Big Sal
Tue 12th Dec 2017 04:34
Very straight forward/thinking poetry, and your samples made me laugh, i.e. OK Google: Become an Adult.
Comment is about Natasha Tingle (poet profile)
Original item by Natasha Tingle
Big Sal
Tue 12th Dec 2017 04:31
Can't have one without the other. Solitude without peace of mind is worthless, at least as long as we trouble ourselves. Nice, simple, concise words indeed.
Comment is about IN PLACE OF SOLITUDE (blog)
Original item by MANISHA SAINI
Big Sal
Tue 12th Dec 2017 04:27
Whether literal or taken metaphorical, this poem is a great one that takes the concept of that which is the symbol of life itself, and juxtaposes it next to simple yet effective dangers that can only be mitigated with the proper knowledge and implementation of said knowledge. I'm sure water warriors and life lovers everywhere would like this too, as it can fit multiple narratives.
Comment is about Water (blog)
Original item by Ria Richardson
Yep, that was me. Haven't used that email address in ages though. I still write - not for anything other than fun, though. Others from that course do it professionally, must be nice to have that kind of confidence.
Comment is about Letting Go of the Lotus Flower (14\\2/10) (blog)
Original item by John Turner
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 11th Dec 2017 22:53
Tina,once you get going there's no stopping you! keep writing kiddo
Rose ?
Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #26 {Rose's Are Red Poems #2} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 11th Dec 2017 22:50
I love the language in this poem, which is reminiscent of both Dylan Thomas and the atmosphere of Cider with Rosie. The first time I read it I did not notice how specific the repetition was. But when you do it gives you the chance to savour the lines all over again.
Comment is about 'Aubade' by Terry Jones is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Anmy yes I do agree with you and thank you for stopping by reading my post
Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #24 {Unsolved Mysteries} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 11th Dec 2017 20:59
unusual and clever piece 220 A.
Rose ?
Comment is about For the Longings of the Bard’s Vessel’s Vein (blog)
Original item by 220August
Your mind, its ideas and the resultant relationship of chosen metaphors, is truly awesome. And then you find the apt vocabulary to support these insights/outsights/resights. Is narcissism an essential factor? I'm honestly keen to know. Is it an essential aspect of amazing writing?
Comment is about i search for love on a cold dead morning (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Hi Laura M,
Saskia's Ghost? Or perhaps another Laura. Are you still writing?
I can't seem to locate you even when I select your name. Send me your details via the inbox if you can message me.
Comment is about Letting Go of the Lotus Flower (14\\2/10) (blog)
Original item by John Turner
A strong sincere 'message'. Some day, as you read a lot and develop your skills, you might come back to it, and make it a real 'tour de force'. The final verse is excellent. I enjoyed your rhyming.
Comment is about Integrated (blog)
Original item by Wonderer
Is this a metaphor for 'old age'? As of a 'once beautiful' woman? Or do I need to be more literal?
Comment is about Used Art (blog)
Original item by Miranda Fegan
Woulda
Shoulda
Coulda
The song of the stock market player and the romantic
Comment is about The Argument (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas
Welcome to WOL. You certainly sound like a well-rounded young lady who will have many avenues to explore through your writing. A sense of 'wonder' is surely the most essential gift a poet can have. And then - application.
Comment is about Sarah Mae (poet profile)
Original item by Sarah Mae
The theme is current and potent, with a fine ending that wraps the story well.
Comment is about R.T.U. (blog)
Original item by Duncan McKenzie Ross
Terrific little piece; history in x syllables. Who needs books?
Comment is about HEADS AND TALES (blog)
Original item by ray pool
This is lovely, beautifully scripted, even if I'm not exactly sure what you are saying. I'm presuming 'death', but not certain.
Comment is about Cast (blog)
Original item by Terry Jones
Lovely new name. My sister is Rhea.
Comment is about Ria Richardson (poet profile)
Original item by Ria Richardson
Mon 11th Dec 2017 19:12
Look like it’s just you and I for the hadron Cynthia..sorry but no guarantee on re-assemblage. I think that’s why the others chickend out. Could be curious though.
All the best Des
Comment is about Poem of a moment (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Mon 11th Dec 2017 18:51
Thank you Ria much appreciated that you love it.
All the best des
Comment is about Intruder (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Sea Spray Lover
He waved goodbye
I cried thinking
what could heal
my broken heart?
Hi there babe
hot bronzed surfer
care to ride
high flying waves?
Tears wiped away
grabbing his board
I was truly
in love again.
The theme for tonight is waves.
