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eve nortley

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 12:46

Thank you for your feedback, it is very appreciated......I think we all need this kind of love once in our lives!

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 12:29

So true.......

https://youtu.be/NrdKe5sDVI4

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Robert C Gaulke

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 12:10

Cheers, Devon! R

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Devon Brock

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 11:24

Yes Randy, I say "wooder", but that doesn't mean I drink from a different well.

D

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Devon Brock

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 11:12

Reminds me of "Touch and Go" by SLF, but from the other point of view. Well written, Lisa.

D

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Devon Brock

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 11:10

Fantastic storytelling, Cynthia.

D

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 10:52

Oh, Mae! Fantastic! Do keep in touch.

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Don Matthews

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 08:21

Well written Jason

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Don Matthews

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 08:18

Yes Eve. Well written. Ah, If I could own a clock like that.......

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Mae Foreman

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 08:14

Thank you dear John! That's my favorite line two! And may I say your interpretation is 100% accurate! You got it!
Thank you so much my friend ?
Mae

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Don Matthews

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 01:05

The issue to me seems to be we don't collectively think there's a REAL problem. We're still consumed with greed, selfishness and me-first. So how does one change this? - education? hit to the hip pocket? hard restrictive laws?. The trouble is we were given greed DNA at the Garden of Eden......

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Emer Ni Chorra

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 00:54

Thank you, Don.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 00:41

Time...it is so beautiful.
I love the picture. I need that clock

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Don Matthews

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 00:41

So succint. So nicely put

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 3rd Jul 2019 00:36

Every day above ground is a good one. Unless you're a potato

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Emer Ni Chorra

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 23:44

Hahaha Devon! Thank you. . Bah!?

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Devon Brock

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 23:40

The audio really makes this poem shine. So, baaaahble on please.

D

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 23:30

I sadly do not have the voice for audio?

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Emer Ni Chorra

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 23:27

Thank you so much for stopping by, Lisa. I just added audio for this piece.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 23:27

Always follow thou own path. And I don't like the 4 legged kind.

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 22:41

Thanks Lisa, Dorothy and Devon for liking and commenting, and I tell you what Devon, I love that phrase, "Upside of the dirt." ?

J. x

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Devon Brock

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 22:14

Yes, Jason, each day on the upside of the dirt should be fully lived, if possible. Thanks, man. I've been feeling a bit gloomy of late.

D

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John Marks

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 22:07

Ring around the asphodel

Cheaters do not kiss and tell

Wrinkle, Wrinkle

Stars no longer shine and twinkle!


THAT'S my favourite verse Mae: blessed by word and cursed by time, the ever-present nursery rhyme.

All blessings

john

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Devon Brock

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 21:06

This is amazing work, Robert. One of your best that I have read so far on your blog. The most interesting part for me, is that you question yourself for seeing the brute nature of the human weed, as if it your own fault.

D

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raypool

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 20:48

Thanks Don, goes to show how variations can come down to us, like a fact that can't get in the way of a good story too.

Martin I am pleased !

Jon, Lisa, Dor. and Devon many thanks for reading and not having me certified.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 20:45

A very perceptive summary Martin, thanks. Yes, I do shudder at the idea of mini estates existing within an enclave. I first encountered it as a child taken for a long walk to where the Kennedy Memorial now stands; a magic area with blackberry woods and twisted elms. Beyond this was this a laundered area with no people present , that was in the fifties. The same hologram exists in more prevalent form today.

Hi David. I do of course indulging in nostalgia, but it can get tedious, and only serves to depress in my opinion. As we reach a certain age it becomes a bit like one of those screens in surgeries we all remember from comedy shows. We hide in a semblance of decency and then have to come out wearing socks.
I did pivot the poem on that line - possibly not exactly correct, but the gist is there! Really that was like the climax of Scrooge's terror in a release.

Thanks fellas.

Also for the likes, Jon, Dor. and Devon!
Obliged.

