Big Sal
Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:53
Will get this one in due time as well.?
Comment is about Book Launch (photo)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Big Sal
Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:43
Great reason to write poetry - raising funds for those affected by violence. Since poetry is a great mediator and reason to write, that in itself should be commended.?
Comment is about Christopher Denny (poet profile)
Original item by Christopher Denny
Big Sal
Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:39
Last line and title are killer!?
Comment is about Grotesque decadence (blog)
Original item by Jakob Robinson
With little sensation of starting and stopping I could be piddling while I’m peddling, MC, and not know.
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Wonderfully written Mac...first and last line brilliant...'men and women of honour being held up to ridicule'..?..good stuff thought provoking..keep it up..Taylor?
Comment is about Get out (blog)
Original item by Mac
Hi Mac, Welcome to WOL.....I enjoyed your sample. I found it powerful and effective. Great to hear your voice can't wait to read more of your work. Off to read...Get Out...I will leave comment...?
Comment is about Mac (poet profile)
Original item by Mac
Thankyou for all your comments enjoy them all love wendy
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
You are very kind Avishek thank you..?
Comment is about AVISHEK GHOSH (poet profile)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
Mystically beautiful. Great one.
Comment is about A Quiet Man (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Thank you Taylor.
I feel that people who are more mentally and emotionally vulnerable get manipulated and pitted against friends, by un-true friends.
I also feel that being awake to manipulation can cause bad reactions on our part, but believe that truly over-coming it is to seize to give them the power any longer. Often, people who stir things and control things, feel at a loss when reactions are not gained.
Today writing this poem I decided I am not someones weapon, but I am my own. Though not all weapons require to be used, but to be disarmed.
Comment is about Forced upon Friendly Fire (blog)
Original item by HayzTee
Entertaining as always Don...always enjoy your poetry..xx
Comment is about Drunk Fairy Grounded (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19836)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 10:30
A beautiful Lyric...?❤
Comment is about YOU ARE THE MUSIC - a song lyric (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Fairness and kindness in tax matters? VAT chance!! ?
Comment is about Tit for Tat (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
It all sounds a bit "airy-fairy" to me!
But these budget airlines get some strange customers.
Comment is about Drunk Fairy Grounded (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 09:30
Nah. Our we breed tough fairies here. Priscilla Queen of the Desert types. Heck. Ryanair don't fly here. Ask Anya.
Priscillas in full flight in hometown now - I will survive.....
https://youtu.be/MeH6432oXmY
Comment is about Drunk Fairy Grounded (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 08:55
My money's on the hare. Past performance is no guarantee of future success.
Comment is about SUCCESS STORY (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 08:52
Don - this Tinkerbell chap...you sure he wasn't going to Oz? I've heard they're all fairies over there. lol
Comment is about Drunk Fairy Grounded (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Beautiful poem M.C. ?
Comment is about YOU ARE THE MUSIC - a song lyric (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (19836)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 05:20
Hello Marin. I'm glad you liked my collages. Yes, you should try it; it is a wonderful past time...sort of like doing puzzles - but better!
Thank you. Jane?
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thu 30th Aug 2018 04:42
Your profile "rant" is so encouraging to this newcomer! Would you believe I did a google search yesterday, "Are there rules to writing poetry?" I knew there weren't, but I guess there were still questions I couldn't really form. I think you cleared that up for me.
And you have succeeded already as to evoking my emotions with my first read of your work "Whispers." My x and I were both guilty on that front.
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
You've got me there. Better, perhaps, a 10 mile "peddle"
than a 10 mile piddle as things are!
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
elPintor
Thu 30th Aug 2018 00:47
I realize we're each in our separate places and as such I appreciate your comments and reading..
lost for comments for now...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kr4DNZz_8zI
Comment is about hiding places (discernment) (blog)
Original item by nunya
Thu 30th Aug 2018 00:30
Hello, how are you today.
Did you had a good time
at the grocery store?
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
This one really made me smile. And I really needed to smile today! Now I'm hungry. Thanks for your welcoming me to blog. Very positive experience here. ?
Comment is about International Bake-off: Britain 1 - France 0 (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
Such a short and sweet poem but loved the images! Congrats!
Comment is about 'Love Garden' by Lynn Hahn is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 22:05
Some great titles you have collected.?
Comment is about Cait Abbott (poet profile)
Original item by Cait Abbott
As it happens, MC, I went for a ten mile peddle on Sunday, two days after the broddling. No ill effects.
As for 'intelligentsia" - I'm sure it is self-evident as I hijack the anacreontic form substituting its trochaic feet with iambic ones.
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
If you want to be thought one of the intelligentsia, you
could always change the title to -
"An Enema of the Poop Hole".
A closing thought - you might be advised to lay off the
cycling for a while. The jury is still out about whether all
that saddle sitting is a contributory factor towards irritating the prostate.
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (19913)
Wed 29th Aug 2018 21:09
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 21:05
Thanks, Taylor. I am right as ninepence; no discomfort at all. Even straight after the biopsy, I said to the nurse, “Most enjoyable”. I don’t think she’d ever heard that before.
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 19:23
The title alone sounds great.
Comment is about Quines: Gerda Stevenson, Luath Press (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
<Deleted User> (19836)
Wed 29th Aug 2018 19:21
Just feeling a little uncomfortable due to your brilliantly descriptive poem... Hope you are not too uncomfy at the moment. A hard read but informative. ??
Comment is about THEY MADE ME WEAR A NAPPY (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thanks, Taylor. The smell of the cut grass really hit me this morning. It was lovely.
Comment is about Daybreak moments (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (19836)
Wed 29th Aug 2018 19:13
Wolfgar said it first but I agree...Magnificent!
This really hit home for me. Thank you?Jane
Comment is about Regret (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I agree with Jane great imagery.. I can almost smell newly strimmed grass. ?
Comment is about Daybreak moments (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (19836)
Wed 29th Aug 2018 19:04
A lovely piece! I enjoyed the imagery. ?Jane
Comment is about Daybreak moments (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 18:46
Those last two lines sum up the last 2 years in America right now. Great, emotionally evocative piece. Enjoyed it.?
Comment is about Get out (blog)
Original item by Mac
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 18:44
I've written 1000's of poems, and only 250 of them are published. I know what it's like to have to throw away good work, or put it aside in favor of living life or trying harder at something I'm working on. Regardless, some great pieces you have on your profile.??
Comment is about Sorcerer's Apprentice (blog)
Original item by Eric Maynard
Big Sal
Thu 30th Aug 2018 14:57
Loved the hyacinth line Avishek, another great piece. Your work gets better and better the longer you remain here, keep up the artistic progression.?
Comment is about Riddle (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH