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Lynn Dye

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 21:31

Happy New Year from me too, Cynthia. Welcome back. x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 20:58

Oh! Forgot to remind you the words of our Pushkin: The less we love a woman the more she likes us. lol

With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Isobel

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:40

Thanks for taking a look at my poetry Gareth. Hope you had a good Christmas and all that.
Isobel x

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Isobel

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:34

Make sure you have 2 entries from Harry O'Neil on your lists - I'm not sure if he tagged either of them in the conventional way. One is about Betty and quite divine.

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Isobel

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:30

Very funny. I fear your words may be wasted though cos they'll go their own sweet way and that kind of knowledge comes with experience :)

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Isobel

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:27

Happy New Year Cynthia. Yes - you have been absent for too long! xx

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:23

The poem is really nice, but.... it doesn't remind me anything and ....I can't see any humor here. It tells me about some men's or women's nature: to satisfy your own ego and then....you can go to hell. Poor woman! She believed that the man loved her. But....
I can only imagine that their age was between 20 - 30. A woman planned to have a family with the loved one. A man, hearing about marriage, was just afraid to be bound. And.....at the same time, he wanted to know that someone loved him. When he found out about it he stopped communications. Isn't it a satisfaction of someone's ego?

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jane wilcock

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:21

With All Best Wishes to You for 2012, Jane

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Nick Coleman

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 19:16

Well done Dave. Is there a rising tide?
(and thanks for comments on my Turnip)

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Anthony Emmerson

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 18:59

Hi John,

I'm sure these two babes (who probably spend a little time in culinary pursuits)would be delighted to park their posteriors on your boat race . . .

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_kDdFs4-ho08/SI1GZGDNvwI/AAAAAAAAAUo/RyLNOv1QLiM/s400/fat+women+eating+on+beach.jpg

Coopey's Groupies maybe?

:)

Regards,

A.E.

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Lynn Dye

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 16:57

Hi Winston, thank you for your kind comments on "Emma was her Eyes", much appreciated.

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Tue 3rd Jan 2012 15:03

Thanks for comment on Jonny's song.

Ian....

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Rachel Bond

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 13:57

:) i like this, it reminds of 'i need a little time..' beautiful south same kind of twist. light and humorous.

cant be doing with the phone, i would like to live in a world with no electricity never mind personal computers and telephones..what do we do with all the time that gadgets save us? even cars and aeroplanes are time travel machines and warp our expectations as we are able to travel 1000s miles in a matter of hours. we dont have to move anymore with the invention of the laptop. its a beautiful virtual world, but it wasnt that long ago that we had none of this stuff and im sure candlelight and parchment scroll were all the rage x

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Anna Babilinski

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 12:31

Thank you Winston for your lovely comment. Glad that you enjoyed your experience at the Octagon. Anna

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 12:29

Anthony, will you please check for me; I've obviously missed a vital point. I have re-tagged two poems 'Hymn of a Northern Clime' and 'The Big Hill'. What else do I need to do to make an accepted entry?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 12:18

These two are just re-tagged, from blogs of the last few weeks. I hope that is acceptable; they are definitely in 'positive mood'. I was really out of the picture for awhile, and missed everything. But I must have been getting vibes!

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 00:43

Hi Winston - many thanks for commenting on 'As 2012 Approaches' - I hope it does turn out to be a better year for us all! Dave

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winston plowes

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 00:30

Well. I have not read the book. But , Lynn, your powerfull poem has had made a massive impact. Thank you. Win

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 00:26



Thanks for the comment on Janine...

Unfortunately, John, the operative word is `old`
(but I`m fightin`)

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 00:20


After calling in at Alexandria, I`ve been reading about Athanasius (the contra mundi one)

This poem is an example of how my brain feels just now.

the saviour is,
`It is beyond reasonable doubt
That there is a balance of probabilities`.

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 3rd Jan 2012 00:08


Dave,
I think I`ve got this (`Deified`)

Thanks for the comment on `Janine...`

I hope you`re better+

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 23:57




Thanks Lynn,

Still catching up

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John Coopey

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 23:42

This is what Cat Stevens meant to say.

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John Coopey

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 23:14

Very thought-provoking, Ian. But strangely I was reminded of a different perspective - the hymn, "How Little I am in it All".

