Hey Michelle, those feelings in Internal Attack depend on the day I guess. Some days are harder than others. Thank you for commenting xx

Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)

Original item by Michelle Cote

These lines make it easy to imagine hours spent daydreaming in a deckchair, with the soundtrack of
happy voices and the breaking waves in the background.
Pleasant to find an engaging upbeat poem.

Comment is about Summer by the Sea (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

Love this

Comment is about Seasons (blog)

Original item by Daisy Lancaster

sorry, Tommy, but I'm getting Bond villain, Metal Mouth..she's a keeper if she saved your finger from that..

elP

Comment is about et Spiritus Sancti (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

wow :)

Comment is about Kerosene (blog)

Original item by K.W.

Beautiful poem, very well written :)

Comment is about Skin (blog)

Original item by Progressive Poet

Many thanks for your words on 'Vial' Peter. Much appreciated! I look forward to checking out some of your own work.

Comment is about Peter Knaggs (poet profile)

Original item by Peter Knaggs

Outstanding for me Martin. So much detail and keeps building all the time , a character study that seems to disappear into the black hole of a sad life. Compelling!

Ray

Comment is about Perfectly formed (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

I think all this new technology can serve both sides... humans will always abuse and pervert just about everything but I think there are enough good folks to use this wonderful technology for lots and lots of good! ")

Comment is about Wired (blog)

Original item by David Lindsay

Hey Laura, thanks for the like on Library :)

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Thank you Mark for your comment on Library :)

Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Thank you Martin for your comment on Library. I think we all spend time sorting words we will never feel are quite the right ones. But the option of just leaving them is too sad.

Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)

Original item by Martin Elder

Thanks Helen for liking Music & Lyrics :)

Comment is about Helen (poet profile)

Original item by Helen

Roses are red, red white and pink

If it has to be champagne on a blue velvet gown

I will take a Pol Roger and show you the town.

Roses are yellow or so some will say they come over

from Texas to lead us astray. Why do you drink coffee

when you know I take tea, OK let me listen to more poetry

Comment is about Coffee-House Poetry (photo)

Dear Tom I am 63 years old and I have never fired a gun.

Although my granddad was a soldier killed in WW2.

Other members of my family have served in more recent conflicts and my dad did his national service and met my mum at Catterick Barracks.

I have had my share of suffering and grief but I have found that trying to write a few words every day is giving me a little relief

Keep up the good work yours Davdcxx

Comment is about Bullet Holes In Backyards (blog)

Original item by Tom

I really enjoyed this poem, good work :)

Comment is about Open Your Eyes (blog)

Original item by Shirley Smothers

Another analogy I can relate to the ticking of the clock have you noticed how the BBC breaks down seconds into
hundredths some times with 30 seconds to start the global news. How much would 30 seconds cost advertising on Google Inc, How much does 30 seconds cost on Scottish ITV.

A slap up meal at a local Brasserie.

Comment is about A Love Experience (blog)

Original item by Tom

I like the thought of storm chasers tearing up the road heading North, I would prefer to be heading North North East or even west if we were heading for the coast.

I knew Fingals Cave as soon as I saw it coming up on Windows 10.

Paul McArtney country with Wings flying higher than an Albatross, I am sure I saw a Golden Eagle rising on a wooden cross.

With a GPS attached to its wing they said they would not harm it with a chip and pin you only have to have a wrist band and St Peter lets you in.

Comment is about Storm Chasers (blog)

Original item by Tom

Comment is about POEM ON THE EUROPEAN PROJECT-author unknown (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Who will exchange my 50p for a plastic five pound note

put it in a bucket haul it up with a wire rope

While they switch positions on the Euro the government

sends out mixed messages and want to rewrite history

God bless her Majesty and the soldiers of the king

Stick in your pipe and smoke it and think of Gunga Din

Comment is about POEM ON THE EUROPEAN PROJECT-author unknown (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Working on it - - - could call it
Brown Bare Ass with Red Bits in the Middle!

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Make sure you get my best side Paul
if you can find one that is!

Comment is about Paul Blackburn (poet profile)

Original item by Paul Blackburn

Thank you Jonathan! :)

Comment is about 'You don’t need expensive kit. Just a mind and a mouth, a pen and some paper': Laura Taylor (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

haha,I write in short form to :0 u for you. who did this ?

Comment is about Poetess (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

nice post

Comment is about Rick Gammon (poet profile)

Original item by Rick Gammon

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Comment is about Paul Point (poet profile)

Original item by Paul Point

Don't close Stuart, don't. Tommy

Comment is about (closure (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Michelle - not bad for starters! Being the pedant that I am: 5th line should be slowly rather than slowing I think. I look forward to reading more.
Rob

Comment is about Sunrise Lover (blog)

Original item by Michelle Cote

Michelle - thanks for commenting on 'Pinot Grigio' and welcome to WOL. You will find a broad spectrum of work on here, so don't be afraid to post your own. The audience are usually quite kind and in some cases very very helpful.
Enjoy.
Rob

Comment is about Michelle Cote (poet profile)

Original item by Michelle Cote

Oh my God, that was amazing! just love this poem!

Comment is about I'm Going To Write A Poem About You (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

lovey poem, I like this very much and living without regret is a wonderful thing to be able to do, savor the past and live without regret... Michelle

Comment is about Teddy Bear (blog)

Original item by Louis Audet

The problem of humanity - its wish to impose its decisions
and choices on others...politics through to war and back
again, seems to be some sort of merciless cycle we find
impossible to avoid down the centuries. Are we puppets
of some pre-ordained plan or test? It's enough to make
a soul wonder!

Comment is about SUMMER OF THE SOMME 1916 (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Yep, cannae argue with what's already been said :) Great piece this.

Comment is about 'Vial' by David Blake is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Hahaa I'm loving your mind! :D Brilliant stuff!

Comment is about I'm Going To Write A Poem About You (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

Comment is about Half heart. (blog)

Original item by Solasta

David, I think this is the poem of the month that I like the best, so far. OK, that's not meritocratic, but I do have good taste, even though I say so myself. Well done, great poem.

Comment is about Vial (blog)

Original item by David Blake

You're very welcome!
Please visit us at The Chocolate Poetry Club some time :)

Comment is about Katy Megan (poet profile)

Original item by Katy Megan

Thank you very much, elP :o)

Comment is about doors that open and close (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Hi Stuart great to find you here. I am just reading a few of your featured poems, nice work. We also followed you on Twitter - @ChocPoetryClub. Thanks

Comment is about Stuart Buck (poet profile)

Original item by Stuart Buck

Hi Tommy, I enjoyed a read of your poems today. Hope to read more soon. Please do visit The Chocolate Poetry Club one day! Paul

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Hi Ian, Thanks for your poem above, some lines leapt into life there - a great read. All the best, Paul

Comment is about Ian Whiteley (poet profile)

Original item by Ian Whiteley

Thanks Phil - Some great lines in the poem above! Paul

Comment is about mentalelf. Philk. (poet profile)

Original item by mentalelf. Philk.

Thanks Elaine, I enjoyed your featured poem. Paul

Comment is about Elaine Speakman (poet profile)

Original item by Elaine Speakman

good stuff also martin.

Comment is about Perfectly formed (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

good stuff.

you should do a sequel and call it naked in the city (:

Comment is about Barefoot in the City (blog)

Original item by Nigel Astell

very good martin. good beat in this poem

Comment is about Under the bed (blog)

Original item by Martin Elder

Thanks Martin, I'm delighted you liked this.

Ray

Comment is about SACRIFICIAL WINE (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Hello Nigel, I'm watching you

Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)

Original item by Nigel Astell

Congratulations on winning Poem of the Week, David. The subtle humour too works well. Nice one!

Comment is about 'Vial' by David Blake is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

On "Remote Console"

"when things are fine"
there is no need for a heart
and therefore no need to express a heart

..I enjoyed this, des mannay, and will be looking at more of your work


elPintor

Comment is about des mannay (poet profile)

Original item by des mannay