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melanie coady

Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:59

wow jesus hun ur fukin gud!! xx miss u here in waterford

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melanie coady

Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:57

wow kealan hun xx

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melanie coady

Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:55

wow! xx

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Cate Greenlees

Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:42

Incredibly powerful poems Anthony. I always enjoy reading your work. I have read these several times now, and find more in them each time.
Cate xx

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Philipos

Fri 25th Mar 2011 19:05

Hi Rebecca many thanks for commenting on When Man Has Gone which me the chance to visit your site and indeed enjoy your work - best regards

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Fri 25th Mar 2011 14:22

hello Tim, my thanks go out to you for your kind comments on 'Stars Would Gladly Cast Their Gleam' - much appreciated :) Best wishes, Dave

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Tom Harding

Fri 25th Mar 2011 13:17

Thanks both. This is from a growing collection of pictures and poetry I've been slowly putting together. Hopefully one day I can collate them all in a chapbook. I've always liked the mix of the two.

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winston plowes

Fri 25th Mar 2011 10:27

Hi Anthony, thanks for your comments on my pyrenean poem. My ride was 3 years ago now. Going for the Alps however in Sept. Yes, those col names are very poetic in their own right arn't they, Win x

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Andy N

Fri 25th Mar 2011 08:15

good title with the title hunting rach, hardest thing of a poem for me usually getting the right title..

enjoyed it otherwise.. good stuff x

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Andy N

Fri 25th Mar 2011 08:13

Nice...like the use of the painting / drawing with it! Am I right in guessing this is from a book or a collection?

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Fri 25th Mar 2011 00:21

Science and art come together in a poetic fusion, a merging of two worlds of words, encoding the life of our site and our community. Brilliant riff.
This is what Write Out Loud is all about. Thank you Ann.

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Tom Harding

Thu 24th Mar 2011 23:42

I know this feeling.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 24th Mar 2011 21:50

But of course now the bug is fixed - this poem makes no sense whatsoever! We obviously need more glitchy bugs on WOL - great when you are struggling for an idea for a poem! Thank you!! And. . . . Goodnightxxxx

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Tom Harding

Thu 24th Mar 2011 20:09

nice. very funny.

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Tom Harding

Thu 24th Mar 2011 20:08

sweet & nicely woven. reminds me of the sadness of keats.

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Tom Harding

Thu 24th Mar 2011 20:04

nice, lyrical & tough.

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 19:50

nice poem and lovely title Dave-best regards.

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Dave Bradley

Thu 24th Mar 2011 18:43

only just caught up with this and would like to join the chorus of appreciation. Great stuff

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 24th Mar 2011 18:39

Yes writing this was so much fun
Once I had found me specs
I enjoyed it just as much
As I used to enjoy . . . crochet :)

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 24th Mar 2011 18:34

Of course I did it on purpose! Honestly - what are you all like!! That's why the writing is a delicate shade of pink :)

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 18:15

BTW - I was assuming that you'd done the WOL/LOL and Bits/Nerves (no tits) on purpose ??
so am I (like)an effin ijit or are you a poetry-like Goddess ? Hmm?

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 18:10

marvellous ! - you had fun here didn't you ?? xx B

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Nash

Thu 24th Mar 2011 17:47

Thanks A.E.! Very kind words...

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Thu 24th Mar 2011 15:41

Thanks for your comments on the Uncertain Narcissist-very spiffing : )

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Thu 24th Mar 2011 15:40

Thanks for your comments Francine and Isobel-when I have performed this poem in public there are usually a few titters and gasps, but what the hey : )

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melanie coady

Thu 24th Mar 2011 15:01

wow!!

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melanie coady

Thu 24th Mar 2011 14:44

absolutly loved it darlin xx

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Mar 2011 14:09

Hi David. Yes, thanks very much for your recent comments on the Betjeman poem and Touch Wood. Fair enough, if he's not your cup of tea. I was quite taken aback by the amount of affection he engenders. Of course, I feel a great bond because of his love of trains. Sometimes I find it difficult to write about anything else but railways!

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David Cooke

Thu 24th Mar 2011 13:12

I've just been catching up with your recent poems. (All very good and hope you've seen my posts.) I was inspired to put my latest on after reading your recent railway poems.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Mar 2011 10:46

A 'stew' of words, all simmering together, each 'ingredient' keeping its individual taste but contributing to the final flavour of the 'dish'.

