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John Coopey

Tue 26th Nov 2013 13:26

No charge for the tutorial, Starfish.

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Tue 26th Nov 2013 10:52

Thanks S.F. for your very kind remarks.
I don't like to use my leisure time being serious

Cheers K.E.D.

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Starfish

Tue 26th Nov 2013 10:43

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for the added explanation of terms used. See, I said WOL was an education.

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Starfish

Tue 26th Nov 2013 10:34

Very poignant tribute to your father. Lovely.

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John Coopey

Tue 26th Nov 2013 10:02

Comatose and Dave - Many thanks for your kind comments.
As for your wife having a large amount of Viking in her - how lucky for the both of you!

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Margaret Holbrook

Tue 26th Nov 2013 09:52

Sad, but very, very powerful.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:46

As Izz says, great analogies for just losing it. It holds out the hovering threat that it could happen to any of us and leaves the reader wondering what it could be like (or possibly uncomfortably reminded of what it was like)

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:43

I really like this Steve. It stands well in the blogs next to Shirley's poem. Two people writing about how much their dads meant to them - and writing very well.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:40

Some poems seem to punch the reader in the stomach and this is one. So few words about something so massive, but so effective.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 26th Nov 2013 08:38

Excellent, John. Captures the historical reality well. I was only reading recently about how the monks took Cuthbert's body away from Lindisfarne because of the raids, which terrorised people for years.

PS I married a Yorkshirewoman and am sure she has some Viking in her.

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Tue 26th Nov 2013 04:56

I really enjoyed reading this.

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 26th Nov 2013 00:41

Hi Nigel,

Thank you for your comments on my poem "Happiness". This time of year is especially difficult. The fourth anniversary of my Fathers death is Dec.9.

Thank You once again,
Shirley

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Shirley Smothers

Tue 26th Nov 2013 00:37

Hello M.C.

Thank you for your comments/poem for my poem "Happiness?". This time of year is especially difficult. The fourth anniversary of my Fathers death is Dec. 9. Your comments have helped.

Thanks,
Shirley

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Mon 25th Nov 2013 21:47

Thanks for explanation,we all been on the internet and looking in dictionary's we couldn't find it !

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Ged Thompson

Mon 25th Nov 2013 20:58

Hello love, just stumbled on one of your poems and added comment, WELL DONE X

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Ged Thompson

Mon 25th Nov 2013 20:50

Very good mate

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John Coopey

Mon 25th Nov 2013 20:01

Quip coming, Ian:
Large portion, you say? Then it's certainly not mine. (Boom, boom)

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 25th Nov 2013 19:54

good poem Simon - full of telling images
as for the conspiracy theorists (and MC knows my position on this) you can read as many money making theorist books as you like - but it's like the Jack the Ripper mythos - the simplest answer is probably the one that's right - in the case of the Ripper it's most likely to have been done by a 'nobody' who died before he could decide to stop - in the case of Kennedy it's the lone gun man - read 'four days in November' by Vincent Bugliosi for a more realistic - less sensational - viewpoint (it's his account that is used in the current film 'Parkland')this highly respected and much published author states 'Oswald did it and he acted alone'

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 25th Nov 2013 19:38

good stuff john - I always feel I've got rather a large portion of Viking in me - i'll leave you to provide the quip ;-)
Iabn

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David Cooke

Mon 25th Nov 2013 19:22

20011! I never noticed that one, MC, although strangely it might be relevant to my most recent posting 'Voyager' inspired by a great video clip of Carl Sagan's called 'A Pale BLue Dot which an old friend of mine from way back recently sent from Vietnam where he's been living for years.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2013 17:01

Hello there - thanks for taking the time to
comment on my poem about the murder of JFK.
I've added to my opinions with comments to be
found on Simon Austin's poetry blog "Kennedy".
Oliver Stone's film was a tour de force of movie
making and whilst he may have not been able to
fill in all the gaps, I follow his belief that
Oswald was hardly a lone nut. JFK made very powerful enemies for a variety of reasons.
P.S. I note in your "bio" above you mention
"In The Distance" with a date "20011"!!
Now THAT'S the sort of immortality any poet
would die for (sorry!! :-))>

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2013 16:43

JC - Interesting to read in his book - just
published: JFK- An American Coup D'Etat - Col.
John Hughes-Wilson (ex-MI6) mentions (p.137)
that on the 11th October 1963 - a month or so
before his death - JFK had (quote) "signed a crucial National Security Action Memorandum, number 263, signalling his intention to pull
1000 troops out of Vietnam by the end of the
year and eventually run down the US's commitment to Vietnam."
Col. Hughes-Wilson continues: "We now know that Kennedy was seriously considering getting
all U.S troops out of Vietnam by the end of
1965, after the presidential election. There
were only 16000 American soldiers in Vietnam at that time, so that removing over 1000
represented a significant withdrawal."

(We should remember Vietnam also represented a
significant source of revenue for certain
business/military power-brokers).

