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Harry O'Neill

Thu 21st Apr 2016 22:50


My old `Floating Voter Song` re-hashed for the Europe vote.


with an invitation to anyone to add their own version

(If I ever find out where the hell my sound files are stored I`ll post the tune )

Come on folks!...we`re all perishing of Haiku - itis.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 21st Apr 2016 22:48

Thank you Jemima, yes a sad loss indeed.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 21st Apr 2016 22:15

She's loyal to the worker who delivers her her £1,000,000 giro cheque each week "ma-am"

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Thu 21st Apr 2016 21:49

haha! good one Miten.

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raypool

Thu 21st Apr 2016 21:10

So pleased that you like this David, as I completely re-wrote it to try for that particular repetitive verse format - it's difficult for me to bring discipline in, but probably worth the effort - as you have highlighted.

I am satisfied that this is the best I could do on the subject matter!

Ray

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Jemima Jones

Thu 21st Apr 2016 20:01

What a loss eh Lynn.Lovely poem.Thank you.Jemima.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 21st Apr 2016 19:55

Thank you, Rose, very much appreciated.

Bill, I love that song you mention, and yes, deliciously barmy is about right! Thank you for your kind comment.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Apr 2016 18:17

I endorse Harry's comment.
Take your time and get things right
And you'll satisfy life's appetite!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Apr 2016 18:06

These lines will surely resonate with many readers,
including yours truly.
I was in my mid-60s when I was convinced by a chum
to get a PC & get with it! I was kind enough to myself
to make sure I got a couple of guidebooks at the outset
- and that certainly made my new life in cyberspace a
lot easier than it might otherwise have been. I had just
got used to Internet Explorer when I was led to Google
Chrome which I forsook for Firefox - all the time making
sure I had online security to keep the nasties in check.
There have been some scary moments when everything
looked set to got bent on me but it's been fun most of
the time, leading to an expansion of my retirement world
towards sites like this and many others that have added
to my enjoyment and knowledge. Then, of course, there is invaluable "email". What would I do without it?
So - the moral surely has to be: stick with it and don't
be discouraged when hiccups happen. The answer is
out there!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Apr 2016 17:42

This says it perfectly IMHO.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 21st Apr 2016 16:02


Rose reminded and (courteously) beat me.

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Thu 21st Apr 2016 14:19

great entertainer,sad loss.Nice dedication Lynn.


Rose.x

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Laura Taylor

Thu 21st Apr 2016 13:01

Ta Ray!

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 21st Apr 2016 12:24

Thanks Stu x

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 21st Apr 2016 12:13

Oh go on then, I'll confess! Thanks fellas. Nearly mentioned the cats but thought better of it.

Lynn x

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 21st Apr 2016 12:08

Hi Celia

I've read your piece over about three times and find it mesmerizing....

Lynn x

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raypool

Thu 21st Apr 2016 11:39

Ghastly and inspired Harry - admirable for the shape alone. The contrast of the white bucket is pure horror. I can almost sense the gravity of it.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 21st Apr 2016 11:31

Fine imagery and worthy in every way. The great thing about senescence is its rarity and virgin quality, and it rhymes with essence, pubescence presence; the list could go on. A Pandora's box.

Fabulous. Ray

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Laura Taylor

Thu 21st Apr 2016 09:29

Cheers chaps!

Ooo yes, senescence is one of my favourite words - the sound, the process, love it. I included it in another poem about how we never really die, how our skin cells enter other people through their mouths and noses :) It was called Rebellious Senescence :D

Look forward to your gothic horror sequence :D

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Thu 21st Apr 2016 08:47

Katy,re the poem image-is that you looking for Heathcliffe?...............if you can't locate him,there is always an old poet ready to take his place....;o)


We loved this pearler.

P&S

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Hypocritical Transparency

Thu 21st Apr 2016 08:31

Read my work. Hit me back....please

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Emma

Thu 21st Apr 2016 07:24

Sounds like the silliness of Market Street pretty well summed up- I like it.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 20th Apr 2016 22:58

Brilliant, Laura, love it!

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Lynn Dye

Wed 20th Apr 2016 22:56

Thank you Laura and Rob for your kind comments, much appreciated.

And thanks also to Rose and Helen for the likes.

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Anna Grinter

Wed 20th Apr 2016 21:53

fine that is your opinion

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Katy Megan Hughes

Wed 20th Apr 2016 21:24

Sure is! I guess we all have to grasp at something...

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Wed 20th Apr 2016 20:13

I go with the other guys here.Fab gear!

Rose.x

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Matthew James

Wed 20th Apr 2016 19:53

Thank you Wolfgar. That means so much to me.

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Robert Mann

Wed 20th Apr 2016 17:17

Helen - Lovely, gente (whoops) but effective. xx
Rob

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Stu Buck

Wed 20th Apr 2016 16:37

great stuff. the word crisp is fantastic isnt it. senescence is a new one on me and thus i am thankful. i'm halfway through a gothic horror haiku sequence. i shall post later as it seems haiku are en vogue.

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Robert Mann

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:41

Lynn - you naughty little voyeur you! Scrummy.
Rob

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Laura Taylor

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:40

Thank you very much Rob :) Yeh, that's another one of those pesky rules innit, if you're writing a series of them, they have to be able to stand alone, and my Arrested one didn't (although I had a lot of fun writing it ha).

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Stu Buck

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:22

you know, now you have said it, i totally see it. the first line could be from the art of war.

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Robert Mann

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:20

Lynn - delightful. I think we are all pushing up personal standards on here as competition draws out the best. Best wishes.
Rob

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Robert Mann

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:15

Laura - This is beautiful. Each stanza stands on its own merits as a complete haiku itself. Wonderful stuff.
Rob

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Laura Taylor

Wed 20th Apr 2016 15:01

Lovely, Lynn :)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 20th Apr 2016 14:44

Fear embalms the alligator - it's like a translation of a haiku heh :D

In fact, it all seems like a translation.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 20th Apr 2016 14:41

One of the first haiku I ever tried my hand at. It was sparked by entering a new friend's house and seeing her vase of dead red roses. I had the exact same thing at home, and never thought anyone else would want to keep dead flowers :D It told me an awful lot about her. I preferred them dead, tbh. Something special about them.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 20th Apr 2016 14:10

Indeed. It makes the poem even more special, knowing that.

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Harry Palmer

Wed 20th Apr 2016 12:16

Leers with madness into the recruiting camera!

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Jemima Jones

Wed 20th Apr 2016 09:29

excellent! Thank you Eric.Jemima.

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Stu Buck

Wed 20th Apr 2016 09:14

works on so many levels!

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Stu Buck

Tue 19th Apr 2016 22:46

cheers both. glad the poem means different things to different people. i envy you working with andrew, his debut is extremely accomplished and quite wonderful in places.

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Christian

Tue 19th Apr 2016 22:29

This is brilliant Eric!, keep it up :D

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Tue 19th Apr 2016 22:23

1st poem-awwww!
2nd poem-ditto,moreso.

both enjoyed.

P&S

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Helen Elliott

Tue 19th Apr 2016 21:19

Too right! :)

Thanks Wolfie :)

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raypool

Tue 19th Apr 2016 20:43

Shades of Mash - I thought !
Strong fare and shades of childhood with the castor oil.


Good stuff .

Ray

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Paul F Blackburn

Tue 19th Apr 2016 20:02

Well done Nicola, thoroughly deserved!

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