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John Coopey

Wed 30th Dec 2015 11:33

Their problems are a good bit easier to solve when they're kids, Graham. That's for sure!
So far, my pair haven't blessed me with grand kids but I live in hope they'll do so before too old to kick a football.
Top four? (Whisper it!)

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Patricio LG

Wed 30th Dec 2015 11:33

I can empathise with that for me it was 19 years it is the hardest experience to pick up and continue, but continue you must, find yourself worth. Coz you are worthy, :-) draw strength from family and friends. I'm sure you don't need me to tell you.:-)

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 11:21

An awful lot of ladies joining at the moment. Hi Rose :-) Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 11:15

Hi Madison, welcome. Tommy:-)

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Vicki Ayers

Wed 30th Dec 2015 11:05

Indeed! I'm sure we will

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:56

Chutzpah! Lol I'm sure we'll get on. Tommy

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Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:50

thanks for reading me Vicki - I've been enjoying your work btw - I have plenty more on here if you care to take a look.

I noticed your uploaded photos - you might like to see mine: http://colsibabes.blogspot.co.uk/ - I like messing around combining words and images although I've been a little lost for words these past few weeks -

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Vicki Ayers

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:49

Thanks for reading & commenting on my 'Guide' Tommy - I can tell you have good technique!! I have been known to send this poem to potential dates!

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Vicki Ayers

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:47

Good to hear Tommy! Maybe I should ask for references before agreeing to a date ....!!!

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:41

Hiya Sandra. Have an interesting read of very many poems. Tommy

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:38

Hi Divya, I hope you enjoy the site. Tommy

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:33

Lovely piece this one John.
I'm finding grandparenthood somewhat the same and my wife keeps telling me that their parents come first (obviously) but I still want to sort out their problems too.

Suffer the little children Eh? (and that comes from an atheist too).

Top 4 top 4 top 4!!! Believe

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Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:28

yep

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 30th Dec 2015 10:20

Yes, a veritable what's what of technique. Slow kissing a must, I've even had good references in this regard. Tommy

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Vicki Ayers

Wed 30th Dec 2015 09:41

Maybe! I wrote this after my 1st time out when my marriage ended (after 14 years)- it wasn't a good experience!! But yes he was older than me & should have known better!! I think there could be a whole new poem about toyboys! X

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DavidAddington

Wed 30th Dec 2015 09:35

Well I've researched the kindle idea and it is an headache. So many rip off softwares and contradictions on forums that say 'yes' do it and 'no' don't do it and companies begging for your cash and all that shit. Come on - it should be free - us artists need to strike back at all this corporate mentality and take the reigns and our own cash. I'm not in it for the money, just want a readership and maybe some pocket money etc.

I've set up an account with createspace as Stu recommended and began formatting my book on Microsoft word. Trouble is my poems are quite long even after editing and my 90's themes would run to 40 + which is way too many for a collection - so may have to rethink and release two collections at same time. Self-advertising will be tough for online.

It's not as easy as people think it to be - ebooks and all that. We will see.

I bought an ebook on how how to make ebooks all 5 pages of nonsense for £1.00 which didn't teach me anything other than be a thief of cooking recipes and make quick cash with silly ebooks pasted from websites - the new writers hey! Just steal all content. That's the world we live in now - fake drugs, fake books, fake profiles - ummmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!

Still gonna give it a shot though.

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Freda Davis

Wed 30th Dec 2015 09:23

Hello Thoughts,
I see you posted this up last February and have not received any comments yet.
Your biog is the soul of brevity. I understand a reluctance to say too much to strangers, but I suppose that if you opened up a bit more, people would respond. Most people are friendly on here, and we don't get trolls much. I have never seen a nasty comment. The site is moderated well.
I hope you will have another go, and give us more of your thoughts.

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Emer Ni Chorra

Wed 30th Dec 2015 08:42

Thank you for your kind words Vicki. Much love, Emer.

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Dec 2015 08:36

Many thanks for you kind comments, Ken and Patricio. My dad used to say "they break your arms when they're young and break your heart when they're older",

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John Coopey

Wed 30th Dec 2015 08:34

Thankyou, Vicki. It's a contrast to me how powerful we are as parents when they are small with how impotent we are when they grow. For instance, any problem was easy to solve when they were small (mend a broken toy etc) but we can't solve the things that make then cry when they're older.