On a matter of presidential assassinations (and
attempts), I find it worth mentioning that
ONLY JFK's was effected "at long range).
ALL of the others could be called "Up close and
personal"...much more in keeping with a lone
nut and his/her obsessions. JFK's demise had
all the hallmarks of a military style organisation and planning...and the grotesque
failure by the SS and FBI to follow basic
chain of evidence procedures (even destroying
vital evidence) only adds to the suspicion
that powerful hidden forces were at work that day.

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Isobel

Mon 25th Nov 2013 14:26

I wonder if this one is inspired by what's happened in the world of cricket?

Great analogies for just losing it here. The important thing is what's going on behind the eyes - very sad.

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Mon 25th Nov 2013 12:15

Hello, what does 'reddit' mean ?

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 23:35

Jarrow was sacked by the Vikings in 794, the year after Lindisfarne (the island; not the band).
"Walha" or "Waelsh" was what the Saxon invaders 350 years earlier called the indigenous British (literally = "foreigner")
"Sais" = Saxon. From whence the Picts call us Sasanachs.
"Wyrd" was the pagan Saxon concept of Fate.

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Isobel

Sun 24th Nov 2013 21:15

Yes - I could never understand that mother of young kids, who went off to conquer some dangerous mountain and died in the process. I mean, what is the point? Even it you do it, so what?

I'd get much more enjoyment from writing the perfect poem - which still eludes me... each to their own, I suppose.

"Crazy people,
buried in the sky."

That sums it up perfectly for me - though I can see some sadness in the way people strive to achieve - at such a personal sacrifice.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 20:11

thanks for the update MC - got the Anthony Summers book 'Not In Your Lifetime' to read next - offers an alternative perspective to my own. I must have about 20 programs sitting on my Sky+ to watch that have been on various Sky channels in the past fortnight - will probably archive them to DVD as I watch them - just need to find the time
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 20:04

Hi Isobel
thanks for the comments on 'Glam' I know what you mean about the tainted stars - it wasn't just glam though - you should read some of the stuff the big bands like Zeppelin and Motley Crue got up to!!!!!
I still love glam rock - it was the music I listened to when I got my first record player, kiss, long hair and attitude - so it will always be MY music - irrespective of the arseholes who have muddied its name
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 20:01

Thanks for the comment (and correction) on 'Glam' Laura - amended and glad you liked it
D'Ya wanna be in my gang? ;-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 19:59

thanks for the supportive comments on 'Glam!!!' Starfish - I'm pleased you liked it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 19:51

thanks for the comment on M.I.A tomas - much appreciated
Ian

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Sun 24th Nov 2013 19:06

agreed-tis indeed!x

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Philipos

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:47

Thank you for commenting on 'Beano.' Appreciated. P.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:39

no change there then John ;-)

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:28

I have a similar but opposite memory of dropping No 2 daughter off at University.
We lugged all her stuff up 3 flights of stairs while she nattered to the other freshers in the communal kitchen.
We'd done everything we needed after about 2 hours (unpacked, positioned furniture, hung pictures etc) and I was ready to come home.
Our Gert on the other hand continued to fuss and do stuff for another 2 hours - she couldn't bring herself to leave!
Now they've both left home to live with boyfriends. We had to buy them a house apiece but it was worth it.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:21

I Looked A Twat.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:18

I don't suppose we'll ever know.
I do feel though that his assassination prevents history from evaluating how he would have conducted the Vietnam War (he had just committed 16000 "military advisers").

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 18:08

Enjoyed this, Simon (if "enjoyed" is the right word). This was one of those pivotal moments whereby everyone around at the time remembers what they were doing when they heard the news.
MC certainly details correctly the suspects and, although I'm normally no great fan of conspiracy theories, I agree that the lone gunman (Oswald) is a hard one to swallow.
What I also feel is that assassination polished his legacy. Had he lived he would have had to have perpetuated or escalated the Vietnam War (having already committed 16000 "advisers" or withdrawn in ignominious defeat (like Nixon and Ford).

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Sun 24th Nov 2013 17:57

I wish

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 17:56

Reddit.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2013 17:55

It must take a particular strain of motivation to want to test yourself in this arena, Dave; where not even experience and skill are guarantees of success, only of improved advantage.

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Graham Ramsden

Sun 24th Nov 2013 14:09

Thanks for your kind words. The poem was written as a response to the Sylvia Plath poem "Hardcastle Crags" near Hebden Bridge which she always found oppressive.

Graham

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David Cooke

Sun 24th Nov 2013 13:43

I watched Oliver Stone's JFK the other night. I wonder when, if ever, the truth will be fully revealed and who the perpetrators really were.

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Ged Thompson

Sun 24th Nov 2013 00:18

Well done, really nice piece,and very true X

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Ged Thompson

Sun 24th Nov 2013 00:14

Brilliant!

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Ged Thompson

Sun 24th Nov 2013 00:14

Brilliant!

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Ged Thompson

Sun 24th Nov 2013 00:13

I like this X

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 23rd Nov 2013 16:34

I must arise and go now...
:-)

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Steve Higgins

Sat 23rd Nov 2013 07:25

Thanks for looking in on my JFK offering. As for the truth, somebody knows it, but they're not talking! All the best,
Steve

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Steve Higgins

Sat 23rd Nov 2013 07:10

You've painted this tragic moment well Simon, best wishes, Steve

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