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Jason Bayliss

Sun 18th Jul 2021 10:31

Thanks Jennifer, I haven't written anything in ages, (can't seem to gather my thoughts ?). Glad you liked it.

J. x

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Sullimani

Sun 18th Jul 2021 08:37

Effectively less blasphemous (if you believe in such a thing) better targeted.

An antidote to some of the squirming religiosity and bilge often seen

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Sun 18th Jul 2021 07:56

Thank you for your comment, Keith ?

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John Coopey

Sat 17th Jul 2021 22:13

It is said that you could kick a dinosaur up the arse and comfortably stroll away from it before its brain reacted to the signal from said arse. Much the same as with Nigel Farage.

Comment is about Ancient History (blog)

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keith jeffries

Sat 17th Jul 2021 21:14

Thank you for an interesting and well constructed poem which depicts lack of appreciation about the social impact on ordinary people in our long history and as to say the cycle repeats itself.

Keith

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jennifer Malden

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:53

Absolutely fantastic writing! Can't believe that it got so little appreciation. A beautifully orchestrated theme and very profound thinking, also very moving.Your stuff never disappoints.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:49

Great philosophy and comforting as well.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:19

Nice twist at the end, and conveys a strong sense of loss and longing.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:13

Agree about leaving technology which was unthinkable not so many years ago, but we have paid a high price for this. If we manage to reduce carbon emissions effectively, hopefully we will leave them our technological advances without the consequences.
Interesting.

Jennifer

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:09

Thanks for the comment, accolade indeed from such an illustrious writer ?

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Trevor Alexander

Sat 17th Jul 2021 19:01

Yes Stehen, the 'Ulster Fry' is basically a Full English plus fried pancakes, fried potato bread, fried soda bread and white pudding to go with the black pudding. Not to be taken lightly. Has sometimes been called cholesterol on a plate. And I understand Mike Gatting has been known to drop catches, but never pies!

Leon, I think it's more like eat it quickly to use up the calories.

Keith, I try to limit my visits to the greasy spoon to weekends. Honest!

MCN I'm jealous of your physiology. I only have to glance at fried food to gain weight!

Thanks for the comments guys.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 17th Jul 2021 17:37

Good point, Joe. Percentages can be misused, or not, as the case may be.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 17th Jul 2021 17:25

I remember a report of former England cricket captain Mike Gatting taking on an 'Ulster Breakfast', which put a full English (calorifically) to shame. Apparently, he survived, which is more than could be said for the breakfast.

Nice one, Trevor.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 17th Jul 2021 17:20

Absolutely right. And it is a nice surprise. This is a good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 17th Jul 2021 17:14

Thanks for all the views, John and M.C. This generation will, I think, leave a legacy of incredible technological progress but also one of excessive consumption which has led to a global heating crisis. It can redeem itself by taking steps to sort this out and not dump its consequences on the grandchildren.

John, the dinosaurs certainly mastered longevity but did they do jealousy or revenge? Or Instagram? Does it matter?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 17th Jul 2021 14:12

It has been said that we stand on the shoulders of giants.
What size shoulders will we provide for future generations
in this fear-fueled age? Are we the era of caution before
courage and conviction? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 17th Jul 2021 14:06

Hi Brian - thanks for the added valid query. Creating a scenario
of "concern" is part of the political process that enables their
endless interference in our lives.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 17th Jul 2021 14:03

Statistically speaking, of course! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 17th Jul 2021 13:57

It's been a while since I enjoyed a "full English" breakfast but
I can smell it in these words! Diet and its needs can play a
part in abstinence, although in my own case, my physiology
from youth is categorised as "ectomorph" (tall and spare) and
I can feel sympathy for those pre-disposed towards gaining
weight when it comes to enjoying food! Metabolism can be a
hard taskmaster! ?

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keith jeffries

Sat 17th Jul 2021 13:47

Trevor,
A humorous poem indeed, but I take your advice seriously as I struggle to lose weight. The contents of your breakfast are in strict keeping with my diet but you miss out black pudding, bacon and fried bread. Greens! Ha, I have a lovely green table cloth.

Thanks for this. It is now time for tea and sticky buns

Keith

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Graham Parker

Sat 17th Jul 2021 12:44

Thank you Brenda, I'm glad you liked it.

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Sat 17th Jul 2021 12:19

Eat it quick to reduce calories.

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Rasa Kabaila

Sat 17th Jul 2021 10:06

Cool poem Edbreathe, too true! Have you found a way to be able to catch your breathe? My strategy now is to have time booked in and honoured for nothing time' !