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John Coopey

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 23:08

Loved the image of the sand grudging the footsteps. You're an old charmer, you, Harry!

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Mon 2nd Jan 2012 20:53

Wow!
what a fantastic outcome!

Well written Lynn.
keep it up!

Marks out of ten?
Eleven!

Love

Patricia and Stef.xx

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Andy N

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 20:48

Hi - My 12 days after Christmas poem is live on here now, Fifi.. http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=26422

Hope you had a better Christmas than the people in this poem! lol

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Flapjack Press

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 19:55

Exploring the synergy between performance and the page

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 18:12

Thank you dears for the comments.Love and hugs, Larisa

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 17:36

Who wouldn't want a giant magic mega bubble?! Touching. A few capital Letters in wrong place, but hey the ho....

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 15:44

I don't know why I like this Dave and the title is ace! Clever stuff as usual. Happy New Year.

Graham

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 14:52

This would surely comply with the conditions of
WOLcomp on this site. An uplifting essay on
the passing of time and the constant human
optimism that makes life what it is.

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Lynn Dye

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 13:09

Thank you Dave for your kind comments on my latest. :)

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Lynn Dye

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 13:07

Harry, I just noticed this doesn't appear in the WOL listings. You need to type WOL comp in the box at the bottom of the entry where it says Tag. You will probably have to press edit first for this box to appear. Hope this helps. :)

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David Cooke

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 10:13

Happy New Year Greg, Thanks for comment on Supervielle version. NOt a new year resolution, but I thought I ought to do a bit more with my French beforte I forget it all. Read some Supervielle recently because MOniza Alvi has brought sa selection via Bloodaxe and this was one she hadn't done.

EG - hello - I am butting in here. AF

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David Cooke

Mon 2nd Jan 2012 10:11

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Lynn Dye

Sun 1st Jan 2012 21:21

I found this quite delightful, Harry.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 1st Jan 2012 20:52

I've read this book too, Lynn. It's a powerful true story and this is a good poem to celebrate it.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 1st Jan 2012 20:50

Thoroughly enjoyed this one Harry

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Lynn Dye

Sun 1st Jan 2012 19:34

Enjoyed this, Larisa. Agree with M.C.
A very happy new year to you. xx

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Charlotte Henson

Sun 1st Jan 2012 17:00

Hey, I was just wondering how old you are. As a young poet with an anthology released, I find you inspirational :)

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Lizzie

Sun 1st Jan 2012 02:51

Thank-you for your wonderful comments.
All the best.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Dec 2011 19:38

As a teenager, I was old enough to understand what was at risk during that time when the
fear of nuclear war was palpable. I have never known anything similar since then - thank God! J.C.'s words bring the reality
close again - and it's distinctly unsettling.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Dec 2011 19:29

It may be a long way to walk to Odessa
But in e-miles it's seconds to Larisa, God bless her.
And so let's all wish her a joyous New Year
And hope to see more of her poems right here!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 31st Dec 2011 19:22

Perfectly timed for the time of year to get us
thinking on the passing essence of life - with
a neat conclusion to round it off.

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Gray Nicholls

Sat 31st Dec 2011 18:59

very sad, but i did enjoy it a lot in particular the second stanza. beauitful.

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Gray Nicholls

Sat 31st Dec 2011 18:59

know Brighton pretty well - this really sums up the area to me a lot. Excellent.

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Gray Nicholls

Sat 31st Dec 2011 18:57

enjoyed this Anna, maybe a bit melodramatic for my tastes but still enjoyed the power in it in the second to last stanza in particular. good stuff.

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Gray Nicholls

Sat 31st Dec 2011 18:55

last stanza brings this full circle, Roy. Really enjoyed this.

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Isobel

Sat 31st Dec 2011 17:27

Thanks for your comments, Steve, Jane, Nick.

I'm not advocating doing away with Father Christmas in this poem. It was just a reflection on how we let children down in so many ways.

I know that my kids treasure the memories they have of childhood - and Father Christmas is a big part of all that. I tend to think that suspended reality is good for them. They will be forced to deal with real life soon enough. Children should be allowed to be children and I think they draw strength from a proper childhood. I must say, I find all those Jacqueline Wilson books about death and divorce and every other social ill, really depressing for kids. Give me Harry Potter any day.

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