Hope so, Keith.
Comment is about I FOUGHT THE LAW AND THE LAW WON (blog)
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Jon, Ghazala, Fred and Don: thank you all of your comments. It means a lot to me when others appreciate my work.
Comment is about In living colour (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
I really enjoyed this Adam, light in all it's forms described so beautifully. Loved the descriptive elements and the more intuitive nod to illumination. The luminescence of sea algae storing and releasing light, just as we seek illumination and share it with others. Gotta love layers, layers are good. Love the poem, skillfully written.
J. x
Comment is about Light (blog)
Original item by Adam Rabinowitz
How the mighty fall.
Keith?
Comment is about I FOUGHT THE LAW AND THE LAW WON (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thanks Keith, also sorry if it's slightly different to when you read it had to edit the last line, scansion was out.
J. x
Comment is about Kissing Frogs (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 24th Sep 2019 12:37
pardon me Avishek for not thanking you for liking my last poem.
Rose ?
Comment is about AVISHEK GHOSH (poet profile)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
Cheers mate, yes, Jimmy Cooper the central character from Quadrophenia. Just added the last verse too!
Comment is about Jimmy (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
Well said and well put together
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Kissing Frogs (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Thank you,just re posted the letter in a fresh envelope as the other was splattered with nose blood. On Saturday before the accident was going to collect my bike and cycle 8 miles back along the canal after posting the letter.I call it" canycling,"do it regularly accompanied by my black Paterdale. Bike will have to wait to be picked up for a while until I mend,chained up with two chains in Burnley.
Comment is about Accrington ,loose wire fear!This happened Saturday afternoon (blog)
Original item by hugh
Tue 24th Sep 2019 10:00
thanks for reading "There Comes A Time".
a passing thought that passed.
Beware the one
who holds the scythe
he comes creeping in
in dark of night
Death may be certain
but of a different stripe
the worst of fears is
an angry wife!
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Yes, a bit rich John. Does this to you then packs up and disappears. Some people........
Comment is about Decisions! Decisions! (blog)
Original item by afishamongmany
Why didn't I think of that John? ......
Comment is about My search for an eight character password (blog)
Original item by hugh
Desmond, Avishek, Julia, Ian, Don and Trevor. Thank you for your comments on this poem as they are much appreciated. The poem was something of a departure from my usual work but there are times when one is driven to strike out at the scociety we live in. I am now entertaining the idea of writing more such poems, which although cathartic, also express what I feel needs to be heard.
Thank you all again
Keith
Comment is about Do me in.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Excellent, Desmond. There should be more poems about fat men.
Comment is about fat man (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Till your kids want a baby sitter. Or a loan. Or some DIY doing.......
Comment is about There Comes A Time (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Ian,
This poem is very good but it really comes into its own when pondered upon.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about True Nature Too (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Obviously “password”.
Comment is about My search for an eight character password (blog)
Original item by hugh
Shit, Fish! I was having a good day till you gave me this lot to think about!
Comment is about Decisions! Decisions! (blog)
Original item by afishamongmany
Beautiful, John.
And wonderful touch with the link to MD at the end.
Comment is about Frank (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Damn! John. I wondered why nature was ganging up on me.....?
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
Original item by branwell kent
I’ve always subscribed to the view that Nature knows best; it does things for a reason. But as Billy Connolly remarked, what possible threat to your nose and ears has it anticipated that it grows the protection of a forest of hair? My own theory is that Nature is saying “You’ve had your time as a virile and rampant male so now it’s time to make you unattractive to the opposite sex So the younger ones can have a chance”. Luckily my Remington keeps a hot babe magnet.
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
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Good golly Keith! I think I got problems......
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
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Sorry,I forgot. Should hairs grow on the palms of your hands, go and see your doctor.
Keith
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
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Branwell, I can’t explain it but rest assured you are not alone.
Keith
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
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Tue 24th Sep 2019 05:56
Thank you afishamongmany much appreciate your comments . Thanks Lisa for the like
All the best des
Comment is about fat man (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Been thinking a lot
'Bout this problem you've got
I got me a theory
(Now hair on my bot)
Anything up
Eventually falls down
So hair on your head
Gravity pulls down
Make sense?
Eventually Bran
You'll lose all, the lot
'Twill end up on floor
All hair that you got
Simple physics Bran......?
Comment is about What I Don't Understand About Getting Old (blog)
Original item by branwell kent
So good Mike......yes, I thought I'd seen it before...
Comment is about Jimmy (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
I wondered why my writer
Was always overheating
Steam rising, fingers racing
While I was on seat, seating....?
Comment is about Lonely Typewriter Seeks Loving Home (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Interesting.......and it rhymes
Comment is about Do me in.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
"Where there's a cut there's always blood,"
Love the poem, really love that line.
J. x
Comment is about ~FOR_YOU~ (blog)
Original item by Black_Rose
"And a voice spake as if whispered from within the depth of a shadow and said, "Why not?"
Loved this Black Rose.
J. x
Comment is about +DEMON+ (blog)
Original item by Black_Rose
wow!! John that was nice,i like it..thank you?
Comment is about +DEMON+ (blog)
Original item by Black_Rose
thanks for welcoming me back (again) Ray - glad you liked True Nature. As usual - you totally 'got it' ?
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
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thanx for commenting on True Nature Becky - glad you liked it ?
Comment is about Becky Who (poet profile)
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thanx for commenting on True Nature Cynthia - glad you liked it ?
Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Frances - thank you for the "like".
MC
Comment is about IT'S A HEARTACHE THING - Country Lament (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Ha! I've reached the age (and the stage in life) when I don't care if I "matter". I'm content to know that I HAVE mattered and provided an
important relevance to the lives of others. Old men should offer
stability and common sense guidance whilst looking after their own
well-being for as long as nature lets them and the grim reaper stays
the hand that holds the scythe that mows us all down in time.
Save me from the trendies and the perennially immature.,,of which
there seems to be an egregious fearful excess in this modern age.
Comment is about There Comes A Time (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Thanks Lisa, Ruth and Kieth, glad you enjoyed my furry lion and pearly clowns. ?
Computer will soon be boxed up as we are moving back to the green and pleasant land so my engagement here will be spasmodic for a while.
Go ye all well
><>
Comment is about Decisions! Decisions! (blog)
Original item by afishamongmany
Dress those spikes and get out there.! Tell them your name. We are all the same. The lion you'll tame. And clowns are insane.
Comment is about Decisions! Decisions! (blog)
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Yea that's what lies do - spawn false realities. Just as truth makes known what is real.
Go well
><>
Comment is about fat man (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
I have a real soft spot for starlings....in fact I was watching a mini fleet of them flying in formation earlier this evening. I especially liked your line ' I put my hand in my pocket and found darkness, failure and losses' we all do that... Sometimes finding just one solitary, shiny hopeful penny!
Comment is about Search (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
<Deleted User> (22180)
Mon 23rd Sep 2019 20:48
Throughly enjoyed it Keith!
J x
Comment is about Do me in.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
CHARLIE WHITE
Tue 24th Sep 2019 13:59
Thank you Don ?
Comment is about The Ship (blog)
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