Hi Kealan, I really like this poem. I have not yet fathomed all its meaning and this in turn leaves me a little intrigued. But what i can gather is well thought out. In such short verse you have conjured many descriptive meanings and that takes talent. I suppose you may have to enlighten us as to the experience that has moved you to write these words. Good read Kealan.

Thanks for sharing,

keep writing and posting. You are one of the poets I make a point of reading whenever i see your work. It's good quality.

stay well

Best wishes from Mike

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(1st pikky)Anne thinking of Mark Philips-
...as though I have,nt had enoughof little pricks.
(2nd pikky)Jabba The Hutt to Beaver
are you still there....over..sorry....under!

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Thanks for your comment on MY CV John. I think I did feel like that for a short while after I retired but not any more I'm far too busy.

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thank you Steve I will look for Ann's piece :)

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There's not much which evokes fond memories of past childhood better than railways.
What will evoke such memories of today's kids I wonder - plane travel? i-pods? alco-pops? Don't seem to have the same pull, do they?

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Thank you for leaving me a comment Andy x

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I don't know why this particular memory popped into my head, but it was insistent, and I couldn't get it out until I wrote these few lines last night ... sorry it's none too polished!

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This is a moving one. Lovely to see a brother voice these emotions also. Big northern families - there's nothing like them!

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You missed out Paxman...

Ha - this reminds me of a verse out of one of my old performance poems where I took a good pop at Jeremy Clarkson.

Fun and light hearted. I enjoyed it.

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I loved this. Elizabeth Bishop's Art is one of my favorite poems so it really drew me in with the use of her line "I lost two cities, lovely ones". Definitely made me want to read further and see how you explored the theme.

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Thank you Anne for that lovely welcome to WOL, I feel at home now!Fantasia on a theme by Thomas Tallis really moved me (and my magician)
Your surname is amazing!x

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thank you Ann.
The photo is from a series taken by my very talented daughter Rachel who's work I'm sure you know on here.

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'lo Andy - cheers for comment on Peace and Quiet. Yeh, last line isn't really meant to 'fit in' as such, it's more of a bemused final statement. That kind of feeling you get when you get battered for doing something your parents wanted you to do in the first place!

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Hehe - yup, you're learning alright ;)

My other favourite venue is the Butterflies bar in Bolton. Jeff Dawson, aka Jefferama, runs two brilliant nights there - a WOL night, and another called Guitar N Verse. Well worth getting along to either or both if you can. I don't make it along there as often as I'd like cos I live in St Helens and I'm really bloody idle ;) It's a similar sort of 'vibe' though, and Jeff is a top compere!

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This is really very moving John, I enjoyed this in a sad sorta way. You've captured the emotions well, and the hustle and bustle of family gatherings - minus the big fight. Where's the big fight?! We always had one ;)

A poignant piece well written imo

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I loved reading this and found it really moving. And it's a perspective that I've never thought about before, a small brother left behind. Old photos eh - I really have to steal myself to look at them, esp the happiest ones for some reason!

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I've heard it said that drowning is a very peaceful way to go, surprisingly. That, or freezing to death apparently! I enjoyed the poem and the photo.

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You are very brave good luck Ayat; it only takes one like you to make a pathway to freedom Sending love and light is all I can do xxx

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A voice that makes the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end (inter alia).

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Only naughty in my head, Isabel.
And anyway, I can't walk in heels that high.

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Hello Cate,
Thanks for your thoughts on "Boots".
I only ever get to be naughty in my head these days!

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THANKS jOHN
I know it wouldnt hee hee I cant even swim.and Im terrified of water but hey ho :)

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Very nice, R.
Not so sure it would be quite as serene as this though!

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PS - it was early retirement, really -- I only had a year to go!

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Hi Hazel - I like your style - nice and light, and to the point! This is very much like my experience -- I worked in factories, pubs, and finally the civil service, then took voluntary redundancy -- and after a couple of weeks found myself twiddling my thumbs, so I've ended up volunteering in a local charity shop to keep myself busy while I wait for the missus to catch me up!

