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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Jan 2021 16:04

A very worthwhile venture that demonstrates how an individual with
conviction of purpose can make a difference to many lives. There
should be more like him in a poetry world that can find substantial
sums for "prizes" in the pursuit of overtly commercial publishing promotions.

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Barbara A Steward

Sat 30th Jan 2021 16:01

An opportune publication containing a variety of pleasurableness, some poems requiring deeper thought, others that skim along, then take you by surprise with a final twist.
A beckoning doorway every month to lead the concerned mind away from daily unhappy bulletins and inspire creative thoughts.
Richard Hartley, the host is a published author with a fascinating poetry book on Amazon, An Early Spring day. Humorous, searingly honest journey through life trials and tribulations. Some with gravitas to cause examination of ones own path.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 30th Jan 2021 15:54

I think it is a picture of four rabbits, the rabbit that looks east, the rabbit that looks west, the Great Big Rabbit which is in rabbit mythology as the true nature of planet earth, and the God Rabbit which is invisibly there too encompassing everything.

Although there is a small possibility that it is a three-headed rabbit (one head resting out of view)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Jan 2021 15:50

Many thanks for the comments and the "likes"..
In truth, this is something I had some inspiration for rather than
conviction. A sort of wry nod towards Noel Coward's detached type
of observation about love's foibles - and the effect they can have on us.

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Emeka Collins

Sat 30th Jan 2021 15:37

Thank you Lisa.

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 15:29

A mother's story told with love.
Absolutely beautiful ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 30th Jan 2021 15:23

J.D. I wish you peace, strength and happiness wherever you can find it, and if you found some of it in this poem that gives me a little bit of peace, strength and happiness too. Thank you.

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:48

Wowww
???
Its so inspiring I am speechless

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Emeka Collins

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:41

I am very grateful to everyone who commented on my poem.

Aviva, your words were like an another poem to this poem. Thank you so much.

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julie callaghan

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:39

Yes, it is definitely two. It was just for a bit fun and I was short of a topic for a write.
Glad to see you back, thanks for the comment and the like.

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:39

As a card reader myself I found this very enjoyable. Bravo ?
It's very seldom to find one's who literally know the words you never spoke.
Accuracy separates those from the ones who predict what they think may happen compared to those who tell you word for word exactly what has already happened. ?

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:35

A house is brick and water but a home is what you make it. What a remarkable feeling when a place gives us the same warm feeling as the place we wore raised.
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J.D. Bardo

Sat 30th Jan 2021 14:08

It looks like two to me Julie. I looked at it a long time, nothing changed. I do see two. How about you?

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Greg Freeman

Sat 30th Jan 2021 12:23

If I could be a bit sentimental for a moment … Thursday night reminded me of that scene in The Railway Children – no, not THAT scene – where proud, stubborn but heart of gold Bernard Cribbins from Oakworth station is reminded by the children on the occasion of his birthday of how much everyone in his village respects and indeed loves him. Forget ‘Daddy, my Daddy’ – the scene with Bernard is the one that makes me well up. There was a flavour of that on Thursday night. Tony’s warm and inspirational words – and all the messages of support we have received from other leading poets, as well as on the Crowdfunder – have reminded us that there is a place for Write Out Loud on the poetry scene, and will continue to be. We feel reinvigorated, and renewed. Onwards, and upwards!

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Philipos

Sat 30th Jan 2021 12:18


A well constructed and enjoyable read.

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Sat 30th Jan 2021 11:34

I think it was Eric that mystified us Ray. No-one asked who he was, including me.

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raypool

Sat 30th Jan 2021 11:16

My attempt to raise 1984 from the dead has fallen a bit flat obviously! But thanks for reading Lisa and Stephen, much appreciated.

Ray

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Sat 30th Jan 2021 10:35

Agreed MC, and they have yet to be bettered ?

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julie callaghan

Sat 30th Jan 2021 09:40

Thanks for the additional likes. Good to see you back JD

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Greg Freeman

Sat 30th Jan 2021 09:14

My wife made a snowman in our garden last Sunday, and as I watched its gentle decline during the week, I felt the same emotions as when I wrote this poem a number of years ago. Not so the Serco workmen in Woking Park ... one day this week they flattened all the snowmen there, causing at least one child that witnessed it to burst into tears. The explanation was that allowing snowmen to die naturally can damage or even kill the grass underneath. I see no evidence of that in our garden.

Thanks for your comment, Paul, and thanks to Phil, Brian, Vautaw, Lisa, Julie, Stephen A, Stephen G, Aviva and Holden for the Likes.

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Sat 30th Jan 2021 08:48

Thanks for the comment Dawn re We Don't Move Very Much.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 30th Jan 2021 08:39

Poetry is a pressure valve. Great work. Help is on the way.?

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jan 2021 08:38

Who do, Paul?

