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Tina Glover

Thu 14th Dec 2017 13:45

Thank you Jemima Jones and I'm glad you like them

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Tina Glover

Thu 14th Dec 2017 13:44

Thank you anmy I sure will

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Chris Hubbard

Thu 14th Dec 2017 10:30

Hello Jemima,

I'm very pleased to know that you have enjoyed reading this remembrance of my mother. I wonder if John Lennon was right when he wrote "All you need is love".

Chris

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Thu 14th Dec 2017 08:44

Like this lots Rich. I was just reading a recent quote by Bill Gates who said that we need new tools to deal with climate change but I reckon we have all the tools we need at our disposal, we just need the right leadership to learn quick how to use them. Thanks for posting. Col.

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Lyrical Lexa

Thu 14th Dec 2017 03:15

Not too shabby for a hunk of junk. Our moon. Love this Cynthia

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Lyrical Lexa

Thu 14th Dec 2017 03:11

Those last few lines. I've always felt that way. What a gift.

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Lyrical Lexa

Thu 14th Dec 2017 03:09

Excellent. Love this Terry.

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Lyrical Lexa

Thu 14th Dec 2017 03:06

Thank you Turtle and Jemima. Knowing you guys can relate makes all the difference. Someone once told me "good things come to those who wait" while I was feeling this way. Of course you hate to hear that while you're hurt but it's so true. I imagine letting go is kind of like closing your eyes when you're getting a shot at the doctor's, waiting for this terrible pain, only to open your eyes & realize it wasn't that bad after it's over.

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 22:36

sorry I do not hopefully cory does..

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Turtle Rawdon

Wed 13th Dec 2017 22:26

I honestly relate to that. It hurts but in the end it's all the same. Saying goodbye.

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 21:09

whoever that person is go get him tina

I look forward to your next book let me know where I can get it..

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Samkelo

Wed 13th Dec 2017 17:30

this is just good to me,poems will increase my writing, so I love this platform I must say so.

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Jemima Jones

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:45

a very well written piece Charlotte.Thank you.Jemima.

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Jemima Jones

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:38

all in all a simply wonderful poem Chris.Thank you.Jemima.

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Jemima Jones

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:35

a great description of the subject Ria.Thank you.Jemima.

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anmy

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:22

I hope you continue to update your blog,Look forward to reading your blog next time.
http://fightfor.ebcoo.net/??

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Jemima Jones

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:21

beautiful piece of rhyming Lexa.Thank you.Jemima.

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Jemima Jones

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:10

such a joy reading your poems Tina.Thank you.Jemima.

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Hazem Karim

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:02

watch online and download latest movies with high quality and subtitles at https://mydownloadtube.to/

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Stu Buck

Wed 13th Dec 2017 15:34

excellent little piece. could go either way, to nostalgic romance or poe-like creepiness. clever.

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Stu Buck

Wed 13th Dec 2017 15:32

oddly romantic and quirky. so a ray pool masterclass then

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Stu Buck

Wed 13th Dec 2017 15:28

hi guys,

thanks so much for your lovely comments, sorry for the delay in replying

beno - i simply opened my eyes one morning and new i had to write this down

suki - that was my favourite bit too!

cynthia - lovely comments thank you. not sure about narcissism, but i definitely have the confidence now to write exactly what i desire, knowing it will come out better than if i tried to pander to positivity and praise. if that makes sense!

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220August

Wed 13th Dec 2017 14:16

Thanks Ray. How's that? (I can't remember if each stop (Period) was like a "Step" taken originally. Today I agree with you.

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 13th Dec 2017 14:14

Thanks Colin. Yes, with the world outside my window covered in ice, trying to think warm thoughts!

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Nigel Astell

Wed 13th Dec 2017 14:02

If I read this poem three times will I understand it better than just reading it once.

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Chris Armstrong

Wed 13th Dec 2017 09:07

I loved the kitchen imagery - the table, the curtains, and so on - as Adam says each reading brings something new. Not the least because of the ambiguity of the key line: "My mother leaned against dreams" - is she supported by them or is she working against them? I wonder!

