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Janey Colbourne

Tue 18th Sep 2018 11:58

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 18th Sep 2018 11:39

Congratulations Janey well deserved poem of the week..?

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Martin Elder

Tue 18th Sep 2018 10:37

Thanks for that Stu. I think that could be the title of another poem 'stinks of hops and regret'

Hope we bump into each other again in the not to distant future.

Martin

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Chris Hubbard

Tue 18th Sep 2018 10:11

Hi, Taylor and Anya,

Thank you for taking the time to respond to my musings. I have been traveling in Europe for half a year, which tends to switch off one's poetic antenae!

Somehow, whatever the situation, I cannot leave my poetic sensibility.

Cheers,

Chris

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Stu Buck

Tue 18th Sep 2018 09:59

Cheers guys! Thanks for the lovely comments as ever.

I'm glad the words seem to spill out for you Graham, I suppose because I write so quickly they have that effect.

Nice to have some time to browse through all the work I have missed on here as well.

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Damon Blackery

Tue 18th Sep 2018 09:45

Okay that lol I miss her a lot.

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Tue 18th Sep 2018 08:57

A wistful feel to this poem.
The search for the peace and beauty within.
Your writing is always thought provoking, which is how poetry should be.

Hannah

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 18th Sep 2018 08:28

You've inspired me. I'm going to go through my junk mail box and see if I can have a thrilling morning unsubscribing.

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 18th Sep 2018 08:19

Thanks for the comments. Uric stones - perhaps their time has come, Ray.

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 18th Sep 2018 08:17

Thank you for taking time to comment. I've not been feeling too eloquent in recent weeks.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 18th Sep 2018 07:25

Enjoyed this poem Ray...the places we can travel to in our mind..maybe..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 18th Sep 2018 07:21

Thought provoking poem. Very clever. Love it..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 18th Sep 2018 07:20

Hilarious Hugh..thank you ?

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 18th Sep 2018 05:58

Thank you, Taylor.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 18th Sep 2018 05:58

Love 'yourself'.

Jon

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 17th Sep 2018 23:51

None of those places are ever located where you think they might be. They are a state of mind and may also be only a fleeting moment. Still worth pursuing though. Nice one Ray!

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d.knape

Mon 17th Sep 2018 23:38

do you have
a Ragtime Band?

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d.knape

Mon 17th Sep 2018 23:36

dropout or suicide???
i knew my poetry was bad
but that's pretty extreme.
hahaha

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Becky Who

Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:46

This was the adorable note my son left for me one weekend breakfast time. It is meaningful on so many levels I can't begin.

I just love the way that his difficulties in spelling and pronunciation of the English "th" has led to "I sink therefore I slam"... which is rather poignantly reminiscent of at least one of my states of mind that is conducive to poetry-writing!

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Becky Who

Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:42

Hiya, actually I posted this photo mainly as explanation for the next one. It was a birthday gift several months ago. It does some things up nicely (although like all mugs it annoys me for being right-handed).

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elPintor

Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:29

Thanks John. I'm in the midst of a pretty major life shake-up and am finding it near impossible to expound.

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Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:19

Here's a like Melissa...now you must like me.

I do genuinely like it.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 21:04

So true Jon the king is dead long live the king....?

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raypool

Mon 17th Sep 2018 20:55

Really special and specular - there seems to be an implication of the violent dislocation of birth and how close to ecstasy is the spirit and how it survives in spite of itself.
A real masterwork. Yes, how do you do this?

Great to get another pearl from you Stu.

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raypool

Mon 17th Sep 2018 20:43

Like a slow power surge Peter, a delightful trip into the fanciful and rewarding. Lovely sense of rhythm and romance well rounded and the fruitful culmination, Bingo!

Just for one second I saw Batman taking off, but no, that won't do!

Ray

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Adam Whitworth

Mon 17th Sep 2018 20:40

Thank you Taylor

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John Coopey

Mon 17th Sep 2018 20:23

Hello MC. Thanks for your thoughts.
Laura = Larisa. She goes under both names and is a WOL and FB chum from Odessa.

