this is amazing. splinters building bows of ships. wow.

Comment is about karaoke 4 (06/08/2016) (blog)

Original item by Zach Dafoe

You should have more confidence, your poem is beautiful!

Comment is about Mighty Darkness (blog)

Original item by Monami Kundu

I'm so glad that one of my poems became close to your heart, that's the nicest comment, thankyou!

Take care

- Jade

Comment is about Monami Kundu (poet profile)

Original item by Monami Kundu

Thankyou so much for your comment on 'a boys pride'

I'm glad you agreed with some of my points and humor is not my forte, so I'm really grateful you thought it worked well.

Take care!

- Jade

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

thnku....I needed the encouragement

Comment is about Mighty Darkness (blog)

Original item by Monami Kundu

oh my sainted Aunt! "lick my body into life"does this include the use of yoghurt? watchout! this poem will draw the guys,like wasps to a jam jar Lynn!!! Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about sensual awakening (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Thank you so much Lynn for your comments on Sinus Rhythm and Taste. As well as on my profile page :) I look forward to going back on your page and reading your posts xx

Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Lynn - who woke you, or should I say aroused you into writing of your carnal desires? Lucky man, whoever it was!
Rob xx

Comment is about sensual awakening (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Ray - there's a lot to like here. I think my favourite line is 'Cascades of guts pushed back to a stubbled hill'. Derelict buildings/works are fascinating places.
Rob

Comment is about INDUSTRIAL WASTELAND (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Hi Charity.Not only do I love this poem,but I also find the title and the poem itself,goes almost hand in hand with the poem I'm posting shortly.How spooky! Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about Queen (blog)

Original item by Charity Kosta

Ray - in this 'disposable' age the analogy of such a mundane object being passed down through generations is probably unique. Well thought through piece this. I like it a lot.
Rob

Comment is about THE PAINT KETTLE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Ray - I've never had this affection for four wheels, but I can appreciate the value of feelings portrayed in a good poem. Nice writing mate.
Rob

Comment is about AT WATFORD GAP (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Ray -my favourite tipple used to recall another pleasant experience. I love the combination. Well written sir!
Rob

Comment is about SOUTHERN COMFORT (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Ray - something dark and seedy about this one and yet the piece does flow well, as pointed out already.
Rob

Comment is about SACRIFICIAL WINE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Thanks David for your comment. I feel like the invisible man at the moment, so very nice to have got a response
and I rewrote this three times to simplify it. The curtains letting light in was just an idea to compound the situation that the process of change will start on the physical level and the march of the internet yes ! A slight teaser maybe at the end. Thanks .

Thanks also Lynn Bless yer. x

Comment is about A FRIEND IS WAITING (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Good little story, well written, I enjoyed this, Ray.

Comment is about A FRIEND IS WAITING (blog)

Original item by ray pool

dark dreams feelings stir
thinking pain must stop
this poem tells me
impossible is your punishment.

Comment is about Forsaken (blog)

Original item by Katy Megan

Awww thankyou u so much and this poen describes a common problem in life where ure bestfriend does not like ure boyfriend lol @jade kelly

Comment is about The flow does not like the sun (blog)

Original item by Abstract Mystery

Hello David,

A very provocative piece..

The trade market and nation-wide economy is shrouded in mystery to most of us, as we only catch glimpses of it and are mostly disinterested beyond our own micro-economies..

But, your blog post brought about a search of some bit of truth..and thanks for that

elPintor

Comment is about The Jolly Merchant Bankers (blog)

Original item by David Lindsay

Hey, Tommy,

"The [certainty/absurdity/assumptions] of mathematics and ones inability to describe/define what we experience."

I read this over and over and am still reading it. These kinds of things seem to feed my attention deficit in an odd sort of way..my eyes keep flitting back and forth to specific terms and phrases.

Anyway, a few things really stand out to me..

1..inter-dimensionality of sound and movement--great use of "sound" like sobbing, wailing, howling and the mention of the indiscrete quality of movement
2..uncertainty principle and changeover--enjoyed your use of "scientific" terms intermixed with those poetic--like, you can know where something is yet not know how fast it is going; or, how fast, yet not be certain of its position
3..confluence of ideas--i.e. poetry, science, words, mathematics--necessitating either revision of previous postulate or a formation of a new postulate in 1.5..

Interesting stuff..I have a only little knowledge of the scientific aspect of certain terms but a great appreciation of your use of analogy of scientific/mathematical terms to describe less mundane aspects of existence..

