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Tim Higbee

Sat 5th Oct 2024 14:15

I admire your courage or perhaps necessity in facing the unanswered needs of your youth from a complicated woman who struggled to be a mother. Our deepest questions often are unanswered only managed. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 5th Oct 2024 11:41

Nice one, Clive,
As easy as Hay Bee Sea!

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Nigel Astell

Sat 5th Oct 2024 11:07

Thanks for your likes
Stephen G
Hugh
Red Brick Keshner
Uilleam O'Ceallaigh
Aisha
Auracle
and
Tobani/Nataiella.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 5th Oct 2024 09:39

Thanks Steve.
Speaking of “The Big Lie”, we in the UK made a film with that title; but we’re far more gentlemanly about such things…one doesn’t go tampering with machines and stuff; one simply ensures that the entire news media, on paper and screen, are in on the act.
That way, the UK electorate don't get to see “The Big Lie”, venues being boycotted on the grounds of trumped-up accusations (now proven to be such) of anti-semitism.
Day one: mainstream news interviewer to politiician: “are you his friend?”; “Oh yes, of course I am!”.
Day two: mainstream news interviewer to politician: “are you his friend?”; “Oh no, don’t be silly!”.

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Tom Doolan

Sat 5th Oct 2024 08:01

Hi Rasa -The basic way to say "hello" in Irish is dia duit (dee-ah gwit). ☘️

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 5th Oct 2024 07:49

Dia Duit Tom. 😃 Is that Gaelic?

Ah I love your comment, Uilleam. 😃That's local bus on Sunday sounds wonderful!

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David RL Moore

Sat 5th Oct 2024 07:19

Thanks for the comment Uilleam.

Thanks to those who sent likes.

David

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Sunshine

Sat 5th Oct 2024 06:09

Thank you Nigel, glad to see your footprints here... Your feedback motivates me 💐

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TobaniNataiella

Fri 4th Oct 2024 22:43

Thank you Hugh for the like

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Oct 2024 22:07

Spectacular, Clive. It put me in the mood:

Instructions: Insert two coins in the machine, or, if left-handed, hose down Elephant. You know it makes sense.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Oct 2024 22:01

A classy sonnet, Trevor. Thanks for this.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Oct 2024 21:51

This is really good! 👍👍

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Telboy

Fri 4th Oct 2024 20:08

Too late to enter this in NPD? It's their loss!

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Steve White

Fri 4th Oct 2024 18:54

Thanks Stephen.

She seemed pretty unrepentant in some of the news reports I read. Nonetheless, I did have a go at reframing the story as a love song: https://youtu.be/-Y_k1fMiG_8

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Oct 2024 17:42

Well put, Steve. In a way, it's sad, though. As you imply, people like this are the gullible foot soldiers of Trump's Big Lie and are (quite rightly) put in prison. But how much time will DT spend behind bars? A nice round figure, I guess.
Good poem on an issue which I fear will see a new lease of life when Trump loses again in November.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Oct 2024 17:21

Thank you, Steve and Uilleam. Yes, each individual who undertakes these perilous voyages does so at great risk and they too often end in tragedy. I read recently about the hundreds of unmarked graves on the migration routes to Europe, and also met two Afghan men whose account of their journey from Kabul to Belgium left me open-motuhed and in awe of their bravery and determination.
As you both say, the human endeavour and tragedy is so often forgotten in all the populist bluster.
And thank you to everyone who liked this poem. I am very grateful for your support.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Fri 4th Oct 2024 16:05

Thank you very much, Graham.😊

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TobaniNataiella

Fri 4th Oct 2024 15:51

Thank you Arrianna for the like

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Arrianna

Fri 4th Oct 2024 15:13

Great depiction of Instagram

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 13:28

Thanks Tom.
"Our government supplies the weapons no mystery".

Yes, but,you don't understand, the UK's contribution to the genocide is extremely small-we only supply the little black buttons for others people to press...nowt to do with us guv.
So the babies, and the close on100,000 (probably) that are killed, are only a LITTLE bit dead.
What we need right now is WW111. THAT should take our minds off the genocide. oops, here we go!

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Tom Doolan

Fri 4th Oct 2024 12:55

dia duit ☘️

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 12:45

Thanks David.
Your use of shadow and light is appropriate, and effective.

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R A Porter

Fri 4th Oct 2024 12:29

Thank you Uilleam and Greg - it was really uplifting. The kids' smiles and enthusiasm for words were infectious. Having spent most of my career trying to make people in business communicate more effectively, sell stuff or look good in front of other business people, I do wonder if I missed my way. But then being dropped in for a few hours is easy, not sure I could keep up with the responsibility of helping to guide the flow of those curious, super-active minds every day! 😀

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 12:08

Thanks Eduardo.
Only yesterday I was walking along the pavement, when right in front of me, a woman, obediently nose to screen, stepped off the pavement and narrowly missed being flattened by the bus from which I had just alighted! The driver sounded his horn, which startled me, but she never even flinched!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 11:14

Thanks for that RA.
There's nothing more delighful than the creativity of little children. Birthday, father's day, Christmas day cards etc. I'll treasure them always. Our granddaughter was once busy making a "spaceship" out of a 6 ft long cardbord box, complete with windows. When I asked her later if it had managed to get to the moon , she gave me a puzzled look, as if to say "don't be silly!"💗

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 10:51

Thanks Rasa.
That’s very true, a language we all know.
As for:
“A flood of colours
A sea of sounds”,
You should be on our local bus on Sundays with all the African ladies in their colourful finery; it’s better than Paris fashion week!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 4th Oct 2024 09:07

Thanks for the inspiration, Clive....so without further adoobydoobydoo...

