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Shifa Maqba

Sat 13th Feb 2021 17:06

Thank you so so so much, Martin and Stephen for your generous comments and roses!

A huge thanks to Adam and Holden as well for the lovely roses!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 13th Feb 2021 17:02

Those flying pieces of chalk were invariably accurate and often
aroused a reluctant admiration among their recalcitrant recipients. ???
Small (and not so small) boys always had an unerring instinct
for perceived "weakness" in teachers and could make the life of
a chosen target something that must have been passing hell for
some. i recall a female teacher of French leaving our class-room
in tears and had enough self-awareness to feel a sense of shame
and remorse for the behaviour that had brought it about. In short,
teaching was no occupation for the "wrong" sort of personality and
either you had it or you didn't when it came to controlling a class.
Hard to define but recognisable in short order to any would-be trouble maker. The fact that I can recall the names of certain teachers even now is a sure guide to how they could leave their
mark (so to speak!) on a youngster.
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Comment is about SCHOOL RITUAL (blog)

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th Feb 2021 16:39

Ray,

Another poem to endorse the fact that we are contemporaries of age and memories. I recall bamboo canes which were on the top of the blackboard and barely visible. As some recalcitrant pupil incurred the master's wrath he would move toward the blackboard and reach up toward where the cane lay. If the insubordinate behaviour continued then the cane was brought down into full view. The offending minor made to come out to the front of the class and bend over. Thwack, the number dependent on the severity of the offence. Other weapons in the armoury were blackboard erasers thrown at the offender or pieces of chalk aimed directly at their target. Little mercy and pleas for clemency seldom had any effect.

Thank you for this
Keith ( a former victim )

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keith jeffries

Sat 13th Feb 2021 14:46

Thank you Stephen A and Martin for your comments which are greatly appreciated and also to D Joshi and Holden for your 'likes'.

Keith

Comment is about Retreat to Natrun (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Feb 2021 12:56

Inside this poem
each image seen
shows the real
you on screen.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Feb 2021 12:53

Given no time to ask
fate has already passed.

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andy simons

Sat 13th Feb 2021 11:37

Ooh, that's a good poem.

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andy simons

Sat 13th Feb 2021 11:34

Good. I like that.

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d.knape

Sat 13th Feb 2021 02:25

those are "Northers".
Down here in Texas, the weather can change in a heartbeat
in the wintertime. It may be sunshine and 70 degrees, then Boom,
a "Norther" blows in and the temp. can drop 30-40 degrees.

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d.knape

Sat 13th Feb 2021 02:23

you always read more into my poems
than I do. I wish I was that smart! ?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Feb 2021 01:42

It is a new one Martin
after someone had shared how much it has helped them helping others in getting through these difficult times.

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Rick Varden

Fri 12th Feb 2021 23:52

Thanks all, yes this new version will be recorded by Silas and Carbuncle. ?

Comment is about THE SOUND OF BARKING (blog)

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keith jeffries

Fri 12th Feb 2021 22:56

Strident words in the final stanza, but true. Bugger complacency!
Keith

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JOHN F B TUCKER

Fri 12th Feb 2021 22:51

I like the "puffy doves" in this poem, and the way that vowelsound is still going when you get to the verb "hunker down." ?

Comment is about OPEN DOOR (blog)

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 12th Feb 2021 22:32

Thankyou to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

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julie callaghan

Fri 12th Feb 2021 20:06

Thanks also for the likes, Stephen A, Branwell and Holden

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Robert C Gaulke

Fri 12th Feb 2021 19:15

Thanks as always for the eyes, Mart. B

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kJ Walker

Fri 12th Feb 2021 19:09

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 12th Feb 2021 19:03

That snow weight toot Rita
Know under Europe set

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 18:45

An excellent poetic journey from beginning to end! Top notch poetry ?

Comment is about Retreat to Natrun (blog)

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 18:38

Wonderful use of words, and, as Martin says, imagery, Shifa.
Superb ?

Comment is about Lonesome Backwoods (blog)

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 12th Feb 2021 18:26

This feels like an extended metaphor about human society. If you meant that, or even if you didn't, well done!