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OI!Dye! put that porno mag down and getcha sweet cheeks back into Bloggington Town! hope yer ok-Stef.xx

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hey,
ta muchly chuck.
hope you're well x

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thanx mate, its a long 1 i know. if i ever publish it in a new book ill consider your suggestion. the audio was bad as my camera is a crap one that since died lol. gotta get a new 1:)

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Hi Re: Gondwanaland - who knows for sure when earth will blow up with the sun and thus decide the fate of man as boffins predict. Then whoosh obliteration unless of course representatives of mankind manage to voyage into the unexplored beyond and repopulate somewhere else. Hope my toes are well turned up by then. Much obliged for the comments.

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is the hat a left-over prop from the Onedin line...Cap'n? lux kooooool! Stef..xx

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have tweaked me woofers...all is fine now on the re-listen to your songbirding-except for the chorus I would have added

#and its no nay neverrrr
no nay neverrr no more#

#will I play the kerb crawler
no neverrr nay morrrrrre!

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Which is your other favourite venue. thanks for the top tip, see I'm learning!

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thanks Annie xx (her dream)

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i enjoyed this, Nick although if i am honest, i don't think the audio did you any favours on it.

on the piece, i think it probably needs splitting up a bit for pace more than anything else, just to help the audience settle down with the piece more, but i did enjoy it..

keep em coming.. A

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lot going on this piece for kath and a lot not said if that makes sense.

as with a piece i've just read by gemma lees, i love the use of the short, sharp lines here as it carries a heck of a punch with it.

excellent, your stuff has come on so much, so quickly..

andy n x

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change in style for you here a bit, i think gem and it suits you well.

the use of the short, short lines is very effective and gives it a beat..

would like to see more like this sometime.

top stuff, chick.

when i am back from summer break - defo going to come down to Middleton..

Andy N x

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i agree with laura, kealan here bud as the you're does stand out somewhat.. i would amend that asap if i was you..

otherwise, lot of good detail in this.. seems like part of a series of pieces however.. top stuff, man..

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Hi! Welcome to WOL! I used to have a fully functioning magician - aren't they great! I like your poem very much! xx

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A shoe horn being better than no horn I guess...

You are wicked Anthony - but you've just given me a good laugh - particularly liked the first two.

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"It suddenly dawned on Tracey that her friends had been having her on, with their "Lard Miracle diet.""

"It was obvious; Tracey's shoplifting trousers were no longer "fit for purpose.""

"Miss Piggy goes through her usual pre-makeup routine."

". . . Arthur was positively relishing the thought of watching her undress."

"It was no good. Tracey would have to go commando. Those jeans would never fit over her skimpy thong."

"It had reached the stage where Tracey would call for the shoe horn."

Sincere apologies to ALL Traceys out there.

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Not by the hairs on her chinny chin chin...

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A posh debutante from Devizes
Found it hard to stop increasing sizes
She was once heard to say
That's my last canapé
For one simply can't zip up one's trizes.

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Oh you are naughty - you really do have a foot fetish! xx

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Hi Jules thank you for your comments.
I am new to all this.

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There are no piercingly clever words in this piece.
Indeed most of the words are short, straight, not descriptive and direct.
Startled and Ashamed are the only two that really give any real impetus to this work. But what a powerful whole. It almost shouts. The resignation booms.
I can't associate with the writer's personal issues as I have said before to Kath and I don't think others should do so either. Praise the work.

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Did she?

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so whats wrong with gherkins then? the deeper ribbing gives extra thrill-so I,ve heard-ouch!

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bugger all wrong with the voice Ann-not sure about ground control to major Tom in the background-and dont you dare blame my taiwanese speakers! do you think an accompaniment on a washboard would have enhanced the recording? love from a relentless rainy Rossendale-Stef(with one eff!)..thanks AAnnn...xx

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Ooooo naughty naughty!!lol
Cate xx

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pic 1
"now lads lets all be upstanding for Princess Anne....."

pic 2
These size 12 jeans must have shrunk in the wash....
Cate xx

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