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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 17:42

What I suppose are euphemistically called 'Teething Troubles'.

Thanks for the poem, Hugh.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 17:32

Thanks for the lovely comments & likes Julie, Keith & Jennifer. And let's hope these sort of days aren't too far away... ??
And for the likes, Aviva, J.D & Mr Po

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 17:25

Thanks for all the likes and lovely comments. Unfortunately I have just heard the terrible news. I will leave the post up though if that is ok with everyone.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 17:24

A really good poem.

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jennifer Malden

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:49

Nice, short and to the point. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:48

Really impressive, especially now, as unfortunately it is just a dream for the moment. Vividly presented. Jennifer

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:48

Outstanding Julie. And even more poignant now. A fitting tribute to a true inspiration ?

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jennifer Malden

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:45

Really splendid writing! Have always loved watching the moon, from that slim silver sliver when new, to the huge luminous orange sphere of a harvest moon. Liked the last three lines too!!!!!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:41

Funny, as usual, but also moving! It's weird how we go back to things from our childhood which we didn't understand at the time. Not many kids like cheese, in my experience anyway. One has to admit it smells strange and sometimes tastes so too. One appreciates it later on.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 16:37

What about the state of the bodywork!!? Nice, Jennifer

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Hugh

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 15:04

Brilliant !!!!

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 12:27

Thank you for the likes Paul and Keith and for your very kind comment.

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 12:04

Thank you Aviva and Stephen G for your kind comments which I truly appreciate and also for the likes from Tom, JD., and Holden.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 12:02

Thank you to Tom, Lisa and Martin for your comments which are a great source of encouragement and thanks for the likes from : Julie, Stephen A., JD., Dawn and Hope Ray. Thank you for reading this poem.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 11:57

A poem of deep appreciation and personal devotion to someone much loved. Very well written and with gratitude for true friendship

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 11:52

Julie,

A magnificent poem, well crafted and a splendid tribute to a true English Gentleman. You have excelled yourself in the writing of this poem.

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 11:48

Julie,

I profoundly disagree with this poem. The quality of your poetry exceeds the quantity by miles. You are a good writer.

Keith

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Mark McCray

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 11:13

My pleasure. And thanks for the feedback.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 11:03

Thanks, Graham. Just one of those spots I will never get to - even less chance of doing so these days. But it got me dreaming about the place, and in particular, the bookstore.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 10:54

Greg, I like the way that you avoid using the 'c' word in V3 to illustrate the title. Clever. I wonder how many of these towns (Malice comes to mind) are there, names after emotions and the like?

Graham

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 10:38

Thank you for your like and great comment Aviva, and thank you for providing todays inspiration.
I am convinced you will be posting your amazing writes on here for quite a while.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 10:25

Thanks for the Likes, Jordyn, Hope and Stephen!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 10:11

But we are the judge and we are the jury
And we call it fudge and say you're not guilty
For quantity we have proof by the score
But of quality too yours has measure, what's more
It was all about whether I ever could try
and write nearly as often or well as you write.

And one final thing, a closing remark
I'm certainly sure that I most truly can't

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 09:23

Thanks Hugh, Stephen G, Paul and Branwell for the likes

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 09:22

Thanks for the likes, Dawn, JD and Hope, thank you for the kind message Dawn, glad you like it.

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keith jeffries

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 08:52

Stephen, one of your best and so well rhymed. It has given my day good start.

Thanks
Keith

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 08:15

Wish you well... I wish to tell, I know that having mental health issues can be hell. thank-you for this poem, I feel it is really swell. J.D.

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 07:07

Strange seeing the scenes from the Isle of Man! of life as we once knew it. Lovely last verse. Thank you

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lisa donohoe

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 01:54

The power of strength to keep pushing forward speaks threw your words of wisdom ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 00:38

There is a definite reality in the fact that if you turn up efficiently and
considerately early for an NHS medical appointment, you will be be
kept waiting long after your original appointed time.
By the way, a local online newspaper here in central London had a
letter from an irate correspondent who cited a similarly chaotic
situation when an elderly relative was among a number who were
obliged to wait in the cold and wet at the designated vaccination
centre. So, it's not exactly a rare occurrence on recent evidence.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 1st Feb 2021 21:56

Great news about the bookstore, JD! I must check out the song. I saw the name on a list of WOL users in the first few hours of February, and thought how wonderful it was.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cQHKtRSht4

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J.D. Bardo

Mon 1st Feb 2021 21:38

I know Chagrin Falls, its one of those places that you say "you can`t get there from here". its off the beaten path for sure. I Like the song Chagrin Falls, and I goggled the bookstore. its still there.

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Dawn

Mon 1st Feb 2021 21:38

I love this pix! ty for sharing it

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Tom

Mon 1st Feb 2021 19:38

Beautifully expressed Keith, brilliant and poignant.

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Martin Elder

Mon 1st Feb 2021 19:18

Absolutely beautiful Keith and at times quite lyrical. I love this style particularly when it is well written as this is.
Fabulous

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julie callaghan

Mon 1st Feb 2021 19:04

Just seen it on the news. Such a shame, it would seem they were not prepared for people turning up early for their appointments.
Great account of the situation.

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Steve Higgins

Mon 1st Feb 2021 18:18

It's nice on a cracker . .

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 1st Feb 2021 18:09

Thank you everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem//song.
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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 1st Feb 2021 18:04

It is echoing in my head, Keith, your poem. Not the words themselves because my memory isn't up to that echo-level but the ideas and feeling of the poem. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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Mike Bartram

Mon 1st Feb 2021 18:00

Thank you for reading, the likes and lovely comment. I wrote this yesterday on Formby beach.

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New Shoes

Mon 1st Feb 2021 17:07

Thank you for sharing the truth in your life. I believe it to be the most beautiful part, and the strength to overcome your past, even more beautiful.

Willow

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Feb 2021 16:59

“Speechism”, MC? Next door to “Thoughtism”.
And thanks for the Like, Holden and Stephen A.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 1st Feb 2021 16:17

This is addictive stuff.....must order a copy.
Cigar-loving Columbo
Was no dumbo
He'd smoke out villains with his attack
Of guile disguised by a scruffy old mac.
P.S. Copy now ordered and anticipated with relish.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 1st Feb 2021 16:11

Sounds a lot of fun for disciples of the "tongue in cheek" tendency..
There are those who call themselves a poet
And do their best to make sure that we know it
Combining their scribblings in the direction
Of what is presumptiously called a collection ?.
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M.C. Newberry

Mon 1st Feb 2021 15:55

An entertaining odyssey down memory lane - welcome in these
dull dank days of disease and dark thoughts.
It appears that "received English" was rarely received north of
Watford. ? But then dialects have always been one of the
spoken (as distinct from unspoken) glories of England. Long may
they linger!
I suppose we should be surprised that here is no such thing as "speechism" as a demand to avoid mickey-taking in that direction.

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julie callaghan

Mon 1st Feb 2021 15:55

Thank you JD and Aviva for your kind comments and continued support. I don’t think my poems will ever defined as quality.
Thanks also for the likes.

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lisa donohoe

Mon 1st Feb 2021 15:46

?????
Extremely well written with a beautiful flow

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lisa donohoe

Mon 1st Feb 2021 15:43

Nothing speaks to my soul more than an honest' raw individual who writes for themselves and has the balls to share.
Brilliant. Thank you for sharing ?

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Feb 2021 15:17

At risk of falling foul of the moderators, Biggus Dickus, Stephen.

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Tom

Mon 1st Feb 2021 14:29

Thanks Aviva ? I'd written the first verse and thought to myself that I must have written hundreds of poems exactly like this. So, I saved it as 'same old poem' and put it to one side thinking I'd just delete it. I came back a few months later and it struck me I could work the 'same old poem' idea into the poem itself and then I wrote the rest.

And thanks Stephen for the like! ?

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