Thanks a lot Jacob and Jon and Keith for supporting this poem. It was not an easy poem to write and I didnt expect it to be popular. Is it a coincidence that we four are men? Generally, people don't like writing that deals with modern Britain (or the US in Jacob's case) with any degree of grit. Betjeman's sentimental depiction of metroland is the rawest most people can take - and that is about 1950s suburbia. Many people prefer Christmas card verses. John
Comment is about Inner City Blues (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
The maternal relationship has some very special qualities to it, least of all a perceptive nature which far exceeds any other person. There is an innate bond which is often inexplicable. My mother had eyes on the side of her head also. She was also wired for sound.
Good poem
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Mother's Eyes (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Fri 16th Nov 2018 14:10
no place to hide.
Mothers know where
we live.
Comment is about Mother's Eyes (blog)
Original item by d.knape
A good autumnal poem.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Autumn leaves to be reborn (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:57
Now if more American poets stuck to writing poetry instead of articles about it. . .?
Go ahead, somebody ask me something stupid.?
Comment is about American Life in Poetry: The Appearance of Modernism (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:55
Great analogy of the porcelain masks, my mother loves those things. Humbling sentiment.?
Comment is about the mask (blog)
Original item by Brooke
<Deleted User> (18118)
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:54
It could be complicated changing his birth certificate, so much depends on proof and documents now but good for him, let him be what he wants to be.
Hannah
Comment is about 69 t0 45 (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
A great poem embracing our love for our parents and the sadness of old age creeping up on them.My parents frequently walk into my brain with happy memorable visits when I see pictures to remind of them spread around the house.
Comment is about Always Yesterday (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:54
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:51
The pieces of yours I've read so far have a definite metaphysical or philosophical edge to them, and they are a treat to read.?
Comment is about Doors and windows (blog)
Original item by Pagan Poetry
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:50
<Deleted User> (18118)
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:48
I agree, we have to write as we feel.
Often my poetry doesn't rhyme but I like to put in a couple of rhyming lines to add the drama.
Rhyming is not always easy and is a skill.
Hannah
Comment is about Setting the Bar (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Big Sal
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:48
I love the poem, but god do I fucking hate raking leaves!?
Comment is about Autumn leaves to be reborn (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Mum loved gardening
When spring came she was happy
And she wet her plants
Comment is about Three Haikus (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
<Deleted User> (18118)
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:37
<Deleted User> (18118)
Fri 16th Nov 2018 12:35
This is a beautiful poem.
I notice leaves, the different colours and textures and sizes and as you show in your poem, torn down by the winds.
Hannah
Comment is about Autumn leaves to be reborn (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (18474)
Thu 15th Nov 2018 22:00
I enjoyed this poem very, very, much.
The imagery it created for me took me to places I love very much and miss when I'm not there. I can't wait to return in January and you have inspired to do some writing why I'm there.
Thanks for posting this Mr Braddock. It's helped me chill out after a hard day in intensive care. I'm going to sit with my whiskey in hand and mull over it a few more times.
Comment is about Glenbrittle – the loch. (blog)
Original item by Alan Travis Braddock
You paint a dark landscape of what has become a reality in many parts of the land. Is this what we have come down to? I think so as you rightly say there is no turning back. A hapless people.
The poem describes well a scene familiar to many but such is its content that we mentally cast a sideways glance.
Thank you for this John
Keith
Comment is about Inner City Blues (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
A beautiful nostalgic poem Fred enjoyed it immensely..?
Comment is about Sweet Memories (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
So well worded the utter pain and hopelessness is palpable...❤
Comment is about the mask (blog)
Original item by Brooke
Thanks again to Linda and Pam for making us all wellcome to perform our poetry on this special day.
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Santa parks his sledge
leaving Cheshire set last
now to enjoy giving
the very last present
might take him a while!
Comment is about November 2018 Collage Poem: Cheshire Housewives (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
Hugh - you're incorrigible. I shall look at my 57 can with
moist eyes now...riven with regret for this unfortunate.
So now Heinz is a has-bean? Or - as the Yanks might say: he's toast!
Comment is about Full of beans (blog)
Original item by hugh
But all art is surely derivative - and that in itself is a form of
plagiarism. And plagiarism is imitation by any other name - and imitation is said to be a considerable compliment.
Copy?
Right!
Comment is about Rules Of Conduct (blog)
Original item by d.knape
This made me grin - thanks for that! As for making a
woman smile, that's a good pointer to making some
headway in any relationship imho.
Comment is about fatal attraction (blog)
Original item by eve nortley
thanks for the comments on 'falling down the cracks in the pavement' Keith - yes - I needed some light relief after the war poetry of the last month or so - been on a tour of 6 gigs in 7 days last week delivering the set of poems and music that I released about WW1 in 2014. It has been fulfilling but emotionally draining - I needed to let off some steam and let out some jeans :-)
Ian
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
thanks for the comment on 'a poppy in winter' Taylor - yep - it was really all about choice - I don't think a soldier fighting in WW1 would have wanted 'remembrance' to be just about remembering (which I think is the red poppy message) without pairing it with learning lessons (Which I think the white poppy encourages)
cheers
Ian
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
thanks for your comments on 'a poppy in winter' Mark - I'm not really advocating the white poppy as the only form of remembrance - I think the red poppy is for that - the white poppy is more a reminder to think about peace when we remember. I wear both side by side because remembrance, on its own, is not enough for me
cheers
Ian
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks for all the comments - interesting reading :-)
Ian
Comment is about A Poppy In Winter (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
TC and KG - many thanks for the comments. I've modified
one line very slightly to suit the theme as intended.
Comment is about MIND - HOW YOU GO!! (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thu 15th Nov 2018 12:39
sometimes our conduct
needs monitoring.
(this is an example of.)
Comment is about Rules Of Conduct (blog)
Original item by d.knape
I look for ideas in the paper. It's surprising what you can find which is true and humourous. It also helps educate. I feel a bit like a WOL roving reporter. ?
Comment is about 69 t0 45 (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 15th Nov 2018 10:19
Hilarious Hugh
Comment is about Wayne's pain turns out to be a sore point (blog)
Original item by hugh
full of beans to follow,watch this space
Comment is about Wayne's pain turns out to be a sore point (blog)
Original item by hugh
Thanks Beno. And good to see you back.
Comment is about Cutting The Line (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 15th Nov 2018 03:24
I'd love to comment but can't remember what I was going to say....
Comment is about MIND - HOW YOU GO!! (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 15th Nov 2018 00:13
Thanks for your comment on Word Me Up Jennifer, I look forward to discovering more if your work.
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Ian,
One of your very best. The content is topical and humorous with perfect rhyming. This has to be published. It will go down as a classic.
Thanks indeed
Keith
Comment is about Falling Down The Cracks In The Pavement (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Jon Stainsby
Fri 16th Nov 2018 16:42
Thank you all.
Comment is about Autumn leaves to be reborn (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby