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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Apr 2022 14:47

A fine poem, Julie, saying things which have to be said. I feel sorry for the young conscripts but what is happening is truly inexcusable.

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John F Keane

Wed 13th Apr 2022 14:37

His inspiring story makes me realise how lucky most of us have it, to be blunt.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 13th Apr 2022 14:25

Pleasing in its content and style. I'm sure a certain Miss Smith
would enjoy this.

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John Botterill

Wed 13th Apr 2022 13:44

Thanks Stephen. Super comment. πŸ˜€

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Greg Freeman

Wed 13th Apr 2022 13:41

Thanks for this, Russell. Always nice when a poet gets a mention in the blogs.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Apr 2022 11:37

Very impressive, Stephen.

'The anticipation of the life we could have , If not for life itself' rings very true. 'Life' gets in the way of many dreams and desires. I guess it was ever thus.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Apr 2022 11:29

Thanks to MC, Stephen, John and Greg for the comments. The extent of suffering and destruction in this city is almost beyond belief. Of course, no one is in a mood to forgive anything or anyone at the moment. But at sometime, maybe years or decades down the line, reconciliation (perhaps a slightly different thing) will surely come.

And thanks to Nigel, Steve, Adam, Julie, Holden, Ursula, Leon and K Lynn for liking this one.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Apr 2022 11:14

A fine poem, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Apr 2022 11:12

Some wonderful phrases here, John. 'Let's peel back the world' - lovely.

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kJ Walker

Wed 13th Apr 2022 06:56

Thank you Stephen.
It's been kicking around my head since Christmas, but I've only just written it down.

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Rasa Kabaila

Wed 13th Apr 2022 03:41

Thank you John. :)

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John F Keane

Tue 12th Apr 2022 23:58

Great cause.

Poetry is closely linked to suicide, for good or ill.

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Tue 12th Apr 2022 23:39

Thanks Stephen for liking ; Broken down Angel '

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Tue 12th Apr 2022 23:37

We thank you Clare for liking ' Broken down Angel '

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Mike Bartram

Tue 12th Apr 2022 20:17

Thank you

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John Botterill

Tue 12th Apr 2022 20:15

Thanks Stephen A and Julie C for the likes. πŸ˜€

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Tue 12th Apr 2022 18:44

no way Holden!

when it comes to articulation, pole position is yours!

πŸŽ–

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Adam Whitworth

Tue 12th Apr 2022 16:47

You've created a fine tribute to charlie here. I salute you, and him.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 12th Apr 2022 13:44

Love of self is the guiding light. For it is within oneself that belief and faith prosper and the struggle against wrong and wrong-thinking exists to make the world a better place...belonging
before division.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 12th Apr 2022 13:10

Each poem
you write
brings with it
more enchanted light.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 12th Apr 2022 12:54

Thanks for all your likes
Leon
John B
Stephen A
Ruth
Holden
and
Stephen G.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 12th Apr 2022 12:52

Thanks Stephen

Thanks Ruth I too enjoy 60's music I do like the idea of putting a song into the poem.
Also you made a fantastic job of making the poetry work so well on the day.

Thanks John just had to leave it with someone getting shipwrecked.

Thanks Leon Ace of hearts with one to break.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 12th Apr 2022 09:19

There are some great words here John, the last two lines being a good example. The sentiments shine through.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 12th Apr 2022 09:04

I really like the brevity of this and the transience. As if we are lucky to witness it. Well done, good work!

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John Botterill

Tue 12th Apr 2022 07:02

Thanks Holden and Ursula for the likes πŸ˜€

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 12th Apr 2022 01:30

Thank you so much for the kind comments, Leon and Stephen, I'm truly grateful! 😊

Leon, I love your interpretation of "a breed apart from the God-fearers" and "rebels without a cause or even wanting one", you've articulated it far better than I could have, thank you! πŸ˜‰

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Pete (edbreathe)

Mon 11th Apr 2022 23:46

Mmmm sometimes I get to the end and think what I’ve written is a bit dark. But thanks for the comment

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Greg Freeman

Mon 11th Apr 2022 23:02

Some things can't be forgiven. More horrors unfolding every day. But a beautiful poem, Steve, nevertheless.

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John Botterill

Mon 11th Apr 2022 22:48

A beautiful tribute to your mother, Rasa, Lovely!

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John Botterill

Mon 11th Apr 2022 22:36

A wonderful poem, Stephen, capturing the depth of the tragedy which is unfolding.

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raypool

Mon 11th Apr 2022 20:08

Thanks Stephen, Stephen, Holden and John for your welcome likes.

I'm so pleased you picked up on this Stephen, as it is one of those perplexing pieces; I was thinking of a war zone but also on a more philosophical level, how difficult it must be for victims to hold on to religious beliefs.

Ray

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 11th Apr 2022 19:49

Beautifully heartfelt 🌈

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 11th Apr 2022 19:46

A powerful & worthy piece Stephen 🌈

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 11th Apr 2022 18:31

Words that, sadly, apply to other places across the globe.
The never-ending cycle of human desire for dominance over others.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Apr 2022 17:27

I did not know his work but it is so sad that an obviously courageous and talented person has left us. My condolences.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Apr 2022 17:14

Wonderful words once again, Adam. I love the idea of all these passengers (or customers?!) who are thrown together and may have all had a similarly unique experience, although this will not shared with the others.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Apr 2022 17:05

A quite disturbing, poel, Pete, but good.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Apr 2022 16:57

I love the concept of 'question marks to the world', Holden.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 11th Apr 2022 16:36

Thank you, John. I am very grateful for your kind comments.

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Mon 11th Apr 2022 14:31

Good one Russell-suffice to say ( Leon ) been there, done the years-learned a trade-and had my life changed for the better thanks to some very genuinely caring people who I will NEVER EVER forget. Thank you for the care-share poem! πŸ‘

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Mon 11th Apr 2022 14:14

Great poem Holden. One of those pieces that the readers are best left to make their own interpretations of, and our interpretation suggests a breed apart from the God-fearers? Rebels without a cause or even wanting one?

We are happy with our interpretation-thank you!

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John Botterill

Sun 10th Apr 2022 19:17

Absolutely stunning Stephen. I agree with Leon. Poem of the week, if not the month!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 10th Apr 2022 18:06

Intriguing as always, Ray. Not completely sure I understand the message but the wordplay is fantastic.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 10th Apr 2022 18:00

Magnificent work, Adam. I don't think this one will fade as you describe, at least it shouldn't.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 10th Apr 2022 17:32

A tough read but a fine poem, KJ.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 10th Apr 2022 17:16

Thank you for your kind comment, Holden. Yes, the tragedy of this is that many people would believe it and take it at face value.

And thanks to M.C., Brenda, Pete and Clare for the likes.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 10th Apr 2022 15:42

Although not familiar with this writer and his work, I feel compelled to remark on his courage in adversity during a life
that was far from benevolent in matters of health...that most
precious of gifts. To continue to create and commit to creativity
in such circumstances denotes a singularly brave determined spirit whose departure must leave the world a poorer place.

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Russell Jacklin

Sun 10th Apr 2022 15:08

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 10th Apr 2022 14:55

Thank you John & Brenda for reading & commenting. 🌈

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 10th Apr 2022 12:39

Best not let her see this then eh?

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