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Fred Nicholson

Thu 10th Oct 2019 21:26

Don, I agree with you.

We rely on mind and the 5 senses to determine our actions. History repeats itself. It may be time to try another way.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th Oct 2019 21:24

If Stanley Kubrick was still around making films we'd probably have
"A Cockwork Orangutan" ! A horror story of future times.

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Fred Nicholson

Thu 10th Oct 2019 21:16

Keith, I hear you loud and clear.
As long as there is belief in 'the other', it will always be an enigma of sorts. Sages, healers, guiding spirits all talk about the 'oneness of life, love, matter, the flow beneath appearance.
Continued belief in the 3-dimensional realm prevents us from knowing oneness of being. Some of us dart in and out of knowing. Some of us may never know. Maybe the Dalai Lama has a foot in each world continuously.
Keith, that is my simple take on life and breath.

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John Marks

Thu 10th Oct 2019 20:28

Orwell had, as usual, something interesting to say about dead and dying metaphors such as "toeing the line" in his 1946 essay, "Politics and the English Language," Below is a link to an edition of the ,New York Times' magazine from 1993 in which Cathleen Schine expands on Orwell's topic. One particularly pithy paragraph is:

Some years ago, I experienced a metaphor epiphany while watching "Chariots of Fire." On the screen, one of the skinny young men in flapping white shorts drew a line in the dirt with his foot, then carefully stood, placing the toe of his primitive running shoe against that line. The music began pumping, the scrawny Brits in their underclothes ran like gods, emotions soared, mine among them -- "Toe the line!"

I forget who won the race. But I'll never forget that moment -- an awakening, a usage revelation. Unblock that metaphor!

https://www.nytimes.com/1993/08/08/magazine/on-language-dying-metaphors-take-flight.html

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elPintor

Thu 10th Oct 2019 20:02

Toeing the line isn't something of which I would boast, Brian. There are plenty of rotten people who would be glad to share your company, I'm sure.

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Thu 10th Oct 2019 19:58

Overpopulation I would suggest is the main reason for many of the world's current troubles. I take responsibility for my part in this as I have three children, though this pales into insignificance when compared with those parts of the world that not only discourage contraception, but actively encourage conception because it is 'God's will'.

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Philipos

Thu 10th Oct 2019 19:08

Ah but Don - did you not know that UK frogs put a front flipper to their mouth when they burp and say excuse me in the politest and froggiest of fashion - I bet Thalia didn't know about that either, and Matilda just wants to waltz the night away. ?

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Thu 10th Oct 2019 17:57

Yes I'm blunt, critical, controversial etc. But when contacted by the moderator and asked to delete/amend something, which has happened a few times, I don't argue...I toe the line. That's why I'm still on this side of the line.

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Tom

Thu 10th Oct 2019 16:49

Thanks for the comment on Cooling Towers, Ray. Very much appreciated, as always. T

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 10th Oct 2019 16:09

Not to mention 'O'Reilly' as your surname!

I was just dropping off to sleep two nights ago, when that thought hit me. All I could think was: 'Cynthia, you're an idiot!' and I gave myself no argument.

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John Coopey

Thu 10th Oct 2019 16:08

Thanks for your further thoughts, Don and Trevor for the “Like”.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 15:48

Thanks Nigel You're kinda getting into Haiku I feel?

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Nigel Astell

Thu 10th Oct 2019 15:46

sore fingers
arm aching
trembling hands
chess pains
only if
they play!

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Nigel Astell

Thu 10th Oct 2019 15:42

Keep alive
your true self
don't let
others take it

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 15:27

Thanks to Dom & Tom for the likes ?

Thanks for your kind words Keith. I've wrote this because today it's World Mental Health Day, and I feel that a lot of today's mental anguish is caused by not feeling that you can be true to yourself.

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Oct 2019 14:51

Ruth,

This is a poem which is close to my heart. Your words are wise and provide good advice.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 13:02

I enjoy your style d.knape there is a lot of value in the light hearted poem!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:57

Cheers! Nigel, Don, Hugh a toast to Sober October!?

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Hugh

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:45

A powerful poetic drink full of meaning

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:30

dk you're a fellow that's close to my heart
(Oh bother, I've used that's, not who's)
I'm getting light-hearted, light-headed like you
And it's not typing this, (drinking booze)

No, it wasn't too bad at all....?