Good to see you here too Stephen-I feel like we are all in a cool writing club together. ?

Keep writing and smiling.

Best wishes,
Rasa

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John Coopey

Fri 16th Jul 2021 17:36

We take a very superior view of those stupid dinosaurs without realizing that they were around for 165,000,000 years whilst we have just been here for 200,000.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 16th Jul 2021 16:28

Thanks for the interesting comment, Keith. I have often wondered what a generation being 'more advanced' means. Perhaps we are just more devious and have more options.

Thanks for the likes, Holden and Rudyard.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 16th Jul 2021 16:25

Enjoy it, Julie.

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Brian Blanchard

Fri 16th Jul 2021 16:13

Good question...another might be 'why are so many seemingly willing to give up their freedoms?'

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 16th Jul 2021 14:26

It should also be noted that the MSM eagerness to publicise the
social media abuse that caused so much disgust did not indicate
the origins with any accuracy - bearing in mind that the platforms
provided are world-wide. It is very likely that the UK participants
formed a small number and that this has been reflected -and rejected - in the reaction of redemptive revulsion. Onwards and
upwards!

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Sanja Atanasovska

Fri 16th Jul 2021 13:42

Thanks.

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Tom

Fri 16th Jul 2021 12:12

Thank you Stephen, very kind. I did toy with using that line or a variation... I'll have a think. Thanks for reading and the like.

Thanks to Aviva, Holden, Aisha and Jordyn for the 'likes' too ? Appreciate you reading.

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julie callaghan

Fri 16th Jul 2021 11:54

Thanks Holden

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julie callaghan

Fri 16th Jul 2021 11:25

Thank you Keith

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julie callaghan

Fri 16th Jul 2021 11:24

Thanks for the likes, Branwell, Holden and Stephen G

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 15th Jul 2021 19:20

Hi Sanja

I've been looking through your blog entries. I like your approach to poetry. It's hard to say exactly why but I wouldn't have continued with it if I didn't appreciate it, and I certainly wouldn't be writing this.
I think I like your words being so sparse, and of course the subject matter, and then leaving it as something that hardly quite happened but feelings are aroused and thoughts are fuelled.
I look forward to reading more.

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Jul 2021 16:04

Questions to ponder over. The answers will show how shortsighted most people are.

A good poem and thanks

Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Jul 2021 15:53

An inspiring poem to go with the mural. Well done to Julie for spreading kindness and respect.

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John Coopey

Thu 15th Jul 2021 15:42

Thankyou Stephen and thanks for the Likes, Holden, Leon and Your Royal Poetess.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 15th Jul 2021 13:35

My pleasure, Julie. We always like to spread the word at moments like this. Well done to you for catching the nation's prevailing mood so well with your poem. And what a wonderful gesture for someone to take it to the mural, read it, and then leave it there. Heart-warming.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Jul 2021 13:06

A great talent that endures. My own favourite remains her
performance in "Meet Me In St Louis" - and her heartbreaking
interpretation of "Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas."

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Jul 2021 13:02

A breath of fresh air can be healthy although it can also bring a
chill.
Out with the old...
In the the new -
Hard to be told
When that means you!
.............................................

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Jul 2021 12:52

Ooeer...the stuff of nightmares. Redeemed by the cleansing
flames behind the curtains.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Jul 2021 11:26

Fine poem, Tom. Looking out seems a good title to me. Perhaps
' A gift from the universe' might work.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Jul 2021 11:10

I think you've nailed it, John, especially the father subconsciously feeling his bow tie. Great rhythm and rhyming too.

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Tom

Thu 15th Jul 2021 09:55

A true story.

Can anyone suggest a better title for this? 'Looking Out' feels a bit uninspired to me.

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julie callaghan

Thu 15th Jul 2021 09:46

Thank you Greg for taking the time to write about the events of this week.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 14th Jul 2021 23:40

Thanks for your comments, Rudyard, and Stephen, and for the Like, Holden.

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Jul 2021 17:55

YES

Keith

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julie callaghan

Wed 14th Jul 2021 17:04

Thank you Greg.

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julie callaghan

Wed 14th Jul 2021 17:04

Jenifer I think I replied to your message to try explain the story behind this write but I can’t see it on the app. I have changed the photo which hopefully helps,

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Greg Freeman

Wed 14th Jul 2021 16:58

A great and inspirational message to draw from all this, Julie.

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