elPintor
Tue 19th Mar 2019 06:00
I'm quite fond of these brief forms that embody such vastness--I must study more.
Rachel
Comment is about tanka for the nemophilia (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
I often beg for a clean slate. The relief of forgiveness is powerful. I very much appreciate the articulation of this idea.
Comment is about FORGIVENESS (blog)
Original item by Ty
Frances Macaulay Forde
Tue 19th Mar 2019 02:58
I agree with Jason, Josie.
I have enjoyed both of your poems... I am very sure there are many more worthy words to read, so please share.
And keep writing!
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Comment is about Josie (poet profile)
Original item by Josie
Many thanks, MC and Dorothy.
I am sometimes bemused by cries of Equality for Women. Of all my married friends There isn’t a single couple, myself included, where the wife isn’t in charge.
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
they know your every move
and everything you do
Oh, they do, they do.
Well-penned. John
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Thanks all for the comments and likes.
They are much appreciated, as always.
Comment is about Word wanderer (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
A compelling poem. Thoughts about who we are and who we resemble tend to come from outside sources more than internal, whether we want to be like them or not. I like your style.
Comment is about Augustus (blog)
Original item by Clarke
Nice One - cute!
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
A Christ
Mon 18th Mar 2019 17:32
I am a moth to flames.
March comes in like a tiger and leaves like a lamb.
To measure the impact of pressure and the radius of the bruise.
I submit my hopelessness to the gallow's of verdict.
Baby's got blue eyes when the morning comes...
https://youtu.be/4CiyKeSnSxk
Comment is about tanka for the nemophilia (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
very topical and cutting david. i agree whole-heartedly although i have to admit i am often quite vacant myself
Comment is about The Daily Sluice (blog)
Original item by David R Mellor
excellent recollection as ever cynthia. i may steal HOLY HOT HANNIBALEM! for use down the pub.
Comment is about Attack From The Rear (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
loquacious is one of those words that comes up constantly in the crosswords and i never seem to know what it means despite writing it a million times. so thumbs up from me, i learnt something and this has an articulate and academic amount of alliteration in it.
Comment is about Word wanderer (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
great stuff ray as ever with a cracking send off.
Comment is about SAME OLD SONG (blog)
Original item by ray pool
first verse is an absolute killer tommy. love it.
Comment is about Knock - Knock (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
<Deleted User> (21487)
Mon 18th Mar 2019 16:59
I loved this poem - I loved the rhythm - i loved the humour - but most of all I am so glad you recognized the truth. mmmmmm ?
Dorothy
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
funnily enough i read a bit about the black annis a while ago in a folklore book i pilfered for 50p from the local library. had never heard of her before and now twice in a month. this is great damon, it shows real skill
Comment is about The Black Annis (blog)
Original item by Mikey V Kinsey
rather beautiful john. i agree with jason, its like a prayer to everything all at once.
Comment is about The greatest gift (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
cosmic joggle is sublime. the whole thing is intriguing and beguiling in equal parts
Comment is about Cosmology 101 (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Oh so many long words - they make me stop and think, to wonder if I can really take in what you are saying. I hope they are not one of your ways of distancing yourself from us common people.
Comment is about On love and self-efficacy (blog)
Original item by Clarke
I really enjoy poems about close relationships, especially ones that pose questions that we all might be wondering about in our own lives.
Comment is about Augustus (blog)
Original item by Clarke
Very stimulating to my imagination. Thank you.
Comment is about Cosmology 101 (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
What's changed? The civil service runs the country. MPs just get in the way. They were finally given some work to do a couple of years ago and just look what they made of it. Your next poem might be The Country that was Murdered. Great read.
Comment is about The Town That Was Murdered (blog)
Original item by Joe Williams
In age, I'm a year behind the author and take some solace in
knowing my late mother - the youngest of a large Victorian - Edwardian family - lived until just after her 90th birthday...and her
sisters also got a long way down life's road, albeit not quite as far.
I can't recall having a taste for poetry per se when I was 16,
too busy being prepared via an apprenticeship process for my
chosen career, but managing to appreciate the likes of Frank
Sinatra and his unmatched interpretations of the lyrics of songs
that now occupy The Great American Songbook. Not a bad
substitute! By the time I got around to WOL, my working life was
over and the benefits of varied learning in retirement were on offer.
By then, it seemed to me that modern poetry had - ljke modern
classical music - lost its ability to "sing" and little has managed to
appeal - then or now. Life has to be enjoyed and it has never
seemed sensible to spend its allotted time with stuff that doesn't add to either. Of course, there are memorable exceptions and
they are valued even more for their (for me) comparative
rarity. Roll on "76" (plus++++++++++++++) ?.
Comment is about Staying alive: me and Mr MacCaig (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Well done, DK - a distinctive "voice" that refreshes the parts most
in need in an otherwise too serious genre of creative writing!
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Brian - and those who clicked on "like" - many thanks for reading and
responding. I've always had a fondness for the "aphorism" approach.
Comment is about BETTER (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Another gem from a reliable source of entertaining (and challenging)
poetry. The attraction being not only the rhythm but also the choice of the words used, and the feeling that there is some reality behind them. A difficult trick to pull off successfully but no one does it better..
Sometimes I think a female in the place might be rather nice
But then I find myself thinking not just once - but twice.
To those who choose to take the vows that join man and wife -
I say to them "good luck old son - I'll take the single life". ?
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
"available for work that wasn’t there."
...and MP's have second jobs such a solicitors and how do they find the time to dedicate their energies to their coctituents? I wonder.
Cheers Joe.
Tommy
Comment is about The Town That Was Murdered (blog)
Original item by Joe Williams
Thanks Martin, I appreciate your comment on "Knock - Knock" and your suggestion is in the pondering stage ;~)
Tommy
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
Original item by Martin Elder
Thanks Martin, I appreciate your comments and your suggestion is in the pondering stage ;~)
Tommy
Comment is about Knock - Knock (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 18th Mar 2019 09:26
Agree with David about non-conformity. It's like being an eccentric...you don't call yourself an eccentric, nor do you work at being one. It happens naturally and it's what others call you, often without your knowledge.
Don, you are free to comment on others' work, but please consider whether your comments will detract from the piece you are commenting on. After all it is not all about you, it is about them. (I can say this as one who has been guilty of this in the past, and possibly still is on occasion.)
Comment is about Good Onya (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
elPintor
Mon 18th Mar 2019 09:10
Congratulations, D.
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'Shoes' by D.Knape (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Thankyou Jason.
I wouldn’t swop her for a gold pig, Frances.
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Frances Macaulay Forde
Mon 18th Mar 2019 04:40
Yes, up to your usual standard John.
I am still enjoying your e-book, 'Waste of Time'. Especially, 'The Photograph' (naturally), 'Words that I forget', 'Frank' (my dad was a Pathfinder/Master Bomber)... and so many more wonderful, intimate poems.
Jason, Dorothy, MC - I certainly recommend his chapbook, available here: https://www.amazon.com/waste-time-Poems-2010-2015-ebook/dp/B075CW7VNR/ref=sr_1_1?keywords=John+e+Marks+Waste+of+Time&qid=1552883946&s=gateway&sr=8-1
The only reason I didn't buy his very reasonable hold-in-my-hands chapbook, is because my shelves are groaning and I'm busy giving away many of my treasures...
UPDATE: I now have the second e-book "Shadows and Dust".
Comment is about The greatest gift (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Frances Macaulay Forde
Mon 18th Mar 2019 04:23
Ha-Ha! And you love her dearly....
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Oh yes, and a truer word was never spoken!?
J.
Comment is about OUR GERT KNOWS BEST (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
This is a fine example of what poetry is about...leaving the reader feeling better for having read it.
Comment is about The greatest gift (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Wow, that is hard hitting. A brilliant insight into the minds of those called to serve. We are all forever in the debt of these brave few. Their sacrifices should never be forgotten.
Heart of Lead and Carbon Quill, brilliant and poignant.
J. x
Comment is about Simple Cloth (collaboration with The Carbon Quill) (blog)
Original item by Heart of Lead
Thanks, Martin. Horses for courses is the usual thinking but it helps
to regenerate interest in both horse and human if some variety is
employed occasionally. ?
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is 'The Racing Stable' by M.C Newberry (article)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Many thanks for the advice, Dorothy.
Don - I think you'd find a priapic prick quite emotional.
Comment is about PRIAPUS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 17th Mar 2019 20:43
I notice brevity is your watchword of late MC. Works for me.
Comment is about BETTER (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (21487)
Sun 17th Mar 2019 20:17
John
This is beautiful - i agree with Jason - almost liike a prayer or even a blessing.
I really love it
Dorothy
Comment is about The greatest gift (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
The need for forgiveness is so strong. If we were ruled by love and forgiveness, we would have no need for law. But indeed, to love and forgive can never be enforced. Your words are so powerful and much needed to hear. I am on that journey as well. Your words are deeply needed and I cherish them. Thank you for sharing.
Comment is about Redemption (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Hi Martin - Thanks for your feedback
May the road rise up to meet you.
May the wind be always at your back.
May the sun shine warm upon your face;
And the rains fall soft upon your fields. And until we meet again,
May God hold you in the palm of His hand.
Sláinte T ?
Comment is about Irish and Proud (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Spellbinding, beautiful poem John. Brilliant, almost prayer like.
J.
Comment is about The greatest gift (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I love the rhythm of this piece the gives it the extra pace that takes the reader with it.
Nice one
Comment is about Handcuff (blog)
Original item by mona s
Don Matthews
Tue 19th Mar 2019 06:23
I guess this is an issue facing many of us on WOL. How brave are we to expose our soft inner core to strangers, not knowing who's out there?
Comment is about Vultures Circling (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews