I love this ! Truly magnificent
Comment is about The Place in my Soul (blog)
Original item by Dewald
Thank you !!!! I’m glad I’ve finally found a place full of creative thinkers
Comment is about Aimee (poet profile)
Original item by Aimee
Good work Aimee !! Good to know that are people of all ages seeing that the world has a lot a contradictions ?
I have posted an piece this morning called Who am I, sharing very much of the same emotion in your post
Love your work !
Comment is about Aimee (poet profile)
Original item by Aimee
Hey litttle Nobody
You've made someone smile
Keep donning smile faces
Keep donning with style
(OK......)
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Comment is about Nobody (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Thank you I’ve been writing for 10 years but haven’t published yet never thought I was that good
Comment is about Aimee (poet profile)
Original item by Aimee
Your poems almost always make me don a smile. ?
Comment is about Nobody (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Thanks both, the sweet mysterys of life
Comment is about The Hard Problem (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
Ray you are correct. I stand corrected. Correction is the side-street to drunken doorways.
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Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 14th Nov 2019 21:57
...though to reach a wide audience it is often necessary to keep the language and the message relatively straightforward. Complex pieces can leave many behind and end up appealing only to a tiny elite. This doesn't mean that pieces have to be dumbed down...that is entirely different.
Comment is about After reading the poetry of Rabindranath Tagore (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Thu 14th Nov 2019 21:53
I don't know where you came from but i am sorry you had to
find my site and read my terrible poetry.
I hope someday you will recover.
Comment is about David Redfield (poet profile)
Original item by David Redfield
Thanks again Hannah
much obliged
Martin
Comment is about Born into this suit (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thank you so much Hannah. I am glad you liked
Cheers
Martin
Comment is about There's a town (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Hi Ray
Thought provoking. The stunning second stanza sums it up for me.
So well thought out and written
Jon
Comment is about NEEDING MAYBE A TITLE IN LATIN (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Hi Keith
Beautifully written. Exposes the cruelty of which mankind is capable.
Jon
Comment is about A Solution (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Beautifully awful!!!!! They even collected gold teeth afterwards!
Jennifer
Comment is about A Solution (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Po - know where you're coming from. But I was throwing out some
magazines after posting this - some dating back to the early 1990s
(hoarder - moi?!) - and a number contained items that remind us how
the Tories became so disdainful of the electorate's misgivings over
the EU (I do NOT consider the EU to be "Europe"), with reminders
that John Major was vilified for betraying the electorate by signing
the Maastricht Treaty without a proper mandate, whilst a certain
"Father of the House" - Ken Clarke - was telling students in Cambridge of his ambition to see us signed up to the Euro.
Years ago, I wrote to the latter expressing my own misgivings about what was being done, quoting lines from G.K. Chesterson's poem "The Secret People". The response was a card merely acknowledging my letter. Now, the poet's words are taking form. His
"Unhappy Lords" see their power wane
now that the people understand what has
been done in their name and reject it..
Here's an amusing but rather alarming example of what we were facing:.
The Lord's Prayer has 58 words
The Ten Commandments have 297 words.
The US Declaration of Independence has 310 words.
But the EC directive on the exporting of duck eggs has 28,911 words!
Comment is about SPOT THE DIFFERENCE (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
If we didn't even bother to turn out surely it would mean we didn't care a damn? turning out will never help the pain and sorrow of those injured, or that of families who have lost members, but it at least shows that we remember and are grateful for what they did. Or not?
Jennifer
Comment is about NEEDING MAYBE A TITLE IN LATIN (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Loved this one, concentrated and full of significance.
Jennifer
Comment is about SMALL WORLD (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Greetings Graham.
Thank you for your comment for the piece, "Hands of Ankh".
There is no translation, as the poem was inspired through a dream, in a language I do not know. Sorry.
Since that time, there is someone I know who believes it it Swahili!?
Wow, and translated a few lines, but didn't have time to translate it entirely.
Thank you for your support.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli
Comment is about Graham Sherwood (poet profile)
Original item by Graham Sherwood
Greetings Cynthia.
Apologies that I haven't referred to your comment sent, Wed 7th Aug 2013 12:15! Oh dear. It was for the :Hands of Ankh". I wrote this piece after a dream in a language unknown to me. Thank you for your sensitive comment.
Much appreciated.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli
Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thanks Hannah and Candice for the comments.
glad you enjoyed the poem. Your aunt and Candice's grandmother sound very similar! Thanks too to Lisa for the like
Jennifer
Comment is about Forbidden fruit (for my grandmother) (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
At ease he sits
by his side
she waits too
till such time
he hears her call.
