it sounds like "a girl thing".... can one come round & watch ?

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Oh, I've got a way to go yet then!
Good question, tell Trish!! (I suppose at 19 we think we know best... Well, perhaps we did at that...)
Thanks for comment, Stef xxx

Comment is about Anniversary (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

correction dearie!

'just a bit of-loving-fun

and lovely and funny to read Lynn.

Patricia and I have served
a fourty five year sentence
so there!-ner ner!

why did,nt you listen to yer Muvver?
Trish says.

best of em to you Lynn.

the two soul(cell)mates
Ma'n'Pa Wildey.xx

Comment is about Anniversary (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

I really enjoyed this poem, Cynthia, it's beautiful.

Comment is about Glamorous Exercises (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

glad you liked
my peeping tom poem
-Windows-

obrigado.

Stefano.xx

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Hi Odessa girl.

so pleased that you like
'Depth'

thanks Larisa.

Stefan.xx

Comment is about Larisa Rzhepishevska (poet profile)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

blimey charlie!
Winston

really appreciate your sifting
through my poems.

glad you gleaned something useful
from 'rampage'
your angle on same subject
is excellent.

very grateful.

Stef.

Comment is about Winston Plowes (poet profile)

Original item by Winston Plowes

Thank you, Dave. So many poets, writers, artists perceive themselves as outsiders or are indeed so, but it is people like them that will always change the world. :)

Comment is about Only (blog)

Hey Laura, Thx for the feedback.

I have left some waffle on the poem lol

My Best

Chris

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Thx for the feedback Isobel,

I have left a waffle on the poem- lol

My Best

Chris

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Thx again for the feedback Dave.

I left a waffle on the poem- and sent you a rather long facebook message- lol.

My Best

Chris

Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Bradley

John - no you're mixing that up with a blow job. Or Cadbury's is, one of the two. You'd be a bit worried if yer man was THAT flakey though, eh?

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

I was loving 'and the rocks obey' rhythm and then you went and fiddled with it at the end! I like the use of low/wide/upon/deep/into as opening words, also the use of the elements in the 'obey' last lines, which you pull together in the last verse. It IS like an exercise, in its structure. Interesting.

Comment is about Glamorous Exercises (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Hello Lynn thank you for your comments on my poems Raindrops and Through The Eyes of a Child, much appreciated. Thanks Hazel

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

I don't get it.
I thought this was about eating a Cadbury's Flake on your own!

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Reads well out loud (which is just the job for this site!).
Lovely alliterative flow to it.

Comment is about Snowmen (blog)

Crackin' cheese, Gromit!
I can enjoy all forms of poetry, Cynthia, but I like rhythmic structure best of all.
This hits the spot.

Comment is about Glamorous Exercises (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

It's a delightful poetry. Love it so much. With warmest wishes, Larisa

Comment is about Glamorous Exercises (blog)

Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thank you so much dear Lynn for commenting on "In a Wood". With love and warmest wishes, Larisa

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Thank you dear Shirley for commenting on "In a Wood". Much appreciated. With warmest wishes, Larisa

Comment is about Shirley Smothers (poet profile)

Original item by Shirley Smothers

Hi, John! Thank you very much for commenting on "In a Wood". Much appreciated. With warmest wishes, Larisa

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

go on then! don,t just stand/sit there-

get a poem on!

haha!
cya later Mater.
her'n'him.xx

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

and oh!
that lovely sweet fresh smell
of the after rained ground!

nice poem Hazel.

Comment is about RAINDROPS (blog)

with the use of my lewd mind
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.

thanks Stell'

S.W.x

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Hi Tom, would love that but thats the day my duaghter arrives on half term hols! Doh. H

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Hi Tom, missed meeting up, must get over to Bolton again soon, and yes you have done it again, she was a nurse (You were the only one to tune into that) H

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Original item by Laura Taylor

Know what this reminds me of? Southern Gothic literature...and Nick Cave's idea of it, plus a singer called Michael J Sheehy - heard of him?

It's hanging heavy with the shame, the guilt, can almost feel the heat haze.

Comment is about My Fall and His Grace (blog)

Good poem - pouring out at the moment eh?

Comment is about Infants Become Skeletons (blog)

Original item by Kealan Coady

Heh - dorty mare ;p

Like Ray, I'm not too sure about 'petty' although it is useful for referring to 'small' etc - it's great sonically, mind

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Ooo I like this stella - the way it starts all cold and shrunk, then opens right up and you can actually FEEL the warmth and glory at the colour and heat, then moves quietly back to a 'safe' place

Comment is about Nothing of Much Worth (blog)

I enjoyed the first verse and most of the rest, but "petty local passions"? Seems quite the wrong words for it.

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Thanks Greg for your insightful comment on 'Scholars'. It's hot off the press so I'm still tinkering with it. I had thought of putting an epigraph from Wittgenstein at the top of it: 'Die Welt zerfallt in Tatsachen' - 'The world is divided up into facts' - but thought that might be taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut! I must say the Victorian classroom wasn't much different from mine in the 1950s!

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Good morning John,.,,thanks for that reassurance on Day's End! Yaaay!! :)

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

calm down, people! let's not get all serious about things, it was just a dumb little poem - but true. i do alright.

Comment is about Length & Girth (blog)

Original item by David Mac

It's just a phase we go through for the rest of our lives.

Comment is about Day's End (blog)

Anne
had to come back to this.

Better than `good` - `great`

I can almost see those iris` widening in that barn.

Comment is about owl (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Enjoyed this poem, too, Hazel, lovely idea to be able to see the world through the eyes of a child.

Comment is about Through The Eyes Of a Child (blog)

I like this very much, Hazel, can almost smell the rain.

Comment is about RAINDROPS (blog)

Hi Isobel, thank you for kind comments on Crimson Lipstick, much appreciated. xx

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

Cheers and thank you everyone :)

John, I think you must be too young to have dated her - hey, wait a minute, you're not that Jack, are you??!!

Comment is about Crimson Lipstick (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Thanks for comments on Crimson Lipstick, John. Have answered more on the blog itself.

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

Hello Shirley
Thanks for commenting on my two poems "Fix" and "I Dreamt You Were Little Again".
There's a saying, "When they're young they break your arms and when they're older they break your heart". Kids!
I've done a few about my kids but be careful if you stumble across some of my more risque stuff.
On the audio front, I'm sure a predominantly British audience would love to hear your Southern tones. I know I would.

Comment is about Shirley Smothers (poet profile)

Original item by Shirley Smothers

Aww Andy thanks so much for liking nothing of much worth lol looks daft when I write it like that..read it in Liverpool Monday night and it got a decent reception so all is well.. :)

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Hiya Isobel :)

Nothing of much worth began with the bell jar and Plath, her realtionship with the men in her life etc but then I sorta Stellerised it ha ha ha...so glad you caught the mood though..xx :)

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

Original item by Isobel

hi MBJ.
this poem
would go down very well
at the drop-in centre for the homless
-little chapel service
that we attend every thursday.

the people who run it
work unbelievably hard.

look forward to your next poem.
thanks.

Patricia and Stef Wilde

Comment is about My Fall and His Grace (blog)

Scary, creepy. I love it!

Comment is about diamante ghost (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

appreciate your reading 'Wild one' Marianne
thank you.

Comment is about Marianne Daniels (poet profile)

Original item by Marianne Daniels

Hi Andy, thanks for commenting on my "A Silly Poem About Hair". Ann Foxglove's poem "A Silly Housework Poem" inspired me to post my recent poem.
My latest poems have been dark and I needed to lighten the mood.
I do have a lot of nonsense/silly poems. I have to think hard about which ones to post. Some are cute others just plain weird.

Thanks
Shirley

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Hi John. Thanks for commenting on my poem "My Mother's Gentle Hands. I especially liked your poems, "I dreamt You Were Little Again" and "Fix".
I have left comments on these pages.

Thanks,
Shirley

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Original item by John Coopey