Dear Alison

The poem Tribute l written well, it touched my heart deeply. Sad when someone dear is gone to early. You have expressed the sorrow well. As if Janet picked the stanza, I like to say too. "Times heal the deepest wounds of loss." Thank you for sharing beautiful poetry.

PS: Thank you for the comment on my Contemplation poem.

Zuzanna
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Comment is about My Friend the Ghost (blog)

Original item by Alison Mary Dunn

Wings of my dreams still dance in my heart and beg to fly.
I love this, and "never to die."
It touched my heart and gave me butterflies.
Like a child in a summer meadow with flowers in her hair, surrounded by serenity, peace and love.
I can smell the bluebells and sweetpeas with their delicate pastel colours.
Even if it wasn't what you intended, this is the image i received. I wouldn't have missed this for the world. Thankyou. love janet.x

Comment is about To Touch The Sky (blog)

What happened to optimism? Think dark and it will be dark. eg; Yesterday, my whole world was dark. Today, it rained.
In my present state of mind, economic depression is a certainty but i remain optimistic?
I keep thinking of a rather nasty little lizard who wasn't very nice to me while in the back seat of my car.His tongue was like the excerpt from "silence of the lamb." (yuck!)
Your little dinosaur in the window reminded me of it. ps i was driving by the way.
Hi ant..

Comment is about Dark June (blog)

wow
thanks everyone
woooooo Clarissa thats a reply
and in Yankee land they got six lanes o traffic!

Comment is about tell me about your traffic jam (blog)

Hello, Antonio

Another fascinating poem - I could easily paint a picture of that garden. The feelings are wonderful when reading your write. The only sad part was when you cut your leg and the blood spill...Hmmm...I hope it was just another Imaginary stuff… Great photo!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about The cloud garden (blog)

HI, Antonio

This is excellent poem. The predictions of the time change….Hmmm… I wonder where you found the cute picture of the little Dinosaur. It feels at home, as they use to be in our Province Millions years ago. The place where they lived called Drumheller.
Although you are looking to the future with this write, it does not change the fact that we have a short time for the longest days in the summer time.
GREAT STUFF!!

Thank you for your comment on my poem.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Dark June (blog)

Hi Antonio! A bit of forward thinking, nice one, yes I will have to get more depressing poetry out for the dark nights of August. I like this and the cloud garden, but have to be honest I didn't really understand the ending of that one!!

Anyway, keep it up, you're on a roll! Thanks for comment, and yes I wasn't the oldest at the New Model Army gig!! cheers Jeffarama!

Comment is about Dark June (blog)

Put this on record, jazz it up with Bibby & get a soft Nordine voice to it!

Comment is about Stop The Clocks (blog)

Original item by John Togher

HI, Sean

In a few lines, you have a great story. It shows that you are talented with words.
Keep up the great job!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Burnt Chips (blog)

Hello, Jordan

Very profound write -your imagination I pictured, it looks scary.
Like Sean noted the Armageddon.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about These Hands (blog)

Original item by Jordan

Great poem. Love the imagery ..I could see it all.

Comment is about The Hare (article)

I'll try and get there Malcolm

Comment is about Bards of New Brighton (blog)

Original item by Malpoet

I feel the need to write, Paul. :-)

Comment is about letting go (the cards and flowers) (blog)

Hello, Richard

Excellent write, shows the truth if one does not keep in touch with friends then the loss is inevitable. Reality in life presented well with a little twist at the end of your poem.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about blackpool (blog)

Never mind all this poetry guff what about scrabble it's your turn!

Comment is about letting go (the cards and flowers) (blog)

Antonio

You never cease to amaze...Are you?
Been reading your writes for a while and found them very entertaining...Smile...:)
Like your style in writing!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about I wonder will she (blog)

HI, Antonio
Your day off from work well spent on writing.
I find your write amusing.... All your poems are very good!
Your creativity shines.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Home Thoughts From A Bored (blog)

Hello, Pete

Amusing and brave write!!
If comes to decency there is a lot said in your write about the truth in teenage years. Taboo subject for me, remembering when growing up, parents were always watching what the kids were reading. Did you imagine seeing the picture painted from this write?
Smiling real big…:)))

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Sex Thief (I stole a pornographic magazine) (blog)

This is brilliant, something you would right in the midst of armageddon
Words of a man done wrong.
Fantastic!

