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Sun 15th Dec 2013 11:07

Gorgeous!xx

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Dave Morgan

Sun 15th Dec 2013 10:40

Julian's right. Voting for this is a vote for WoL in all its guises and publicity is valuable. So vote!

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Starfish

Sat 14th Dec 2013 20:56

Alas only until the next cull :(
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

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Starfish

Sat 14th Dec 2013 20:40

I think we need an audio entry of this one!

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Starfish

Sat 14th Dec 2013 20:37

I like this. I like the description and also how at the start "This year is charring in the fire grate" and at the end you "Toss my wondering on the fire", bringing it all together.

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Julian (Admin)

Sat 14th Dec 2013 18:32

Thank you for those comments. And, to whoever nominated me (taking the p…?), thanks also.

It's embarrassing and underserved. Write Out Loud is the product of a team of excellent and truly dedicated people (Paul, David, Greg, Isobel, Laura, Ann, Frances, Michael) who keep the website ticking over and steadily developing; and a community of writers, publishers and organisers who submit gigs, poems, articles and such. This includes our Write Out Loud coordinators.

It aint me you are looking for, babe.

But, if it gives Write Out Loud some much-needed press…

Aagh!

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Shevaughn

Sat 14th Dec 2013 16:16

What do I write for the security question "what is the colour of the sky"??

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Greg Freeman

Sat 14th Dec 2013 15:59

Don't forget to vote, folks! Deadline is midnight on Monday night.

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Frances Spurrier

Sat 14th Dec 2013 14:39

Julian. I'm so happy that you have received this nomination and it is very well deserved. Does the Panda award involve the receipt of a cuddly black and white furry job? In which case I have plenty of bamboo to hand should you win.

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Sat 14th Dec 2013 10:52

sooo cosy an ending,to a great poem.
one suggestion though-

natures decorator is poised
to paley paint in,the new year'

?....x

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Sat 14th Dec 2013 10:44

sweet'n'neat!x

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 14th Dec 2013 08:46

Thanx Greg, its also the festive get together so as is tradition, if anyone wants to bring some festive party nibbles, that would be very much appreciated thanx for your support and all the best for 2014! X

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Shevaughn

Sat 14th Dec 2013 01:39

Thanks Steve! I'm glad u found favourites in 2 of my poems :) thanks again
-Shevaughn

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Greg Freeman

Sat 14th Dec 2013 00:50

What chins? Blame the camera angle, John! I'd been standing for a long time, and had to sit down. I've been re-reading '7 O'Clock Brit' in the anthology. I love that poem, more with every reading.

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nick armbrister

Sat 14th Dec 2013 00:26

well Shevaughn I met a gal on some penpal site I joined when I couldn't sleep in the summer. i went to see her in the Philippines. shes as crazy as me lol. same interests too. no lectures when i get a new tattoo or want to go to the plane museum or see a goth band. im different and will die for what im into and believe in.cant be doing with fly by night cowboys lol. stay happy young lady and true to you. always.:)

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nick armbrister

Sat 14th Dec 2013 00:08

very adult and truthful and real poem. good.

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John Coopey

Fri 13th Dec 2013 23:52

Thanks Steve. We were truly the golden generation - though I'd swop that for being 20 again!

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John Coopey

Fri 13th Dec 2013 23:41

You might have cropped my chins from the photo, Greg!
Good night, good reads, good company.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 13th Dec 2013 23:29

Hi Jules.

Nobody deserves this more than you.

Ken

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David Coldwell

Fri 13th Dec 2013 21:00

Well deserved nomination. Fantastic news.

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 20:12

Every heart needs a soulmate, someone to keep beating for
lovely thought,
Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 20:09

Hey Shevaughn,
Thanks for the comments about my poems. Had a look at your work and 'Time warp' and ‘Unfinished Business’ are my favourites. They are sort of like snapshots of poems and just waiting for more words to make them complete. I usually start off with a few lines then build on until I’ve said everything I want to say.
Having said that, there are all sorts of poems on this site some long, some medium, some short like yours. The good thing about short poems is they concentrate the reader on a clear thought. Anyway, lovely writing,
Best wishes,
Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 19:44

If I could travel back there would be so many things I'd change . .
Best wishes,
Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 18:19

Happy days for our badgers :-))

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 18:14

Well observed John, the passage of time has its effect on us all,
good one,
Steve

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Steve Higgins

Fri 13th Dec 2013 18:00

Thanks for dropping in once again Starfish. I have to say I'm detecting a little tongue in cheek element regarding the pip. It took some dedication to grow you know! :-))
Best wishes, steve

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 16:14

Hey Aaron! Awesome writing :) keep blogging,ill be looking out for your poems! I'd love for you to check out some of my poems and read your opinions and suggestions!.
And again awesome writing! :)

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 16:01

I can visualise the entire scene like a movie.Its almost like I'm there with you through each line that you portray in your poems,and i find that so serene and delightful. You are one the poets on this blog that inspires me Ann :) I would really love for you to check out my poems and give me your opinion. Keep blogging!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 13th Dec 2013 14:38

"Nearer dead"? If age is the arbiter then I'm
nearer dead than you! I believe the "number"
is no guide to the wins that life can offer across the spectrum of "age".
I go along with the saying "Look after number one".
That way, you help yourself and make sure you
are also there for others.
Cheers.

