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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 22:26

Sounds like you are describing where i grew up. Fun. "inbred locals" ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 22:23

Thank you for the whistle-stop tour, Stephen. I'd probably be one of the scary ones at somewhere-on-sea.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 22:02

Thank you for commenting Stephen, delusion is quite essential, as essential as eating, but in just the same way some foods are good for us and others can be damaging in either big or small quantities.. delusion is like that, I think. But delusion as you say, is innocent.

Dishonesty is usually not innocent, and when people deny us truth whether it be about ourselves or our surroundings or their intentions then it takes away our freedom to choose fairly. Some people pride themselves on their ability to be dishonest, they have a different value set and see it as a skill - this sort of idea was behind the questioning of myself, do I need truth? should I continue to need it?

Apart from the anguish about To Be (Truthful) or Not To Be...
The other concept (in the first 5 lines) is that we might need nothing at all...money, fame, status, love, comfort, health, luck, even strength, etc.. (because we give ourselves happiness)

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 21:55

Hello Ray

I finally got round to putting the Essex poem on the blog!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 21:52

The county of Essex has a lot going for it and (sometimes) an unfairly bad reputation. All human life is there, and long may it be so.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 21:44

It was strange how 1984 passed by without much comment, but Big Brother is always out there, in some form, watching, waiting....

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 21:37

I think that we always need truth, uncomfortable though it may be. Otherwise we can be happy while living a lie, although this is not necessarily bad if it doesn't impact on others. There's something to be said for innocent delusion.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 21:29

Yes, a real lyrical gem.

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Joe Marcello

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 20:11

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 17:49

I spent quite a lot of my time today watching a pair of Bullfinch from my window, they are beautiful, so lucky to have them visit.

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 17:44

Thanks for the likes and comments JD, Clyde and Stephen A, you are too kind. Thanks for for the likes Hugh, Dean and Aviva. Struggled for motivation today.

Yes Stephen A, that was my write from the other day.

A daily poetry blog I like to write
In verses that are light and bright
I try to compose lines that rhyme
Quantity over quality is my crime

I have definitely got enough for a book, unfortunately I think there is only myself who would read it? I just checked my website and can't believe I have clocked up 270 poem posts.


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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 16:43

You're on a roll Mr Knape? Mrs Knape?? Ms, Miss, Master!?
Anyway, another goodun ! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 16:38

Another top poem, Julie, written with heart. Somebody mentioned strive for quality over quantity, with you we get both! And you're getting better & better! I certainly couldn't write a poem a day. ?
You must have enough for a book I reckon ( or even a couple!)?

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clyde McCulley

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 15:49

Good poem for good old Tom.

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clyde McCulley

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 15:48

Good remembrances of a Grandpa. Good job.

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clyde McCulley

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 15:45

good, timely, thought provoking.

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 15:10

I will take a double, if that is no trouble.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 14:54

Thank you J.D for your valued opinion, It's wonderful to know what each reader is thinking, whichever of them kindly let's me know (and takes the time to), to each comment I will gratitude show (at least I try to).

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keith jeffries

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 14:09

A poem with a good and clear warning of the damage we are doing daily to the environment. We are custodians of the planet not sent here to plunder and destroy it.

A good poem and thank you

Keith

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 13:49

Thank you also MC for the comment

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 13:19

Which would you prefer fully clothed or naked? The choice is yours x

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<Deleted User> (13740)

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 13:17

Sex addiction is a serious addiction and causes all sorts of relationship problems. We may laugh about it but really it's not funny and can sometimes mask deep psychological afflictions x

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Wed 3rd Feb 2021 13:15

Xx

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:47

it's a junk poem!

keep your shoes!

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keith jeffries

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:47

This poem is almost a confession of a cathartic nature. A rummaging of the soul with revelations dawning. I value such poetry as it is an honest reflection of a tragic aspect of today's world. The writer has overcome this and all credit is due to him.

Thank you for this

Keith

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:46

Hi Stranger
Hy Drangea!

?

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:29

Aviva, I prefer the inclusive. But not being good with decisions, my choice was elusive. Thank-you for todays contribution. You are a valued member of our institution. J.D.

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Xoanxo

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:25

Thank you Vautaw!!! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 12:10

Thank you for the additional Likes, Stephen G, Holden & Branwell. Much appreciated ??

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 11:50

Thankyou Adam,

Happiness we can give ourselves, but sadly truth isn't always in our control and it can create havoc in people's lives when that happens. I've always thought honesty is the first form of respect for ourselves and others, and truth is the fabric of our real existence.

As we can see I'm still not ready to need nothing, but I explore this theme further in another poem posting soon.

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Adam Whitworth

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 11:34

Hi Aviva.
Very thoughtful and interesting writing.

Both happiness and truth are ill-defined concepts. If I had to compare and contrast the result would be messy.

Personally, I suspect the pursuit of truth has little effect on my level of happiness. There's no conflict between them, they are on the same side.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 09:44

It appears Paul has removed his profile from the site.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 08:19

He's gone off to form a Dream Team with Don Matthews.

But he'll be back.

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julie callaghan

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 07:34

I guess you mean Po, his comment has gone from my last post and his last post about Captain Tom.

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New Shoes

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 05:41

Is there a warranty? I shall have to inspect it myself, you can't always take people at their word.

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New Shoes

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 05:22

" What's happening now, is happening now" Space Balls

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 04:51

Paul Sayer
do us a favor
limp on in
on wing and prayer!
?

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New Shoes

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 04:50

"I had a few cheap thrills, but they cost me a lot more than I could give" Neil Young

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 04:46

thanks Jennifer
we are linked through poetry
and cottage cheese.

why are you hiding behind those flowers?
?

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New Shoes

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 04:42

I figure if you can show your children you love them and be the best parent you can be while being your unique self, then you are participating in the role the way it is meant to be played. It is a great opportunity to better ourselves as well, as your poem expresses.

Peace, and Happy Day!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 04:10

Beautiful ❤️

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Feb 2021 03:42


The body of the poem is fine-
the fenders need some work!
?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 23:59

Admiration and affection shine through in equal measure. Good one!
Captain Sir Tom
With admirable aplomb
Took fame in his stride -
With humble grace and selfless pride.?

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Tue 2nd Feb 2021 22:10

There are over-reactions, and conspiracy theories, but often there is a simple answer to odd events. Good one Branwell.

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julie callaghan

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 21:04

Thank you for all the very kind comments and likes.

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Hugh

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 19:34

Your poem would be a fitting tribute read out at his funeral, send it to his family. I am sure they will warm to your tribute.

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d.knape

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 18:30

crackers and cottage cheese.
that's the way my dad like it!

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d.knape

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 18:29

The body of the poem is fine-
the fenders need some work!
?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 18:28

Enjoyed. Read it again. You are here to be a voice of the FACT of no accidents.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 2nd Feb 2021 18:10

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem.

Though in itself it might not provide much to the reader, (unless you happen to be someone with similar experiences).

But, in the jigsaw of my poetry it is a very important piece.

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