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Sun 10th Dec 2017 08:20

brilliant Louis - love it!

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kJ Walker

Sun 10th Dec 2017 07:21

Keep speaking your mind Wendy.
I don't always agree with everything you say, but i always admire you for having the courage to say it.

Cheers Kevin

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Tina Glover

Sun 10th Dec 2017 06:28

Thank you dear Patrick you are a nice person with a kind soul bless you for your support ?☺️?

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Sun 10th Dec 2017 01:18

I will always support you in any way that I can .. always

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Ria Richardson

Sun 10th Dec 2017 00:17

Perfectly written

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Ria Richardson

Sun 10th Dec 2017 00:15

I love this

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 9th Dec 2017 23:55

Hi Ray - thanks for the comment on my blog. I do believe
there's a place for cynicism - purely on the grounds that
I also believe that "cynicism is the last resort of idealism".

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John Coopey

Sat 9th Dec 2017 23:38

Thanks, Leon. But I've never believed that "others" have the monopoly of shite ideas. We all do.

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Natalie Rupik

Sat 9th Dec 2017 23:25

this is beautiful but so sad

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DESMOND CHILDS

Sat 9th Dec 2017 22:16

Hi Ray,
A very slippery nature of a subject,and as you say we can indulge
So I think you I and Stu should get our coats on and nip over to the hadron collider and see if they will shoot us round a few times and see what happens. Cynthia,Rose,C?l and Fred welcome too. lol

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<Deleted User> (18474)

Sat 9th Dec 2017 22:13

Really resonated with me this poem. Thank you. Beno.

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Miranda Fegan

Sat 9th Dec 2017 22:05

Just wanted to thank you for your lovely comment on my poem Snow Day. I appreciate how concise you were in why you liked it; it's not something we get every day and it's helpful when building one's talent.

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Mira

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Julian (Admin)

Sat 9th Dec 2017 21:22

Sounds as though it more than soldiered on, becoming one of those "you should have been there events". Well done Mssrs Spoz, Doyle and McGonigal.

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 19:01

Great imagery for a subject such as this. Blue eggs, blue birds, blue roses, blue skies, everything fits together so well. Great poem.

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 18:58

Sometimes things that are the most difficult to attain are also worth the most. Peace of mind is priceless. Good poem here.

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Rich

Sat 9th Dec 2017 17:00

well put.

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Sat 9th Dec 2017 16:37

John their ideas are such stuff that shite is made of.Enjoyed the spoofer

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 14:25

its llangollen ray, a beautiful area and lovely railway. i used to live near pickering in yorkshire too, another cracker.

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 14:13

Impressively different and challenging Des. In view of the slippery nature of the subject we can be indulged endlessly which gives it a certain charm and relevance to other kindred matters. Blimey, i'll get me coat!

Ray

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Chris Armstrong

Sat 9th Dec 2017 14:12

Well, I hope so! Although generations tend to spread geographically more than 50 or 60 years ago! But when my sons were still at home we virtually always ate around the table - its such a cosy time to catch up!

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 14:03

Here is the hijacking of a genuine humanitarianism by the commercial wizards who know every trick in the book - well expressed Jennifer. I like the comparison you make with the biblical concept of giving. Where did we go wrong? Much of what we celebrate at Xmas goes to landfill - another problem!

Ray

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:52

HI Rose. I'm glad this ticked a box for you - no reason why ladies shouldn't equally enjoy being transported back to nostalgic times! My parents never owned a car so went everywhere by train; magic times. Blackpool saw big crowds coming by train (still open), again before cars. Just think, no car parking fees then! I'll check out Ted Nugent ....
Thanks for responding.

Thanks Hannah, appreciated. I might follow this up the nostalgia trail with one in a similar vein ....

Yes Leon. They do pack quite a punch - back in the day they were rather sad and dirty and leaking in the sixties(a bit like me now). Thanks mate.

Stu very pleased you like this. I am thinking you might be referring to the Llandudno branch or is it Wrexham?
I love railway poetry especially Adlestrop. How lucky to be close to such treasures! All the best to you.

Thanks also, Beno, Col and David. Appreciated.

Dream on everyone. Ray

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Nigel Astell

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:33

Sack full of poems
to be let loose
at Oldknow in Marple
by the merry poets
of Write Out Loud
posters with festive details
posted all over town!

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:12

tense and off-putting (in a good way). like watching a david lynch film with chinese subtitles

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:11

intense summer nights. how lovely ray, i am but a slip of a man compared to thee, but i too love the steam railway near my house and can feel the sun on the nape of my neck as i read this.

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:10

science and poetry collide, as if shot together in the large hadron collider, creating something beautiful and crisp.

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:08

such effortless writing laura, the transition from line two to three is beautiful.

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:04

lovely meowku

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Sat 9th Dec 2017 11:55

Great collection. I love 'My People' and 'In Praise Of Arguing'. Kim runs a brilliant group of young poets (Dove Cottage Young Poets) and the Kendal Poetry Festival she organises with Po Yarwood goes from strength to strength.
: )

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 11:15

HI Mark . Re my first comment to you re Mr Khan's motives: cynicism is perhaps a too barbed word and not in keeping with the impression I have of you - so please overlook this please - got carried away!

Ray

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 11:12

HI Mark . I just wanted to retract my claim on a recent post about Your "cynicism being intact" re Sadiq Khan. I didn't wish to imply that your approach to life is cynical, in fact you have a shrewd observational skill, which may include elements of cynicism as in that case. It's hard to all things to all men, and I try to be lively and immediate in replying to comments, and to broaden contexts. So, please take this as a one-off. I would hate to think you got the wrong idea!

Have a good Christmas and vive les comments.


Ray

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John Coopey

Sat 9th Dec 2017 09:17

Thanks, Fred. Although it does reflect my own views on Brexit I do adopt a blunderbuss approach to parody. I've posted proBrexit stuff, anti-Conservative, anti-Labour, anti-Corbyn, anti-May etc. If they're stood up, they're fair game.

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 02:59

Good form in the poem, and it flows well.

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 02:58

Fuck Trump. Great poem.

Comment is about Hashtag Arrogance (blog)

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 02:51

Anyone can rhyme, but only those that try really persevere. I especially enjoy the concept of this, as I enjoy to rhyme.

Comment is about Mime Rhyme, slightly different (blog)

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Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 02:49

Everyone has a story to tell, compile yours and tell it. Very concise poem.

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Rick Varden

Fri 8th Dec 2017 23:24

Absolute unbridled brilliance!

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Big Sal

Fri 8th Dec 2017 23:24

Great poem, very thought provoking in its substance, and an enjoyable read.

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Rick Varden

Fri 8th Dec 2017 23:22

Stuff it, politics aside this poem is absolutely brilliant, witty, clever, I LOVE IT. well done. Send it to The Speaker!

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Rick Varden

Fri 8th Dec 2017 23:15

Quite brilliant Connor

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Rick Varden

Fri 8th Dec 2017 23:12

Great piece, good job, well done Miranda.

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Connorlannes

Fri 8th Dec 2017 22:58

Wow, I really love this piece, Miranda. It balances between very obscure imagery and a decisive plot that I'm a very big fan of.

Can't wait to read more!

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<Deleted User> (17847)

Fri 8th Dec 2017 22:50

besides making me hungry Chris,this cosy piece has also got me wondering if we can hold onto the tradition of dining together as a family.

It really is so important in so many ways

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Fri 8th Dec 2017 22:43

nice piece Ray.A lot has to be said for the guys who restore these beautiful beasts as well

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Tina Glover

Fri 8th Dec 2017 22:05

Yes I have been fortunate enough to meet Mr.Right and we will go the distance and then what God has in store for us because no one on the planet knows what will stand the test of times but we try to make things last and work but life can change at any given moment and that I don't take that for granted... But when I write it's not always about me it's thing's that surrounds me or that inspires me...But thank you for wishing me the best of luck and may you have that kind of relationship some day if you don't already... Thank you!

Tina?

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John Coopey

Fri 8th Dec 2017 21:34

The short answer, Jemima, is that nobody knows. Which, to my mind, was a bloody good reason for not voting "Leave".

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 8th Dec 2017 20:43

Beautiful poetry. A glimpse into a childhood.
Look forward to more.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 8th Dec 2017 20:06

I love the title of this and it is an important issue, handled very well in this poem.

Hannah

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Jemima Jones

Fri 8th Dec 2017 18:44

made a good job of it John.Will this mess end in tears and or tatters I ask? Thank you.Jemima.

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DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 8th Dec 2017 17:30

Thank you Cynthia and Rose, I very much appreciate your comments. I am glad you have both enjoyed this poem.

All the best Des

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