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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 3rd Sep 2020 02:35

I think the greatest achievement a poet can make is to paint words that immortalize life and love. Well done John. You are the bright star of WOL. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 3rd Sep 2020 02:27

Lovely. ?

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d.knape

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 23:28

marriage isn't perfect
but the data shows married people live longer
and are overall happier
so that poem "Making Allowances" was my ode to marriage
mostly mine!
?

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 18:47

Stephen - An old pal of mine from Newcastle said that Malcolm Macdonald was so bow-legged he couldn’t stop a pig in an alley.

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Wed 2nd Sep 2020 17:42

And did you know that smiling uses fewer face muscles than squeezing out a turd?

I'll get my coat...

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Wed 2nd Sep 2020 16:58

Made me smile this did this rainy afternoon xx ? namaste and blessings

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 16:44

Perhaps the next accessory for batsmen in test matches. Could make quick singles a bit difficult, though......

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julie callaghan

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 16:16

Thanks for the comment and like Nisha

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Tom

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 15:50

Congratulations on 50 years... That is something to treasure. As is this poem. I'll bare this advice in mind ?

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John Coopey

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 14:48

I always favour frugality, MC.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 14:02

Thanks for the comments, one and all - and for the "likes".
There could be a "part 2" to come. Let's retain the right to offend
and encourage a laugh, "guilty" or otherwise!
Too much navel-gazing, that's the trouble these days. ?

Comment is about WHEN YOU'RE OVER SEVENTY....WHO CARES? (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 13:56

Having sustained a lower back/spinal injury following a bike
accident, I know the existence of this idea. In my own case I
use a far cheaper alternative of a folded pillow placed between
the knees where the legs (in own own case - long!) come together
and place a strain on the lower back and hips. Separating the
legs at that point of contact reduces this discomfort and enables/
assists a night's sleep. Cheap and cheerful - that's my credo!
I hope my comment might provide comfort in this regard to those
who may have similar problems obtaining a comfortable night's
rest.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 13:19

Great profile pic, Dom! Where was it?

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Emeka Collins

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 11:31

I really hope we all we learn that life itself is vast and our roles are little compared to it.
This understanding can help us be more human than pride in whatever we think we are or possess.

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Tom

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 11:03

Really enjoyed this reflective piece Miyurangi, right up my street! Thanks for sharing. Tom.

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Abdul Ahmad

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 09:42

Thank you for your comments John. Point taken. Appreciate the like.

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Nisha Nair

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 07:15

Thanks for a day trip at Bodrum, made a quick trip to Bodrum and is back with a fresh memory.

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julie callaghan

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 07:03

Thanks for the comment and like John. I read your poem, very sad times. I remember the story well and was only thinking about it the other day. I have been coming to Turkey for 15 years but only started writing this year, hoping I will only have good times to write about my future trips.

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 03:49

The 4th paragraph is my favorite.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 01:53

In an unforgettable position
toilet door won't close
I attempt but she gives up.

Comment is about Underground (Part 7 to 12) (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 00:52

Cheers Paul

Don you are my main man

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john short

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 00:27

Yes unfortunately we've had a rather sad end to the summer with endless rain. Drab august indeed. One observation: perhaps too many capital letters in your poem. Constructive criticism, I hope.?

Comment is about Escape August's veil (blog)

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john short

Wed 2nd Sep 2020 00:19

Thanks Abdul, glad you liked the poem. Check out The Lake online poetry ezine. Lots of good stuff there.

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 23:49

Healing begins !!! Beautifully expressed

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 23:24

Don't hide who you are, the world knows now anyway, be proud of who you are and your rainbow colours with hope for your future

Comment is about Cutting the Strings (blog)

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John Coopey

Tue 1st Sep 2020 23:15

We've earned the right to be curmudgeonly, MC.

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John Coopey

Tue 1st Sep 2020 23:12

I'm not expecting JML will want to use my piece for advertising purposes, Brian. But I may broaden my ambit to your suggestions as well as the Parker Knoll Recliner.

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 22:50

John

You've watched the advert then? Will you also be doing pieces on Dormeo mattresses and the Upwalker Lite?

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John Coopey

Tue 1st Sep 2020 22:36

Lovely imagery and a different take on Bodrum from mine of last year.
https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=87158

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raypool

Tue 1st Sep 2020 22:21

Join the club - boo - boom!!

Ray

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julie callaghan

Tue 1st Sep 2020 19:24

Thanks for the likes Stephen, poems hub and Brian.
Brian I have never been to Bangor but I have been to me! or should that be the other way round? ?

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 16:58

Not quite Day Trip to Bangor, but equally enjoyable.

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MANISHA SAINI

Tue 1st Sep 2020 16:24

Thanks Paul, Stephen for the roses and liking my work!

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 15:49

Carry on continuing not to care Mark...it's the privilege of age.

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Nisha Nair

Tue 1st Sep 2020 15:02

Hi Paul, Thank you! I thoroughly enjoyed my little journey through time.

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John Marks

Tue 1st Sep 2020 13:32

Thanks Keith.

Being in a minority, even in a minority of one, did not make you mad. There was truth and there was untruth, and if you clung to the truth even against the whole world, you were not mad.

George Orwell, aka Eric Blair

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kealan coady

Tue 1st Sep 2020 13:15

Thanks Kate

Comment is about The Shadow on the Rock (blog)

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:47

Ha, ha, made me chuckle M. C.

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:46

Thank you Kate

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:45

So true for me right now D.

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:41

I'm with Keith, fantastic imagery.

Comment is about The Shadow on the Rock (blog)

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:40

A magnificent start to a poem Michael. Indeed, it is such a thrill to experience the vulnerability of letting one's guard down....

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:31

Thank you. I appreciate the feedback. I was going to title the poem A beautiful Possibility because thats the name of the person in my contacts list. ?

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:19

Fantastic. Loved this line:
If his heart had a say it would leap from his chest and chase opportunity as it appeared.

Comment is about Conquering Monster's (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:16

Sardonic and near enough to cynical suspicions to be worth a murmur of concern. We all have the thought surely that the medicos
can look on patients as guinea pigs more than fellow beings on a
journey through life and seeking it to be as trouble-free as
possible. I have some personal experience of the "going without"
syndrome to prepare for hospital checks and remember my own
resentment of the process and the arbitrary (it seemed) policy that
inflicted this on me. Hang in there and keep them working for you -
rather than the other way round...as can occasionally seem to be the case once you're aboard their medical-go-round! ?

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kealan coady

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:02

Thank you Keith

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Poems hub

Tue 1st Sep 2020 08:13

I loved the last line. ?

Comment is about Be Kind (blog)

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Poems hub

Tue 1st Sep 2020 08:12

Beautifully penned. You're a passionate write. I love the way your poems make me feel. Keep trying. Never give up on true love.

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d.knape

Tue 1st Sep 2020 08:00

It means more to me
coming from poet, Paul Sayer
I'm coming in now on
a wing and a prayer!
?

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Poems hub

Tue 1st Sep 2020 07:57

Soulmates forever. Such a chemistry exists many of us can feel it. Keep holding on to it. You will save her and yourself through this.?

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