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Trevor Alexander

Mon 17th Sep 2018 20:16

I always worry when I click 'unsubscribe' that I'm just confirming I'm still there. Long may I be spared from such fears.
Well said.

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raypool

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:50

Thanks so much for looking in Stu. I appreciate your comments every time. This is one I pored over and edited a lot , like a jigsaw found some of the pieces had been misplaced. It was gratifying in the end !

I'm well thanks and had a couple of short holidays this year which recharged the old batteries. I hope things are going your way!

Ray

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:22

You kept me wondering until the very end Peter. Thoroughly enjoyable poem.. Loved it thank you..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:15

Wonderful... Thank you for sharing...

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:11

Excellent and so true. Delete delete. Thanks for sharing..?

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Melissa Wiens

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:10

Thank you Taylor!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:09

Clever poem...enjoyed this..

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 17th Sep 2018 19:08

Liked this poem very much Melissa...?

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Mon 17th Sep 2018 18:12

Soaps, where we the viewers always seem to know more than the characters.
The daddy is never really the daddy.
Love this poem.

Hannah

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Mon 17th Sep 2018 18:05

I love this, it made me smile all the way through, all the references to those magical men.
Fantastic.

Hannah

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 17th Sep 2018 17:58

I can literally feel this spilling out of your mouth Stu! How do you do this?

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Mon 17th Sep 2018 17:55

This is amazing writing !
Love the ending too.

Hannah

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Martin Elder

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:37

A great poem Janey. Love it. I look forward to reading more
Many congrats on POTW

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:36

Absolutely right in its premise! Photography has proved
itself to be one of the GREAT inventions - from still to
moving image - to capture the imagination and the reality
that would otherwise be lost. Just think how the great
events before its arrival would have connected with our
lives - and what might have been prevented (the murder of the princes in the Tower?), if it had been in use as we know
it today (CCTV) A fascinating thought!
I never knew my Uncle Nick who was killed in the Great War
(1914-1918) but I have his photograph - a good looking
young man, casual in his dress-down army uniform - and
he is alive for me...looking out from that sepia print of a
hundred years ago.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:25

A late friend of mine here is central London was a fervent
supported of the claret and blues (the Hammers) and would
burst into this venerable song at the drop of a club scarf!
Community singing at football matches has long been a
tradition and clubs like West Ham and Liverpool still lead the way towards keeping it alive. The famed US composer
Richard Rodgers was pleasantly surprised when told his
song was a football "anthem" here.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:17

Thanks for the comments.
There is an old adage: "A little of what you fancy does you
good". A useful maxim for life that holds its truth across
the years. ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:10

Thank you for all your comments as they are much appreciated. I go the Bohemain Cafe almost everyday but only for their Carrot Cake.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 17th Sep 2018 16:07

O how I love the delete button. Well said
Thanks, Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Sep 2018 15:54

I recall Private Eye did a spoof on this Charles Aznavour
song (referring to him as " 'As enough" which seems to
apply here ha-ha). Pensions are based on contributions -
at least that was my understanding. In that sense, the
number should be reflected in the return.
I always enjoy the "equality" debate - and enjoyed this as
a very skilful dual spoof on both the song and the topic
itself.
P.S. I'm intrigued by the comment addressed to a certain
unseen "Laura". I have my own idea who that might be.
The old song from the movie is a personal favourite and
I trust you'll resist a spoof on its famous haunting lyric!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Sep 2018 15:30

A pithy summation of the escape when faced with the unacceptable - online perhaps being the most irritating
source?
The moving finger clicked and moved on! ? In daily life, you'd probably be either a drop-out or a suicide!

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Sep 2018 14:54

Excellence is never on time!!

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Sep 2018 14:53

Your table is cleaner than mine! Happy belated (insert day here)!?

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Big Sal

Mon 17th Sep 2018 14:52

Lovely imagery.?

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