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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 14:26

Golly gosh! Amelia Call
Poet/job in real estate?
Volatile? Yes I do like
Real estate? you say love/hate?

Golly gosh! Amelia Call
You indeed are a mixture gal...?

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Wed 16th Oct 2019 13:59

Don, with you all the way on your detestation of Cowell-ugh! bigtime!
good poem 'chuck' ? check out ' Spotlight ' tv channel for all the oldies that my boring papa loves.









Rose ?

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Emilia Callahan

Wed 16th Oct 2019 13:56

Thanks, Tom! This is one of my favorite styles too.

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Emilia Callahan

Wed 16th Oct 2019 13:55

This is not my best work. If anyone has constructive criticism I could use to transform this into something better, I'd appreciate it ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 12:35

Great piece Chrystal a positive outlook will always bring out the youthful side!

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 11:28

I have never liked Simon Cowell from the beginning.
?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 11:20

Very well expressed Don! You have filled in the blanx for Do.Ro.Thy here. This was one of those short pieces I originally posted on Instagram, then I thought I would try the style here for something presented a bit differently.

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 11:14

Should I brake...stop, 'fore continuing?
Is there something that I may have missed?
If I don't pause but just keep on driving
I might miss something I'd not have wished

Is this what you were trying to say Ruth, or have I gone off on my own interpretive tangent?.....

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 11:01

Have you seen Simon Cowell lately? It was his 60th bday last week and he has had so much surgery done, that now he does look like a psycho. Don't go down that route Don

Let your words keep you handsome!

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:58

I'm working on idea Brian
You just put in my mind
A muso company for WOL
A Syco sorta kind

(Syco= Simon Cowell)

Simon's worth x million
I see my name in lights
I could go down in history
For WOL Syco delights

(I promise you a cut of royalties Brian.....)

(Thalia says I'm all heart.......) ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:45

I'm an Aquarian. Quiet and laid-back. Is that why Thalia and I work well? ?

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Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:44

Somewhere deep in my subconscious I remember this from first time around.

Push it Don...you could be the new Syco.

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:41

Have you heard 'Mouldy Old Dough' Ruth? I've one coming up on this and as mentioned several SM members went on to be Lieutenant Pigeon. .....

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:39

Don, I am still waiting for you to tell me when your birthday is!

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:36

Fred, Ruth is a specialist
On reading of our stars
Remiss of me to not have told you
Of her repertoire

She knows all about Virgos.,..?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:35

I have never heard of this song or this band Don, going to watch this now. Funnily enough, my mum was called Ena but a lot of our neighbours called her Edna and she hated it lol


Just watched, I enjoyed the dancing. The track is earwormingly good!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:33

Don I hope you're keeping all the lights flashing at the Orstrailian Alien Station!

Nigel thanks for that little poem so true that space fills with thoughts in no time.

Thanks for reading Fred, yep I am guilty of walking in space at times, my dad still shouts if I'm shopping with him at the time lol

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:27

Ah Fred Happy Belated Birthday, it wasn't too many weeks ago, when was it? Apron and cookbook is not that bad seeing as she was a chef, but if you had got one other Non essential/practical that would have been perfect ( big virgo trait). Thanks for reading

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:21

Back to the blank page
Fred, off you go
Wait for a Muse-strike
Could be fast/slow

Be patient. She will eventually strike. Make sure pen and paper at the ready.... ?

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 10:13

Fred you should've known that chefs
Got cupboards full of cheffy gifts
Perhaps voucher for surplus-rid
Might just have stopped your Virgo rift?

You didn't know of such vouchers? Google for nearest 'Rid your Rubbish' company.....?

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 09:58

Hey Chrystel

I'm doing well. Thalia and I are bonding like a rocket. She even revealed an unknown talent to me today. Choreography consultant to Edna 1 and 2 (see post Edna - Stavely Makepeace 1970). What will she come out with next ?

First I thought 'fervid' was a typo. Look it up first Don before you put your foot in it. I'm glad I did. Yes, fervid sounds better . Shows your 'educated'.....?

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 09:00

I love this. Makes me feel good.

Thalia helped with choreography....she's multitalented ?

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Chrystel Roberts

Wed 16th Oct 2019 08:46

Hey Don,

How are you? It's been a while...

Yeah, fervid; I thought it sounded better than fervent

Best regards

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Philip Stevens

Wed 16th Oct 2019 07:55

Toast ! oh crumbs
To Dom, I reply
As I wipe the sleep
From my eye

Enjoy your cereal
Enjoy your day
Thumbs up to writing
No more to say

?