Are you calling this style experimental? It is interesting, for sure; needs a lot of discipline in word connotation/associative idea manipulation.

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Philipos

Thu 24th Mar 2011 10:17

Like the way you bring us to the scene and depart again and leave it for us to remember our own similar experiences as motorists - it dwells in the mind though these shocks and we keep going back to the same event in most cases - talking/writing about these experiences certainly helps and as you so rightly put it 'makes you think'

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Philipos

Thu 24th Mar 2011 10:00

Re: Jacob's Ladder as you so correctly infer is the link between this world and the next as well as a colloquial term for the rope ladder on the side of a ship - your comments always appreciated kind sir.

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Anthony Emmerson

Thu 24th Mar 2011 09:41

Hi Nash,

Admired the way you came at these tragic events from a different angle, and without overt sentimentality. Great cross-referencing and an understatedly humanitarian conclusion.

Excellent,

regsards,
A.E.

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 09:08

Hi Terry.a beautifully heartfelt poem.enjoyed reading.best regards.

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Rachel Bond

Thu 24th Mar 2011 00:50

All photos for Butterflies Gigs Bar, Bolton Write out Loud taken by Rachel Bond.

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Rachel Bond

Thu 24th Mar 2011 00:49

All photos for Studio Poetry The Studio Liverpool Mar 2011 taken by Rachel Bond, with exception of this one, taken by Rebecca Audra Smith.

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Thu 24th Mar 2011 00:21

Oh yes now i see. Please excuse, i had the wrong specs on. How the heck did you get up there?
...and is that as a young person with...is that red hair i see?
and how big is that mug? :-)

Where was it taken? I've never seen that chair before.

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Isobel

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 22:38

I love this one Gareth. It is good to see bi-sexuality/homosexuality explored so subtly. As others have remarked, the poem has good flow and imagery.

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Rachael Dunn

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 22:32

Thanks Francine,
I was a but iffy about the title, will play with it, until it sits right :)

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Isobel

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 22:23

You must know my views on catharsis by now Anthony…
I do write the occasional autobiographically inspired piece – though my pride would stop me from going to the outer limits. I think women are more inclined to give vent to their emotions in this way and I don’t see it as a bad thing. Catharsis only gets a bad name when the needle gets stuck and we fail to look beyond ourselves. Our own blood and tears are but a drop in the ocean when you take a look around.

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Francine

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 22:20

I really like the feeling and images this evokes, even though the last half is a bit of a downer. I personally would give it another title though...
'Abstract Notions'

Like the lines:
'Existence was not enough to tame us'
'We mix strife and strain with acid rain'

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Francine

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 22:00

This is really good, Ann - so creative and fun!

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Francine

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 21:55

I love the title!
This flows along nicely, and like Cynthia, I find those last lines reflect well what you are saying.

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Anthony Emmerson

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 21:45

OK, I'll 'fess up! If there wasn't that "little bit" of "us" in our writing it would all be much the same I suspect. That doesn't mean though that we write all our "characters" and scenarios from first-hand experience. Isn't that what imagination's for? ( although I wouldn't have minded being George Best for a while!)

" . . . a heart, a strong mind and a very sensitive soul."

I nearly fell off my "big chair"! Does The Pope know this- I should be in for Sainthood!

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Wed 23rd Mar 2011 19:13

Who was it who wrote that all writing is autobiographical, in that through our writing we reveal ourselves?

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 19:09

Thank you boys! xxxx

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Wed 23rd Mar 2011 19:07

Well, I'll go to't foot of our stairs, I will. Michael has actually offered a comment, after years of his words being the raft on which all of ours float.
See what wonders your poetry can evoke, Ann?

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Isobel

Wed 23rd Mar 2011 14:19

Thanks for paying me a visit Anthony - what doesn't kill us certainly makes us stronger :) Am working hard on doing more performance/funny stuff - though I fear my latest may be too blue to post on WOL. Co-incidentally, it also bigs up Wigan - the best place to perform in the whole North West, from my experience. We don't take ourselves 'too' seriously up here, which makes for an entertaining evening. You will have to revisit your roots one day. xx

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Wed 23rd Mar 2011 14:17

I loved this one too. Not a clue what it was about but the first line hooked me in and the rest held me there to the end.

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