Comment is about These Hands (blog)

Original item by Jordan

I can imagine you at boiling point reading that Pete, great stuff - In a car park the size of Europe! Love it cheers Jeffarama!

Comment is about tell me about your traffic jam (blog)

Brilliant Pete, and very amusing accuracy!!! I would like 83 similar offences to be considered my lord! cheers Jeff

Comment is about Sex Thief (I stole a pornographic magazine) (blog)

This is a very sad
A lovely tribute.

Comment is about My Friend the Ghost (blog)

Original item by Alison Mary Dunn

chalk?...oh bugger

Comment is about Home Thoughts From A Bored (blog)

HI, Antonio ~ each of your writes are entertaining and amusing! This one was nice to read too. I am not sure about the TV shows you have in your Country, but I can appreciate the writing, as not all Shows will be good. We have those too in here but I am not an avid TV watcher. Prefer reading or listening to my favourite music...Thank you for sharing your lovely poem.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

Comment is about A spoonful of Sugar (blog)

Dear Carol~ how well you wrote this magnificent poem of MIRACLE on the making. I was yesterday visiting my adopted family. The young mother gave a birth to a very beautiful baby girl. The baby was so adorable. I hold her in my arms when she slept so peacefully wrapped in a flannel wraps. The baby was like a little princess.
It was one of those days that I really enjoyed visiting hospital, celebrating new life.

Thank you for the warm poem and the beauty in your words as you described the birth in a very wonderful way. This is such an important life event for every family.

BEAUTIFUL POEM !

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Water-birth (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

Antonio – YOU ASKED -"How did people throughout history manage without TV? How?!"
People from the past they were busy in different chores. Considering not all things were available at the stores, so for one- the women were cooking at home baking, sewing cloths ...Just few to mentioned. You see as the entertainment goes people thrived on story telling etc...Some entertainment was to participate in weddings and more open social life I think…Just my two cents…:)

Thanks!
Zuzanna

Comment is about Did you see...? (blog)

Hello, Antonio

I would call this a real fiery love poem. You have expressed yourself openly in this write.
I am glad that this is an Adult poetry site. On some sites that writing would be not permitted due having Children Poetry and young readers there. In that case, your poem considered as an explicit one, excellent write!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about A mathematical problem (blog)

Hello, Phil

I like your poem. Unfortunately, this is quite profound division in today’s World. You have captured the entire essence of it. I wonder why there is no equality if comes to both sexes. We have to remember the fact that woman is holding onto two jobs in order to support the family. Often working outside home, and then doing all the chores at home. I think we need more balance in every society. This is just much fairer then to see only Man Clubs. Thought provoking and educational write.

Thank you,
Zuzanna

Comment is about Men Only Groups (blog)

Original item by Phil Golding

Ah thank you Louise. Really enjoyed your poems - I enjoy writing what I write but I read work like this and wish I could do the clever stuff too! That photograph is so lovely by the way.

Comment is about Louise Fazackerley (poet profile)

Original item by Louise Fazackerley

Carol I love this. Very real with lovely expressed detail throughout. I like the line,

'I breath you in, Gaze into the dark universe of your eyes'

Ally

Comment is about Water-birth (blog)

Original item by Carol Falaki

I agree with you totally on this and I even watch the damn thing. I guess some of us just like to see people cringe for a cheap laugh. I'm not an avid watcher of such things but if I'm eating my dinner at the same time................!?

Comment is about A spoonful of Sugar (blog)

Hello John,
thought your poem was tops. The idea of us all applauding time for taking us on a consistent and continual journey to our final destination is was brilliant. It's the reason a lot of us go out and get pissed! I for one.
Ally

Comment is about Stop The Clocks (blog)

Original item by John Togher

Love it!

