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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 24th Feb 2021 17:54

Fun.?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 24th Feb 2021 17:48

Thanks for the comment Stephen. And a nod of appreciation towards those who clicked "like". Adding the following.....
Everywhere we see this inclination
To seek what's known as "mitigation".

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 24th Feb 2021 17:43

Thank you for commenting Rose, ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 24th Feb 2021 17:40

Maybe kids should be wise enough to....
Act like their mothers
And listen like their fathers! ?

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Mike Bartram

Wed 24th Feb 2021 16:07

Thank you for reading, the likes and the lovely comment.

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Wed 24th Feb 2021 16:07

A nicely balanced piece for my money, Aviva. Lovely!






Rose ?

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Your Royal Poetess

Wed 24th Feb 2021 15:01

Beautiful poem and image

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 24th Feb 2021 14:43

Thank you Hope Ray for commenting. To me it is a soothing continuance rather than a painful contradiction but that's fascinating to know that it can be seen differently - as I think I've said before I love how words can resonate differently so thanks for sharing your thoughts on this.

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John Marks

Wed 24th Feb 2021 13:48

Beautifully written Cynthia.

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Wed 24th Feb 2021 10:06

Last two stanzas opposes the first few. Contradiction painfully perceived. ?

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Wed 24th Feb 2021 10:04

A beautiful dream. Loved the content?

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Mike Bartram

Wed 24th Feb 2021 08:53

Thanks for the likes and comment! I have heard about the movie, but not seen it, its free on YouTube apparently, so I may watch it this week.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 24th Feb 2021 05:34

Thanks for your comments, Graham and Tony, and for your additional one, Stephen. Our Rome trip was six years ago. Reading about Keats back then, I was struck by this image of Italy's neglected and unrestored ruins in the early 19th century. Cows grazed among the strange pillars of the Forum poking up out of the earth.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 24th Feb 2021 05:27

Thank you Nigel for sharing your inspiration here in your comment, and yes, that is exactly what I hope for.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 24th Feb 2021 01:03

right or wrong
better or worse
to alter
perhaps not.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 24th Feb 2021 00:43

Swimming not drowning
for if danger lurks
caring and concerned
guardian angels close in.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 23:52

A timely write Greg. I’ve just been reading about the Keats family. All in all a tragic bunch. One of my favourites from schooldays (an age ago) JK had a good pair of eyes. You’ve done him proud here.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 22:50

Thank you for your comment Stephen, and I admit I am especially fond of this one myself too. Since they are all my children, friends, and many of them even my rescuers too then of course I can't pick favourites, but this is certainly a very significant one and I've been looking forward to posting it.

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:27

I got through, without a doctor , quacks them doctors are anyway .

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:26

ha x

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:25

Do you think we can slip into different dimensions of time . ?..? Xx

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:18

sweet red apples are my favourite and your poems make me happy ?

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:17

I know , sending you a virtual hug . Hugs make the world go round . Ps I still hug people , with a mask on and now I've been vaccinated . Xx

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:14

Surely sweet dreams are better than nightmares ?

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julie callaghan

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 21:01

Thanks for the lovely comment and like Stephen G. Thanks for the likes Aviva, Stephen A, Scattered Sun and Your Royal Poetess.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 20:22

Possibly my favourite poem of yours Aviva. Wonderfully constructed & beautifully written ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 20:07

Thank you for the comments Julie & Stephen. Wasn't sure if it was going to be a song or a poem. Somewhere in between I think.
And thanks for the likes Aviva, Tony & Y.R.P, always appreciated

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 18:01

Good. It reminds me of the film "Network", where all news is entertainment.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:58

The last line leads me to tennis players who stare accusingly at their coach when they play a bad shot. Take responsibility!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:54

Thanks Julie. A great song and a strong poem to go with it.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:32

A stunning, moving piece of verse. Thank you so much.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:29

Reading this again, I would just say that it transported me to Rome and to Keats. Not a bad feat!

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Tony Hill

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:21

I sometimes think of the great poems he would have written had he lived longer. Tony

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Tony Hill

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 17:19

Pleasingly enigmatic, Ray.

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raypool

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 16:41

Thanks Aviva. Yes, you're right about that. I just fancied the idea.

Stephen, Glad it worked. Leaves more questions than answers type of thing. I hope you're enjoying the book!

Ray

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Nazia Khan

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 15:38

??????

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 14:57

Thank you for clicking the Like button on some of my poems your highness ?. Enjoying your work too. Clever & eloquent with meaning. The pen (or more likely, keyboard) is, indeed, mightier than the sword. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 13:22

I recall a film about this woman and the movement of which she was
a part. Courageous in her commitment to the end, even impressing
her German interrogator who, it seemed, would have seen her avoid
the guillotine if possible.

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julie callaghan

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 13:18

Beautiful, thank you

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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 10:57

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 08:43

Good morning Hope Ray and thank you for commenting, ?

I agree with you that our failures and downfalls can be the route to whatever we achieve afterwards, in this dream-scape failures are the droplets of rain and hopes and plans are trees and flowers (which need some rain to grow).

Thank you also to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 08:36

'Too much wining destroys a marriage' ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 07:22

Thank you, Stephen, for the like.

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d.knape

Tue 23rd Feb 2021 03:33

I like your rhyme.
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Tue 23rd Feb 2021 01:55

If we look at the brighter side of life we will be happy but even our failures and downfalls had a strong role to play in helping us achieve many things in life.

Good morning world. Loved to read this poem Aviva.?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 22nd Feb 2021 21:55

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem.
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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 22nd Feb 2021 20:37

Sometimes I like my writing.?

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julie callaghan

Mon 22nd Feb 2021 19:56

Thanks for the comments and likes everyone.

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