LOL very good poem!

Comment is about Whether Forecast (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

I am nothing short of fulfilled with merriment at receiving such a pleasant comment - many gleeful thanks to you. I am working on some clean poems to put up - most of them are for therapy and would probably have me arrested if they left my scribble book.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

Original item by Malpoet

Many joyous thanks for your comment Monsieur Morgan.
I drink guiness too - except I put a shot of Tia Maria in it which generally unsettles people. I'll join you for one at Wigan if you're going.
Can't believe you know our lovely neighbours - it's a small old world.

Secret Agent Mia Darlone checking out.

Comment is about Remembrance Sunday (blog)

Original item by Dave Morgan

Hi, thanks for introducing me to the site.

i like you're poem, 'Taboos' is a cute one.

the bit

'Then she would go and make a pot of tea.
And the end of the world was averted.'

made me giggle, reminds me of how my Mother-in-law reacts to pressure or stress

'make a cup of tea!'

:-)

Comment is about London Writers Cafe (group profile)

Original item by London Writers Cafe

Such depth of grief and sadness in so few weords. You have touched me (as well we know)

Tx

Comment is about The Lost Poet (poet profile)

Original item by The Lost Poet

not sure how 2 got there
lol

Comment is about the choking, RIDERS ON STORM (blog)

Its a nice poem,Your emotion is there and has been all along. I need not say anything more for I know whats there inside.no need to thank, but its nice to hear from you.

Comment is about the choking, RIDERS ON STORM (blog)

Its a nice poem,Your emotion is there and has been all along. I need not say anything more for I know whats there inside.no need to thank, but its nice to hear from you.

Comment is about the choking, RIDERS ON STORM (blog)

Cellos and bikes
Bikes and Cellos
When it comes down to it
We're all fiddlers

Love the imagery
it does it for me Mia

Dave

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Great. I love the poetry. Let's have some more.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Thanks for your performance at Dead Good Poets last night Dave. I really enjoyed it, as always.

Comment is about David Bateman (poet profile)

Original item by David Bateman

this is very nice, Im not sure if I got it all. But it would be nice to have a little stone home there and a garden , some sheep and other animals, flowers and children playing..ah yes I can see it, not that big home in the picture. oh well I did enjoy reading your poem

Comment is about Valley (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

WOW! This is amazing, they sure do sell fear very well, the mass of brain dead feed on it Peter. Some is real and some is not, I tell you Im so tired of trying to figure out whats truth and whats a lie...loved the poem. Happy Holidays! ;)

Comment is about Fear (Norton Personalities) (blog)

OH My this is rich, I really enjoyed reading this at times it was so sad and at other just to funny. great job. Happy Holidays! ;)

Comment is about Spam for Richard (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

OMG ...ekkkkk! Well Dads are almost always right. Wow what a deal, so she had another boy friend all along?! Thats tragic. I did enjoy reading your poem seems so real life. Happy Holidays!

Comment is about 2 X Girls = Don't (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

This is so wonderful! I feel the same way in winter. I guess I need the sun. At times I think it would be nice to be a bear and sleep all winter long. I really enjoyed your poem Melissa and Happy Holidays to you! ;)

Comment is about Winter's Passing (blog)

this is great, reminds me of my drive to work everyday that takes an hour. I really hate it. but soon wont have to deal with it, the corps just anounced mass lay-offs, aprox 2-3000 of us across the USA. So ...wow love the poem, its so real. I know people dont think like me, but if you leave a little early, put some tunes on and just relax and say Im going to get there in one piece and on time, it really works for the most part.oh god cold calling..ekkkk hated it. nice poem Peter.

Comment is about Cold Calling (blog)

I'm spending time at the moment typing streams in order to find material to use in poems.

This one was inspired by a recent drive home on the M62

Comment is about Cold Calling (blog)

Hello Daniel, it was terrific and thoroughly enjoyable talkiing to you this evening. We must skype again soon. Thank you for your poems -- powerful and poignant and memorable. Speak with you soon! Best Wishes, Moxy

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

Thanks folks. Not much is sweet in those sardine can carriages! :-)

Comment is about Underground (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Thanks Clarissa

I try to keep a focus. I regularly attack the stupidity and misbehaviour of my own government and its friends, so I consider it some sort of responsibility not to ignore the far worse abuses carried out by some others.

The criminal Sudanese regime is responsible for the murder of hundreds of thousands of people in Darfur and the systematic rape of thousands of women. This revolting regime represses its people in the name of Islam. That is the biggest possible insult to religion. Far greater than any insult that I could deliver. When a well meaning teacher is imprisoned, and even threatened with death, they shame and ridicule themselves. Now let the international community stop the rape, murder and torture by this illegal regime.

Comment is about Bear Facts (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

In ways I can really understand this poem, at least I hope that I do. I have felt this way. Your right the one that looks back is the only one that can help/ being positive helps to a point, self help books help a bunch and for me it was realizing that family really does for the most part try and be good and that they do love you in their own sick way. Forgiveness is the cure forgive self and everyone else.and apply positive words and thoughts to life. Its not 100% but after applying it for a time it sinks in and really helps. I enjoyed this poem it reminded me of me long ago and in ways reminds me of friends and family. I think it may be a poem many can understand if honest. we are all just children looking for friends and a person that cares. great poem and feelings!

Comment is about the escape artist and the man in the mirror. (blog)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

this is very smart

Comment is about Underground (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

OK Malcom this is brilliant! I really liked the bear touch...did you mean to do it? As for the latest story of grace from such a hell, the teacher. poor lady, I wonder if the kids get beating's for naming it ? You know I really try to have an open mind, but the more I hear of them/that place, the more a massive pig blood drop sounds like the best idea. They should thank Allah everyday that Im not the president. I have known for years about these people, and they are so back ass ward, I get enraged! Great poem, got me pissed off!

Comment is about Bear Facts (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Hello Lenford

I have just registered on the site and was drawn to yout poems.

I am looking forward to reading more.

TinaB

Comment is about Lenford White (poet profile)

Original item by Lenford White

Dolce Vita! Mia,
You really do have a nice way with words...

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

its nice

Comment is about The Fisherman's rest (blog)

You had me going there Phil. While i was getting into the story I was just thinking that I must lead a very sober life.
I reckon you must have been brought up on Jack London.

Comment is about Winters Dice (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Hello Daniel, poet of originality, vision and imagination -- I am really looking forward to the skype sessions.

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

I put my hand in this tombola of poetic orthography and pulled out your ticket. How glad I am. 'Shadows' is a fantastic multi-layered piece. The last three lines are, and I use this word on very few occasions, brilliant.

Comment is about Frank Burton (poet profile)

Original item by Frank Burton

Yes, wonderful. This is very precise.

Comment is about Two Grandfathers (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Deeply moving and touched on a bit of family history -- this week in Lincoln a recovered memorial tablet was re-dedicated in All Saints church after the original church, a methodist, was demolished to build a car park. The tablet turned up in a back garden, was restored by the finder, a Mr Hudson, who also did some research about the named soldiers, all members of the Lincolnshire Second Battalion. The first name on the tablet was that of my father's grandfather, a man who had died at the age of 40 in the trenches -- quite old for a soldier. My dad had never known how his grandfather had died and it seems he was over 6ft tall, not a good height for trench warfare, and he had his head blown off by a sniper. Shocking details even now. Your poem is very haunting and beautifully controlled -- the narrative balanced and yet so very shocking.

Comment is about Two Grandfathers (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Hi Steve, not seen you for ages but I see you're still going strong!

Comment is about Steven Waling (poet profile)

Original item by Steven Waling

wow this touching thanks!!!
Hi Sophie and Clarissa

Comment is about almost empty (blog)

I may not be your 1000 visitor - just the man who has paid a thousand visits. Enjoyable poems Danny/Andy - Andy/Danny.
Like your stuff - bizarre and real. The two go together.

Comment is about Andy Sewina aka Danny A Wise (poet profile)

Original item by Andy Sewina aka Danny A Wise

Excellent . . . . and fun

Tina B

Comment is about If I was… (article)

WOW . . . . heartfelt and grief stricken. The loss is so sad and raw. I have just found the site and tonight is my first browse. Your words touched me.

Tina B

Comment is about That Primal Scream (article)

Hey malcom,
thanks so much for telling me about all this.Its illegal to do that here to, but that type seem to get away with it here.Oh the slipped disc was very well crafted, ha silly me I figured he was hurt.Ah yes the sub prime deals, the scum that came up with those deals should have to take the pain on that. interesting personal info, I was renting a home for 2 years, made all payments on time, the owners had refinanced the home, to cover credit card debt, they asked me if I would mind the house /rent doubling, I said hell yes! I told them look, I know you paid off your credit cards but thats not my problem, and Im not paying for your bad debt. A few monthes later they forclosed on the house, I had already moved out. very sad deals going on out there with the sub prime, many not responsible are being hurt by it. The real threat to yours and mine governments are the banks that deal with, I believe "world banks" im still looking into it. From what I can tell we/yall/us and a few other countries, really dont own anything and really dont elect anyone. A few elite banks run it all the main governments and control all "fake paper money" and hold all the gold hostage. ah yes mervyn King, is he the one Kings college is named after?

Comment is about Annie Versary (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Hi
Sorry for the delay -forgot my password. Thank you so much for your kind words. Sadly the poem isn't about me, or at least only in the sense that I am a woman. It's not intended to be about a perfect woman either, but is in response to seeing so many wonderful women getting a bit bogged down in the dull routine of life - kids, dishes, etc. So I wrote it in a deliberately grand celebratory style.
And yes, one of my classic typing errors, it should be taint me, saint me, paint me, and then it scans ; )
Best wishes
Morag

Comment is about Woman (article)

Hi Clarissa

No. This is about Gordon Brown, British Prime Minister who took over from Tony Blair.

At the moment he is stumbling from crisis to crisis. His political party (The Labour Party) recieved about $1.3m from a supporter who gave the money in the names of other people. That is illegal under our system.

Recently a government department lost the personal and bank information of 25m people on 2 computer discs they put in the post without encription or security (two slipped discs).

'The Rock is Northern Rock, a bank which got into terrible financial problems from the sub prime crisis and the Government has lent it about $50billion and more to come, without much idea of how it will get the money back.

Watt was the General Secretary of the Labour Party who was forced to resign over the donations scandal.


Mendelsohn is the chief fund raiser for the Labour Party.

The reason the poem is called Annie Versary is a silly little joke. It was written on the 250th anniversary of the birth of William Blake the poet who wrote 'Tyger, tyger burning bright'. Blake was a radical and the 'tygers' in that poem were people who represented a threat to government of the time because they wanted a revolution like the one in France. I was parodying his poetic form to imply (quite falsely I'm afraid) that Gordon Brown should fear the public too.

By the way, Mervyn King is now the Governor of the Bank of England. Gordon Richardson retired some time ago.

Thanks for the enquiry and taking such an interest.

Comment is about Annie Versary (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Malcom,is this about sir gordon richardson the goveronor of the bank of england?

Comment is about Annie Versary (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Daniel, these poems of yours are very nice, love the poetry bomb esp!

Comment is about Daniel Hooks (poet profile)

Original item by Daniel Hooks

Come on then!
Who's going to be my one thousandth visitor?
If it's YOU!
Please leave a comment!
Thanks for visiting and don't forget to check my pub-poetry page SweetTalkingGuy.. at:www.sewina.blogspot.com

Comment is about Andy Sewina aka Danny A Wise (poet profile)

Original item by Andy Sewina aka Danny A Wise

Malcom, Ill never forget that picture, I would love to see it again, just so it sticks in my mind for life. I felt sorry for them, still do to a point. great poem!

Comment is about Transition (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

John, I only just got back from holoday. Limited internet access sorry matey! ok, can you bounce an email? cheers

Comment is about the souvenir hunter (blog)

Peter. Your enthusiasm on the night was obviously alcohol inspired. I'm yet to receive an email from you.

Comment is about the souvenir hunter (blog)

Mama Mia, Your chello, brings music to my ears and other parts of the anatomy. Welcome to Write out Loud matey. Gordon Z

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

Thanks very much Clarissa. It is a controversial poem and people react to it in many different ways. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Comment is about Malpoet (poet profile)

Original item by Malpoet

I don't disagree with anything you say Clarissa. The public must be protected from violent criminals. I would not necessarily believe Williams in his claims of innocence of the murders or his conversion to the promotion of peace, but I am sure that killing him will not have helped anything.

I also think that the decision to execute was a cynical piece of politicking.

I don't claim to have solutions to these appalling situations. I just comment.

Comment is about Tookie Williams Died Today (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

Melissa, This is wonderful, and yes they do walk with us and at times we can feel them, its freaky! In dreams they do talk to us, I love the poem and the pic is wonderful. I have a small video a friend sent me of orbs, its awsome! Loved this poem really hit home with me. thanks

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