Bawdy fun well executed. It reminds me of something
heard years ago.
Ist guy (admiring a passing girl): She got what it takes!
2nd guy: No - she's got it. You've got what it takes!
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Comment is about Great Expectations! (blog)
Original item by John Andrew Nield
We travel in opposite directions, MC. As ever (and for you others too) your thoughts are always welcome.
Comment is about PEPE THE SHEEP SHAGGER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
I'd vote for this. Admirably succinct in its presentation.
Comment is about Ballot Cross (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
A rewarding "mood" piece that poetry can do so well.
I can almost smell the paper on those dusty shelves and
see the glint of sunlight filtering over old books.
i might have been tempted to use "breezed" rather than
"waltzed" to lead to the thunderstorm departure.
Comment is about How It Happens (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
patricia Hughes
Mon 12th Jun 2017 14:12
Thank you for such positive comments Dominic and Julian.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I find these varied opinions stimulating! On a personal
level, I always suspected Blair's on/off smile as less
than sincere. A test for "smilers" is to see how long the
smile remains. The genuine article tends to fade rather
than be "switched off" (the old light bulb!). He (like
Obama) came in - greeted like some young Messiah,
and there's nowhere left from there but down. From
another personal POV, I can't forgive his double act with
Blunkett- abandoning UK borders to the world and its
dog: the effects of which were, are, and will be felt
in many ways, not least the pressure on our essential
social services and our vulnerable countryside as these
islands try to accommodate the demands of the added millions and their offspring even as the Western world
becomes less reliant on human employment and more on
artificial/electronic additions to the work and leisure
environments.
As for Mr Corbyn, he offers another variety of hope but in my lifetime I've never seen a Labour administration that handles the money competently or carefully.
Comment is about PEPE THE SHEEP SHAGGER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Hi MC - Gotham has lost a hero and Family guy has lost a mayor. Thanks for feedback :)
Comment is about Batman (Adam West) R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Hi Rose - it's sad when we lose another Superhero :(. - Family Guy will need a new mayor lol. T :)
Comment is about Batman (Adam West) R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Nice one! I didn't know he'd had a late career surge
doing a voice for "Family Guy" (wasn't it?). I recall the
original TV series - with the likes of Frank Gorshin and
Cesar Romero doing their inimitable thing in support of
the star and his sidekick.
Comment is about Batman (Adam West) R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Congratulations Patricia. Familiar, evocative and terribly hard. I think Julian has it right, very moving, well written and brave. Best wishes, Dom.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
We travel in opposite directions, Lancs.
Comment is about PEPE THE SHEEP SHAGGER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 12th Jun 2017 11:33
and such a nice guy in real life as well Tom.
yep,R.I.P. Adam.
Rose ?
Comment is about Batman (Adam West) R.I.P. (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Hello everyone! My apologies as I cannot be at WOL this evening; I've come down with a sore throat/cold - but hope you have a great evening!
Also, to let you know that my friend Christine won't be there either - she has to have a major operation on Wednesday (if you're believers, please say a prayer for her!)
Thanks so much - love, Dorinda x
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Very moving, very well written, very brave. Thank you for sharing your superb poem with us all.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Lan I love this. So powerful. Trust me.
I love it because it is so so Zen. Ponder on this:
"It is the silence between notes that makes the music, it is the spaces between bars that cages the tiger."
I always believe that stillness is a source of great strength.
In fact I believe silence brings out all the splendours within us and through that silence our dance begins!!!
Some more pleeeease!
Be blessed.
Raj
Comment is about The Gathering of Forces (blog)
Original item by Lan
Thanks Colin, I'm with you on the last line! I've amended. I was teetering on it when I put it in.
Thanks for the comments on the art, I'll take that compliment. That was my era and music at the time so I maybe subliminally influenced!
Comment is about How It Happens (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
Lancs - It is indeed a salutary lesson to consider what Labour might have achieved were it not for refuseniks like myself who decided after 45 years of doing so not to vote for them this time.
