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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 22:01

Oi! I heard that!

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Isobel

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:39

I'm delighted to hear that there is a simple explanation for you disappearing like that :)

Re photo - any will do - how lucky are you not to be visually challenged - like what John Coopey is... ;)

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:16

...that comment about trying to find a photo that does justice...
...best keep looking!

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 13th Jan 2013 21:11

Isobel,
Your chat request kept coming up and I kept ticking `allow` but nout happened and as a computer thick `ead I didn`t know what to do next.

(I presume it was to do with old stupido deleting himself off the profiles by accident)If it was anything else let`s know.

(I`ll add a photo when I can find one that does Justice, homage, adoration, etc; to my immense good looks)

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Isobel

Sun 13th Jan 2013 20:36

Thanks for your comment on my FB poem Cathy. Yes - speaking to the wall is a strange concept - you ARE speaking to yourself - but at the same time everyone you ever knew - from the person you met in a lift a day or so ago to someone you haven't seen since your first job 20 years ago... Facebook is a crazy crazy place!

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Nigel Astell

Sun 13th Jan 2013 18:04

Sexy lady
Seductive glasses
Poetry book
Would love
To borrow
Mind you
I might
Just get
Stuck on
Page three.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:47

Thanks for your comments on "You've Met The Met", Laura.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:46

Hello Harry,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". Time was when the NUM were a significant if not enormous power. In their time, leaders like Gormley and Scargill were names everybody had heard of; likewise Vic Feather or Len Murray.
Who knows who the President of the TUC is these days, let alone a piddling little union like the NUM.

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Travis Brow

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:42

Thank you very much.

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:41

Hello MC,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met". My own role in the strike as a manager was to help staff the pits on a care and maintenance basis, preventing them fopm gassing up or flooding so there'd be something for the miners to come back to!

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John Coopey

Sun 13th Jan 2013 17:33

Food for thought, MC.
...and an honest form too. No pretence of "free verse" by the ritual chopping of prose into little lines.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 13th Jan 2013 15:59

No regrets
Sounds bullet proof
But I'm not sure.

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Fkx

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:47

There is a weight that a poet bears
although there along the edges the answers are scarce. There is a soothing undertone to this poem that allows what is not yet seen to comfort the begging heart of understanding. Thanks for sharing.

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Fkx

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:36

Having someone written into your life, that is so powerful and a union so intimate it is divine.
Thanks for sharing!

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Steve Higgins

Sun 13th Jan 2013 10:18

Liked this katy,
my problem is usually the other way
If I had said no
instead of yes!
Best wishes, Steve

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Ged Thompson

Sun 13th Jan 2013 02:11

I like this, well done

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Ged Thompson

Sun 13th Jan 2013 02:00

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Hazel

Sun 13th Jan 2013 00:28

Hi Cynthia thanks for your comment on Robert Burns, I like a lot of he's work.
Hazel

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 23:13

"Brave or stupid?" you say.

BRAVO GIRLY!! we say.xx

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 23:09

Hi again Shirley and thank you so much for the wonderful news regarding little Isabella.

It has no doubt lifted your spirits as well.

An awful thing for the whole family to have to endure.Good luck and good health to you all.

Patricia and Stef.xx..XX for Isabella.

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Tom Harding

Sat 12th Jan 2013 19:51

Hi Lynn,

Thanks as usual for your comments on 'Paxos'

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Tom Harding

Sat 12th Jan 2013 19:50

Hi Cynthia,
Thanks for the comments on Paxos. The 'He' is the stick insect... he was awkward and not at all graceful and therefore seemed naturally a male!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 12th Jan 2013 19:19

In times our forebears lived, not we,
Protection came from family,
There was no safety net to hand
Or other help in that other land.
Posterity will judge the deed...
Of "evil" men, there is no need.
The road to hell is trod unmentioned,
A highway for the well-intentioned.

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tony sheridan

Sat 12th Jan 2013 19:13

Hi Katy. This poem is very.....** thud**...[Wakes up on floor].........[Looks at computer].........**thud** Take care,Tony.

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John Coopey

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:59

Like I said, Tommy, that's the problem with polaristion. Consider this; if the story had ended with the bobby nutting the collier would it have still been "an amusing anecdote"?

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:47

John
there were indeed 'cruel bastards' (your words) among the miners- a 'cruel' and dangerous and underpaid profession that breeds both resentment to their exploitation and pride in their work. This condition can be found generally among sections of the working-class. But that is a secondary issue- too many people ignore the main issue of pit-closures, pay and conditions- any talk of such is, frankly - a distraction.
As for Scargill '' I wouldn't trust his wisdom on things he knew nothing about (the science of fuel technology).''(your words) The NUM had employed creditable scientific reports on such matters, supported by the scientific community generally.
On the tactics, yes there were things he should have done - giving Welsh miners the chance to discuss and campaign amongst themselves - before putting to a ballot.
Also there was discontent. In the 1982 strike ballot over threatened Welsh pits (the Yorkshire area, which came out first in 1984) voted against. This caused some confusion and bitterness among South Wales miners at the start of the 1984-85 strike. John the working class are not a homoginised group but will need a clear, resourceful and strong leadership.

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Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:46

Loved it as much as you did.xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:39

I do have some catching up to do. What an impressive profile.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:12

I like this a lot, very clever. Last year I found an anthology of Robert Burns' work on a Church Fair table, all of 50p. There are more than 550 poems/ballads/songs in it. I'm a bit overwhelmed, but I pick my way through gradually, as the spirit moves me, for he is an acquired taste to absorb in the tens per gulp.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:08

Welcome to WOL from me too, Carla. I found this beautiful, some lovely turns of phrase, as has already been mentioned.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:02

STILL WAITING!LOL!XX

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Lynn Dye

Sat 12th Jan 2013 17:00

Good one, Tom. Enjoyed this.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:59

WE only need one word to describe this-




STUNNING!xx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:55

Carla, this is good. Would you consider:

'among the skeins
of our tangled hearts'

The last two lines seem just a bit out of sync. Comments are always only my opinion.

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:52

WIT-WOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SOD THE COMMENTS!!!(EXCEPT THESE)
PATRICIA,QUICK!
AVERT YOUR EYES-PASS ME SOME NEW BATTERIES FOR MY PACEMAKER AND TURN THE PRINTER ON!!

OH!I'VE COME OVER ALL UNNECCESSARY.XXXXXXXXXXXX!!

(DEFINITELY A PICTURE WORTH A THOUSAND..ER..)

MORE PLEASE!HAHA

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:48

I like the immediacy, the 'world in a grain of sand' concept. Great imagery pulling in all kinds of related ideas. Is the 'He' the 'stick insect' which furthers that metaphor and impact? Or did 'I' become 'He', perhaps unintentionally. Genuinely interested.

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Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:41

Lovely Shirley!
And thanks for the reply on our page.
Sincerely hope you are feeling much better.
Feel very welcome to drop by whenever.
In the meantime
rest assured that we will be thinking of you.xx

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:28

Cheers Lynn for comments on our page.xx

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 12th Jan 2013 16:23

ditto the above.xx

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Greg Freeman

Sat 12th Jan 2013 12:38

Well said, Lynn. About the here and now.

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Sat 12th Jan 2013 12:21

Great observation, beautifully projected.

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Hugh

Sat 12th Jan 2013 11:11

Excellent !!!

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tony sheridan

Sat 12th Jan 2013 10:41

Nice one Lynn! Every line is spot on! Take care,Tony.

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John Coopey

Sat 12th Jan 2013 10:34

Tommy,
Thanks for your thoughts on "You've Met The Met".
Arthur Scargill didn't know a lot about the things he should have known about (Leadership, the tactics of a strike, etc). I certainly wouldn't trust his wisdom on things he knew nothing about (the science of fuel technology).
The problem with polarisation is that you necessarily see things depending on your own perspective as sitting between a set of cruel bastards and the horny-handed heroes. I can assure you there were plenty of cruel bastards among the blokes I worked with.

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tony sheridan

Sat 12th Jan 2013 10:22

Happy New year Cynthia. Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Sat 12th Jan 2013 10:17

This is great stuff! More in this style please. Take care, Tony.

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tony sheridan

Sat 12th Jan 2013 10:01

I love the canals and I love this poem! Well done. Take care, Tony.

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darren thomas

Sat 12th Jan 2013 09:07

This, together with 'The Clock' and 'Handwriting' are beautiful examples of poetic awareness. Their language. Their pacing. Their deeply secreted themes. Some wonderful imagery too -
"my fingers like broken chess pieces,
my knuckles; bird skulls cracked
by those spent women" being just one example.

I don't know why but the final line 'the spring will be here soon' seems almost TOO definate when married against the equivocalness of your imagery. 'A spring will be here soon' maintains the enigma to the end - and beyond?

Wonderful writing.


Give my regards to G.

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Lynn Dye

Sat 12th Jan 2013 07:57

Well, it's your poem, MC, and you make your points well. Don't get me started on the current government though! :-)

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Fkx

Sat 12th Jan 2013 07:37

Thanks Tom, for reading and responding to my poetry. Your interaction is most welcome and greatly appreciated. I will get on to your other poems as well, time permitting. It shall be a busy year! Good stuff unfolding. See you 'round the site or better yet on our poems. Cheers.

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