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leon stolgard

Sun 7th Apr 2024 22:58

Obviously Tom you had forgotten the age old piece of advice..

always live in HOPE! although it isn't so easy to do that in these changeable weather days-( raincoat off? raincoat on? )

what is there not to love about this poem?

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 7th Apr 2024 22:22

Many thanks for the kind words and 'likes'.
I'll post the audio when I've finished the recordings in June Bethany - but if you just can't wait - a lot of my work can be listened to here: https://thecrowsofalbion.bandcamp.com/

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 21:24

It was a pleasure to read your poem, Larisa. I visited Ukraine several times in the 1990s and have been writing a series of poems on the war in Ukraine (from the comfortable position of an outsider, of course). I am impressed by how many Ukrainian poets are keeping the flame of hope burning.

I hope we can get the profiles opened up soon.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 21:14

Congratulations to Graham.

I only managed one visit to Milton Keynes and always thought of it as unfashionable, which is perhaps no bad thing. In any event, what do I know? This is a deeply personal, richly annotated tribute.

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Telboy

Sun 7th Apr 2024 19:23

Congratulations Graham.

Back in the late 70's I went on an organised coach trip from West London to Milton Keynes, to be shown four developments in the hope we would sign up to purchase a property. I didn't...I was only along for the ride so to speak. The whole area had been planted with thousands of saplings, and as it was winter and they were leafless it resembled a scene from a WW1 battlefield. Twenty years later I found myself working in MK, in Knowlhill, and was able to see how the trees and the town had matured.

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Julian (Admin)

Sun 7th Apr 2024 18:07

Congratulations, Graham. Brilliantly done.

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Tom Doolan

Sun 7th Apr 2024 15:47

Спасибо большое - Larisa 😊

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keith jeffries

Sun 7th Apr 2024 15:19

Graham,
Thank you. I agree that most people try to be good. This very intention is the pathway to eternity. With or without a Faith people gravitate toward this belief that our personal futures are accountable. We can only do our best and trust that it is pleasing and sufficient for an eternal reward. I cannot speak for God but maybe we shall see one another in the world to come as we have established a good friendship in the here and now.
Thanks again,
Keith

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 7th Apr 2024 15:02

Thank you so much, Tom! I enjoyed reading and listening to your poem.
Regards,
Larisa

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Auracle

Sun 7th Apr 2024 13:56

You're welcome. And I'm sorry I have to wear a mask online.

My mother's family has been subjected to terrorist suicide attacks in Indonesia.

I do this to protect myself & others.

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Robert C Gaulke

Sun 7th Apr 2024 13:06

Thank you

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David RL Moore

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:39

Thanks to those who have generously commented and liked.

It is for those who slip through the cracks and have no voice that this is written, those who cannot speak for themselves and no-one will ask after their welfare.

David.

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rob1967able

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:36

I do like the sound of it leon. Thanks.

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Andy Millican

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:29

I recently attended Glossop Open Mic at the Labour Club. I confess to being a literary and musical heathen, however I do go to many events and see many music and spoken word shows, and appreciate the offerings based on how engaged and entertained I am. I will not name any names of the artists, but will venture that they were ALL amazing. There was music, poetry and flash fiction proffered which combined to create one of the most entertaining and engaging nights I have ever been to. I have rarely laughed so much at the amusing parts, and felt so emotionally moved by the tales designed to create such a feeling. The host, Andy Millican, did an amazing job too.

Philip Walton


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leon stolgard

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:26

struck a chord

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rob1967able

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:22

Thank you guys, i feel humbled. Love.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 7th Apr 2024 11:07

Hi, dear Stephen!
Thank you so much for commenting. So, I've read that you were here in Ukraine. I wanted to write a comment but your profile is closed for me.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 7th Apr 2024 10:36

Thank you Keith. Rather clumsily put on my part but I guess what I mean is I try to be good. I've never consciously hurt anyone and give help in times of need. Whether I'm judged (if, as I am bound to say, there is a judge) fit for a hereafter, then so be it. I would however, never ridicule anyones' faith and I celebrate yours!

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keith jeffries

Sun 7th Apr 2024 10:11

Graham,
Thank you for your comment. I think you do not understand the concept of faith. It is not the same as faithful. Might I point you to an accurate definition of Faith in the book of Hebrews Chapter 11:1-16. It is because we possess no evidence of an after life that we tend not to believe in it. Too some extent I understand this as we require proof and without it we tend discard anything not properly understood. Do you have an alternative? Or is death the final act after which nothing is of any consequence?
Ticks and crosses! From where did this come? Accountability I beleive will be a part of eternity and I should imagine that with a merciful and compassionate God you will be with your family and in a far better place.
Thank you for taking the time to reading this poem and commenting on it,
Keith

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David RL Moore

Sun 7th Apr 2024 08:28

Thanks Auracle,

I hear and see what you say about my apparent vulnerability. I used to shield myself from exposure, it was something I was taught.

I later discovered the liberating qualities of honesty. I think it is honesty which some see as a vulnerability, personally I feel the opposite is true. That said I am 100% aware of how many veiw it.

Thanks again.

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David RL Moore

Sun 7th Apr 2024 08:07

Hi Ray,

I like the use of "make occasion for theirs to be told" I have spoken of my belief in the vanity of biographical funerals arranged by the pre-corpse for their own exaltation, The rich are in position to behave in this manner, on occasion even building themselves Palaces.