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John Marks

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:27

Thank you Brian, Don, Graham and Ray for your responses. An accusative voice Brian? Well if the cap fits. It certainly fits my big head.Though I have recently learnt much from my children - how to use fewer resources, how to help the global poor more effectively, how to think more positively about the future, particularly concerning the role of technology in moderating the worst effects of human activity e.g.pollution. I'm not so sure about the 'blink of an eye analogy' Graham. I don't know much about Environmental Science but I'm pretty sure that human activity can accelerate changes that do great harm to the planet and to its poorest inhabitants e.g. through rising sea levels - human activities, like burning fossil fuels, are responsible for 87 percent of the sea level rise since 1970 that's been caused by the swelling volume of the upper ocean.

John

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:21

Poor Greta got bit mixed-up
Thought she was a he
Vets said on her deathbed
Greta, you're a she

(Greta - shock horror...)

Poor ranga she had lived her life
Like a biker, tough
Never once examined bod
When she was in the buff

So we can't blame poor Greta can we? ?

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John Coopey

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:09

I think if their survival depends upon preserving the sperm of threatened species it kind of makes the case for those trying to save the world, Don.
And you are quite right about the confusion of gender. I originally wrote this with the dead ‘un being female and the two coffin dodgers being male. But when I changed it I forgot about the name I’d given her. I’ve edited it back now.

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d.knape

Thu 10th Oct 2019 12:04


now, that wasn't too bad, was it?

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 11:35

Ruth

I like combining serious with humour. To me it's a good mix. I provide the serious. Thalia provides the humour.

A good partnership.?

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elPintor

Thu 10th Oct 2019 11:33

For all of your "banging on" about it, Brian, one might get the idea that either you have a stake in the outcome of the decision to eradicate David's writing from the site, or you are jealous of the attention and support he has received. Why does it bother you so much?

Furthermore, regarding abuse, you've displayed your blunt and critical tongue on more than one occasion to other contributors. And, I'll go one further and venture to say that the moderators were nowhere to be found when you offered your criticism for criticism's sake.

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 11:27

Allow me to be both flippant and logical John.

You obviously didn't pick up on the newsflash of May 8.reassuring orangutan lovers around the world that Greta's copious sperm had been saved and frozen for his two ladyloves Gretel and Garbo.(You sure it was Greta John? Sounds a bit suss for a male...)

Thinking logic John, if you and Gert were the only two humans left, do you not think they would neglect to let your precious stuff go to waste? The continuation of our entire species would rest on your shoulders ......?

On the other hand I could have missed the whole point of your poem which wouldn't surprise me......

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 11:17

I do enjoy your silliness Don but I also enjoy your serious work where you don't cause trouble, you just show depth. And that can be done. Having said that, I do sometimes think that you make serious points humorously as well, so you got it covered. Hope Thalia agrees?

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 11:04

Pollies will get it all sorted
We elect them to do this, (don't we?)
To work in our interests, not themselves
But it seems they just don't want to see

Or care....

So what is the answer, the solution?
Politicians seem to have lost the way
I'm just a lowly rhymer, no pollie
And what I write down holds no sway.......

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raypool

Thu 10th Oct 2019 10:48

A gratifying collaboration of subjective and objective images with the human touch. Poignant memories..

Ray

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raypool

Thu 10th Oct 2019 10:44

Hi John. Many years ago I read a book by teilhard de Chardin a palaeontologist and philosopher who predicted the rapid rise of global awareness and has been proved right in terms of the Internet which has brought it about. The mutual responsibility for our behaviour Is now unavoidable and it is painful to be so aware of our folly collectively. The pathetic scramble we are seeing is the backlash. What we need is the second coming. (joke). There is no central coordination with the will to oversee our salvation. Remember the meeting of Obama and Attenborough? Really a cosy chat about the future. No great international event was triggered. As for politicians will- check out brexit! Great poem by the way.

Ray

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 07:34

Decided there's less trouble
When writing 'bout some fun
Less attacks, less trouble
(And Thalia says "Well done")

Don't know about my Thalia?
My Muse of Mirth (a dear)
She rings the bell, I run, lap lap
(Something's not right here.....) ?

