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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:03

Sorry Greg I missed your icing on the cake comment! I nearly gave up after that, but thanks to zoom all is well.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 17:01

Sorry for the delay - I thought it had vaporized.

Thanks Stephen and Lisa for looking in.

Thanks Brian - the answer is that George Orwell's real name was Eric Blair , nor relation of Tony. Although history will remember Tony Eric was more left wing than him.

Stephen, as you say we are watched but mainly by those with commercial interests, paying reduced taxes . If Orwell could see the TV reality series he would probably turn in his grave.

Ray

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Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:58

Very relatable.

I often try to make my “outlook” “be bright” on my birthday despite not looking forward to celebrating.

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:46

Yes. It's a while since I wrote any, but I might have to have a little surge...

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:45

A good and well rhymed poem which portrays a dark period in our history. I particularly enjoyed the pen ultimate stanza.

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 9th Feb 2021 16:40

Ray,
A poem which restores those images stored in some cerebral cavity which lets us see ourselves as we once were. My memories are of a motorbike and sidecar, caravan parks, paddling in rock pools and eating packed lunches. Halcyon days indeed of which the present generation know little of.

Thank you for this trip down memory lane.
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:16

Trevor - addictive...don't you think? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:07

My sister over in Brussels would certainly enjoy this and identify with
its sentiment. She''s just mentioned her balcony plants bravely
ensuring colour in the present -10c temperature there.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Feb 2021 15:02

Same here in the UK.. The official agency responsible actually gave
permission for ad. breaks to be increased - as if intent on annoying
us some more! And the change in YouTube has seen its videos
constantly interrupted on an increasingly irritating scale....most
moronic in those experienced in classical music videos when a
work is interrupted even as it draws to a close. Philistines!! ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:54

This is very eloquent and seems to capture the mood so well that I wish it would progress to resolve the state reached (and become a meditative poem).

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:35

How I've missed your poems! Amazing piece and an equally amazing comeback.

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curiousdud3

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:25

Hey Nicola, I'm ok..... think my head just went down a darker path than usual. I'm back in the light...... Thanks for checking ❤️ xx

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julie callaghan

Tue 9th Feb 2021 13:03

Thanks Aviva and D Joshi.

Maybe I should have done a before and after the sun came out. I am sure I will be able to take a photo with a cloudy grey backdrop soon.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 12:05

sun's ray - grey day
sun's rays - grey days

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raypool

Tue 9th Feb 2021 11:46

Hi Graham. Yes, I do know because it was the theme of an Ealing comedy with Alec Guinness playing different roles to deceive the authorities, can't recall the name of the film just now. I wonder if they are still followed? More power to your elbow.

Ray

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Candi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 11:40

It's getting really tough now isn't it for us social creatures. Hope you are reunited before too long.

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julie callaghan

Tue 9th Feb 2021 11:34

And then the sun came out, but sunshine doesn’t rhyme with grey day. ?

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D Joshi

Tue 9th Feb 2021 11:04

Great Poem Keith, paints a very detailed picture of our current landscapes. ?

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 9th Feb 2021 10:27

D Joshi, Keith and Brian
Thank you gentlemen dropping in, reading and leaving encouraging comments on this work. The like is much cherished.

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Tom

Tue 9th Feb 2021 10:07

Thanks Aviva and Joshi for the recent likes. Thank you for reading.

And yes, Joshi, I completely agree - finding the positives through all of this strangeness is the key to success as you so rightly said! Thanks for tracking this one down and giving it a look.

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John Coopey

Tue 9th Feb 2021 08:56

Thankyou, MC and Aviva.
Bert Williams was a huge star of early screen and stage, whom WC Fields was compared to as second best. Interestingly he blacked up, despite being a black Bahamian. To distinguish themselves from other black faces, on their billboard advertising, he and his partner called themselves “the real c***s”. “Somebody” complemented his most famous song, “Nobody”.
I’ve attached the You Tube original.
And thanks for the Likes, Brian and Holden.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Ze3DKv4OWXM

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Helen Sheppard

Tue 9th Feb 2021 08:51

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Clive Dalton • Oakley Flanagan • Janet Hatherley • Wye Haze • Ian Humphreys

Sue Ibrahim • Joanna Ingham • Emilie Lauren Jones • Zoe Karathanasi • Anna Kisby

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Helen Sheppard

Tue 9th Feb 2021 08:47

Burning Eye Books - Fontanelle by Bristol poet Helen Sheppard. We have known Helen in the scene for a long time, quietly lifting others up and sharpening her own skill along the way. This definitive collection will showcase Helen’s beloved work on nursing, mental health and the complexities of caring.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 9th Feb 2021 08:37

Limited life span body parts
humans using robot arms write
robots with human brains
become underground poets overnight.

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Mike Bartram

Tue 9th Feb 2021 08:35

Thanks for reading and leaving a comments and likes!

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Tue 9th Feb 2021 03:53

This poem is sweet

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 9th Feb 2021 03:17

Thank you for commenting J.D. and I certainly hope that you'll find a satisfying new dream soon. We could do a mutual transfusion, even. I'll dream that you will find a new dream, you'll dream that I'll.... wait a moment, that won't work we'll both instantly satisfy the dream and be back to the start, ah but at least we'll each have had a dream come true.

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 9th Feb 2021 02:58

The first three lines of this poem really struck me, as I am currently struggling to find new dreams to cling on to for purpose in life. I also need a transfusion. J.D. (thanks)

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 9th Feb 2021 01:25

Watching and waiting for spring, while cuddled comfortably in a cave. The Bears are getting restless.

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Chris Hubbard

Tue 9th Feb 2021 01:10

Thank you Brian - i often get the feeling that things are not necessarily as we like to think they are.

Cheers,

Chris

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 9th Feb 2021 00:34

Great images and shift to your longing.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 9th Feb 2021 00:33

Beautiful word painting.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 9th Feb 2021 00:31

I like your word paintings. You had me at snowdrops and daffodils.
Great work.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 8th Feb 2021 23:58

Brilliant and love the various voices in the audio.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 8th Feb 2021 23:49

Thank you for commenting Jason, and that is such a beautiful and meaningful analogy, I will remember it.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 8th Feb 2021 23:45

And a wonderful opportunity to relish the recall of those memorable
old music hall monologues in this impeccably read reminder of
what we are missing.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 8th Feb 2021 23:18

A cracking review, Matt, of what sounds an intriguing collection.

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 8th Feb 2021 23:14

All the cracks and scars are just life writing it's words on us, just like the blank sheet of paper that only becomes a classic when the pen digs in across its virgin face. Never fear the pen, never fear the ink, it's what we're here for.

J. x

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 8th Feb 2021 22:55

Thank you Brian for commenting. And, when I think about it this poem has kind of a broken scheme or perhaps a rebuilding one, it varies but has hints of previous rhymes and relaxes on imperfect rhymes frequently, all of which is quite apt for the theme. I can't claim to have done it deliberately but seems like my inner poetic voice knew what it was up to this time. ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 8th Feb 2021 22:20

Pain is hidden behind every word: the pain of longing. Well done!

I haven't seen my fiance in about a year. We live on the phone. I breathe painful longing at times.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 8th Feb 2021 22:17

Yes, I agree with your inner turmoil expressed so poignantly here. Well done.

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keith jeffries

Mon 8th Feb 2021 22:07

Abdul,
This poem sums up my present mood of disquiet, the fears of which are allayed by what I see out of doors and the knowledge that nature will continue unaffected and unabated.

Thank you for this
Keith

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D Joshi

Mon 8th Feb 2021 21:56

Nicely written? Can always turn to nature for a good distraction ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 8th Feb 2021 21:52

A defiant cry to get back up after a fall. I like your writing scheme - loose but tight enough to enhance your expression. Well done!?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 8th Feb 2021 21:48

Excellent. The allusions are on target. Well done.?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Mon 8th Feb 2021 21:45

I like this very much. I am a lover of history. Nothing should be cancelled or reworked. We grow from it.?

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D Joshi

Mon 8th Feb 2021 20:24

Great Poem Tom, we've all definitely appreciated natures beauty during this pandemic. Very well written

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julie callaghan

Mon 8th Feb 2021 19:36

Thanks for the comments, Trevor, Stephen G and Nigel.
Thanks for the likes Hugh, Stephen, JD and Dean.
Just edited it a little, can't leave this one alone

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keith jeffries

Mon 8th Feb 2021 19:20

Bien hecho mi amigo. Tu poesia es corta y expresiva. Me gusta muchisimo.

Gracias por esto
Keith

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