Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Profile image

John Coopey

Wed 10th Oct 2018 10:06

Yes, indeed, Brian. It’s something we don’t like owning up to, like having a pair of pink lunes.
I worried myself a little being able to recollect these characters without the need for any research.

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Profile image

Greg Freeman

Wed 10th Oct 2018 09:23

John Clarke's funeral will be this coming Friday, 12 October, at Honor Oak crematorium in south London at 10am. In the evening there will be a farewell event in his honour - Jazzman's Final Gig - at The Birds Nest, 32 Deptford Church Street, Deptford, London SE8 4RZ - 020 8692 1928. All welcome. A donation towards food provided will be appreciated.

Comment is about Jazzman John Clarke, Beat poet (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Profile image

Chris Armstrong

Wed 10th Oct 2018 09:20

Hi MC and Brian...
Oh! I live with my hope unfurled
But I know
Anything written here will not tilt the world

Comment is about Late Wisdom (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong

<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 10th Oct 2018 08:59

Hi John - I used to watch Crossroads all the time...quite enjoyed it at the time - in retrospect I'm perhaps sorry to say.

One good thing though...it spawned Acorn Antiques.

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Profile image

keith jeffries

Wed 10th Oct 2018 08:40

Words of pure devotion.
Thank you

Keith

Comment is about Happy To Be Alive (blog)

Original item by Jethro Iresare

Profile image

keith jeffries

Wed 10th Oct 2018 08:38

This succinct poem charaterises what so many feel in the light of war, particularly during the last century. Have you read Siegfried Sassoons´The Menim Gate?´Your poem echoes his words.

Thank you for this

Keith

Comment is about The Fallen Arch (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Profile image

Jon Stainsby

Wed 10th Oct 2018 08:33

Very true, Don.

Comment is about The Fallen Arch (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Wed 10th Oct 2018 08:01

Walking from the car park we saw that spectacular orange glow what a start to a fun filled evening - - -

One of my favourite poets on the night was Leg Before Wicket Phil

Hitting you for six
the crowd creased up
anyone with boundary frown
follow on swinging low
solid wood cricket bat
top edge flat head.

Review is about New Mills Festival Poetry Trail Round Robin on 26 Sep 2018 (event)

<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 10th Oct 2018 07:59

Spot on Don...it's within us all.

Comment is about The Fallen Arch (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

DESMOND CHILDS

Wed 10th Oct 2018 07:14

Congratulations John, well deserved POTW.


All the best des

Comment is about ‘Peace, love and understanding have left the building’ is our Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by steve pottinger

Profile image

AVISHEK GHOSH

Wed 10th Oct 2018 04:09

Excellent

Comment is about The Web of Sleep (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Big Sal

Wed 10th Oct 2018 01:18

Read like wedding vows. Well done.?

Comment is about Happy To Be Alive (blog)

Original item by Jethro Iresare

Profile image

John F Keane

Wed 10th Oct 2018 00:39

The term was created at our meeting on Monday. While numbers were thin, hardened poets turn up whatever the weather.

Comment is about Hardened Poets (blog)

Original item by J F Keane

elPintor

Wed 10th Oct 2018 00:23

Ray, I'm happy to know that it sparks any thought at all--you definitely couldn't be wrong. Our minds are all so unique and there is great beauty in that.

Thank you. And thanks to you too, David and Becky.

x

Comment is about unbroken (a timeline in prepositions) (blog)

Original item by nunya

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Oct 2018 23:40

Book 'em, Don-o! ?

Comment is about Clutter Haiku (blog)

Original item by Don Matthews

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 23:03

Fabulously presented thoughts a real humdinger Hazel.It's effective that you ask the question first and then give it your own individual answer, which brings a sympathetic response from our dear readers!!

Ray

Comment is about Life before death? 1 and 2 (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 9th Oct 2018 22:07

Wonderful poem Keith.. Thank you ?

Comment is about The Web of Sleep (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Profile image

Graham McKay-Smith

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:53

Thanks Gary. Nice to meet you. I'm here as Call Me Graham. Massive recognition to Laura Taylor for her support and encouragement.