How do you do, I'm Mick Adoo,
I’m captain of thissh sship,
Of ale, I've had a sssshhhip or two,
Yes, I've got a little lizszszt,
I always walk and talk like thissh
When I'm Brahms and Liszt.

Copyright by ME by the way😜


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Greg Freeman

Fri 4th Oct 2024 08:12

What a wonderful way to spend National Poetry Day, RA! Spreading the word about poetry at your local school ... you win the prize. You deserve a medal!

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Greg Freeman

Fri 4th Oct 2024 08:04

Yes, good children's poem, I'd say, with Roald Dahl influences. Check out The Dirigible Balloon https://dirigibleballoon.org/

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Greg Freeman

Fri 4th Oct 2024 08:02

Ah, a 'list' poem, about lists! Interesting, and different.

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Landi Cruz

Fri 4th Oct 2024 00:58

I believe I understand completely, David--I often feel much the same. But then, it also often seems to me there's not a thought in my head.

"Interstellar" is a great film. And, yeah, the rabbit hole does go deep...

Was it the gnostics who subscribed to the idea that the physical realm of matter is itself corruption manifest?

..there's a distinct possibility that I would misrepresent the beliefs of others according to my own misunderstanding, so I won't go further.

If mankind ever does unravel the thread of creation, of what will he dream?

A good evening to you ) 🌷

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C Richard Miles

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 23:05

Haven't been on the site for a while but was sharing the poem with a friend & realised I'd recorded a version more recently so I thought I'd post it. The reference to Windows 8 is a bit dated but I'm thinking of switching my internet provider at the moment but, just like that new computer, it's not allowing access to certain websites I use regularly - something to do with certificates

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 23:03

Some great lines! Nice one 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 22:54

Thank you Uilleam (are you sure it wasn't just something in your eye?) 😉
Thank you Tom! And thank you... Bob 😆
And thanks for the likes 🌷

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Telboy

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 21:13

One of the best things on here in a while. Well done Trev.

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Rick Varden

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 20:53

Ha ha yea!

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Steve White

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 20:45

Thank you, Stephen.

The humanity of these godforsaken voyages is often lost in the clamour of populist dog whistles.

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Trevor Alexander

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 18:20

An attempt for the National Poetry Day theme of 'counting'.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 17:14

Rick, your poem reminded me of a joke you used to hear when I was a student.
- Maybe YES or maybe NO.
-Maybe RAIN or maybe SNOW.
-Maybe BABY.
- I don't know.

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Tim Higbee

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 15:07

This is so very touching, Tom

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 15:03

Thanks to Aisha and Holden for the recent likes.

David

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Tom Doolan

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 13:49

Thanks for likes: Aisha, Red Brick Keshner, Tim & Holden 👍

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Tom Doolan

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 13:45

A very emotive piece Stephen.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 11:09

Beautiful Stephen-your last two lines made me cry, you meanie!💗

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 09:26

Thank you Uilleam, I've become a lover of Alliteration, glad you like something in it, thanks for the comment

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 09:00

Thankyou, Uilleam and Redbrick Reggie’s Ghost and Stephen for the Likes.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 08:58

Nice one Clive.
"oh the beetle, rolling scat"😊
or
oh the Beatle singing scat...
but did they ever do any of that?

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 08:15

Hi Landi,

I very much enjoyed this piece. It set me thinking but alas I could not muster an appropriate response or comment as the rabbit hole went too deep.

On the evening of reading it I attended the big screen anniversary of one of my now favourite films "Interstellar" now that really twisted my melon when interwoven with your text.

Thankx,

David RL Moore

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 07:03

Thanks for the comment Uilleam, and to RBK, Stephen and Reggie for the likes.

Primarily written in honour of my good friends now under the gun in Beirut and the Greater Lebanon.

It could just as easily be for my friends in Tel-Aviv, Jerusalem, Gaza, and The Occupied Territories.

Things don't get much more current or realistic than that in my opinion.

David RL Moore

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Landi Cruz

Thu 3rd Oct 2024 01:25

Thanks for the comment, Uilleam. 

Your words started me thinking early today about the story of Adam and his task to name the creatures which cohabited the earth in the days of Eden--my thoughts, at the moment, are branching out like tendrils in too many directions for which to account, though.

I will say that I had a class a couple of years ago with whom I did my best to study Of Mice And Men.  However,  even the most astute of them had very little interest. I tried to emphasize the many parallels with Genesis, but things I found obvious proved to be much too extracted for the teenage mind.  Anyway...

..I still find the idea that Curley's wife died without a name to be particularly poignant--though many might interpret her to be the temptress in the garden, she seems more to me the embodiment of arrested development.

Thanks to everyone for reading )

🌷

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