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Luke

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 22:56

This was based on a dream I had a few nights ago.
Thanks for reading.

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Rick Varden

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 21:28

Ha ha yea! Thank you

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 18:05

“Where’ve you caffein bean ‘til now?” she said.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 17:34

And it is thus, that the dog-whistling politicians who loudly complain "This is a Christian country..." betray and crucify Jesus with every death.
They don't want to "stop the boats", because that gives them power over a population divided by hate.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 17:25

That's a beautiful last line David; its beauty is in its truth.

"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know."
Keats

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 17:06

A grim beauty in this one, John.

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Yanma Hidayah

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 16:57

@Holden @Uilleam Thank you 🤍

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 14:19

Thank you Yanma. Very moving; I recognise something of my own experiences in that little boy's solitude.

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 13:45

A moving poem that unfolds beautifully, Yanma! 🌷

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Tom Doolan

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 13:41

Thanks for likes: hugh, Uilleam, Manish, Yanma Hidayah, Auracle & Larisa. 👍

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 13:27

Thanks JD. Can’t make my mind up whether it’s alliteration, consonance or what, but it works very nicely; wish I was there!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 11:27

Wave your wallet at her Rick-that might work!😊

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 11:16

Thanks Landi.
"Awaiting A name"

...and it needs a human to name it! just imagine if some being existed who/which could give it a name other than the one we earthlings have given it....?

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David RL Moore

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 09:12

Thanks for your comment Uilleam,

I'm an observer now when it comes to political activism. In this country revolution is a thing of the past (for now) and this piece of writing is fantasy.

Our political system has crippled itself with appeasement and dishonesty. It has also utilised state agencies to work against its own people. Until such time as an apathetic society wakes from the anesthesia of popular cultural and the opium of the quick fix we're all fucked.

Most of us deserve the contempt with which politicians appear to hold us in. I'm convinced many politicians have recognised this and that is what motivated them to join the winning side.

David RL Moore

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:38

Shades of The Big Friendly Giant or something there, Clive.😊

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:35

Thanks for the likes:
Red Brick Keshner
Tom Doolan
hugh
Jordyn Elizabeth
Stephen Gospage
Stephen W Atkinson
Aisha Suleman
Steve White
Auracle

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:31

Thanks for the likes:
Red Brick Keshner
Trevor Alexander
Steve White
Auracle

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:27

Thanks for the likes:
Tom Doolan
Trevor Alexander
Holden Moncrieff
Auracle

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:25

Playing catch up; thanks for the likes and comments
Tom Doolan
Stephen Gospage
Aisha Suleman
Larisa Rzhepishevska
Steve White
Tim Higbee
Arrianna
Tobani / Nataiella

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:20

Belated thanks to:
Tom Doolan
hugh
Ruth O'Reilly
Larisa Rzhepishevska
Holden Moncrieff
K. Lynn
Hélène
Manish
Tim Higbee
Arrianna
Tobani / Nataiella
For your likes…and a jolly good read it is, too!💗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 08:05

What are we on WOL for, Ghazala, if not to express ourselves and to learn from others?
A thoughtful and imaginative poem, I say. As far as poetry is concerned, I have few academic qualifications, save those of my schooldays, thus I’m loath to comment on certain aspects of anyone’s poetry so, thank you for the accompanying notes, which I find insightful and helpful.

I have several old books, gleaned from the treasure troves which are second-hand bookshops, of Spanish (Lorca etc.) and French poetry which spans the centuries; they are all, thank goodness, heavily annotated, and as a result I’ve learned much which I otherwise would not have done.

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David RL Moore

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 05:54

Thanks to Tom, Uilleam and Stephen for the likes on this one.

David

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Yanma Hidayah

Wed 2nd Oct 2024 02:33

Thank you Arrianna 🤍

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Arrianna

Tue 1st Oct 2024 20:13

Beautiful poem ❤️

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 1st Oct 2024 14:26

They try to recreate the old markets with supersized shopping centres, but fail miserably. The sanitised, dehumanised cathedrals of commerce are just not the same. Just an excuse for increased 'stallholder' rents, and thus ever higher prices.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 1st Oct 2024 12:04

GREAT!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 1st Oct 2024 10:58

Thanks Ian, I've not yet had chance to listen to it properly.