Comment is about Your smile keeps me from madness (blog)

Original item by Neil Francis Brooks

thanks for your comment on lonely friend Alison. Your profile pic is intriguing, is it a painting? Keep writing

Comment is about Alison Mary Dunn (poet profile)

Original item by Alison Mary Dunn

And I also!
You're work is continually exploring newness. You're styles are diverse. I'm enjoying very much reading your findings.
This particular write fast unfolds and some darkness. I just love it. It's exciting! Very interested in your work Mr Brooks.
thanks
Ally

Comment is about After studying a painting by John ruskin. (blog)

Original item by Neil Francis Brooks

Hi Neil, I agree with you. I think we have to stay close to the pen wherever we go or else we'll lose our chance to capture the inspiration!
Ally

Comment is about Advice on being a poet (blog)

Original item by Neil Francis Brooks

Richard, I'm pretty sure you could save lives with these words. They should be on a wall in any office used for counseling. Very well written
Ally

Comment is about Lonely Friend (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Hi Antonio, do you and Pete C work on perfume counter in Boots? Nice one, made me smile, cheers Jeff

Comment is about I wonder will she (blog)

Hi Richard, thanks for comment, I was in Blackburn last night for New Model Army!

Just catching up with stuff and glad to see you've contributed another wonderful thoughtful poem that would mean something to anyone who was at rock bottom. Having just come through some nighmare times, I can really identify with this, its from the heart, and very deep, just up my street!! Cheers Jeff

ps I will be putting some stuff on soon!!

Comment is about Lonely Friend (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Your poems are made for open mic nights. Really funny and true. Makes me even more glad I'm a cyclist. I really enjoyed this piece. I don't think I've ever written a funny poem and don't even know if I can. Ben Elton springs to mind, the way he reels off his stuff. It's great cause it's both hilarious and deadly serious at the same time. Wicked write Pete!

Comment is about tell me about your traffic jam (blog)

Jesu Antonionioni

you knock more work out here than a pirate dentist shovelling bucks into a box offa those unfortunate types who's eyes are too close together

some industry you have there mate : )

Comment is about Home Thoughts From A Bored (blog)

in my teens of course... : )

decent website Peter...

and a good morning to you and all that

Comment is about Sex Thief (I stole a pornographic magazine) (blog)

hiya! i really really enjoyed your poems. it's nice to hear something real. and funny.

Comment is about Mia Darlone (poet profile)

Original item by Mia Darlone

great - 'what a difference a spray makes' great line !

Comment is about I wonder will she (blog)

'Fleers' is a wonderful word.

Comment is about After studying a painting by John ruskin. (blog)

Original item by Neil Francis Brooks

PC at his best. What can I say? I can even hear the high pitched intonation as I read it, when we get to the bits that REALLY perplex your reasoning, that's when we see the REAL PC.

Comment is about tell me about your traffic jam (blog)

Traffic jams ... More than 6 cars in a line is a jam over here. Mind you TT week and practicve week before it has started and now it's bikes coming at you from every direction passing both sides on country lanes. It's the time of year I weave all over the road... they keep a distance then.

Enjoyed the rant, remind me not to drink from any of your bottles.

Comment is about tell me about your traffic jam (blog)

Childproof tops have always foiled me from taking the last one. A good plea to a friend not to end it.

Comment is about Lonely Friend (blog)

Original item by Richard Brooks

Whoo hoo ... you go for it fella! I like this one. I'm hopeless at picking smelly stuff. Leave it to the women. As long as I don't come out in a rash it's all good if she likes it.

Comment is about I wonder will she (blog)

I hope I can get to a machine with sound to hear this piece. Unfortuantely I'll be away for a couple of weeks....I'll be baaaaack! (not sure if thats a threat or a promise)

Comment is about bearded Killers (an audio monologue and poem) (blog)