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John Marks

Fri 13th May 2022 19:10

Thank you Clare, Stephen and Holden. You are very kind. What a generous thing to say, Stephen, thank you very much.

'In this poor body, composed of one hundred bones and nine openings, is something called spirit, a flimsy curtain swept this way and that by the slightest breeze. It is spirit, such as it is, which led me to poetry, at first little more than a pastime, then the full business of my life. There have been times when my spirit, so dejected, almost gave up the quest, other times when it was proud, triumphant. So it has been from the very start, never finding peace with itself, always doubting the worth of what it makes.' Basho

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th May 2022 17:44

This really good, Stephen. It flows so well.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th May 2022 17:42

A great piece, Holden. Beethoven's 9th may get close, or the final chorus of Fidelio?

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th May 2022 17:38

Sounds better than last year's, so who knows?

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Brenda Wells

Fri 13th May 2022 17:18

A very moving piece but one that shows much positivity and warmth.

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Brenda Wells

Fri 13th May 2022 17:14

Great sentiments expressed in a powerful rhythm.

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Brenda Wells

Fri 13th May 2022 17:11

This is beautifully written Stephen.
Your words tumble lightly from the page and fall like music.

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keith jeffries

Fri 13th May 2022 16:54

a gem
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 13th May 2022 16:52

Beautifully crafted and well thought out. This is poetry which has long awaited expression.
Thank you
Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 13th May 2022 16:24

Airport! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Could be there a while! Hopefully you get there smoothly lol. Somewhere nice I hope

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 13th May 2022 16:05

Brilliant writing, as always, John

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 13th May 2022 16:03

Sadness & beauty wonderfully conveyed.
I'm sure she would be proud ๐ŸŒˆ

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julie callaghan

Fri 13th May 2022 15:54

Iโ€™m hoping Ukraine wins Stephen. Just hope thereโ€™s none of the usual voting shinanigans. To be honest Iโ€™m bored, sitting in the airport and struggling for inspiration ๐Ÿ˜

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 13th May 2022 15:48

2nd, after Ukraine ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 13th May 2022 15:47

Gorgeous stuff, Holden ๐ŸŒˆ

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 13th May 2022 14:56

Thank you both

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Red Brick Keshner

Fri 13th May 2022 14:02

What ensues after meeting at the centre of the bridge, one could wonder!

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julie callaghan

Fri 13th May 2022 10:28

Love this. Well done. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 13th May 2022 10:17

And they say there's no money in poetry (ยฃ35 a shout)

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Candice Reineke

Fri 13th May 2022 09:23

Yes, wouldnโ€™t it be nice?! Beautiful piece, Holden.

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Candice Reineke

Fri 13th May 2022 09:18

Lovely, Stephen! Your words had me seeing Sylvia Plath, Emily Dickinsonโ€ฆand others Iโ€™m sure.

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keith jeffries

Fri 13th May 2022 08:51

Stephen,
Thank you for your comment. On leaving school I served for ten years in the Army which I do not regret, but now I am a convinced pacifist.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 13th May 2022 08:48

A poem which has a lot to say and all of it true. May I be as bold as to suggest that you continue to write a poem every morning and of the same calibre. This poem is my thought for the day.
Thank you
Keith

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John Coopey

Fri 13th May 2022 08:00

Thankyou, Stephen. I made a very poor show of pronouncing the title at Open Mic last night despite practising it in my head several times! And Thankyou for the Likes, Holden and Jo.
And thanks for the Like, Brenda and Stephen A.

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John Botterill

Fri 13th May 2022 07:07

Thanks Ursula. I really appreciate your comments ๐Ÿ˜€
Thanks for the like Holden and Stephen A.

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Alaia vibes

Fri 13th May 2022 01:37

Thanks man, I appreciate it!

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Thu 12th May 2022 22:43

Beautiful, John. Heart-warming poem for your grandchild.๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ‘

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 22:42

Beautiful and moving, Clare. Consummately skilful, as always.

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Thu 12th May 2022 22:40

So moving and beautiful. Great poem, Russell.๐ŸŒท

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 22:34

A beautiful, touching poem, Russell.

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 22:14

Thanks Stephen. It's certainly my hope for my unborn granddaughter ๐Ÿ˜

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:53

A poem of sadness, Clare, but also of joy and hope. It really gripped me.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:48

Another fine poem, John. Yes; life is wonderful.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:45

An accomplished poem, Russell. On a lighter note, I remember Greg Chappell of Australia hitting a streaker with his bat, but it didn't break. Neither did the streaker, if I remember.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 21:39

An inspiring villanelle, John, and we know who the villain is.

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 20:35

A truly amazing poem, Jo. I love the clear-eyed honesty of your writing. A real tonic to read! ๐Ÿ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:32

Strong stuff, Pete, but the real thing. Thanks.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:30

A really impressive poem, Jo. A fascinating read.

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John Botterill

Thu 12th May 2022 20:27

Thanks Jo and Clare for the likes ๐Ÿ˜€

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:27

A grimly superb poem, Keith. So many memorable phrases: 'Uniformity of Malevolence' one of the best.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th May 2022 20:22

A fine tribute to an impressive memorial of a terrible event. Excellent, Nigel.

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Jo Callisto

Thu 12th May 2022 19:45

Thanks Ursula!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Jo Callisto

Thu 12th May 2022 19:45

Ha yes Stephen, I DID used to watch Quantum Leap. It was such a fun show. But I love cosmology documentaries these days. They're a GREAT antidote to real world stuff. I enjoy pondering on the really big questions like... there's one called Olbers Paradox.... and it's something like: IF the universe is INFINITE (and has been there forever)... then *why* is the night sky.... not FULL OF LIGHT?? It *would* be full of light.... if it had been there... forever, even tho stars do die.... because the light from **all the stars** would still be travelling and the sky would just be one massive light ball. But it's not. <--which, I find totally fascinating tbh. And I also LOVE the law of conservation of mass, where matter cannot be destroyed, it can only change down to its smaller iterations.

Hey, your wife does great work then by the sounds of it. I did similar things at break times. Sometimes I just used to stand in a toilet for the whole break time. It sounds SO sad--but I was kind of.. in my element, lol.. truly.. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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Reggie's Ghost

Thu 12th May 2022 17:52

Corbyn offered a radical alternative. Perhaps the Party should have stuck with him on principle and been content with permanently holding the government to account rather than watering down their policies to gain the public vote?

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 12th May 2022 14:29

thanks for the kind comments Stephen & RG - and thank you to those who have 'liked' the poem - I appreciate it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 12th May 2022 14:28

thanks for the kind comments and likes - apologies in my delay in replying - my spam filter is blocking my WOL notifications

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Nigel Astell

Thu 12th May 2022 10:25

Your ship will sail
once the coast is clearโค

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Russell Jacklin

Thu 12th May 2022 08:49

Thank you all,
There is another one called,
If you can't play the game, break the bat,
unfortunately not so hopeful

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Red Brick Keshner

Thu 12th May 2022 05:01

Oh yes, the tide has to be in or it all stays put. Thanks for sharing. /Frederick.

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Sunshine

Thu 12th May 2022 04:43

Thank you Nigel๐Ÿ’•

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