Comment is about Graham Mckay-Smith (photo)

<Deleted User> (19836)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:53

Captivating...very impressive!

Comment is about Camera On... (blog)

Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH

<Deleted User> (19836)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:49

Dark and mysterious...compelling!??

Comment is about The Web of Sleep (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:43

Hi Graham. It was a pleasure to use that line! I heard once that it was used to describe ballroom dancing. God how right you are, I wasn't always beyond reproach. Some of those gigs, dire places. It really needs a guide - Southwark Working Man's Club, Ford's Dagenham, and on the plus side Buckingham Palace and Gleneagles.

Thanks Big Sal for bringing that up. I don't decide to write to a known format really, but feel it coming on, Though this one is like a question and answer, or an interrogation in the mind. A closed loop. I think whatever we write should be framed for impact; however you think it out. Some are brilliant at structured work, and it takes discipline.

Rachel, there you go with the truth. En masse drinkers can really put the boot in of course, lurching up to the bandstand and making fools of themselves. There is humour in it though, and I have many stories....

Ray

Comment is about FUNCTION ROOM (blog)

Original item by ray pool

<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:41

Great writing as ever Keith.
A poetic description of something we all experience, yet the mystery remains.
Really enjoyed.

Hannah

Comment is about The Web of Sleep (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:29

This is really a tricky one Rachel - as is a series of blind alleys awaits in the past, and someone at fault that puts you where are now. That's the best I can do.

The very best as always Ray

Comment is about unbroken (a timeline in prepositions) (blog)

Original item by nunya

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:23

A cautionary guide to everyday life Hugh.

Ray

Comment is about Stress can make a mess (blog)

Original item by hugh

<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:13

Read it through twice, it's a brilliant poem.

Hannah

Comment is about Life before death? 1 and 2 (blog)

Original item by Hazel ettridge

Profile image

keith jeffries

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:08

I know the real answer. They go in groups because hidden inside the rest room is an exotic male dancer who does a quick turn. Then they all applaud and return to the more sedate goings on elsewhere. I´ve heard them cheer.

Keith

Comment is about Women And Restrooms (blog)

Original item by d.knape

<Deleted User> (18118)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 20:57

This is a thought provoking poem.
OK, you go into the cubicle, then come out and wash your hands. Then do your hair looking in the mirror.
Then talk about what is going on.
Sometimes the revelations are stark.
Recently with a friend, in the rest room, we saw a sign saying - hair dryer 20p. My friend yelled it was too much to pay. I said only 20p. She revealed her husband takes all her money and she has nothing, not even 20p.
Then we went outside as if nothing had been said.

Comment is about Women And Restrooms (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 19:52

Captures the dedication rather well, the more you throw at them, the harder they dig in.

Ray

Comment is about Hardened Poets (blog)

Original item by J F Keane

Profile image

raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 19:49

Crossdressers may know the answer to the mystery. Just an idea. Ask the wife.

Ray

Comment is about Women And Restrooms (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Profile image

Jon Stainsby

Tue 9th Oct 2018 19:42

Thanks very much, Chris.

Comment is about Peace, love and understanding have left the building (blog)

Original item by Jon Stainsby

Jemima Jones

Tue 9th Oct 2018 19:07

And not so very far from the truth Avishek. Thank you. Jemima.

Comment is about Camera On... (blog)

Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH

Jemima Jones

Tue 9th Oct 2018 19:04

faultless description Keith. Thank you. Jemima.

Comment is about The Web of Sleep (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 9th Oct 2018 18:31

Thoroughly enjoyed this poem.. unfortunately I am unable to enlighten you as I would have to be killed for letting you in on the secret..?
M.C. enjoyed your comments especially last three lines which made me laugh out loud.?

Comment is about Women And Restrooms (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 9th Oct 2018 18:25

You go from strength to strength Avishek...?

Comment is about Camera On... (blog)

Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:43

The last two lines are sad as they show a resigned acceptance of the situation. Like MC below I am a committed leaver, but I do see how many people have misgivings over what is to come. But the clock can't be turned back...if it could I've no doubt all the young stay-in -beds would now turn out in force to vote remain.