The poor whose lives are often more worthy and undoubtedly more interesting would be lucky to get a bench in a dog shit Park.

Food for thought Ray...we await the next State sponsored cry-fest with a provisional cringe.

David.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 07:16

A thoroughly admirable poem, David. Brilliantly accessible.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 07:01

More truth in these nine lines than in many a voluminous tome, Ray.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 06:58

It's good to see a poet writing about the difficulty of composing a villanelle, Trevor, and then demonstrating that he has mastered it so comfortably. Well done!
I'm trying to write one about Donald Trump at the moment, but that's another story.....

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Apr 2024 06:51

I was so happy to read this wonderful poem, Larisa. With everything you must be going through, you are still able to reflect gloriously on life and on dear, departed friends. More power to you and to everyone in Ukraine.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 7th Apr 2024 05:33

Short but sweet. I like this poem.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sun 7th Apr 2024 05:09

I am so happy to see my old friends here. M.C. Newberry. I remember you, my friend. Thank you so much for the comment. Yes, you are right. I found a friendly shore. And now my soul is calm.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Landi Cruz

Sun 7th Apr 2024 04:46

These are the words that people don't say..they are written on faces...

🌷

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John Marks

Sun 7th Apr 2024 00:05

I felt overstuffed and dull and disappointed, the way I always do the day after Christmas, as if whatever it was the pine boughs and the candles and the silver and gilt-ribboned presents and the birch-log fires and the Christmas turkey and the carols at the piano promised never came to pass.
Sylvia Plath, The Bell Jar

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keith jeffries

Sat 6th Apr 2024 23:27

This poem finds a place within me which I cannot explain. Powerfully written. i think I have been in this place. Your use of language is spot on.
Thanks,
Keith

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Telboy

Sat 6th Apr 2024 21:19

Powerful stuff. Doesn't hang together completely, deliberately in my opinion.

David you've just raised the bar.

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Reggie's Ghost

Sat 6th Apr 2024 21:01

Christ I'm out of breath reading this!

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Auracle

Sat 6th Apr 2024 20:06

it's very inspired. I also like the vulnerability of your videos.

I was born in the old world. And I will die in the old world.

Thank you

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David RL Moore

Sat 6th Apr 2024 19:44

That's where the scribbling on love gets you...😀. Well here, anyway.

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Auracle

Sat 6th Apr 2024 19:19

Maybe the 'happy intellectual life' I envisioned for myself in the 90's & 00's is still possible.

This is really my cup of tea.

It takes me back to my first year of English in High School. And eventually visiting Kensington Gardens in London.

It was all I ever wanted...

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Auracle

Sat 6th Apr 2024 19:04

honest. that's all I want for now

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Apr 2024 18:46

My thanks to those (you know who you are) who "liked" this contribution. I emailed Channel 5 with my appreciation and
got a reply that promised that the programme makers would
be informed. A good result!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Apr 2024 18:39

Nice one RP.
Be content with what you've got,
Even if it's not a lot!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Apr 2024 18:32

Being caught up in unrelenting war
Like a ship in search of a friendly shore,
While buffeted by violent storns
From merciless nature in its worst forms,
Can see the soul steer its own safe path
Evading the tempest's awful wrath,
With the aim of securing a peaceful port
And refuge from the storm's onslaught!
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Graham Sherwood

Sat 6th Apr 2024 17:05

If I am totally wrong and there is a happy hereafter (whatever that is likely to look like) I hope I have many more ticks on my slate than crosses. Compared to some self-titled religious people I know, I brush up rather well I think!

Faith is family and friends.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 6th Apr 2024 16:56

Thank you so much, Tim. I'm really grateful for your unwavering support towards my work, it means a lot to me.😊

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Hélène

Sat 6th Apr 2024 16:02

A poem many of us can relate to Ornella. Well written. Did I forget to lock the car? Important items left in the car (what if someone steals them!) Walk four blocks back to check the car before going in to the meeting (fortunately arrived early for the meeting so I had time to walk back to the car.) Did I forget to lock the car? No, I did not!

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O .K

Sat 6th Apr 2024 15:50

It did make the A-Level Syllabus!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 6th Apr 2024 14:35

Thank you so much for the message! I am sure my problem will be solved. I have so many good friends here.
Regards,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 6th Apr 2024 14:26

Dear Rose, I am so happy you remember me and that you liked my poem. I am sure now that we'll overcome the difficulties. I have so many friends here.
With love and warmest wishes,
Larisa

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Apr 2024 14:11

Delighted for you, Larisa, that this has been so well received.

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John Coopey

Sat 6th Apr 2024 13:04

Nice work, Trevor. I’ve written the odd villanelle but I confess to finding them aurally unsatisfying. It always seems to me that the middle line never gets resolved. I think I’ll write one about that!

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Rose Casserley

Sat 6th Apr 2024 12:47

Nice one Odessa girl! hope you are managing to cope considering what your city is at present undergoing

yes I well remember David Dunn
a very nice kindly person who had commented on so many of my old poems

also hope your posting problem gets sorted
it can be so bloody frustrating trying to get through the signing in process

take care love
and do keep in touch



Rose 💋

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shan shan

Sat 6th Apr 2024 12:16

Thank you Uilleam 💕

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 6th Apr 2024 12:08

Thank you so much for commenting, David. But your profile is also closed for me.

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