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Stu Buck

Sat 30th Apr 2016 20:05

cheers both. we have a plague of jackdaws in the village and our house has huge windows. its a match made in heaven (or hell i suppose for the jackdaw)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Apr 2016 19:16

JC - I saw "Red Ken" on a late night political programme
very recently and was impressed to see him stand to
attention and mouth the words when Katherine Jenkins
sung the national anthem. Perhaps remembering Corbyn
not doing likewise.
if you join a disciplined UK force to serve "Queen
and Country" then the oath of allegiance is enshrined in
the procedures. Elsewhere, it is modified to suit the
accepted constitutional arrangements of a country and
its history - as in the USA among others. When in Rome...?
I know the tune but not its name. At least the content
of your blog didn't encourage the use of "The Leader
Of The Pack"! :-)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Apr 2016 19:09

On occasion, I find my sleeping mind creates a theme and
eventually the words - often well on the way to completion
when I finally totter from bed. This has also been the case
with song/lyric - which I why I've found a cassette tape
player VERY useful. I know from experience that if I don't
act immediately and get something on tape, then it will be
lost IF I drop back to sleep, often a test of will power
when duvet comfort calls!

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Apr 2016 18:46

Hello MC,
I've never had much time for Livingstone. But he and Corbyn are meant to be political allies. I bet Corbyn could murder him right now.
I've just read Allegiance. As you might expect I disagree with the premise but still enjoyed the discipline of the poem.
Are you familiar with this tune? Twinkle's 1964 motorbike accident song, "Terry".

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Apr 2016 18:28

JC - whatever the pros and cons in this "free speech"
spat (we're all too busy tip-toing around other folks'
sensibilities nowadays), you are, as usual, right on the
money with both rhyme and presentation.
Talent ( encouraging a wry chuckle) is always to be welcomed. Thanks.

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John Bastard

Sat 30th Apr 2016 14:18

your final line here is breathtaking.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 30th Apr 2016 14:13

After all the rhetoric, copy inches, TV coverage, radio tributes, press conferences, bios, etc the one word I haven't seen mentioned is forgiveness! It's a shame there isn't room for it yet. It will need to come out before this sorry mess can be laid to rest.

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Stu Buck

Sat 30th Apr 2016 14:01

lynn this is brilliant. its disgusting and surreal. i dont get on here as much as i used to now, due to baby stuff, but im glad i came on today because this has made me do all sorts of emotions.

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Stu Buck

Sat 30th Apr 2016 13:58

cheers guys. as so often happens, as soon as i sat on it i wanted to change it, but hey ho, these sort of problems i will take all day over the stresses and strains of a normal life.

lancy - i hoped to convey a sense of the victims mind and memories slipping, i hope i succeeded(ish)

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Mike Weinblatt

Sat 30th Apr 2016 07:08

Hi greg

I knew Adrian very well, first met him at streates coffee bar, I use to go round on a sunday and have tea with him and joyce, he was a wealth of knowledge, in fact introduced me to the joys raymond chandler. Adrian stayed in my parents house after a cnd march, when we were in london. In his painting christ entrance to liverpool I'm next to arthur dooley near the front. I participated in his happenings at the hope hall. We nearly caught up in Cookham Berks, he had come down for a poetry reading, I was rehearsing my big band in a church in cookham, he I believed went to the wrong church. Oh yes, it's me on the saatchi site, I've always dipped the brush, Adrian did have one of mine,
fondest regards

mike weinblatt, jm weinblatt, lord shosti o'kovitch and once was mike vincent

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 30th Apr 2016 00:05

I think we got our wires crossed there sweetness :~) Tommy

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Apr 2016 23:57

So whose position do you support on this, Tommy? Kenny's or Jezza's?

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 29th Apr 2016 23:48

Not all Jews are Israelis and not all Israelis are Jews.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 29th Apr 2016 23:19

Hi Peter, can you check your WOL emails, please? Just click on Inbox at the top of this page. Many thanks, Greg

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Nigel Astell

Fri 29th Apr 2016 20:02

Thanks but please - - -

Only when the ink goes dry
dare you ever consider that sin
there is no corner to hide
for someone with your poetic talent!

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Lynn Hamilton

Fri 29th Apr 2016 19:21

Thanks Martin. Your comment is sincerely appreciated.

Lynn x

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Greg Freeman

Fri 29th Apr 2016 15:30

Thanks for stumbling upon and commenting on this article, Mike, and great to meet - online, at least - the author of that poem quoted. Did you know Adrian Henri personally in those days? And you mention that you write, but what about art ... is this you? http://www.saatchiart.com/art/Painting-lord-and-lady-shosti-o-kovitch/89719/1403772/view

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 29th Apr 2016 14:52

love it Corr-absobloodylutely!

