for your kind comment Philipos, glad you liked this one.

Thanks Don, well maybe some have muses with wings...the winged messenger of inspiration.

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Don Matthews

Thu 14th Nov 2019 09:19

You take life too serious
Said the Easter Bunny
Loosen up you gloomy lot
Most things should be funny

It's OK for you Easter
Silly Easter Bunny
We like our doomy gloomy times
When things are so un-funny

(Can't understand these humans....)

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Don Matthews

Thu 14th Nov 2019 09:09

You really got to me here....

But does she have wings?......





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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 05:27

Thanks for taking us on this memory journey with you! I can see you there at the piano enjoying the view. What’s that song you are playing? Maybe Moonlight Serenade... https://youtu.be/2Dk9dujVeWE

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 05:18

Welcome Aimee! I love your poetry already and look forward to reading more!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 05:14

The power of star crossed love, makes for the best poetry! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 05:11

Oh that last line Aimee, gets you right in the feels. Good one!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 04:55

Poets must have pain to mold like clay. You make wringing out the soul onto the page look like child’s play! Bravo John. Write on.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 04:48

John, I hope you never stop writing. Your words are nectar to our souls. I really love this one, like so many of your poems. Write on my luminous poetic friend.

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Philipos

Thu 14th Nov 2019 00:28

Wowie. 10 out 10. Blessings. P. ?

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Wed 13th Nov 2019 22:20

Another great write.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Wed 13th Nov 2019 22:18

This is fantastic. The imagery, the reality.
One of the best I've read.

Hannah

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Don Matthews

Wed 13th Nov 2019 22:11

Very good Jason. As usual.....

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