Comment is about PEPE THE SHEEP SHAGGER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
In the interests of balance, perhaps it is worth reading what our friends from over the pond think of our most recent deliberations
http://www.newyorker.com/news/daily-comment/the-book-of-jeremy-corbyn
Comment is about PEPE THE SHEEP SHAGGER (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 12th Jun 2017 08:52
I love the mix of Spanish and English alongside Bruno Mars and Roman mythology.
I think the first two verses work really well but for me the third is less convincing perhaps because of the word 'dolor' which is rather an oddity. I'm not sure but it might be spelt 'dolour'. It's not a word I am familiar with.
all the best
Colin
Comment is about Unrequited Love (blog)
Original item by Juan Pablo Lynch
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 12th Jun 2017 08:40
excellent Raymondo - you surprised me with Dwayne and Erica from Amerika, I was expecting a plot from China or Russia.
Tom raises an interesting point and one which in some ways is already with us in the form of internet connected household appliances which are vulnerable to cyber attack. We're all basically toast.
cheers,
Col
Comment is about SILVERSIDES v CHARRINGTON (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 12th Jun 2017 08:26
think I'd be tempted to ditch that last line Tom - it has a touch of teenage angst about it which rather spoils the maturity of an otherwise excellent poem and in a way only serves to restate what has already been hinted at quite eloquently.
I like the juxtaposition of librarian and traipsing very much. Should there be an 'of' between 'middle' and 'my'?
Your artwork is such a joyous accompaniment to your words and reminds me of early 80's British Indie pop record covers. I hope that's a compliment - it's meant to be.
all the best
Colin
Comment is about How It Happens (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
I like this Shonda. There seems to be a note of fatality, a kind of defeatist tone at the end. Perhaps a gem going unappreciated and undiscovered?
The title is spot on.
How about an upbeat one next where you have sprouted into something fresh?
Thanks for sharing.
Raj
Comment is about Shell of Myself (blog)
Original item by Shonda Hurley Bell
intriguing stuff ray! i couldn't help but think of a podcast i recently listened to about how the future will bring criminal cases involving robots with the increasing automation of life e.g. automated cars etc.
Comment is about SILVERSIDES v CHARRINGTON (blog)
Original item by ray pool
really like some of the imagery here, particularly the moth holding court in the corner of the room
Comment is about Behind The Veil (blog)
Original item by Seanin Hughes
hi all, thanks for your kind comments. I'm not sure this one came out right so appreciate the thoughts.
Comment is about Midsummer (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
Tommy the really sad thing about the Labour Party is how the exodus of big hitters like Chuka etc now sees them crawling back to offer their services to JC. I hope he's got the balls to tell them to f**k off.
Comment is about 15 hours (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Just read CAD's attempt at rubbishing May. Quite frankly I've seen better on WOL!
Comment is about Tony Walsh gives poetic verdict on election result alongside Carol Ann Duffy (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Yours beats mine hands down rhythmically, Harry. The limerick is made for the hanging last syllable.
Comment is about WINNERS AND LOSERS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Graham nearly 500,000 people have joined the Labour Party since Corbyn. The anti-Corbyn GUARDIAN headlined warnings of the Labour Party is in danger of the membership falling below 400,000 3 months ago! Harry claims the meteoric rise in membership is due to UKip deserting ranks. Now you're blaming students (with a wink) re grants- well whyever not? The youth (like us all) have many issues. People have not stopped slagging off Corbyn despite more than doubling membership; winning two internal elections and scoring an amazing comeback from a national election- don't you think the leader and membership deserve some credit? ;- )
Comment is about 15 hours (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
patricia Hughes
Sun 11th Jun 2017 22:32
Thank you Kevin.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I sense a sort of weary acceptance and the reflection of the mind out on a leash Tom. A lovely pensive delicacy runs through it, and shows you have a fine feeling for the subtle pleasure and how cunningly set up they can be, and easily they depart. The last three lines are brilliant to my mind.
Ray
Comment is about Midsummer (blog)
Original item by Tom Harding
John,
Can I help it if the sheer twinned recognition
of the double-sidedness of the result (exemplified
by the juxtapositions of `win` and `defeat` in those
two last lines) caused a fit of limerickle inspiration.?
