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Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:28

Good morning Larisa-you are very kind to have read and commented on my poem'The way of many'I am enjoying reading all your poems with all the lovely pictures!-its very nice to have you blogging on here-many thanks again-Stefan-x

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:23

Good morning Lynn.My gratitude to you for commenting on'The way of many'and as I mentioned previously,I like your change of poetry style-really good!enjoy your day Lynn.Thank you-Stefan-x

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:22

HI Andy


Thank you for your comments on my tiny poems :-). U r too kind, but it definitely inspires me to write more X

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 07:36

Excellent. From here on I think you should be named Arillas Laureate. x

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<Deleted User> (8240)

Fri 4th Jun 2010 06:44

Wonderful Lynn, loved it.

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 06:40

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Dave Bradley

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 23:32

Hi Ann. Thanks for commenting. Hope you understand if I don't always say thank you. The WOLosphere could get awfully clogged up. That survey of yours sounds really interesting. More power to ya!

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Ray Miller

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 23:03

I used to think I was my own worst enemy.But I wasn't sure. So I decided to view the matter scientifically,gather the facts, look at the evidence impartially. Turned out it was Cilla Black, she's my worst enemy.I'm only in 5th place.But does she really mean each stanza to be five words long, not five lines.

Ray Miller
Cilla
Black Killer.

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Isobel

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 22:46

What's it's all about Ray? Haven't you ever heard her sing Alfie? Forget blind date and those chicken legs - you have to admit that was a stonking song and her nasal voice was somehow right for it. That song even inspired me to write a poem - one of my very best!

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Francine

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 20:43

You go Dave!
My motto has always been 'Better late than never' ; )

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 20:15

I'm from St-Petersburg (left for UK 10 years ago ) :-)

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 20:01

Thanx for your comment to "Play". Spasibo i priyatno poznakomit'sya! :-)

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:43

I enjoyed this thought provoking work, it is new wave in its perception as technology and our relative modes of communication march forward.TC

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:41

Hola Anthony ;-) re TC it was an afterthought for me too the 'Top Cat' thing ha ha I used to love that show .......
TC........ Officer dibble..... ;-))

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:33

This sort of stuff is very important. Power to the people!! I'm doing a stile survey for Cornwall Archaeology Society and it is very interesting! xx

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:32

You should have swallowed the Blue pill ha ha..... welcome to the club ;-)
TC

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:27

Thank you Thermo, that is exactly the effect that I was aiming for! xx

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:26

I like this too Ann, sort of the cleansing after the storm, the oxygenated air that permeates all.
Love TC X

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Isobel

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:23

You tell 'em Dave - or should we call you Swampy? x

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Lynn Dye

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 18:50

Ah probably not hard exactly, maybe I just need more confidence!!
You asked where I am from, Larisa. I am English, and live in Hertfordshire about 25 miles from London. Love Lynn

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 18:23

Hello Joyous, Magnanimous & Glorious Poet! Thank you for your very generous comment on my biog. Life is one dickens of a doozy, ain't it?! Merry hours and funny days to you :) PS. I love the new photo. What are you staring at in the distance? xxx

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Ray Miller

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 18:04

Each stanza must be 5 words long!How can I convey my deep hatred for Cilla Black in 5 words? That's ridiculous.

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 16:52

Good afternoon Lynn-hey!!! brilliant!,if thats your first non rhyming try.Has the horse been stabled now? just when I,ve been and got 'me cowboy outfit-lol! ne'er mind-might get to play an extra in 'Country file'haha!keep em coming girlie! thanks-Stefan-x

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Isobel

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 16:38

I think this is a great idea. You should also blog it. I'm not totally sure that everyone reads features but they do blogs.

I find it hard not to explain my poetry cos it is important to me that my audience/readers understand. I could give it a go though.

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 13:41

See how drunk I get 2moro after work first, Isobel.. If I get very drunk - I may just arrive and perform in a drunken, wild manner.. Not much change from norm I know!! lol x

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 13:39

Hi Kath;

Just the Mary Bell case itself - not a case I know tons about that's all, chick. Yours is the sort of piece that is I need to read up on a bit before I can really offer a comment...

I do like the piece from what little I know... The structure is very clever and disturbing..

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 11:38

I sometimes wonder too. That aside, I liked this!

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Rachel Bond

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 11:28

i love cat poems...have you read ts eliot's with his idea that a cat ahas 3 names?
love the last two lines also...what of the men who think thats cats may care?
my beau likes this x

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Antony Owen

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 10:14

Tommy - you're on the money with the comment in Stalingrad, the resourcefulness and desperation of the rape victim is supposed to be evoked in the close of this poem. I have not mentioned whether the soldiers perpetrating this particular crime to be of any nationality.