Re Tom's comment, we now have a so-called "street market" where you can get a mortgage on a beefburger costing just short of £10 quid!😧

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Tom Doolan

Tue 1st Oct 2024 10:48

Thanks for likes: Tobani / Nataiella, Jordyn, Holden, Manish & Stephen W. 👍

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Tom Doolan

Tue 1st Oct 2024 10:40

Nice one Ian - It won't be long before markets will be consigned to history. 😐

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Ghazala lari

Tue 1st Oct 2024 10:01

Thank you Grahan for your feedback.😃

"It's my choice to elaborate and explain. I guess that's no sin and there's no such rule that one needs to follow, therefore I ain't breaking any".

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 1st Oct 2024 09:21

Sometimes I think it is a shame that you extensively explain your poems instead of allowing the reader to interpret them for themselves. They then become mere texts.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 1st Oct 2024 09:15

Definitely Uilleam. It's going to be.

Thank you!!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 1st Oct 2024 08:50

Lovely, Mike. I think they may still be around in non-league football, complete with a sugar bowl with its one shared spoon to stir in your tea! (May be the pandemic put an end to that!)

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 1st Oct 2024 07:58

Thanks David, let's "clear the rot away".

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David RL Moore

Tue 1st Oct 2024 07:54

Thanks for the latest likes on this.

David

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 1st Oct 2024 07:52

Thanks MC.
Re Latin: we’re told that it’s a “dead language”, but is it?
It has survived by mutating over the years into Italian, and therefore, it is now as dead as Schrödinger's Norwegian Blue Parrot; it’s both dead and not dead!😏

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Tue 1st Oct 2024 07:20

Thanks, Sourajit.
Your poem posits an interesting moral problem:
“…Yet still we're told, that money's the curse,
The source of all evil, the root of the worst.”

A frequently mis-quoted saying is that from the Christian Bible (the King James version,1 Timothy 6:10), which says:
“…For the love of money is the root of all evil: which while some coveted after, they have erred from the faith, and pierced themselves through with many sorrows.”

I would interpret that in a more general sense, and suggest that the problem is "the love of money", one of greed; that the love of anything, to excess, is at the root of many evils. Or, as the saying goes: “One should eat to live, not live to eat”.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 1st Oct 2024 02:50

A beautiful poem, full of hope. I enjoyed this, Tim.

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Tom Doolan

Mon 30th Sep 2024 20:26

Thanks for likes: Stephen G, Aisha & hugh 👍

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 30th Sep 2024 20:01

Thank you so much, my dear friends, for commenting and liking my poem. With best wishes, Larisa

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 30th Sep 2024 17:56

Killer last line Hugh (literally) Well done! G

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 30th Sep 2024 17:51

Intriguing Manish!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th Sep 2024 17:48

Ha...this takes me back to my old job, nicking the street traders
offering this sort of thing illegally in Oxford Street, London W1.
Anyone seeing one of those disreputable characters wiping his
nose on a grubby overall sleeve would surely think twice about
buying his offerings. Health and Safety??? Do me a favour, guv!😝 !!!!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 30th Sep 2024 17:43

UOC - talking of languages (so to speak 😉), interesting that Latin remains so relevant. Not everything has to change to make
sense of our lives and expectations.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 16:05

Correct Stephen, “Life has no meaning without art”. Though, to get things into some perspective; what on earth is the value of a few drops of paint on a canvas, (in this day and age), other than a measure of the vainglorious delusions of some billionaire, who would like to keep it in their bank vault, purely for the satisfaction of owning it?
I would much rather our children and grandchildren survive to create their own art and be able to tell their and our story to future generations, i.e: That we fought their corner.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 15:20

Excellent advice Hugh, I know never to try that one on.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 15:17

Great lines, jeronth.
"So tread with care on dreams that gleam,
For desire’s spark can burn the dream."

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 15:14

"lost and found in the beauty of the ordinary,"
Nice one, Eduardo.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 15:09

"Push ahead", I say. Per Ardua ad Astra.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 30th Sep 2024 15:03

I used to aim for one of those stalls coming out of the "Palais de Danse" (now a hole in the ground) after a night on the ale, drinking rum'n black chasers. Never did me any harm, in fact I'd say my immunity got a booster.
The vile crap they're selling in supermarkets now, full of preservatives, with "Not For Sale in the EU" notices on (cheers, Brexit!), is probably no better.

"...nearby toilet facilities, with soap and sink." There's something similar in our local BnQ car pk.

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