(your kind of stuff is catching man!) ?
Comment is about WINNERS AND LOSERS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Tommy, that 150,000 are all prospective students holding their hands out for tuition fee money. I don't think they realised they had to win the election first!
Comment is about 15 hours (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
We'll deserved POTW .very honest, and couldn't have been an easy write. Your daughter has every right to be proud.
Kevin
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Every little breeze seems to whisper Louise (an old song I know) ! This is wonderfully soft and cuddly and really gets close i'm sure to a maternal instinct !
Ray
Comment is about Baby (blog)
Original item by Louise Clarke
I like the way this "feels" so lonely. Your sparse use of language conveys so much.
Comment is about Absolute Dark (blog)
Original item by Rik Hall
Yes I am going to be a grandma soon. It is for my daughter in law and son xxx
Comment is about Baby (blog)
Original item by Louise Clarke
patricia Hughes
Sun 11th Jun 2017 20:59
Thank you Seanin,
I wasn't expecting it to be made poem of the week,I'm really rather chuffed,it has given me a little burst of confidence.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Beautiful. I could imagine this on a card for a new baby, or to be given to an expectant mum, but it's too good for that. Was it written with someone special in mind?
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about Baby (blog)
Original item by Louise Clarke
Very proud daughter here! Well done, mum - it's an incredibly honest and evocative piece.
Comment is about 'The day my dad went mad' by Patricia Hughes is Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Chaps the Conservatives are in disarray: Labour has increased its membership by another 150,000 in the last week. Corbyn's position is strengthened and another election more than likely. The Tories need to be kept under pressure. Viva! Tommy
Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)
Original item by Harry O`N eill
Chaps the Conservatives are in disarray: Labour has increased its membership by another 150,000 in the last week. Corbyn's position is strengthened and another election more than likely. The Tories need to be kept under pressure. Viva!
Comment is about 15 hours (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Brilliant!!
A superb piece I loved it. I would love to see this performed. The poem, not the act ?.Well done John.
Comment is about Great Expectations! (blog)
Original item by John Andrew Nield
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 11th Jun 2017 17:52
welcome Seanin! haha! that mad hatters hat tells us a lot about you.
A lot of politicians should be wearing them as well
don't you think?
Great sample also!
P&S xx
Comment is about Seanin Hughes (poet profile)
Original item by Seanin Hughes
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 11th Jun 2017 17:00
another very precious neccessary player on the wonderous stage of nature Wendy.
Lovely poem dear.
P&S xx
Comment is about Song Bird (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 11th Jun 2017 16:54
my husband and I think this is spiffing Seanin.
P&S xx
Comment is about I'd Be Queen Of Myself (if I weren't anti-monarchy) (blog)
Original item by Seanin Hughes
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 11th Jun 2017 16:52
'trying to access? theres no trying about it Sky you have succeeded brilliantly!
P&S xx
Comment is about Writing Without (blog)
Original item by Sky
Interesting times, indeed, MC.
Comment is about LAND OF HOPE AND JACKANORY (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Pack it in, Harry. I don't mind you writing better stuff than me but there's no need to stick on my blog!
Comment is about WINNERS AND LOSERS (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Harry O'Neill
Mon 12th Jun 2017 14:45
A common fact of the rise of the populism movement in both Britain and America is the fact of almost full employment in both countries.
In Britain there is also - of course - Government subsidy in the form of in work benefits leading to low productivity and static earnings....In America there seems to be a desire to return to economic and political isolationism...
The word being looked upon with growing suspicion in
the old Western industrial sphere is `Globalization`
The best exposition of what is facing us is - in my opinion-
Philip Hammond`s speech at Davos:
https://www.gov.uk/government/speeches/davos-2017-chancellors-speech-at-the-cbis-british-business-leaders-lunch.
Today, one can well understand the antagonism between Hammond and `hard Brexit`May which caused her to keep him practically silent during the election campaign.
Convinced Conservative that Hammond is allowed for, This is well worth a careful read.
Comment is about 15 hours (blog)
Original item by Tommy Carroll