War does things to people that takes away humanity from some people yet strengthens the spirit of humanity in others.

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 10:12

Regarding 'In Stalingrad' got it second time, tommy after speaking to a friend who knows the history off this much better than me!

love it now!

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kath hewitt

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 09:36

Hi Andy,

Thanks for your comment although i wasn't sure what you meant by 'agreeing' or not? What with in particular? My eye caught something about mary bell somewhere on the internet so i decided to have a look-see at her story,what i have written is just based on the basic points of the news reports. I am intrigued by murder and what makes people do these sorts of things, find it really interesting lol x

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kath hewitt

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 09:33

Hi Ann,

I had hoped the nursery rhyme type thing worked! Thanks for your comments. I kind of do believe in evil as an 'living' entity but i think it's a sketchy area, particularly in a child so young. Does make me want to know more though. Look forward to seeing yours soon x

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 08:19

not sure if i agree with this totally without looking into the case further, kath but the way you have structured as per what ann said is true...

interesting stuff (will defo make a note to read up on this and come back with more thoughts)

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 08:16

some good stuff in here, Max.. particularly like 'Ephemeral ghosts that exist' but the use of language is simple but complex (if that makes sense) to me...

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 08:12

Hi Kath. I think it's very clever the way you have written this so that it sounds like a chant that kids might sing in the playground, like ring a ring a roses. There's a good book written ages ago by Gitta Sereny about Mary Bell. I think, for me, unless you believe in real evil as an entity in this world, you can't demonise a 10 year old child (and I'm not suggesting that you are.) That's just my own opinion and I'm sure many would disagree. I do agree that murder is fascinating. I just wrote a poem about Jack the Ripper actually!

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shoeless

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 08:02

how do i tag ? i think we need to tag the cat poems :)

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Wed 2nd Jun 2010 23:37

Good evening Kath.Indeed,disturbing.Well versed.Lets hope the final judgement fits the crime! best regards-Stefan.

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Wed 2nd Jun 2010 23:33

Good evening to you Lynn.Lovely as always to hear from you,with your kind words.Now then,wheres the next romantic sequel from you? there again,good things are always worth waiting for eh.Keep well dear Lady.My best wishes to you.Stefan-x

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 22:46

How about a compromise - poems about eating a can of worms?

Regards,
A.E.

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 22:18

Hi Lynn, thanks for commenting on 'War Losses', much appreciated. Oh and welcome to the site too! :)
Best wishes
Dave

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Lynn Dye

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 22:15

Excellent, Dave and so true!

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Steven Kenny

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 22:14

Creepy and disturbing! I like it! ;-)

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Chris Dawson

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 21:02

I'm just delighted with my 'longest title for an award' award.
:)
Cx

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Chris Dawson

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 20:52

Really good Max - I do like your work very much. The last two verses are simple and brilliant.
Well done
Cx

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Isobel

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 19:33

Not up to much, other than trying to keep kids occupied - at least we have some fine weather - that makes a nice change! May go to poetry pillow - could do with a night out and Max's set should be good. Maybe see you there. x

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Andy N

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 13:14

Hi Isobel;

I was too tired to go to W.O.L. Sale on Tuesday.. One of those days in work! I am gonna make a effort for W.O.L. Stockport next Monday however and if I stay sober on Friday after work maybe Poetry Pillow! What are you up 2? x

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Isobel

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 12:39

I think poetry on the theme of eating our children, might open up a whole can of worms best left unopened LOL. However, I agree that it would be good to do this again - though I think monthly feature might be asking too much of people. Perhaps if we did it every couple of months, we might get a better response.
The cynic in me thinks that Pandora could never be topped - but I'm happy to give it a try - also to take suggestions on themes.
Something that lends itself to lots of interpretation ideally...

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Ray Miller

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 11:58

I've not even asked a question, Cate. I've merely said that I'm thrilled to bits. Cop-a hoop, in fact.

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 11:34

A big second to all these comments here! Isobel this has been great fun and Ive loved seeing how each poet has tackled this theme... each so different and each brilliant in its own way! Banksy I love humble pie myself...Ray ,like Isobel, Im willing to help resolve your question...Rachel Im not sure how we`d all deal with child canabalism but I` ll give it a try...Anthony nice to see you cringing before us all, but I agree we gotta do this again. I realise its a lot of work Isobel but its been so worthwhile I seriously think its worth continuing!
Cate xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 10:58

Very interesting and nice poem Lynn. What country are you from? You wanted to know if my name Larisa or Laura. Laura is short for Larisa. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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