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Paul Sands

Fri 13th Dec 2013 14:33

Thank you Cynthia, I appreciate your comments immensely.

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John Coopey

Fri 13th Dec 2013 13:33

Versatile indeed. Of course, Starfish, I did scrape the bottom of the bowl with "Prawn Vindaloo".

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:35

I love lilacs too. I have filled my home with them, the scent so thick you could hardly breathe.

Great poem. I wish I could be 'romantic' and 'interesting'.

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David Cooke

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:35

HI Cynthia As ever I am bowled over by your encouragement. I'm a long time lapsed Catholic myself with a daughter who has converted to islam. I've also got a Kosovan branch in my wider family (That's where the blackbird sneaked in from!) so I have wide ranging ideas on what heaven might be. There's also a bit of Plato in there. When I was a kid I was convinced Heaven was a real place. I suppose my poem says it's all things to all men (And women of course!)I think your frequent kind comments on this site merit a copy of my current collection Work Horses. Just message me an address on this site and I'll send you one.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:12

Hi Shevaughn

Thanks for your kind comments on my stuff. I've only been writing a few years and I think the more I write the better it seems to get? (to me)

Your poems show a maturity beyond your years, and I get the impression of a caring sensitive disposition, with as yet an untapped mind full of pleasing ideas to come.

You have the advantage over me, starting much younger.
Put that precious time to good use, developing the natural talent you obviously possess.

Ken












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steve mellor

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:11

Hi Starfish
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on 'Complicit'.
It was a long long time ago, but I'm pretty sure it was only £10.
I think I chose SA as it was the easiest place to emigrate to, and to get back from.
Sad eh?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:06

Me too! Grrr-eat poem that never drops its stylish delivery. Good couplets are such fun, to write and to read, especially harnessed with severe metre.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:57

Well worth reading.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:53

Good poem, Mr Beckett, with an excellent theme. I'm honestly not sure how honest it really is - the transforming power of words to lift the soul out of pure misery. They certainly must reach a receptive and perceptive mind, one with fulsome powers of imagination - and, I would think, experience.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:45

This is good, no doubt about that. Would you consider dropping a few repetitions like 'soft',or the repeated simile structure, (using metaphors instead), making the poem even more minimal? Just a thought.

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:40

Hey Lynn! I just read your sample and man,you sure tell it like it is!
Amazing writing :) please check out some of my poems,would love to read your opinions. Keep blogging!

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Lynn Dye

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:37

Hi Solar, thank you for your comment :-)
Now that would appear to be the million dollar question - must admit, you have a great imagination, haha. Lxx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:22

'Love', and the expression of it, is an acquired taste. I did laugh through this very funny and well-written piece. Your 'lover' was probably equally glad to be done with you with your own sense of what is 'proper'.

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 11:12

Such wonderful gripping poems you write Cynthia! They are simply intriguing! please check out my poems,i would love to have your opinions!Keep blogging! :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 10:53

I really enjoy this, present tense intended, for I have come back to it more than once. It is the theme and the sustained mood that grabs me. My house is full of books both current and from other generations. It's a kind of veneration not possible without a physical object in your hand, the 'touch' of it as well as the ideas.

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 10:28

Yours poems are really inspiring and genuinely realistic:)
Keep blogging!
i would love for you to check out my poems and give me suggestion to make my poems as good as yours!

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 10:17

Wonderful poems,couldn't stop reading :) I would love to read your opinion on some of my poems. Keep blogging!

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 09:55

I am a beginner and i find ur poems lovely and not to mention most addictive.i would love for and experienced poet like u to give your opinions and suggestions on my poems.thank u.keep blogging! :)

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 09:51

Amazingly written :)

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Shevaughn

Fri 13th Dec 2013 09:35

Thank you so much I appreciate your kindness.please tell your friends about my poems!thank u

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Starfish

Fri 13th Dec 2013 09:33

I have just been reading your work - what a beautiful and mature use of language. Best wishes Starfish.

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