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Isobel

Wed 16th Oct 2019 07:19

It's funny but before I'd even read Graham's comment I thought how lovely and refreshing your profile writeup was. A poet who's actually interested in how other people think and create. Not everyone is and you meet many on the poetry scene who aren't there to listen at all.

Thanks for commenting on my poem Tom. I very much enjoyed your Cooling Towers poem - a relationship poem with some depth and originality.

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 05:43

Ruth, this one gave me a smiley remembrance. It was my friend's birthday. She was a chef and I am a Virgo. I got her a cookbook and an apron, and that was the start of our rift. ?

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 05:27

Ruth, been there, done that. Very nice. ?

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 05:16

Beauti-fully composed.

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 05:09

Vautaw, I reflected on 'Abandoned' deeply and feel thank-full. My muses come through fingertips, from within-out. They are not present all the time, but then, neither am I.

"So, back to the blank page I go."
"Just me and my pen."

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 04:59

Vautaw, I get it, bone deep!

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 04:38

Kate, and so can I. The internal conditions create the outer scenarios.

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 04:36

Michael, it made me laugh, after your comment opened that door.

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 16th Oct 2019 02:51

Listening to the profile tune and got a bit lost. Enjoyed the melody, tempo and your voice. Are you also the instrumentalist? If so, great delivery. If no, still good. Some things don't come immediately. Would you agree Michael?

Creasote is the word I hear you say. It's used to preserve wood utility poles. I believe it is deemed poisonous here in Western WA. I just now see there is a medicinal creasote bush that provides a resin for the wood preservative. Wow, I am still learning stuff. Never heard of a creasote bush before a few minutes ago.

Kinda feel it is a love song, but haven't figured out how. I got stuck on preserved poles and medicinal bushes. Maybe, just a little more time. ?

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d.knape

Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:29


They say Greeting Cards are out of date
obsolete in this fast-paced world
but homemade cards are still special
when made by children
in some of their first Acts of Creation.

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d.knape

Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:24

There is poetry
in children's art
and those who receive
always support
No mystery
right from the start
their creating comes
straight from their heart.
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d.knape

Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:18

Master of Ceremonies---
you got it right.
the poem is about the innocence of children
and how they express themselves.
thank you.

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Philipos

Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:44

Thank you Ray - Nut Hatch - appreciative of your kind comments. P. ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:39

You've done very well Phil
To rhyme reply to me
Having just come in from work
And not had your tea

I have just arisen
Had my breakfast too
So I am in top form
Rhyming back to you

(Yawn......)

(Why's my tummy still rumbling?......)

(More sleep/cornflakes perhaps?.....) ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:31

I like this Chrystel.....Fervid? You've taught me a new word......

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:27

Soooo...good Ray

You may be simple bladder (me?)
We all bow down to you
You came from Ba Ba black sheep
Our reverence we now shew

Although we toss you round, we kick
We do it for a cause
Hear the crowd all cheering?
It's you they're cheering, yours...

(Poor deluded bladder.....)

(One cruel poet....) ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 23:13

I got towards the end and thought I've read this before, so I must have left a comment. Why hadn't I? I don't know. Remiss of me.

Well done Fred. I didn't know what was coming. The last two lines are heart-touching an MC's comment I like.....

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:58

FFS corse I'm brillyant
FFS nasty too
Know wot? I'm shit mixed up here
Not worth a brass razoo....

(Wot's a brass razoo?....) ?

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Fred Nicholson

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:55

I thank you Do.RoThy and M.C. Newberry for reflecting on Eye Peace.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:53

A fine treatise Ray!

But if I might make so bold, you have made a serious omission, which requires another stanza.

Where is your definition of the 'off-side-rule'?



I'll get my proverbial coat

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Don Matthews

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:48

Oh bother Ray, I'm an avid high street postcard-shop-looker but didn't see anything like this pop out at me. Sorry I missed her. you think she would've appreciated some Skippy verse as we were 'doing it'?.....?

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Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:45

Forsooth ye hath sayeth a fyne yarn sirrah.

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Fred Nicholson

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:44

Thanks Michael.
I reflected on both meanings, the latter being more chilling.

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Fred Nicholson

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:40

YES Don, It doesn't take much to impress me. I was im?pressed.

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Michael Triandam

Tue 15th Oct 2019 21:54

For me, this could be simple poem about a person walking over thin ice or it could be a larger poem about global warming. I liked it

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raypool

Tue 15th Oct 2019 21:51

Well thanks Lisa and Jason , appreciated likes.

Thanks Hannah, you may well be right. It is sad when people reveal themselves in this way.

Ray

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