Comment is about Write Out Loud at Stockport art gallery tonight (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hi Ray
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. I think that too many people ignore or just cannot see the infinite beauty that surrounds us everywhere; from the mundane or everyday, the smallest to the greatest, the natural world is its own poetry, its own reality. I hope David Attenborough would agree.
Thanks again.
Chris
Comment is about 'Great White Heron' by Chris Hubbard is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I don't remember shades of blue, but I was on Messenger. It was a long time ago.
Comment is about Letting Go of the Lotus Flower (14\\2/10) (blog)
Original item by John Turner
To be honest I've not seen this form in use before.
I really like the piece, its content and clever references but I do not think it works in this almost mirror image style.
I would have still voted for the first half as POTw however.
Good work
Comment is about 'Aubade' by Terry Jones is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Excellent Stu!
..like a motorway system designed by a madman
the veins of something not quite there..
Thanks for sharing.
Suki
Comment is about i search for love on a cold dead morning (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
Too true! Art now is a cattle market for people who know the price of everything and the value of..not much.
Suki
Comment is about Used Art (blog)
Original item by Miranda Fegan
A fabulous antidote the the Christmas carol!
Good work Ray!
Suki
Comment is about HEADS AND TALES (blog)
Original item by ray pool
anmy
Mon 11th Dec 2017 09:52
No one knows what will happen in the next second, just like quicksand can not catch the same.
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Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #24 {Unsolved Mysteries} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
Ta for y'note on me final haiku Stu. Reckon it just about sums up everything for me at the moment, surrounded as we are by madmen.
Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)
Original item by Stuart Buck
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 11th Dec 2017 08:43
Wow your writing is very impressive .. Follows a very prose story style
Comment is about Natasha Tingle (poet profile)
Original item by Natasha Tingle
The pace and languid style really support the nature of the bird Chris; I have tried the three line approach and always find that it leaves air to breathe yet impels one on. A really lovely studied poem that inspired us to consider the subject. I wonder if David Attenborough appreciates poetry? If so this would be a fitting study for him. Congratulations on being chosen this week.
Ray
Comment is about 'Great White Heron' by Chris Hubbard is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hello Phillip,
I wanted to say thank you so much for the nice comment on my blog it's much appreciated and so far from what I'm reading from your post and poetry his outstanding and I really enjoyed reading it and I'm going to read some more but thank you for so much for the nice comments on my blog and I really liked BREAK-DOWN a BREAK-UP. Beautifully written!
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Comment is about Phillip Kelly (poet profile)
Original item by Phillip Kelly
Oh thank you Patrick same here because I just got started knowing you and it wouldn't be fair to either of us well stay sweet always because you are in prayers ??
I like the way you said that it got me by surprise a bit but brought a smile to my face!
Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #19 {Living Death Traps} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
<Deleted User> (16099)
Sun 10th Dec 2017 16:55
I will be a knock on your casket saying "hey let me in " we are not done knowing each other yet.and anything less would just not be fair to either of us..my prayers always to you..
Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #19 {Living Death Traps} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
You have a very unique style that very different to mine....i have to write poetry to a set stucture form... But yours is like free verse.... But very effective in portraying emotion... I wish i could write in yoir poetic style.... Also... I too have a form of brain disease and write erotica
Comment is about Chiari Warrior Soldier (poet profile)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier
<Deleted User> (18474)
Sun 10th Dec 2017 16:20
Hi Stu.
This poem instantly reminded me of being a kid, when on a summers day I used to love closing my eyes so I could see the pink of my eye lids and watch the patterns the dust made floating on my corneas. I'd forgotten about it until now. Bizarre I know, a little like your poem. What ever made you think of it?
Enjoyed it very much. Beno.
Comment is about i search for love on a cold dead morning (blog)
Original item by Stuart Buck
And you power on - with crucial observations and deftness of touch. Great to see you online today. Season's Greetings .
Comment is about Strange to think... (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
Earl Yarington
Sun 10th Dec 2017 14:40
Yes, there is a kind of love for them that is so difficult to put into words. You do well to express them here.
Comment is about My daughter (blog)
Original item by Shruti
Count me in! Dare I presume re-assemblage of parts at the end, basically in the same order? And if not, what an excellent subject to consider.
Comment is about Poem of a moment (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS
Hello Ray! Your 'youthful' photo is quite something! Liked Heads and tales. Gruesome and concentrated, and food for thought.
Jennifer
Comment is about HEADS AND TALES (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Tina Glover
Tue 12th Dec 2017 09:36
? Rose,
Thank you for your nice comment on this one and I do appreciate it and keep it in mind and you keep the amazing work to!
☺️☺️
Comment is about Diary Of The Southern Queen Entry #26 {Rose's Are Red Poems #2} (blog)
Original item by Chiari Warrior Soldier