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 08:00

that's warmed me up nicely Trevor - thanks. Roll on summer!

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 07:30

I feel all Christmassey now. That calls for a mince pie. Lol.
Noted the way the rhymes fall in this poem. It all sounds just right to me. Lovely.
Beno.

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 02:17

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Wed 13th Dec 2017 02:15

Nice imagery.

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Tom Harding

Tue 12th Dec 2017 23:09

I think u promised to let you guys know when the book was available - https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/191158703X/ref=cm_sw_r_fa_apa_kVZjAbMVQRPQE

No hard sell but might make for a nice alternative Xmas present? either way would love to know what you guys think

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Tom Harding

Tue 12th Dec 2017 23:06

Thanks Cynthia, seasons greetings to you too!

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Tom Harding

Tue 12th Dec 2017 23:05

Thanks for the comment MC yes I like the analogy of the different classes...! I should have included that

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Tom Harding

Tue 12th Dec 2017 23:03

Hi all, thanks for the comments. Very kind as usual! Thanks for asking Ray yes at last the book is available now...
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/191158703X/ref=cm_sw_r_fa_apa_kVZjAbMVQRPQE

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raypool

Tue 12th Dec 2017 21:57

A haunting by the isolation within crowds - the imposition of thoughts on vast tracts unknowable Tom. (Or I am trying to write a poem as a comment?) You do manage to transport US and that's the main thing. Any news re your book yet?

Ray

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raypool

Tue 12th Dec 2017 21:38

A very nice idea this 220 A. You are kept in a state of suspension while ascending. With respect I preferred not to have the full stops- although on second thoughts just lose the ones after Runs and Space, so as to get a sort of stop - go sense. Or play with it - or totally ignore me whatever. Just an idea !

Ray

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John Turner

Tue 12th Dec 2017 19:54

Ah well, nice to hear from you. Drop me a message via inbox if you want to swap details.

All the bezzy

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raypool

Tue 12th Dec 2017 19:19

HI Jennifer. Thank you - Me in 1964. We can all dream! Glad you enjoyed this vignette. Sometimes I spend more time on the shorter ones (for impact) - good practise.

Yes Suki , a grim subject but its more my humour that i'm presenting. Glad you liked it.

Thanks Cynthia. History shown in sharp relief(from the dark side).

Mark, Yes how true - don't muck abaht with the powers what was !

I appreciate all your comments , a bit like cracking open a puzzle and difficult to elaborate on.

It's lovely too to get all the likes ! Col, David, 220 August and Beno.

Ray

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:49

Beautiful poetry....It touches my heart....The love between mother and daughter is eternal...

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:46

I feel a heaven like peace in my mind when read these words...

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:43

Excellent...true power of an woman shown in the poetry...

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:40

Awesome...yes everyone need to be strong...lovely writing...very inspiring

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:37

very heart touching...The poet has create magic with her poetry...I feel the words seem to be live when I read...

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:31

very emotional...heart touching...

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Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:29

Splendid....Excellent....This poem reminds myself and encourage me and shows me rays of hope and positiveness when I am depressed....The words are heart touching....

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John Coopey

Tue 12th Dec 2017 17:41

Thanks, MC.

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dorinda macdowell

Tue 12th Dec 2017 17:04

What a wonderful meeting it was yesterday evening! - I just love our group!
Love from D x

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Tue 12th Dec 2017 16:51

Shaakiera,thank you for helping to spread peace and kindness in this troubled world.A Merry Christmas and happy New Year to you and yours.Keep up the good work!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 12th Dec 2017 16:37

I like the railway/station analogy of our travel through life & could imagine "the passed" crowding along platforms lit by
the old hissing gas lamps trying to make way for the
newly arrived. I found myself thinking...1st, 2nd or 3rd
class?...depending on the price paid in life's journey.

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Tue 12th Dec 2017 16:37

Hi, Tina and a warm welcome to you brave lady.Thanks so much for liking 'swimming with loan sharks'. Yes, your writing is certainly free flowing and delightful-keep it up! I sincerely hope you can get better and as soon as possible.

Enjoy your time on here and I look forward to more of your poems. Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to you and yours.

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