Comment is about Late Wisdom (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:31

I enjoyed this for a number of reasons but have not lost
confidence in the outcome of a return to self-determination.
In this world of machine and electronic device,
To hear we need more folk made me think twice;
With each passing day these things make our wares,
So let's keep our own folk while other lands keep theirs.

Comment is about Late Wisdom (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong

Profile image

keith jeffries

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:27

Powerful with good imagery. I like this.
Thank you

Keith

Comment is about Camera On... (blog)

Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:20

Some useful reality here. Stress can be debilitating in many
scenarios, one of the more frequently met being that caused
by financial worries that have no immediate alleviation in
view. Other causes are varied and need a cool head and
dispassionate dealings if they are to be accommodated and
placed in the "no harm" bin.
But in the general sense, an old pal advised years ago:
Avoid stress - and he was right.

Comment is about Stress can make a mess (blog)

Original item by hugh

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:12

An interesting question that few if any males seem able to
answer. Perhaps the behaviour is the result of the primary
school onwards grouping of numbers of the female sex in
corners of the playground? If he were still around, perhaps Desmond Morris, the anthropologist, would come up with
an answer. And maybe men don't hang around in a "rest room" when any such behaviour might see it be an "arrest" room! ?

Comment is about Women And Restrooms (blog)

Original item by d.knape

Big Sal

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:04

Great piece with its power evident and showing.?

Comment is about Camera On... (blog)

Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH

Big Sal

Tue 9th Oct 2018 17:03

Sounds epic. Glad to know poetry is alive and kicking somewhere at least.

Comment is about Laura Taylor, London, 2018 (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 9th Oct 2018 15:36

Congratulations Jon...well deserved!

Comment is about ‘Peace, love and understanding have left the building’ is our Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by steve pottinger

elPintor

Tue 9th Oct 2018 15:11

Thanks for reading, Sal. I don't want to give the impression of being unappreciative--I need encouragement probably as much as anybody. Often, I feel a bit too paralyzed to say much of anything. As much as I try to get around that, I guess I just need to accept it as part if me.

Comment is about unbroken (a timeline in prepositions) (blog)

Original item by nunya

Profile image

Chris Armstrong

Tue 9th Oct 2018 14:45

I liked that a lot - particularly as it offers a hope that I'm not sure is deserved at the moment... but we have to, of course. It reminded me a little of Leonard Cohen chatting between songs! Really good!

Comment is about Peace, love and understanding have left the building (blog)

Original item by Jon Stainsby

Profile image

keith jeffries

Tue 9th Oct 2018 14:17

Hello William,

I enjoyed reading the words you wrote in your sample as they are spoken from the heart, that storehouse where all poetry comes from. Keep writing and let´s see some more of your wrork..
Keith

Comment is about william thompson (poet profile)

Original item by william thompson

Profile image

keith jeffries

Tue 9th Oct 2018 14:11

True words and thank you for them.

Keith

Comment is about Hardened Poets (blog)

Original item by J F Keane

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Tue 9th Oct 2018 13:04

The Magnificent Seven

Seven poets expressed themselves as poets often do

Comment is about Cultivate Life - October 2018 Collage Poem (blog)

Original item by Stockport WoL

Profile image

Nigel Astell

Tue 9th Oct 2018 12:50

Great write up Nicola - - - what about Mary Berry with a Beard!

Review is about New Mills Festival Poetry Trail Round Robin on 26 Sep 2018 (event)

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 9th Oct 2018 12:46

Great poem love it Sample the stress...?

Comment is about Stress can make a mess (blog)

Original item by hugh

Profile image

Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 9th Oct 2018 12:32

Wonderful thank you your words inspire....?

Comment is about Hardened Poets (blog)

Original item by J F Keane

More Comments

◄ Prev123 … 299 … 598 … 897 … 1196 … 12311232123312341235 … 1495 … 1794 … 2093 … 2392 … 2691 … 298629872988Next ►

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message