Very cool.

elP

Comment is about Paradoxes: 1; 2; 1.5 and (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

What can I say, I have known a lot of people who have survived at all costs.

and a lot of people who have died before their time

the closer the family the harder is the pain

don't let the trick cyclists win kick em where it hurts

Comment is about In Her Eyes (blog)

Original item by Nicole

Already done the posh clobber, Rose, the wedding was last Saturday, and I made do with a fascinator!

I wasn't too affected by the watery eyes bit, which was just as well as I had agreed to write a personalised poem for the happy couple and read it out in the church!

Thanks for your good luck wishes.

Thank you Bill.

Comment is about Son's Wedding (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

next stop,the posh clobber shop Lynn.Don't forget the big hat,you'll need it when the watery eyes start making a mess of your mascara!


Good luck to all concerned.


Rose.x

Comment is about Son's Wedding (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

M.C.,
Are you sure you`re not related to Masefield?

( Im reading this after Jonathan Humbles` spoon one. his
rhyming rocks along comfortably, this one has got me feared
of the sea-sickness!)

It`s exitin` though!

(football`s startin` now...I`m off)

Comment is about CLIPPER (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

I loved this poem, it resonated with me deeply. Beautifully written.

Jade

Comment is about Hourglass Appraisal (blog)

Original item by kimafia Jones

This is so gorgeously written, I was really pulled in by your writing :)

Comment is about I Can't (blog)

Original item by Michelle Cote

I really liked this :)

Comment is about The flow does not like the sun (blog)

Original item by Abstract Mystery

This is beautiful :)

Comment is about Mighty Darkness (blog)

Original item by Monami Kundu

There will be two themes for Monday night!

Theme one Anger and Peace
Theme two Writers are Vultures

Casting a Vote

Stockport W O L live event
filmed by J.F.K Productions.

Hosted by Andy N who
invited many poetry performers.

Confusion only set in
when helped by Nigel!

Best quality recording possible
copies can be ordered.

But we need everyone
to cast a vote.

Do we keep it
a very private affair?

Or let others observe
on full public viewing.

On a personal note
I recommend vote no.

Keep it amongst ourselves
unless anyone gets famous.

Then we can sell
the film rights to - - - the highest bidder!

Comment is about Write Out Loud at Stockport art gallery tonight (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

fantaz!

P&S

Comment is about Do it Again (blog)

Original item by Corr Lens

@vickiayers its me! and al of us!

Comment is about Pixievic (poet profile)

Original item by Pixievic

@vickiayers its me! and al of us!

Comment is about Do it Again (blog)

Original item by Corr Lens

Thank you for your comment, Jemima, yes those duties could be on the cards at some future date, who knows!

Comment is about Son's Wedding (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Glad you liked my Mill Girl! David

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

Original item by Martin Elder

HI Ray glad you liked my 'cogs'. Davidf

Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)

Original item by ray pool

congrats are in order Lynn! Stand by for Grandma duties! speak soon.Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about Son's Wedding (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Cheers, Jemima. Thank you for your kind comment.
Lynn x

Comment is about 2 Haikus on Observational walks (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

count me in too please Lynn.Lovely work! Thank you.Jemima.

Comment is about 2 Haikus on Observational walks (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Hi Harry - The heat is getting to me lol. Long may it last. :-D

Comment is about Summer by the Sea (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

Hi M.C. - Thanks for your feedback. The recent good weather has inspired me :-D

Comment is about Summer by the Sea (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

Harry - an interesting observation. It certainly seems
likely that both had first hand knowledge of the days of
sail on the high seas, and used them to inspire their lines.

Comment is about D'YE MIND, OLD PAL? (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Enjoyed this poem, Andy, well written.

Comment is about Dreaming of a different kind of realism (blog)

Original item by Andy N

Within a poetic framework of realism
a different kind of snapshot taken.

Comment is about Dreaming of a different kind of realism (blog)

Original item by Andy N

weirdly, i have the first episode loading on iplayer as we speak!

Comment is about tripping balls with billy shakespeare (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Cheers for liking, Rose and R. Miller. Thank you x

Comment is about 2 Haikus on Observational walks (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Thanks fellers. This one was born out of having spent a number of years with guys like this trying to help and cajole them on a road to recovery and see them come out the otherside.

Comment is about Perfectly formed (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Thanks Andy it was one of those that I wrote very quickly as a reaction to what I had seen.

Comment is about Under the bed (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

A sobering thought indeed Harry. Live each day with or without the kettle on.

Ray

Comment is about THE PAINT KETTLE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

David,
As someone who can`t even reset his password, this
is all beyond me.

Comment is about Wired (blog)

Original item by David Lindsay

It`s the warm weather, Tom, (but welcome all the same)

Comment is about Summer by the Sea (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan