Not a poem that will be a hit with vegetarians, but very appetising for the rest of us! Would it be pushing a pun too too far to say "Well done!"?
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Thank you for your lovely note on Budgetary Democide :)
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A powerful poem Ray, packing a lot of truth and feeling into a few words.
Comment is about THE WISDOM OF THE UPRIGHT SPINE (blog)
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Thank you very much, Ray yes, the scent, touch, to actually feel what I am writing and sense history with it, is important to me
Thankyou David, a memory of times when black gold would end life short, but was so essential for a way of life for the men and women in towns and essential for Britain, then desolated by political change destroying people's lives leaving behind ghosts that still remain.
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He who sups with the devil must needs have a long spoon.! As we say in the music business, this poem was really cooking.
Ray
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more blood and sex!
funny that all the things that seperate us from such 'savage' beasts should be our downfall!
enjoyed this, especially the last line which is excellent.
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thanks both! i once worked out i must have cooked over 5000 steaks in my life so far and every one that wasn't medium rare made me shiver! funny, this started out as a love affair to the steak and ended up as a love letter to cannibalism.
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There's more than a little "I ate his liver, washed down with a nice Chianti" about this piece Stu, reinforced by the hypothetical execution at the end.
Mouthwatering and Chilling
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Absolutely love this one , it lives in a dream and has strong imagery . I was thinking of your love of all things touchable (wood and the like) and this blends in to the material sense of a place.
Nice one. Ray
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Saw your comment on Stockport W O L
You can't call me lovely Nigel till we get those glossy photos back from Rachel Andy darling x
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I'm with Stu on this Tommy. No frills I like. A kind of kitchen sink 60s feel to it for me. Unfulfilled life and desperation all very precisely represented. Sad and compelling. Ray
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My kind of poem Stu - and shows how versatile you are.
I don't eat red meat, but your description delights me nevertheless. The sexual frisson is a nice addition, and maybe there is a closeness in the psyche . I think the word barbaric has hit the spot in its rawness.
Funnily enough I'm just chiming with the meat sentiment with my latest. Read all about it!!
ray
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Cheers Patricio. Interesting take P, interesting. Tommy
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Cheers Patricio. Interesting take P, interesting. Tommy
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Cheers Stu. From where? to where? Indeed. Tommy
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i like this tommy. its a really well told snapshot and poses far more questions than it answers (a good thing in my book)
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Thanks Stu. Poetry gives a certain freedom to condemn life in the raw, but one has to earn a living. Music is not always about groupies and adulation, although that obviously would help!!
A good larruping is I guess a slang word, but one of the threatened species which I think should be drawn out on its creaking plinth as a reminder that the world is more than only what our "protectors" want us to hear.
Mr Grumpy.
Comment is about AN EVENING AT THE RITZ BALLROOM BRIGHOUSE WITH THE JOE LOSS ORCHESTRA (blog)
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sir,you see i was always witout friends,i was always picked last for everything. i walked alone constantly and i still do but i just had to wait for the right people to come along. it is worth the wait.you'll see. your friends will be wonderful and u will never stop smiling. you can never aprreciate the good without dealing with the bad :)
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Preeti Sinha
Tue 17th Nov 2015 04:31
Hello Jade
First off, good to see you back. And secondly, thank you for reading, commenting and relating to what I wrote. I go into strangers' worlds, imagining their lives, and getting vicarious thrills tiptoeing around in their stilletoes, watching the world through their eyes.
Preeti
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Preeti Sinha
Tue 17th Nov 2015 04:27
Hi Pat,
Thank you for your kind comments on Nobody Cane. It was very very hard for me to post it. I felt I was exposing my inner most self so had to take it down.
I am so sorry to hear about your step father. Not easy dealing with things like that, is it!
Cheers,
Preeti
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A masterpiece for the world to wake from apathy... Or not!
Comment is about Speak The Unspeakable (blog)
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I work with some of these people ha ha
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I don't know if I'm even close, however I felt like this as a father, when my children left home, just exactly how you describe it.
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Interesting stuff - my own project THE CROWS OF ALBION attempts to merge my own poetry with musical backings / soundscapes - I also released a 21 track CD last year commemorating the full chronological history of WW1 - as a comparison piece here is my take on 'Anthem For Doomed Youth' from that album - which commences with my own sonnet remembering Wilfred Owen - if anyone wishes to hear more examples they can be accessed from the link. Similar idea - similar project - I will follow with interest :-)
https://soundcloud.com/the-man-at-the-back-1/death-of-a-poet-anthem-for-doomed-youth
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Happens too often. Even when least expected
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ray thanks for comments on 'cat' - a simple poem but glad it resonated!
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Reading on the poetry boat, Durham, National Poetry day 1997, which was hosted by Peter Mortimor.
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...or see me in person at Poems, Prose & Pints in Harrogate this Wednesday, and you can have it for only £2.50
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I've just published a new pamphlet, and this is the title poem. It's a not-for-profit pamphlet to mark the United Nations' summit on climate change in Paris next month. I've already published a couple of the poems on Write Out Loud in previous blogs, and since I want to spread the message as widely as possible I shall try to publish all the rest here over the next few weeks. But if you can't wait, you can buy the pamphlet very affordably from my website
http://www.birdbard.co.uk/bookshop.html#
or on Amazon or Kindle
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Speak-Unspeakable-words-overheating-world/dp/1519178085/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1447711385&sr=8-1&keywords=speak+the+unspeakable
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Hi V! my smile :-)
Tommy
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It'll be a great night! I wish I could be there....
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Cynthia thanks for the response. I sometimes write in the first, second and third person in a piece when I wish to engage then disengage the reader. I am aware of this and its limitations and of the frustration that can ensue. The third person being unannounced. An example of a form would be "Tommy Carroll (himself)" simple but twisting. However I do have some but I would have to read again with greater attention ( I have just finished rereading (skimming) all 300 ( approximately) of my pieces...
I try and flip those pebbles into the pond Cy ;-)
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Cynthia thanks for the response. I sometimes write in the first, second and third person in a piece when I wish to engage then disengage the reader. I am aware of this and its limitations and of the frustration that can ensue. The third person being unannounced. An example of a form would be "Tommy Carroll (himself)" simple but twisting. However I do have some but I would have to read again with greater attention ( I have just finished rereading (skimming) all 300 ( approximately) of my pieces...
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thanks for commenting on '...the monkeys paw' Harry - hope you are keeping well and the resting up worked.
I rather liked this eerie little piece myself, but as Cynthia noted it would appear only the two of you did. I'm finding myself on Write Out Loud less and less these days - hopefully will get he time to spend a bit more time here = the plus side is I'm gigging a lot - so - hey ho :-)
Keep well mate
Ian
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thanks once again for your kind comments on '...the monkey's paw' Cynthia - I rather liked this one, but - as you say - it would seem not many others did. The Monkey's Paw was a chilling tale that whoever held it had 3 wishes but, of course, those wishes didn't turn out exactly as their 'wishees' thought they would. Quite a good analogy with George Osbourne's defeat in the Commons I thought - ah well
Ian
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Terrific spoof! All great thoughts rise upon the fumes of alcohol? It may well be so.
I do wonder if this 'string' should be more aptly called 'senryu' due to its subject content.
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yes, agreed. this is a corker. and you have used the word larruped in a comment. brilliant. i can smell and taste this its so descriptive. its clearly from memory and not a fictional piece. larruped though! ha! i never thought id see anyone using larrup, let alone larruped as a past participle!
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i have looked back as i said i would and i still like it a lot. i agree about the hammer blows, it is repetitive in its lilt and timing and overall i do think ive got a point across while keeping it dense and nightmarish. more importantly my wife likes it and she never likes anything. so whatever the outcome i have won!
Comment is about once upon the sea of blissful awareness (blog)
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fear controls i suppose. i wonder if in 2300 years time people will still be here to learn from our mistakes (not that we have learnt). i think not.
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I am so struck by the 'sameness' of experience upon our current world 'stage' and that of the ancient 'civilizations'. People living in fear is a terrible common denominator.
This is a repost; I happened to come across the poem while sorting out some other work. And my husband commented on its timely observations.
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wonderful - in that it is both very clever and makes me feel learned for understanding it. especially like catharsis, a beneficial expulsion indeed.
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Just to comment once more, Stu. It does have a persistent hammer blow effect for me and this gives the whole thing credibility. That insistence reminds me of Dylan Thomas in full flow, leaving little gaps for pondering - I think you have hit on a winner in that case.!!
Comment is about once upon the sea of blissful awareness (blog)
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Nice point David. What I was aiming at was a metaphor for all that's British and looked up too here being perhaps ludicrous when transplanted into a different culture with its own mindset. Although things may have entirely changed in the desert lands now. I dunno.
You might hopefully put me right on this! ray
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Michelle, I would stop making comments completely if I considered them to be 'reviews'. Where would I get the crust? I like the idea of talking together, informally, and often helpfully. Anyone can take my own work apart totally, which has happened frequently, to my delight and improvement. I always consider the points or options suggested and do make relevant changes.
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A beautiful expression of a universal experience. First the thought and then the electric words. Really good poem.
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The Staleybridge poems look great - my personal favourite is 'Somewhere Else'.
As for the Paris massacre, the real question is 'why doesn't it happen more often?' Many urban districts in Europe (the UK included) are full of hate-filled, disenfranchised and alienated young men with nothing to lose. Little wonder they seek out 'causes' to fight and die for - indeed, I suspect we will witness more of these atrocities in the months ahead.
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DavidAddington
Tue 17th Nov 2015 16:56
My laptop is also pissing me off by missing letters in words so can't be arsed to edit today. Shit, this writing thing was just so much easier when I just used a biro in notebooks.
PS: Do all the view counts on this site account for other people view a profile, or do majority of them account for each time you log into your own account and edit etc?
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