Comment is about OPEN DOOR (blog)

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julie callaghan

Fri 12th Feb 2021 17:40

Thanks for the comment Nigel and for the like Martin

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keith jeffries

Fri 12th Feb 2021 17:40

A poem which lightens another dark day especially the last two lines which are filled with assured hope.
Thank you for this

Keith

Comment is about The Taste of May (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 16:17

ARB - thanks for the witty response. And thanks are also due to
those who have clicked "like".

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 16:12

I think I prefer this to the original lyric ! ?

Comment is about THE SOUND OF BARKING (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 16:08

A worthwhile reminder of how the small often forgotten pleasures of
living are there, waiting to instill joy and renewed zest for this life.

Comment is about The Taste of May (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 16:04

An entertaining and intriguing lead to a neat pay-off that collars
our grins of pleasure.

Comment is about Hobo (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:59

Some attractive word play in these lines on a subject that is always
worth our time.
Keep an open mind
And you may find
The wisdom conceit
Can leave behind ?

Comment is about THE ROBOT GENERATION (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:54

I seem to recall that the state of Montana in the USA had the reputation for being hit by "northerlies"...brrr. Not much to "warm"
the climate of the soul when they hit !?

Comment is about OPEN DOOR (blog)

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:33

Did you read this on Monday Nigel or is it a new one. Either way its one of your finest.

Comment is about Giving Something Back (blog)

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:32

I like this simply for the use of words and its flow and rhythm. Very good

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:26

Wonderful. I am seeing robots everywhere now. Especially after Monday night. As a result a mini series of mine now has a dystopian leaning towards it
Love it Andy

Comment is about Consequences XVI (blog)

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keith jeffries

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:19

Martin,
After reading this poem the word exhilarating flew into my mind. I was back in my childhood sledging with my brother on a rather inadequate thing made by my father. The two of us would set off and hurtle down the slope which held some danger as a stream was at the bottom and had to be skillfully avoided.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:17

Wonderful Bob. Love that last line which rounds it al off nicely.

Comment is about More research (blog)

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:14

some excellent use of words here Keith. Dare I say without wishing to use a pun that this is sheer poetry.
Love it

Comment is about Retreat to Natrun (blog)

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Feb 2021 15:02

Absolutely stunning imagery. A wonderful poem

Comment is about Lonesome Backwoods (blog)

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attila the stockbroker

Fri 12th Feb 2021 12:59

Well done! I'd have helped if I'd known about it...

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Adam Whitworth

Fri 12th Feb 2021 09:07

Love this one. very, very very good.

Comment is about Don't Tell My Heart (blog)

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John Coopey

Fri 12th Feb 2021 09:01

Thanks for the Likes, D Joshi and Holden.

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Mike Bartram

Fri 12th Feb 2021 08:53

Thanks for reading and the nice comment!

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Feb 2021 08:49

Perhaps you have more
they themselves have nothing
but pictures to show.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Feb 2021 08:36

Thanks for all your likes
Keith
Julie
Hugh
Stephen A
Holden and
Martin.

Comment is about Giving Something Back (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Feb 2021 08:33

On the radio a volunteer who had talked to concerned anxious people who seemed so worried as they waited.

He just helped saying it would only take a few minutes for the jab and noticed one lady he had already talked to come back.

The doctors and nurses came out afterwards and said something like this makes a desperate situation a whole lot better to deal with.

Thanks for your comment Keith

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julie callaghan

Fri 12th Feb 2021 07:37

Thanks for the added likes and for the comment Stephen A. I am also feeling the need to upload a new profile photo?? you may have inspired a write

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 02:07

Very good. Yes, what do we expect? LOL

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 02:03

enthralled indeed. well done.

Comment is about Zeitgeist Zealots (blog)

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 02:01

very good. subtle.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 12th Feb 2021 01:56

I like this one a lot.

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Scattered Sun

Fri 12th Feb 2021 00:08

Thanks for the likes!
I love your work. You write so beautifully, I can feel every emotion.

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