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Patricio LG

Wed 30th Dec 2015 08:26

I do so miss them little.. Well done John

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Patricio LG

Wed 30th Dec 2015 08:18

I do believe low cut jeans showing arses are designed for certain classes, as hoodies over heads wouldn't it be nice to change designs for other threads. The fashion houses are to be blamed for brainwashing people towards certain trends, couldn't they mix it up with more kinder blends.
The same with music such noisy crap
Creating violent sounds spearheaded by rap
knowing young people lap it all up, drinking shorts from a small cup until they end up wrecked hardly can talk, look for a pretty woman they may want to stalk. as for boobs we all like them it's women's way to attract men. keep looking Ria, I'm sure you will find some other well read people closer to your kind. (SORRY :-()) I can see where your coming from. Brilliant poem by the way.

PS Happy New 'Hic' year.

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Patricio LG

Wed 30th Dec 2015 07:13

I guess your hoping to find an inexperienced toy boy then lol, a verse you could have added in would follow from "we'll show you the way and keep you on task............ . :-))

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ken eaton-dykes

Wed 30th Dec 2015 00:20

Nice one John.

My how the years hurry by, with increasing acceleration as
ones tally of time accumulates

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ken eaton-dykes

Wed 30th Dec 2015 00:02

Thanks Julian and all the team@WOL. You've done wonders for me. Hope you'll be able to cope with extra workload that WOL's snowballing popularity brings during 2016.

Ken.

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 23:51

My little un is still little - but too old for kisses at the school gate! Lovely sentiment x

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 29th Dec 2015 23:31

Thanks Vicki, It helps to know that. :-) Tommy

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Freda Davis

Tue 29th Dec 2015 21:53

I hope the new year brings new delights and developments for WOL Julian, and that you find all your wishes come true. So glad to see you have become a CIC. Excellent move. Here's to the next ten. I think back very fondly on those sessions in the Hole in the Wall. It all seems a long time ago.

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Freda Davis

Tue 29th Dec 2015 21:47

It sounds as if you could do with hanging out in new haunts in 2016, because I don't think these characters are going to change much. You do set them out very clearly in all their horrors Ria. I hope your new year brings some better company.

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 20:43

Hi Tommy - your words strike home with me particularly your words about love - I shall enjoy reading more xx

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raypool

Tue 29th Dec 2015 18:48

Thanks Stu, hard sort of poem to get right - your approbation makes a difference to my confidence! Am I really this cynical?

David, a full blooded and compassionate comment as always and an affirmation for my efforts. I do feel a bit flat and have had a nasty virus, so I sweated over this literally! All it needed would be Rolf Harris in a reindeer suit and a sugar rush. By the way I am a sad bastard.

Ray x

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Preeti Sinha

Tue 29th Dec 2015 17:41

Corr, this is sublime

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 17:11

A lovely poem Ian - heartfelt & poignant x

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:48

I love this - I'd love to know who you're talking about here - yourself or another? Either way powerful words - 'the incredible seed needs more water to grow' - what a line xx

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Stu Buck

Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:25

oh so intriguing!

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Stu Buck

Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:23

this is great ray. the first two lines stand alone for me, extremely funny.

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 16:21

Wow indeed ❤️

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 15:54

Love this - my kind of poet x

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 15:47

I'm new on here and just discovered you - I'm very glad I have x

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Juhi Gupte

Tue 29th Dec 2015 13:51

Thanks Tommy for kind words of appreciation!!

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 29th Dec 2015 13:00

You have mail!'

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 29th Dec 2015 11:59

You clever girl.
The knowledge of his lack of knowledge.
However, pretending love doesn't hurt is a difficult ask.
It always does, even when it's good!

Happy New Year Preeti!

Graham

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:39

I love the verse 'sellotaped - back up....' it's a powerful image x

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:28

I like the photo you posted along with this - it really shows that if you never know what's lurking underneath if you 'scratch the itch' - I can identify with this x

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 09:05

Hey Patricio thanks for reading my poems & posting comments

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:53

Ah yes FB stalking.... so easy to do these days - and in a Zen like state - I do this trance like without even knowing I'm doing it half the time!! Nice one x

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Vicki Ayers

Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:42

Thanks Preeti - it's tough being a single gal!!!

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Nigel Astell

Tue 29th Dec 2015 08:40

Christmas drinking eating too
saying some things you might regret
then spending the rest of the year making up!

I did hope you did too!

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Preeti Sinha

Tue 29th Dec 2015 04:44

Thanks for reading my poem :) And leaving a comment

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Preeti Sinha

Tue 29th Dec 2015 04:43

Love this!

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