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Becky Who

Thu 10th Oct 2019 05:30

Thanks for commenting on my poem "climate change". ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:58

'and will of course die out as a species ' I don't follow you here Graham?

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:52

Cosmologically the planet will die, that much is known already. Taken as a big picture, we are all products of the earth's natural resources ourselves and will of course die out as a species long before the earth does.

Of course we should all be better at consuming less, but in the great order of things, we are in the blink of an eye timeline wise. We matter very little.

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Don Matthews

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:39

Yes Brian, we are all responsible in some way....

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:27

Pieces such as this always seem to be written in an accusative way, pointing the finger at other un-named persons or organisations. But aren't we all responsible in some way or another? All our lifestyles in the West rely on using resources taken from a finite supply.

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Don Matthews

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:09

Well done John....

And well-chosen, appropriate video clip.

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Don Matthews

Wed 9th Oct 2019 23:07

Clever comment Ruth....?

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Don Matthews

Wed 9th Oct 2019 22:53

MC

Yes, I've seen some hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian people. They tell me it's too much takeaway, booze and telly.

I produced some chemical compounds during my time at university but could not reach the 1,185 league...?

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keith jeffries

Wed 9th Oct 2019 21:47

Kevin,

You paint a humorous landscape with this poem. You never fail us. I particularly like the line "so cold that the dog froze to a lamppost. My father once told a story of his father who was so drunk he was found lying on the pavement clinging onto the kerb edge shouting, Help me, I´m going to fall"

Another great poem
Thanks indeed

Keith

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raypool

Wed 9th Oct 2019 21:17

HI Mark.

Yes I can see your point about the glamorizing of the enforcers , a nasty bunch and semi psychotic streaks no doubt. Nevertheless they exploited the situations that existed at the time and were desperate to be accepted. I know Ronnie Kray married Kate and he was gay. Thanks for that. I collected police and other whistles and had some obscure early constabulary examples, but mostly sold now.

Ray

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Tom

Wed 9th Oct 2019 17:31

Hi Graham, not at all - and thank you. Be great if it gets some traction, I do find it so interesting. Let's see what happens. Maybe you could kick us off ?

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 9th Oct 2019 17:23

Hello Tom, I hope you don't mind but I've set your request to learn how other poets write as a new thread in the discussion section.

Let's see if it catches anyone's attention.

Graham

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Oct 2019 16:46

Note that Greece - that historical holiday haven - is now a front rank
producer of coal, enabling the country to survive its parlous financial position within the EU...and defends its use as a means of saving
an economy that can ill-afford the expense of importing power aid.
to meet the country's demands..

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Oct 2019 16:37

A vexatious subject in many ways, not least for the unhappiness it
can cause. Even among darker skinned folk there's discrimination
- so where does it end? Do we have to resort to the old "birds of
a feather" syndrome to understand and come to terms with this
conumdrum? How much better it would be if we could all adopt
the attitude "take as you find".and use that as the basis for our
behaviour in this world of ours. But against that there are other
forces at work, not least the reality that "like" gravitates towards
"like" and "we" (across the social/racial spectrum) feel more
at ease with those who share much of what makes us who we are
- and that doesn't just mean "lighter skinned" people, does it?
Adapting to changing circumstances - individually and generally -
requires commitment from us all if we are to make the future a
worthwhile prospect for those growing up now.


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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Oct 2019 16:23

Reminds me of 1960s days patrolling dockland streets at night.
But nowadays I find the film and TV entertainment world's preoccupation with villains and their nefarious nonsense a source
of mild disgust. But then the two always seem to have had a curious
symbiotic relationship that even extended to marriage in some cases.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 9th Oct 2019 15:58

Don - please allow me to refer you to "The Wordsworth Book of Intriguing Words" (UK) which contains the 1,185 letter word from
the American Chemical Society's "Chemical Abstracts". The WBOIW
also displays other examples but these fall short(!) as words spoken
or published and as such are held to be artificial (check Guinness Book of Records?) .But hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian delights
continue to appeal!!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 9th Oct 2019 15:21

A message in a finished bottle Nigel?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 9th Oct 2019 15:16

I like that line Nigel 'Driving away yesterday' very positive spin

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