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J.D. Bardo

Sat 30th Jan 2021 06:49

I for one, will never fall for that Love crap again!! That is what I will say, but it happens again, and again, and again. Love hurts. I have no more use for Love.
I am trying to hold on Po, that is all I know.

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J.D. Bardo

Sat 30th Jan 2021 05:59

Good timing on posting this Aviva, I really enjoy this poem. and yes, I can use it, I will keep it in my pocket full of pick me up poems. Thank-you, J.D.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 30th Jan 2021 05:42

I like your expressionistic lines.. keep it up. Write a poetic word with them -- that would be cool.

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 30th Jan 2021 01:57

Will do Lisa and the same goes for you.❤

J. x

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Nigel Astell

Sat 30th Jan 2021 01:06

Thanks Stephen
Paul and
Your Royal Poetess
for your likes.

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 00:35

D.knape
My last profile you wore also distracted by my bunny ears ??

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lisa donohoe

Sat 30th Jan 2021 00:27

The strongest are always given the hardest battles. How we handle life , says it all.
Keep that head held high and don't stop fighting your fight.
You've got this my friend ?

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d.knape

Sat 30th Jan 2021 00:18

I was going to leave a brilliant comment
but I got distracted by your nose.
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d.knape

Sat 30th Jan 2021 00:16

why do you have a male profile?

It just Dawned on me.

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lisa donohoe

Fri 29th Jan 2021 23:07

Hello philipos ?
Thank you , it's great to be back.
Awh I appreciate that immensely. Thank you kindly

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Jan 2021 22:40

You never know, MC.
It would be good to hear this sung.

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Jan 2021 22:31

You're quite right, Dawn. This is huge generalisation. But often generalisations have a kernel of truth which enables them to stand up. You don't, for instance, hear of the police breaking up Old Age Pensioners' 5 o'clock tea dances for breaking Covid rules.

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 29th Jan 2021 20:38

Thanks Lisa, I think the Warrior Blood runs in both our veins.

And thank you Jennifer for such high praise, I am genuinely humbled.

J. x

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Dawn

Fri 29th Jan 2021 20:35

Funny because it's true! Very clever. Thank you?

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Dawn

Fri 29th Jan 2021 20:33

I believe you nailed the tone and sentiment here. Admittedly, I do not share it, but I could see from your minds eye the way you put this together and ... It makes me think...
Thank you

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Dawn

Fri 29th Jan 2021 20:25

There are 10's of millions that completely get this! I love the title. Thank you for sharing it.

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 29th Jan 2021 20:03

Thank you very much Lisa. I wrote the first stanza without knowing where it was going, then, basically, it wrote itself. Sometimes it happens. Bit sad that you can relate to some things in it, but, I guess, we all have our own private heart aches. I wish you well ?

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jennifer Malden

Fri 29th Jan 2021 19:38

Absolutely fantastic! This is really poetry, and something beautiful written about a very important isue in our times.

Jennifer

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Philipos

Fri 29th Jan 2021 19:15


A big welcome back to WOL Lisa - just trawled through a few of your specimens - great stuff.

Keep the momentum going.

P

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 29th Jan 2021 18:47

Thank you Lisa for commenting. I am sure you will understand when I say that for me first best would be that nobody who found this poem would need it, and second best would be that if anybody needed the poem they would find it. ?

Thank you also Paul for your comment. I really intended to make use of the tags just to help people filter my poetry and find subjects they'd be more interested in, but it turns out to be a good way to drop hints about what on earth I think I'm talking about too ?

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem. ?

(Sadly Paul's comment is no longer viewable since he left the site)

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 29th Jan 2021 18:26

Yesterday is distant, Tomorrow too
But it is neither of they, it's today and you
Are worrying which day it is needlessly
The days are spaced out and so are we

? ................. ? ................. ?

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julie callaghan

Fri 29th Jan 2021 18:10

Thanks for the likes and the lovely comment Philipos. A friend shared two photos of these beautiful deer on Facebook and I couldn't resist.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 29th Jan 2021 18:07

Then, from what you say here, and what I've seen in certain other poems you have suffered many sadnesses and found your way through each one of them. I think I understand why you connect with some of my writing. I thank you for the compliment too, I'm not used to being deemed 'talented' at all.

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Jan 2021 17:49

Thanks, MC. Not that inventive, though. You’ll recognise The Who classic.
And Aviva, I’m not sure the shops in the mall would welcome my angelic tones gurgling out all day long. Thanks for the Like, Julie.

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lisa donohoe

Fri 29th Jan 2021 17:45

Bravo ?

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d.knape

Fri 29th Jan 2021 17:43

Is it tomorrow?
or is it yesterday?
Get together with Paul Sayer
to see what he has to say!
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d.knape

Fri 29th Jan 2021 17:39

I got rhythm!! ?

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