Rose.

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Fatima

Fri 29th Apr 2016 13:14

Hello

I am a student studying the refugee crisis and I have read a poem I believe that you have written called "What is it". Will you please share your views on the influx of refugees into Europe?

Thank you very much

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Laura Taylor

Fri 29th Apr 2016 13:06

Love your ambition Stu :) Some interesting stuff here. My favourite, for its brevity and cleverness, is the strobe haiku.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 29th Apr 2016 12:58

Yeh I know Tommy, you don't have to tell me. I was just made up that it was finally made official.

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raypool

Fri 29th Apr 2016 11:41

Thanks for the appreciation Martin . I did go wistful on this one.

Wolfie: I thought I thanked you before on this, but I can't now find it! Anyway, lovely to get your fulsome comments and obviously eye to eye as always.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Fri 29th Apr 2016 09:49

cheers martin. i love zappa and beefheart, the album hot rats is a belter and i quite agree, he combined jazz and rock in a fragmented way but made it amazing.

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Jemima Jones

Fri 29th Apr 2016 08:23

fair comparison Lynn (and Tommy) Thank you.Jemima.

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Jemima Jones

Fri 29th Apr 2016 08:19

loved it all David,especially the last two lines.Thank you.Jemima.

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Jemima Jones

Fri 29th Apr 2016 08:16

ever so clever! Thank you.Jemima.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 29th Apr 2016 08:11

Thank you Phil and Rose for the likes.

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Matthew James

Fri 29th Apr 2016 05:36

Thank you both so much :)

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 29th Apr 2016 02:09

Sian, I, along with millions of other football supporters of various teams, welcome this transformation of Leicester without vast sums of capital who have enthralled a nation. Tommy :~)

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elPintor

Fri 29th Apr 2016 01:44

clever, clever..this reminded me of Shel Silverstein's "The Lion Who Shot Back"..I used to get great joy reading it aloud to my son, describing how funny the hunter's caps tasted.

Thanks for the laugh.

elPintor

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elPintor

Fri 29th Apr 2016 01:26

Thanks kindly for the comments. This seemed to me to need a little reworking, but I let it go anyway.

elPintor

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Sian Bird

Thu 28th Apr 2016 23:03

Hi Tommy

Thanks for taking the time to comment on my page. I'm new! But...do you actually like us foxes or are you just being polite lol

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Thu 28th Apr 2016 22:09

Brilliant!

Rose.

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:56

This has been excellently put together Stu, the whole nature of it is fractured .I often feel that my own thinking is quite fractured when I get these random ideas and notions, that work together. Frank Zappa would write musical pieces that seemed quite fractured and random but often worked really well.
However a Great series of poems, particularly liked rust and gaps.

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:48

I like it Ray , speaks to me of what could have been if only circumstances had been different, as with so many things in life. great poem.

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:43

This is simply a wonderful poem Lynn. I love the way it flows. Nice one

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:29

In the dark of the night, a lot of people on both sides of this divide will ask themselves the question.

Was I guilty of anything?

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:21

What a beautiful poem. It is nice to read such a wonderful evocation on the importance of family
Nice one

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Steven Dark

Thu 28th Apr 2016 20:15

@ Dominic James .... of course, my pleasure, with appropriate credit of course :)

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Lynn Dye

Thu 28th Apr 2016 19:19

Oh yes, been there, done that, I like it too.

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Various

Thu 28th Apr 2016 19:08

I feel that! Like it.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 28th Apr 2016 19:05

Oh yes, quite another matter! Still, we can live in hope...

Says a lot with just four words, Tommy, well done.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 28th Apr 2016 19:02

No, of course not, Tommy. The Establishment has much to answer for. Their cover-ups are disgusting on many levels.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 28th Apr 2016 18:34

Come on you Foxes! ;~) Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 28th Apr 2016 18:29

Pat & Stef cheers & cheers :~)

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 28th Apr 2016 18:25

Lynn had 96 police officers died on 15th April 1989 would they have had to wait 27 years for Liverpool supporters to be arrested and jailed? ;~) Tommy

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Matthew James

Thu 28th Apr 2016 16:35

Thanks for your kind words :)

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Katy Megan Hughes

Thu 28th Apr 2016 15:55

Well said. How did you guess that was my real wish ; )

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Katy Megan Hughes

Thu 28th Apr 2016 15:51

Indeed. Thank you Martin. I really love your poem He's not the one, so thoughtful and poignant.

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