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Jon Stainsby

Fri 16th Nov 2018 16:42

Thank you all.

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John Marks

Fri 16th Nov 2018 16:25

Thanks a lot Jacob and Jon and Keith for supporting this poem. It was not an easy poem to write and I didnt expect it to be popular. Is it a coincidence that we four are men? Generally, people don't like writing that deals with modern Britain (or the US in Jacob's case) with any degree of grit. Betjeman's sentimental depiction of metroland is the rawest most people can take - and that is about 1950s suburbia. Many people prefer Christmas card verses. John

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keith jeffries

Fri 16th Nov 2018 15:10

The maternal relationship has some very special qualities to it, least of all a perceptive nature which far exceeds any other person. There is an innate bond which is often inexplicable. My mother had eyes on the side of her head also. She was also wired for sound.

Good poem
Thanks
Keith

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d.knape

Fri 16th Nov 2018 14:10


no place to hide.
Mothers know where
we live.

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keith jeffries

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:59

A good autumnal poem.
Thanks
Keith

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:57

Now if more American poets stuck to writing poetry instead of articles about it. . .?

Go ahead, somebody ask me something stupid.?

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:55

Great analogy of the porcelain masks, my mother loves those things. Humbling sentiment.?

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Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:54

It could be complicated changing his birth certificate, so much depends on proof and documents now but good for him, let him be what he wants to be.

Hannah

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Hugh

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:54

A great poem embracing our love for our parents and the sadness of old age creeping up on them.My parents frequently walk into my brain with happy memorable visits when I see pictures to remind of them spread around the house.

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:54

Pure excellence.

Comment is about Inner City Blues (blog)

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:51

The pieces of yours I've read so far have a definite metaphysical or philosophical edge to them, and they are a treat to read.?

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:50

Good use of rhyme.?

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Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:48

I agree, we have to write as we feel.
Often my poetry doesn't rhyme but I like to put in a couple of rhyming lines to add the drama.
Rhyming is not always easy and is a skill.

Hannah

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Big Sal

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:48

I love the poem, but god do I fucking hate raking leaves!?

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Hugh

Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:40

Mum loved gardening
When spring came she was happy
And she wet her plants

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Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:37

Fantastic, great, funny.
Love it.

Hannah

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Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:35

This is a beautiful poem.
I notice leaves, the different colours and textures and sizes and as you show in your poem, torn down by the winds.

Hannah

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Nov 2018 22:28

Very nice Keith ?

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Thu 15th Nov 2018 22:00

I enjoyed this poem very, very, much.
The imagery it created for me took me to places I love very much and miss when I'm not there. I can't wait to return in January and you have inspired to do some writing why I'm there.
Thanks for posting this Mr Braddock. It's helped me chill out after a hard day in intensive care. I'm going to sit with my whiskey in hand and mull over it a few more times.

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Nov 2018 21:09

You paint a dark landscape of what has become a reality in many parts of the land. Is this what we have come down to? I think so as you rightly say there is no turning back. A hapless people.

The poem describes well a scene familiar to many but such is its content that we mentally cast a sideways glance.

Thank you for this John

Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:58

A beautiful nostalgic poem Fred enjoyed it immensely..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:56

Wonderful Lynn ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:54

Another interesting subject Don..?

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Damon Blackery

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:50

Thank's

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:50

Tastey...Hugh?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:47

So well worded the utter pain and hopelessness is palpable...❤

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Nigel Astell

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:49

Thanks again to Linda and Pam for making us all wellcome to perform our poetry on this special day.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:45

Santa parks his sledge
leaving Cheshire set last
now to enjoy giving
the very last present
might take him a while!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:25

Hugh - you're incorrigible. I shall look at my 57 can with
moist eyes now...riven with regret for this unfortunate.
So now Heinz is a has-bean? Or - as the Yanks might say: he's toast!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:17

But all art is surely derivative - and that in itself is a form of
plagiarism. And plagiarism is imitation by any other name - and imitation is said to be a considerable compliment.
Copy?
Right!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Nov 2018 15:09

This made me grin - thanks for that! As for making a
woman smile, that's a good pointer to making some
headway in any relationship imho.

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:12

thanks for the comments on 'falling down the cracks in the pavement' Keith - yes - I needed some light relief after the war poetry of the last month or so - been on a tour of 6 gigs in 7 days last week delivering the set of poems and music that I released about WW1 in 2014. It has been fulfilling but emotionally draining - I needed to let off some steam and let out some jeans :-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:09

thanks for the comment on 'a poppy in winter' Taylor - yep - it was really all about choice - I don't think a soldier fighting in WW1 would have wanted 'remembrance' to be just about remembering (which I think is the red poppy message) without pairing it with learning lessons (Which I think the white poppy encourages)
cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 14:05

thanks for your comments on 'a poppy in winter' Mark - I'm not really advocating the white poppy as the only form of remembrance - I think the red poppy is for that - the white poppy is more a reminder to think about peace when we remember. I wear both side by side because remembrance, on its own, is not enough for me
cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 15th Nov 2018 13:52

Thanks for all the comments - interesting reading :-)
Ian

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Nov 2018 12:59

TC and KG - many thanks for the comments. I've modified
one line very slightly to suit the theme as intended.

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d.knape

Thu 15th Nov 2018 12:39

sometimes our conduct
needs monitoring.
(this is an example of.)

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Nov 2018 12:17

I look for ideas in the paper. It's surprising what you can find which is true and humourous. It also helps educate. I feel a bit like a WOL roving reporter. ?

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Thu 15th Nov 2018 10:19

Hilarious Hugh

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Hugh

Thu 15th Nov 2018 09:58

full of beans to follow,watch this space

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 15th Nov 2018 07:30

Great interview. ?

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kJ Walker

Thu 15th Nov 2018 07:16

Thanks Beno. And good to see you back.

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Nov 2018 06:13

Beautifully crafted ?

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 15th Nov 2018 04:48

Lovely

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Joanna Halliday

Thu 15th Nov 2018 03:57

Thank you for listening ?

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Thu 15th Nov 2018 03:24

I'd love to comment but can't remember what I was going to say....

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Robert C Gaulke

Thu 15th Nov 2018 00:19

Thanks!

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Thu 15th Nov 2018 00:13

Thanks for your comment on Word Me Up Jennifer, I look forward to discovering more if your work.

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John Coopey

Wed 14th Nov 2018 23:13

I'll try, Kev.

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Nov 2018 22:33

Ian,

One of your very best. The content is topical and humorous with perfect rhyming. This has to be published. It will go down as a classic.

Thanks indeed

Keith

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