Ray

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Mae Foreman

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 17:56

My utmost respect and admiration! You have raw talent! I can't begin to imagine the magnitude of the effort you put in overcoming your challenges considering that not only you seem yto have overcome them but you become excellent at it! With such determination you can do everything! I absolutely love your work!
Thank you?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 17:05

We have spent a couple of centuries as a, "Take, make and throw away society," except when either money or resources have been in short supply, and it didn't have too much impact at first. But, when you consider that in 1800 our population globally was estimated at about 1 billion, in 1970 it was 4 billion and now it's about 8 billion. Everything we do now is amplified by the number of us doing it. Personally, I think that there's a good chance we'll be the authors of our own demise because we don't take it seriously. Really like this Don, great subject matter.

J. ?

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 16:25

Thank you both for these lovely comments! x
P.S. I love perks of being a wallflower ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 16:14

Interesting on various levels. We repaired in the past because money was scarce - the mantra was "waste not, want not". With
increased incomes, we began to buy new and thus contribute to the
general health of the economy. Now, we are serious about the
business of recycling and feel better when we throw out stuff that
in other times would be held back for repair, renovation...call it
what you will. We act according to how we are allowed to act...be
it via additional income or outlets for our discarded stuff to be put
to further use. The primary object should be to avoid letting the
latter fall into disuse but instead produce other things...for example,
in the way that plastic bottles can somehow be turned into garments. That's proper "productive" thinking!

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Don Matthews

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 16:03

That's what the poem's all about. We're creating it.

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Tue 2nd Jul 2019 14:17

Crap

We're creating it.

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Don Matthews

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 09:32

Oh no, dk is leaving us
For some leafy way
WOL is gonna fall apart
What more can I say?

Just dug into my 'say bank'
Found some more to say
dk don't get led astray
On your holiday.....

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Mae Foreman

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 09:00

Thank you so much Martin ?
Mae

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Martin Elder

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 08:44

Beautiful Mae
congratulations on this wonderful poem

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Mae Foreman

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 08:17

Thank you so much Jason! ?It's a great honor ?and I'm absolutely thrilled! ?
Thank you for the constant support my dear friend ?
Mae

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Mae Foreman

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 08:15

Thank you Devon! I appreciate the support, I'm glad you like it?
Mae

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 07:00

you are incredable

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Martin Peacock

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 01:37

Cheers Eiren. Nice of you to say so!

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 01:28

Way cool Tommy

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Lisa C Bassignani

Tue 2nd Jul 2019 01:22

Thank you Leon. ?

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Mimi

Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:58

Very honest and visceral. ??

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Eiren Water

Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:41

Thank you Martin and Sophie
x x x

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:35

Congratulations Mae, a worthy winner and I have to say I am so pleased to see you get POTW.. Absolutely brilliant.

J. x

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Devon Brock

Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:15

Peter, this is a wonderful homily to those past loves. You know, at the time of parting, it is often so full of betrayal, grasping, howling. But as we age, we realize that those failed relationships oftentimes are a learning. Those failures reflect more on ourselves and teach how to better love. I praise all my former forever loves for what they have taught. Now, happily married, those loves and lessons were not for naught, Thank you for this beautiful poem.

D

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Devon Brock

Mon 1st Jul 2019 22:59

Locked me in with "scorchio waydays". The rhythm of the words and the mundane garnished with science. Yes. I want more.

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Devon Brock

Mon 1st Jul 2019 22:36

Was never a fan of Pablo's work, except the blue period, but I love this poem. The unanticipated birth of artistic movements by the seminal artists. The disruptions caused by the first adherents. Well done.

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Devon Brock

Mon 1st Jul 2019 22:21

Congratulations Mae. This is a wonderful poem. Lovely work contrasting the symbolism of each flower with it's obverse.

D

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Robert C Gaulke

Mon 1st Jul 2019 22:17

Fish in a barrel living in 2019 USA, Martin. B

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Martin Elder

Mon 1st Jul 2019 20:36

wow this quite a long one for you , but none the less held my interest right to the end. I love these vignettes of life that you create.
Nice one Bob

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