Comment is about Muse (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
What a way to finish Aimee.
I like the intermix of the reluctance of separatiuon with the relief of leberation. Well done.
Raj
Comment is about Myself (blog)
Original item by Aimee
Do.RoThy
Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:08
A beautiful tribute...beautifully expressed...each word entered my lill heart and made a tear trickle down my eye.....? heartbreakingly beautiful!!
Comment is about The Place in my Soul (blog)
Original item by Dewald
Do.RoThy
Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:04
This is an amazing brainmatic thriller
The trail so curvy and twisty
Breadcrumbs as a mark to mystery
The last straight captured my heart.
Excellent!!
Comment is about A Trail of Breadcrumbs (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Do.RoThy
Thu 14th Nov 2019 13:00
Hey lowercase Nobody Don
Like your fav e.mily dicki-son
Now you the other slice
Which uppercase Donny's life
Enigmatic and charismatic
Quite like this Nobody poem
It made me giggle and smile a lot
You know Sah....you nobody funny ol boy Mr.
Hehehe ?
Comment is about Nobody (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Do.RoThy
Thu 14th Nov 2019 12:56
Crazy Nobody......yes tz dedicated to Mr.Nobody from Nowherenia.....hehehe?
Comment is about Heartsoubody!! (blog)
A nice metaphorical use of techspeak to convey breakdown in communications/relationships.
Strong ironic hint that over-reliance on such substitutions for real communication have actually led to this situation anyway. It's the universal neurosis of our times: can't do with, can't do without ...
Comment is about Attachment (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Thanks Dorothy, I think it's the journey we all have to take in the end. So pleased You liked it.
J. x
Comment is about The Oaken Pole (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Thanks Tom and thank you Don, I just had one of those, "Well this where we've got to and do you know what, the journey's not been so bad," kind of moments. Glad you enjoyed.
J, x
Comment is about The Last Toast (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Thu 14th Nov 2019 11:18
Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:22
Liked your poem
thought it was neat,
don't step on your
Blue- toed feet!
?
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
Original item by Tom
Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:15
thanks for reading "Dear Valued Customer"
i hope you had as much fun reading it
as I had writing it.
Comment is about Emilia Callahan (poet profile)
Original item by Emilia Callahan
Golly gosh! A poem dedicated to me! I'm honoured....
?
Comment is about Heartsoubody!! (blog)
I wondered what that was flapping on my back Ruth?
?
Comment is about Muse (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Thanks for your kind comment Philipos, glad you liked this one.
Thanks Don, well maybe some have muses with wings...the winged messenger of inspiration.
Comment is about Muse (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
You take life too serious
Said the Easter Bunny
Loosen up you gloomy lot
Most things should be funny
It's OK for you Easter
Silly Easter Bunny
We like our doomy gloomy times
When things are so un-funny
(Can't understand these humans....)
?
Comment is about Everything is Funny (blog)
Original item by Michael Triandam
You really got to me here....
But does she have wings?......
Comment is about Muse (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Thanks for taking us on this memory journey with you! I can see you there at the piano enjoying the view. What’s that song you are playing? Maybe Moonlight Serenade... https://youtu.be/2Dk9dujVeWE
Comment is about ON THE QE2 1977 (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Welcome Aimee! I love your poetry already and look forward to reading more!
Comment is about Aimee (poet profile)
Original item by Aimee
The power of star crossed love, makes for the best poetry! ?
Comment is about Together in my thoughts (blog)
Original item by Aimee
Oh that last line Aimee, gets you right in the feels. Good one!
Comment is about Myself (blog)
Original item by Aimee
Poets must have pain to mold like clay. You make wringing out the soul onto the page look like child’s play! Bravo John. Write on.
Comment is about An adamantine distress (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
John, I hope you never stop writing. Your words are nectar to our souls. I really love this one, like so many of your poems. Write on my luminous poetic friend.
Comment is about Blue (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Philipos
Thu 14th Nov 2019 00:28
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 13th Nov 2019 22:20
Another great write.
Hannah
Comment is about Born into this suit (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 13th Nov 2019 22:18
This is fantastic. The imagery, the reality.
One of the best I've read.
Hannah
Comment is about There's a town (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Very good Jason. As usual.....
Comment is about The Last Toast (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Philipos
Fri 15th Nov 2019 08:06
Interesting profile MT. Thanks for commenting on Coming a Croper. Blessings. P.
Comment is about Michael Triandam (poet profile)
Original item by Michael Triandam